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'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?
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'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?guy]]''?\\
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'''Roland''': [shuts [[DoorSlamsYou the door]] that was [[BehindTheBlack hiding]] him] You think I can't be king?!\\
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'''Roland''': [shuts [[DoorSlamsYou [[TheDoorSlamsYou the door]] that was [[BehindTheBlack hiding]] him] You think I can't be king?!\\
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'''Roland''': [deep breath] Okay. All I have to do is - visualize. The crown, sitting on top of my perfect - [gets [[DoorSlamsYou hit by the opening door]] again, this time by Sunny, who Roland realizes is watching Dawn dancing] Hey. Listen, uh ... elf? I know just how you feel.\\
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'''Roland''': [deep breath] Okay. All I have to do is - visualize. The crown, sitting on top of my perfect - [gets [[DoorSlamsYou [[TheDoorSlamsYou hit by the opening door]] again, this time by Sunny, who Roland realizes is watching Dawn dancing] Hey. Listen, uh ... elf? I know just how you feel.\\
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'''Marianne''': *cringes*
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->'''Narrator/[[HeyItsThatVoice Fairy King]]''': This is a story about two kingdoms, side by side, but worlds apart. At the border grew magical flowers; primroses, blooming between light and darkness. They were used to make a love potion. Because, after all, everyone deserves to be loved.
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->'''Bog King''': Bring me the prisoner.\\
'''Stuff''': I get to rip her wings off!\\
'''Unnamed Goblin''': I want the wishbone.\\
'''Bog King''': NO EATING! [other [[ImAHumanitarian goblins]] all groan in disappointment]
'''Stuff''': I get to rip her wings off!\\
'''Unnamed Goblin''': I want the wishbone.\\
'''Bog King''': NO EATING! [other [[ImAHumanitarian goblins]] all groan in disappointment]
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->'''Roland''': Listen, uh ... elf? I know just how you feel.\\
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'''Minion 2''': Well, so much for being king.\\
'''Roland''': [shuts [[DoorSlamsYou the door]] that was [[BehindTheBlack hiding]] him] You think I can't be king?!\\
'''Minions''': King Roland!\\
'''Minion 3''': But, uh, wouldn't he have to ''marry'' Marianne?\\
'''Minion 1''': Yes, and he will. We just need to get some of that "love potion".\\
'''Roland''': You're saying ''I'' need a love potion?\\
'''Minion 1''': No!\\
'''Minion 2''': It was just a joke!\\
'''Minion 3''': We have to ... go ... [they fly away]\\
'''Minion 1''': Just kidding, Boss!\\
'''Roland''': [deep breath] Okay. All I have to do is - visualize. The crown, sitting on top of my perfect - [gets [[DoorSlamsYou hit by the opening door]] again, this time by Sunny, who Roland realizes is watching Dawn dancing] Hey. Listen, uh ... elf? I know just how you feel.\\
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'''Marianne''': Oh. [not knowing her sister made it] ... Why?
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].
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'''Marianne''': Oh. [not knowing her sister made it] ... Why?
Why?\\
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].\\
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].\\
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'''Roland''': Great idea!\\ [pats Sunny on the back hard enough to knock him down a few steps]\\
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'''Roland''': Great idea!\\ idea! [pats Sunny on the back hard enough to knock him down a few steps]\\
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'''Bog King''': [sees Marianne stomp on the boutonniere Dawn made for him] Wait! I ... actually sort of ... like this one.\\
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->'''Roland''': Listen, uh ... elf? I know just how you feel.\\
'''Sunny''': Yeah. Marianne slammed you pretty good. [Roland glares, then starts fake-crying. Sunny looks uncomfortable, but sits down beside him on the stairs.] Man, you've got it ''bad''.\\
'''Roland''': I just wish, [sniffles] I wish there was some way to make her love me again! You know, maybe something like a love potion.\\
'''Sunny''': Like a love potion!\\
'''Roland''': Great idea!\\ [pats Sunny on the back hard enough to knock him down a few steps]\\
'''Sunny''': It ''is'' a great idea! ''Except'', only the Sugar Plum Fairy knows how to make the love potions; she's locked away in the Dark Forest; nobody ever goes into the Dark Forest!\\
'''Roland''': But I know ... you can.\\
'''Sunny''': But why can't you?\\
'''Roland''': [stands up] Cause I'm ''big''! My armour, it's too [reflects light into Sunny's eyes] shiny. I'd be spotted for sure. If only I was ... little, like you.\\
'''Sunny''': [slumping] Oh.\\
'''Roland''': And I could ''blend in'', like you.\\
'''Sunny''': [sadly] I do blend in.\\
'''Roland''': [sitting and fake-crying again] Oh, it would have been perfect! And then we'd both - you know, me, and you - both use the love potion!\\
'''Sunny''': I'll do it!\\
'''Roland''': You will?\\
'''Sunny''': If you ''stop crying''.\\
'''Roland''': Oh. Oh, I'm feeling much better now.
