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** [[ScareEmStraight "We need to exaggerate the direct effects to minimize the risk of the kids watching (who most likely wont understand the, even more gruesome, indirect effects) trying to copy the actions."]]
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** [[ScareEmStraight "We need to exaggerate the direct effects to minimize the risk of the kids watching (who most likely wont understand the, even more gruesome, indirect effects) trying to copy the actions.actions we're warning against."]]
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* '''Enforced''': "We really, really want to show some violence, but none of the characters and weapons are strong enough to do damage like that!" "Let's just go with it."
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "We really, really want to show some violence, but none of the characters and weapons are strong enough to do damage like that!" "Let's just go with it.""
** [[ScareEmStraight "We need to exaggerate the direct effects to minimize the risk of the kids watching (who most likely wont understand the, even more gruesome, indirect effects) trying to copy the actions."]]
** "We really, really want to show some violence, but none of the characters and weapons are strong enough to do damage like that!" "Let's just go with it.
** [[ScareEmStraight "We need to exaggerate the direct effects to minimize the risk of the kids watching (who most likely wont understand the, even more gruesome, indirect effects) trying to copy the actions."]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie across the face. [[MadeOfExplodium Charlie immediately explodes,]] [[LudicrousGibs leaving a gory and disgusting mess.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie across the face. face, and [[MadeOfExplodium Charlie immediately explodes,]] [[LudicrousGibs leaving a gory and disgusting mess.explodes.]]
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** Charlie is being torn apart with inhuman strength.
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** Charlie is being torn apart with [[SuperStrength inhuman strength.strength]].
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** Charlie is being torn apart with inhuman strength.
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* '''Played For Horror''': The sheer ease by which human bodies can be torn apart causes characters to suffer frequent and [[BodyHorror horrifying deaths]] at the hands of the monsters.
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** Charlie used to be a blue plasticine figurine, but he was turned into a fragile HumanoidAbomination via magic.
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** Charlie used to be a blue plasticine figurine, but he was turned into a fragile HumanoidAbomination [[AWizardDidIt via magic.magic]].
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** Charlie used to be a blue plasticine figurine, but he was turned into a fragile HumanoidAbomination via magic.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie across the face. [[LudicrousGibs Charlie immediately explodes, leaving a gory and disgusting mess.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie across the face. [[LudicrousGibs [[MadeOfExplodium Charlie immediately explodes, explodes,]] [[LudicrousGibs leaving a gory and disgusting mess.]]
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** Charlie is actually a golem made of paper.
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** Charlie is actually a golem {{golem}} made of paper.
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* '''Discussed Subversion''': "Dang. Movies make chopping heads look so easy."
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face. [[LudicrousGibs Charlie explodes in a shower of gore.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face. [[LudicrousGibs Charlie explodes in immediately explodes, leaving a shower of gore.gory and disgusting mess.]]
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** Charlie's body has been weakened by disease or malnutrition.
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* '''Inverted''': MadeOfIron
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* '''Inverted''': MadeOfIronBob swings his sword with all his might at Charlie, but all Charlie gets is [[MadeOfIron a small cut]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Charlie gets what looks like a papercut when Bob slaps him in the face.
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* '''Downplayed''': Charlie gets what looks like a papercut when Bob slaps punches him in the face.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face. Charlie explodes in a shower of gore.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face. [[LudicrousGibs Charlie explodes in a shower of gore.]]
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* '''Justified''': Charlie is a zombie, and his rotten flesh has trouble holding itself together under any kind of force.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Charlie is a zombie, and his rotten flesh has trouble holding itself together under any kind offorce.force.
** Charlie is actually a golem made of paper.
** Charlie is a zombie, and his rotten flesh has trouble holding itself together under any kind of
** Charlie is actually a golem made of paper.
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* '''Implied''': Bob threatens Charlie by poking him with a spoon until he dies. Having done the deed offscreen, Bob checks his watch and sees that only two minutes have passed.
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%%* '''Implied''': Bob threatens Charlie by poking him with a spoon until he dies. Having done the deed offscreen, Bob checks his watch and sees that only two minutes have passed.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???Bob threatens Charlie by poking him with a spoon until he dies. Having done the deed offscreen, Bob checks his watch and sees that only two minutes have passed.
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* '''Subverted''': Charlie trips and falls onto a large twig and it looks like it's gone right through his body, until we see that though it went through his jacket, it passed around his actual flesh.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Charlie trips and falls onto a large twig and it looks like it's gone right through his body, until we see that though it went through his jacket, it passed around his actual flesh.
** Charlie trips and falls onto a large twig and it looks like it's gone right through his body, until we see that though it went through his jacket, it passed around his actual flesh.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Then Bob runs up to help, trips, and the twig really does impale him all the way.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...Then Bob runs up to help, trips, and the twig really does impale him all the way.
** ...Then Bob runs up to help, trips, and the twig really does impale him all the way.
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** Bob attacks Charlie with his sword, hoping to slice him in half. It doesn't work.
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** ...at first. Turns out, it was a case of DelayedCausality.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Charlie gets what looks like a papercut when Bob slaps him in the face.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Charlie becomes paranoid because of his vulnerability to damage and ends up too scared to even leave his own bedroom.
* '''Reconstructed''': Charlie makes sure to wear heavy armor all the time because he knows how easily he'll fall apart if hit.
* '''Reconstructed''': Charlie makes sure to wear heavy armor all the time because he knows how easily he'll fall apart if hit.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Charlie becomes paranoid because of his vulnerability to damage and ends up too scared to even leave his own bedroom.
* '''Reconstructed''': Charlie makes sure to wear heavy armor all the time because he knows how easily he'll fall apart if hit.
* '''Reconstructed''': Charlie makes sure to wear heavy armor all the time because he knows how easily he'll fall apart if hit.
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%% Optional items, added after Conversed, at your discretion:
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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** whatever Bob shots Charlie with his popgun, the popgun rounds pass cleanly through Charlie's body
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** Alternatively, Charlie is a [[HappyTreeFriends Happy Tree Friend.]]
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** whatever Bob shots Charlie with his popgun, the popgun rounds pass cleanly through Charlie's body
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** Alternatively, Charlie is a [[HappyTreeFriends Happy Tree Friend.]]
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* '''Parodied''': Charlie tries to do something utterly mundane, like taking a walk to the park, and ends up ripped into bloody bits by equally mundane events, such as brushing against an untrimmed bush alongside the path.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Charlie tries to do something utterly mundane, like taking a walk to the park, and ends up ripped into bloody bits by equally mundane events, such as brushing against an untrimmed bush alongside the path.
** Charlie tries to do something utterly mundane, like taking a walk to the park, and ends up ripped into bloody bits by equally mundane events, such as brushing against an untrimmed bush alongside the path.
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** Alternatively, Charlie is a [[HappyTreeFriends Happy Tree Friend.]]
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** Alternatively, Charlie is a [[HappyTreeFriends Happy Tree Friend.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face, and Charlie's head flies across the room in a torrent of blood.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Bob slaps Charlie lightly across the face, and Charlie's head flies across the room face. Charlie explodes in a torrent shower of blood.gore.
