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-->'''Pete:''' It's okay Steve, I hate you too, and would‘ve been glad to see you die back there.
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-->'''Pete:''' It's okay Steve, I hate you too, and
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'''Steve:''' IRegretNothing, I just had to get it off of my chest, especially if that ''was'' it for me.
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-->'''Pete:'''
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* '''Deconstructed''': Steve ends up surviving, but his words of course affect his relationship with Pete either way, no matter how good or bad it already was.
* '''Reconstructed''':
'''Steve:''' IRegretNothing, I just had to get it off of my chest, especially if that ''was'' it for me.
-->'''Pete:'''
-->'''Steve:''' [[InsultBackfire ...Thanks, Pete.]]
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'''Steve:''' IRegretNothing, I just had to get it off of my chest, especially if that ''was'' it for me.
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-->'''Steve:''' [[InsultBackfire ...Thanks, Pete.]]
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Up to Eleven is now defunct
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'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]:''' "[[VolleyingInsults Joke's on you, idiot]], [[SeeYouInHell I hope I burn in hell too]]. [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment Because then you'll have to put up with me all over again]], [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch motherfucker]]! ''([[LastDisrespects spits on Steve's body]])''
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--->'''Steve:''' ...and most of all, I hate myself... so don't feel ''too'' bad. It's about time this happened... ''(dies)''
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--->'''Steve:''' ...and most of all, I hate myself... so don't feel ''too'' bad. It's about time this happened...happened to me... ''(dies)''
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--->'''Steve:''' Pete, I just want you to know that... I hate you and I'm glad you're dying!
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--->'''Steve:''' Pete, I just want you to know that... I hate you and I'm glad you're dying!dying, you son of a bitch!
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** Immediately after the above exchange, Pete dies as well.
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Fixing quotes.
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... I just want you to know that... I hate you! *Dies*"
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete...Pete... I just want you to know that... I hate you! *Dies*"''(dies)''
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... I just want you to know that... I [[PrecisionFStrike fucking hate you]], you piece of shit! I hate you more than anyone else in this world! I'm glad I'm going to die so I won't have to be surrounded by morons like you! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And I always hate that hairstyle of yours!]] I hope you die a slow and painful death and I hope you burn in hell, you bastard! *Dies*"
-->'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]''': "[[VolleyingInsults Joke's on you, idiot]], [[SeeYouInHell I hope I burn in hell too]]. [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment Because then you'll have to put up with me all over again]], [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch motherfucker!]]" *[[LastDisrespects spits on Steve's body]]*
-->'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]''': "[[VolleyingInsults Joke's on you, idiot]], [[SeeYouInHell I hope I burn in hell too]]. [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment Because then you'll have to put up with me all over again]], [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch motherfucker!]]" *[[LastDisrespects spits on Steve's body]]*
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete...Pete... I just want you to know that... I [[PrecisionFStrike fucking hate you]], you piece of shit! I hate you more than anyone else in this world! I'm glad I'm going to die so I won't have to be surrounded by morons like you! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And I always hate that hairstyle of yours!]] I hope you die a slow and painful death and I hope you burn in hell, you bastard! *Dies*"
-->'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]''':''(dies)''\\
'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]:''' "[[VolleyingInsults Joke's on you, idiot]], [[SeeYouInHell I hope I burn in hell too]]. [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment Because then you'll have to put up with me all over again]], [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitchmotherfucker!]]" *[[LastDisrespects motherfucker]]! ''([[LastDisrespects spits on Steve's body]]*body]])''
-->'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]''':
'''[[UpToEleven Pete]]:''' "[[VolleyingInsults Joke's on you, idiot]], [[SeeYouInHell I hope I burn in hell too]]. [[CoolAndUnusualPunishment Because then you'll have to put up with me all over again]], [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... I just want you to know that... I hate you... [[TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou but I like your shoes.]] *Dies*"
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... You get the idea by now." *Dies*
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, I just want to say that... you're an idiot!" *collapses, but doesn't die*
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... You get the idea by now." *Dies*
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, I just want to say that... you're an idiot!" *collapses, but doesn't die*
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete...Pete... I just want you to know that... I hate you... [[TheOneThingIDontHateAboutYou but I like your shoes.]] *Dies*"
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete...''(dies)''\\\
'''Steve:''' Pete... You get the idea by now." *Dies*
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, ''(dies)''\\\
'''Steve:''' Pete, I just want to say that... you're anidiot!" *collapses, idiot! ''(collapses, but doesn't die*die)''
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete...
'''Steve:''' Pete... You get the idea by now.
-->'''Steve:''' "Pete,
'''Steve:''' Pete, I just want to say that... you're an
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, I just want you to know that... I hate you and I'm glad you're dying!"
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, I just want you to know that... I hate... the sun..."
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, Pete, I just want you to know that... I hate... the sun..."
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-->'''Steve:''' "...but I hate you more, you fucking moron... *Dies*"
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-->'''Steve:''' "I've always hated everything." *Dies*
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-->'''Steve:''' "I've I've always hated everything." *Dies*everything. ''(dies)''
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-->'''Steve:''' "...and most of all, I hate myself... so don't feel ''too'' bad. It's about time this happened... *dies*
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-->'''Steve''' (after already telling Pete)''':''' "...What? You know [[{{Jerkass}} I've always treated you like crap]], and this ''is'' my last chance to say it, [[HiddenDisdainReveal so are you really surprised]]? Well... Goodbye, idiot." *Dies*
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-->'''Steve:''' "I'd tell you how I really feel about you, but what kind of words are those to go out on?"