'''Sunny''': Yeah. Marianne slammed you pretty good. [Roland glares, then starts fake-crying. Sunny looks uncomfortable, but sits down beside him on the stairs.] Man, you've got it ''bad''.\\
'''Roland''': I just wish, [sniffles] I wish there was some way to make her love me again! You know, maybe something like a love potion.\\
'''Sunny''': Like a love potion!\\
'''Roland''': Great idea!\\ [pats Sunny on the back hard enough to knock him down a few steps]\\
'''Sunny''': It ''is'' a great idea! ''Except'', only the Sugar Plum Fairy knows how to make the love potions; she's locked away in the Dark Forest; nobody ever goes into the Dark Forest!\\
'''Roland''': But I know ... you can.\\
'''Sunny''': But why can't you?\\
'''Roland''': [stands up] Cause I'm ''big''! My armour, it's too [reflects light into Sunny's eyes] shiny. I'd be spotted for sure. If only I was ... little, like you.\\
'''Sunny''': [slumping] Oh.\\
'''Roland''': And I could ''blend in'', like you.\\
'''Sunny''': [sadly] I do blend in.\\
'''Roland''': [sitting and fake-crying again] Oh, it would have been perfect! And then we'd both - you know, me, and you - both use the love potion!\\
'''Sunny''': I'll do it!\\
'''Roland''': You will?\\
'''Sunny''': If you ''stop crying''.\\
'''Roland''': Oh. Oh, I'm feeling much better now.
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->'''Sugarplum''': [released from her cell] I'm free! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
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->'''Sugarplum''': [released from her cell] I'm free! I'M FREE! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
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'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely. [Dawn starts singing again] No! No - What you're feeling is the potion, you know ... No, no, I suppose you don't. [covers his ears] Please, stop! [Dawn stops; Bog gets an idea] You must be tired from all that singing.\\
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'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely. [Dawn starts singing again] No! No No, no, no, no - What you're feeling is the potion, you know ... No, no, I suppose you don't. [covers his ears] Please, stop! [Dawn stops; Bog gets an idea] You must be tired from all that singing.\\
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->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your boutonnière!
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->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left forgot your weapon upstairs. But I found your boutonnière!
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'''Marianne''': But, Dawn -\\
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'''Marianne''': But, Dawn -\\Don't listen to him!\\
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'''Bog King''': [sees Marianne stomp on the boutonniere Dawn made for him] Wait! I ... actually sort of ... like this one.\\
'''Marianne''': Oh. [not knowing her sister made it] ... Why?
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].
'''Marianne''': Well, it's, uh ... It's ... lovely.
'''Marianne''': Oh. [not knowing her sister made it] ... Why?
'''Bog King''': I, um ... [[ItWasAGift I don't know]].
'''Marianne''': Well, it's, uh ... It's ... lovely.
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->'''Thang''': Where'd he go?\\
'''Stuff''': He disappeared!\\
'''Thang''': Can elves disappear?\\
'''Stuff''': If they're magic.\\
'''Thang''': Is he magic?\\
'''Stuff''': ... Well, he ''disappeared''!\\
'''Thang''': Sorry.
'''Stuff''': He disappeared!\\
'''Thang''': Can elves disappear?\\
'''Stuff''': If they're magic.\\
'''Thang''': Is he magic?\\
'''Stuff''': ... Well, he ''disappeared''!\\
'''Thang''': Sorry.
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'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely.
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'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely.
lovely. [Dawn starts singing again] No! No - What you're feeling is the potion, you know ... No, no, I suppose you don't. [covers his ears] Please, stop! [Dawn stops; Bog gets an idea] You must be tired from all that singing.\\
'''Dawn''': I could sing FOREVER!\\
'''Bog King''': No! No. Why don't you have a wee nap? I promise I won't go far.\\
'''Dawn''': [yawns and settles down to sleep [[MouseWorld on a toadstool]]] Wait! Please tell me your name?\\
'''Bog King''': I am the Bog King.\\
'''Dawn''': [happy sigh] [[TheNicknamer My Boggy-woggy Kingy-wingy]].\\
'''Bog King''': [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Bog. King]].\\
'''Dawn''': Boggy Kingy-wingy.\\
'''Bog King''': King.\\
'''Dawn''': Kingy-wingy.\\
'''Bog King''': ''[[RuleOfThree King]]''.\\
'''Dawn''': [yawns] G'night. Sweet [[RunningGag Boggy-woggy]].\\
'''Bog King''': ... Good night.
'''Dawn''': I could sing FOREVER!\\
'''Bog King''': No! No. Why don't you have a wee nap? I promise I won't go far.\\
'''Dawn''': [yawns and settles down to sleep [[MouseWorld on a toadstool]]] Wait! Please tell me your name?\\
'''Bog King''': I am the Bog King.\\
'''Dawn''': [happy sigh] [[TheNicknamer My Boggy-woggy Kingy-wingy]].\\
'''Bog King''': [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Bog. King]].\\
'''Dawn''': Boggy Kingy-wingy.\\
'''Bog King''': King.\\
'''Dawn''': Kingy-wingy.\\
'''Bog King''': ''[[RuleOfThree King]]''.\\
'''Dawn''': [yawns] G'night. Sweet [[RunningGag Boggy-woggy]].\\
'''Bog King''': ... Good night.
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'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the same for you! \\
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->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy the primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].
->'''Dawn''': [[Happy humming]]\\
->'''Dawn''': [[Happy humming]]\\
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->'''Bog King''': I hate this time of year. ''Spring''. Send more goblins to cut down every primrose! No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy the primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].you]].
->'''Roland''': [after getting caught cheating on his fiancée, the Crown Princess] I am ''so'' ... not getting my army.
->'''Dawn''':[[Happy humming]]\\[Happy humming]\\
->'''Roland''': [after getting caught cheating on his fiancée, the Crown Princess] I am ''so'' ... not getting my army.
->'''Dawn''':
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'''Dawn''': [[Even happier humming]].
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'''Dawn''': [[Even [Even happier humming]].
humming].
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'''Dawn''': Anything for you, Boggy-woggy.\\ [goes back into her prison cell]
'''Bog King''' [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...
'''Bog King''' [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...
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'''Dawn''': Anything for you, Boggy-woggy.\\ [goes back into her prison cell]
cell]\\
'''Bog King''' Uh, [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...\\
'''Bog King''' Uh, [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...\\
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'''Dawn''': You are not the boss of me! And [[SiblingLoveTriangle don't even think about]] [[AccidentalForeshadowing stealing my Boggy]]!\\
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'''Dawn''': You are not the boss of me! And [[SiblingLoveTriangle [[SiblingTriangle don't even think about]] [[AccidentalForeshadowing [[{{Foreshadowing}} stealing my Boggy]]!\\
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'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?
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'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?guy]]''?
->'''Bog King''' [backing away from Dawn] Please don't sing!
->'''Bog King''' [backing away from Dawn] Please don't sing!
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->'''Sugarplum''': [loudly] I'm free! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
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->'''Sugarplum''': [loudly] [released from her cell] I'm free! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
->'''Marianne''': [being held down by two goblins] Release my sister, you scaly-backed cockroach!\\
'''Bog King''': Return the love potion by moon-down, tough girl, [[ImpliedDeathThreat or you'll never see your sister again]].\\
'''Marianne''': I'll have your head on a stick! [frees one arm and punches him in the face]
'''Bog King''': Return the love potion by moon-down, tough girl, [[ImpliedDeathThreat or you'll never see your sister again]].\\
'''Marianne''': I'll have your head on a stick! [frees one arm and punches him in the face]
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'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
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'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
more]]?
->'''Goblin Guard''': [trying to keep Dawn asleep so she won't [[HellIsThatNoise start singing]] again] Rock-a-bye, fairy, away in your cell. Scream your head off, but no one can tell.
->'''Bog King''': [hears Dawn start singing again] The beast ... has awoken!\\
'''Marianne''': Oh, no. ''What'' did she fall in love with?
->'''Marianne''': You?\\
'''Bog King''': Yes.\\
'''Marianne''': Antidote?\\
'''Bog King''': Working on it.\\
'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Goblin Guard''': [trying to keep Dawn asleep so she won't [[HellIsThatNoise start singing]] again] Rock-a-bye, fairy, away in your cell. Scream your head off, but no one can tell.
->'''Bog King''': [hears Dawn start singing again] The beast ... has awoken!\\
'''Marianne''': Oh, no. ''What'' did she fall in love with?
->'''Marianne''': You?\\
'''Bog King''': Yes.\\
'''Marianne''': Antidote?\\
'''Bog King''': Working on it.\\
'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
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->'''Marianne''': You know, I really enjoyed our fight, but I'll be taking my sister home now -\\
'''Dawn''': Oh, no you're not! [hugs Bog] Boggy-bear!\\
'''Bog King''': Bog ''King''. Let's go back to our cell now, shall we?\\
'''Dawn''': Anything for you, Boggy-woggy.\\ [goes back into her prison cell]
'''Bog King''' [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...
'''Marianne''': But, Dawn -\\
'''Dawn''': You are not the boss of me! And [[SiblingLoveTriangle don't even think about]] [[AccidentalForeshadowing stealing my Boggy]]!\\
'''Bog King''': [[RunningGag Bog]]! [to Marianne] She stays here until I get the potion back.\\
'''Marianne''': Forget the potion! Get the antidote!
'''Dawn''': Oh, no you're not! [hugs Bog] Boggy-bear!\\
'''Bog King''': Bog ''King''. Let's go back to our cell now, shall we?\\
'''Dawn''': Anything for you, Boggy-woggy.\\ [goes back into her prison cell]
'''Bog King''' [[InsistentTerminology Bog]] ...
'''Marianne''': But, Dawn -\\
'''Dawn''': You are not the boss of me! And [[SiblingLoveTriangle don't even think about]] [[AccidentalForeshadowing stealing my Boggy]]!\\
'''Bog King''': [[RunningGag Bog]]! [to Marianne] She stays here until I get the potion back.\\
'''Marianne''': Forget the potion! Get the antidote!
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'''Marianne''': Look, Dad. I promise, if I meet a guy out there who takes my hand, and looks me in the eyes, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and I don’t wanna hit him]], I’ll consider it. But that guy doesn’t exist.
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'''Marianne''': Look, Dad. [[EngagementChallenge I promise, promise]], if I meet a guy out there who takes my hand, and looks me in the eyes, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and I don’t wanna hit him]], I’ll consider it. But that guy doesn’t exist.
->'''Thang''': Nice button-ear!\\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not "button-ear", it's boutonniere!\\
'''Thang''': No, I think it's button-ear.\\
'''Stuff''': It's boot-in-ear!
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not "button-ear", it's boutonniere!\\
'''Thang''': No, I think it's button-ear.\\
'''Stuff''': It's boot-in-ear!
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->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
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->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear',boutonnière!
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear',
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!''more''!
->'''Marianne''': Roland, you are such a -\\
'''Roland''': ''Hero'', to rescue you from, what did you call him? A "scaly-backed cockroach"? [starts hissing and making faces, presumably imitating a roach.]\\
'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?
->'''Marianne''': Roland, you are such a -\\
'''Roland''': ''Hero'', to rescue you from, what did you call him? A "scaly-backed cockroach"? [starts hissing and making faces, presumably imitating a roach.]\\
'''Bog King''': [to Marianne] Wait. Is that ... ''[[WhatDoesSheSeeInHim the guy]]''?
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->'''Fairy King''': Marianne, you’re a … [[RebelliousPrincess unique]] girl. And Roland may have a few flaws –\\
'''Marianne''': Understatement!\\
'''Fairy King''': But he still loves you.\\
'''Marianne''': He loves the crown. And his hair. And not in that order.\\
'''Fairy King''': But if not Roland, then, there has to be someone else.\\
'''Marianne''': No, there doesn’t.\\
'''Fairy King''': Maybe if you got out more?\\
'''Marianne''': Let it go, Dad.\\
'''Fairy King''': You’ll be a stronger ruler with a king at your side.\\
'''Marianne''': I’m stronger alone.\\
'''Fairy King''': … I don’t want you to be alone.\\
'''Marianne''': Look, Dad. I promise, if I meet a guy out there who takes my hand, and looks me in the eyes, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and I don’t wanna hit him]], I’ll consider it. But that guy doesn’t exist.
'''Marianne''': Understatement!\\
'''Fairy King''': But he still loves you.\\
'''Marianne''': He loves the crown. And his hair. And not in that order.\\
'''Fairy King''': But if not Roland, then, there has to be someone else.\\
'''Marianne''': No, there doesn’t.\\
'''Fairy King''': Maybe if you got out more?\\
'''Marianne''': Let it go, Dad.\\
'''Fairy King''': You’ll be a stronger ruler with a king at your side.\\
'''Marianne''': I’m stronger alone.\\
'''Fairy King''': … I don’t want you to be alone.\\
'''Marianne''': Look, Dad. I promise, if I meet a guy out there who takes my hand, and looks me in the eyes, [[BreadEggsMilkSquick and I don’t wanna hit him]], I’ll consider it. But that guy doesn’t exist.
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'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a love potion] Flirt. [slaps a flower onto his chest]\\
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'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a love potion] Flirt. [slaps a flower boutonniere onto his chest]\\
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'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.\\
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'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.\\
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'''Bog King''': What is that?
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.
'''Bog King''': For ... me?
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.
'''Bog King''': For ... me?
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.
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'''Bog King''': What is that?
that?\\
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special foryou.
you.\\
'''Bog King''': For ...me?
me?\\
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.\\
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for
'''Bog King''': For ...
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.\\
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->'''Sugarplum''': Directions: Dust the one you love; stand in front; be the first she sees when she opens her eyes.\\
'''Sunny''': Got it! Dust the first eyes you see, be in the front, and stand on the one you love.
->'''Sugarplum''': [loudly] I'm free! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
'''Sunny''': [hissing] Free? We're still in the dungeons!
'''Sunny''': Got it! Dust the first eyes you see, be in the front, and stand on the one you love.
->'''Sugarplum''': [loudly] I'm free! I'm free! I'm free - Did I mention I'm free?\\
'''Sunny''': [hissing] Free? We're still in the dungeons!
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'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a love potion] Flirt.
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'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a love potion] Flirt.
Flirt. [slaps a flower onto his chest]\\
'''Bog King''': What is that?
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.
'''Bog King''': For ... me?
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.
'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely.
'''Bog King''': What is that?
'''Dawn''': It's a boutonnière. I made it special for you.
'''Bog King''': For ... me?
'''Dawn''': It looks good on you. I hope you like it.
'''Bog King''': [fiercely] This isn't - [clears throat] Well, um, thank you. It's ... lovely.
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->'''Bog King''': If you don't stop singing, I'm gonna rip your wings off, my pretty little fairy princess.\\
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->'''Sunny''': Look, I'm usually a guy who enjoys a good joke, even at my own expense. But right now, I'm not in a "ha-ha" frame of mind. I'm in an "ah!" frame of mind.
->'''Sunny''': I need you to make a love potion -\\
'''Sugarplum''': How do you think I got in here? The Bog King won't listen to me about what happened on [[ArcWords that fateful day]], and I've been locked away for so long...\\
'''Sunny''': That fateful day?\\
'''Sugarplum''': [gasp] You were listening! So I'll do it.
->'''Bog King''': If you don'tstop singing, keep your mouth ''shut'', I'm gonna rip your wings off, my pretty little fairy princess.\\
->'''Sunny''': I need you to make a love potion -\\
'''Sugarplum''': How do you think I got in here? The Bog King won't listen to me about what happened on [[ArcWords that fateful day]], and I've been locked away for so long...\\
'''Sunny''': That fateful day?\\
'''Sugarplum''': [gasp] You were listening! So I'll do it.
->'''Bog King''': If you don't
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->'''Narrator/[[HeyItsThatVoice Fairy King]]''': This is a story about two kingdoms, side by side, but worlds apart. At the border grew magical flowers; primroses, blooming between light and darkness. They were used to make a love potion. Because, after all, everyone deserves to be loved.
->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy the primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].
->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy the primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].
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->'''Bog King''': You fight well- [[YouAreACreditToYourRace for a fairy]]. \\
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the same for you! \\
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the same for you! \\
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
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->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy the primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].
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->'''Marianne''': You cheated on me, remember?\\
'''Roland''': You left me at the altar. Remember? ''(Note that the events also happened in that order.)''
->'''Bog King''':No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because If you don't stop singing, I'm gonna rip your wings off, my pretty little fairy princess.\\
'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a loveis dangerous. It weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''. Destroy potion] Flirt.
->'''Bog King''': You fight well- [[YouAreACreditToYourRace for a fairy]]. \\
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say theprimroses! [[BadBoss Or same for you! \\
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': Iwill destroy you]].
dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
'''Roland''': You left me at the altar. Remember? ''(Note that the events also happened in that order.)''
->'''Bog King''':
'''Dawn''': [under the influence of a love
->'''Bog King''': You fight well- [[YouAreACreditToYourRace for a fairy]]. \\
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': I
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!more!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
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->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. \\
'''Bog King''': It weakens, it rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''.\\
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss Destroy the primroses or I will destroy you]].
'''Bog King''': It weakens, it rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''.\\
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss Destroy the primroses or I will destroy you]].
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->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. \\
'''Bog King''':It weakens, it weakens ... It rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''.\\
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss Destroy the primroses or primroses! [[BadBoss Or I will destroy you]].
'''Bog King''':
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
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'''Bog King''': I hate it more!more!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
->'''Marianne''': I know she's the kind of girl who falls in love with every guy she sees, but this is ridiculous!
->'''Thang''': Sire, I forgot to mention that you left your weapon upstairs. But I found your button-ear! \\
'''[[ThoseTwoGuys Stuff]]''': Not 'button-ear', boutonnière!
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids [Staring at tacky love accessories his mother put up]]] Why would she? \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids [Staring at tacky love accessories his mother put up]]] Why would she? she...? \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids [Staring at tacky love accessories]]] Why would she? \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids [Staring at tacky love accessories]]] accessories his mother put up]]] Why would she? \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[ShipperOnDeck Why would she?]] \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[ShipperOnDeck [[IWantGrandKids [Staring at tacky love accessories]]] Why would she?]] she? \\
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids Why would she?]]
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from each other]
'''Marianne''': Who likes this?
'''Bog King''': Not me.
'''Marianne''': I hate it.
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from each other]
'''Marianne''': Who likes this?
'''Bog King''': Not me.
'''Marianne''': I hate it.
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->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids [[ShipperOnDeck Why would she?]]
she?]] \\
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from eachother]
other]\\
'''Marianne''': Who likesthis?
this?\\
'''Bog King''': Notme.
me. \\
'''Marianne''': I hate it. \\
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from each
'''Marianne''': Who likes
'''Bog King''': Not
'''Marianne''': I hate it. \\
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'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
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'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].more]].
->'''Fairy King''': [escorting Marianne to the dance] Please smile.\\
'''Marianne''': [sighs; then smiles a wide, uncomfortable smile at the King]\\
'''Fairy King''': A real smile.\\
'''Marianne''': [through her teeth] This is one of my better ones.
->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. \\
'''Bog King''': It weakens, it rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''.\\
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss Destroy the primroses or I will destroy you]].
->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids Why would she?]]
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from each other]
'''Marianne''': Who likes this?
'''Bog King''': Not me.
'''Marianne''': I hate it.
'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
->'''Fairy King''': [escorting Marianne to the dance] Please smile.\\
'''Marianne''': [sighs; then smiles a wide, uncomfortable smile at the King]\\
'''Fairy King''': A real smile.\\
'''Marianne''': [through her teeth] This is one of my better ones.
->'''Bog King''': No primroses, no potion. No potion, no love. Because love is dangerous. \\
'''Bog King''': It weakens, it rots. [[OrderVsChaos It destroys order. And without order, what is left?]] ''Chaos''.\\
'''Bog King''': [[BadBoss Destroy the primroses or I will destroy you]].
->'''Bog King''': [[IWantGrandKids Why would she?]]
'''Bog King and Marianne''': Oh... [quickly step away from each other]
'''Marianne''': Who likes this?
'''Bog King''': Not me.
'''Marianne''': I hate it.
'''Bog King''': I hate it more!
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'''Dawn''': [[Even happier humming]].
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'''Dawn''': [[Even happier humming]].humming]].
->'''Bog King''': You fight well- [[YouAreACreditToYourRace for a fairy]]. \\
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the same for you! \\
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
->'''Bog King''': You fight well- [[YouAreACreditToYourRace for a fairy]]. \\
'''Marianne'''': Wish I could say the same for you! \\
'''Bog King''': What do you mean? \\
'''Marianne''': I dunno. I was expecting... [[DoubleEntendre more]].
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->'''Dawn''': [[Happy humming]]\\
'''Marianne''': So that's how you react to a near death experience? \\
'''Dawn''': [[Even happier humming]].
'''Marianne''': So that's how you react to a near death experience? \\
'''Dawn''': [[Even happier humming]].