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-->'''Steve:''' "I'd I'd tell you how I really feel about you, but what kind of words are those to go out on?"on?
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-->'''Steve:''' *sigh* Pete... We always did have a hard time with each other, didn't we? *Dies*
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-->'''Steve:''' *sigh* ''(sigh)'' Pete... We always did have a hard time with each other, didn't we? *Dies*''(dies)''
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-->'''Steve:''' (after already telling Pete)''':''' HAHAHAHA! Have fun knowing that this was the last thing I ever said, idiot! *Dies*
-->'''Steve''': Pete, there's something you need to know... It's about us. Pete, I- I hate you. I hate you with all my heart. I hate you more than I've ever hated anybody. I hate you so much that I can barely take it. In fact, I want to go on hating you for the rest of my life. And if you don't save this world or whatever, well, I won't be able to hate you anymore."
-->'''Steve''': Pete, there's something you need to know... It's about us. Pete, I- I hate you. I hate you with all my heart. I hate you more than I've ever hated anybody. I hate you so much that I can barely take it. In fact, I want to go on hating you for the rest of my life. And if you don't save this world or whatever, well, I won't be able to hate you anymore."
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-->'''Steve:''' (after ''(after already telling Pete)''':''' Pete)'' HAHAHAHA! Have fun knowing that this was the last thing I ever said, idiot! *Dies*
-->'''Steve''':''(dies)''\\\
'''Steve:''' Pete, there's something you need to know... It's about us. Pete, I- I hate you. I hate you with all my heart. I hate you more than I've ever hated anybody. I hate you so much that I can barely take it. In fact, I want to go on hating you for the rest of my life. And if you don't save this world or whatever, well, I won't be able to hate you anymore."
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'''Steve:''' Pete, there's something you need to know... It's about us. Pete, I- I hate you. I hate you with all my heart. I hate you more than I've ever hated anybody. I hate you so much that I can barely take it. In fact, I want to go on hating you for the rest of my life. And if you don't save this world or whatever, well, I won't be able to hate you anymore.
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-->'''Pete:''' "Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I really feel."
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-->'''Pete:''' "Come Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I really feel."
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete, I just want to say that... you're an idiot!" *collapses, but doesn't die*
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* '''Lampshaded''': "That's okay. I hate you, too, Steve, and I'm glad you're gone."
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* '''Lampshaded''': "That's okay. I hate you, too, Steve, and I'm glad you're gone.dead."
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-->'''Steve''' (after already telling Pete)''':''' "...What? You know [[{{Jerkass}} I've always treated you like crap]], and this ''is'' my last chance to say it, [[HiddenDisdainReveal so are you really surprised]]? Well... Goodbye, stupid." *Dies*
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-->'''Steve''' (after already telling Pete)''':''' "...What? You know [[{{Jerkass}} I've always treated you like crap]], and this ''is'' my last chance to say it, [[HiddenDisdainReveal so are you really surprised]]? Well... Goodbye, stupid.idiot." *Dies*
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--> '''Steve''': Pete, there's something you need to know... It's about us. Pete, I- I hate you. I hate you with all my heart. I hate you more than I've ever hated anybody. I hate you so much that I can barely take it. In fact, I want to go on hating you for the rest of my life. And if you don't save this world or whatever, well, I won't be able to hate you anymore."
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** Knowing what Steve will say to him in his dying breath, Pete shoots him so that he's gone for good.
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'''Pete:''' "Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I really feel."
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-->'''Steve''' (after already telling Pete): "...What? You know [[{{Jerkass}} I've always treated you like crap]], and this ''is'' my last chance to say it, [[HiddenDisdainReveal so are you really surprised]]? Well... Goodbye, stupid." *Dies*
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-->'''Steve''' (after already telling Pete): Pete)''':''' "...What? You know [[{{Jerkass}} I've always treated you like crap]], and this ''is'' my last chance to say it, [[HiddenDisdainReveal so are you really surprised]]? Well... Goodbye, stupid." *Dies*
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-->'''Steve:''' (after already telling Pete): HAHAHAHA! Have fun knowing that this was the last thing I ever said, idiot! *Dies*
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-->'''Steve:''' (after already telling Pete): Pete)''':''' HAHAHAHA! Have fun knowing that this was the last thing I ever said, idiot! *Dies*
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* '''Played For Drama''': Pete is truly crushed by this and responds to Steve in his final moments with "Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I really feel..."
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* '''Played For Drama''': Pete is truly crushed by this and responds to Steve in his final moments with by expressing his own feelings.
'''Pete:''' "Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I reallyfeel...feel."
'''Pete:''' "Come on, man! You were still like a brother to me Steve, and I loved you for it! I hope you're happy with your last choice of words, knowing how I really
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... I just want you to know that... I [[PrecisionFStrike fucking hate you]], you piece of crap! I hate you more than anyone else in this world! I'm glad I'm going to die so I won't have to be surrounded by you! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And I always hate that hairstyle of yours!]] I hope you die a slow and painful death and I hope you burn in hell, you bastard! *Dies*"
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-->'''Steve:''' "Pete... I just want you to know that... I [[PrecisionFStrike fucking hate you]], you piece of crap! shit! I hate you more than anyone else in this world! I'm glad I'm going to die so I won't have to be surrounded by morons like you! [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And I always hate that hairstyle of yours!]] I hope you die a slow and painful death and I hope you burn in hell, you bastard! *Dies*"
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** Steve and Pete can't stand each other, [[VitriolicBestBuds even when they're friends]].
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** Steve and Pete can't stand legitimately hate each other, [[VitriolicBestBuds even when they're friends]].
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-->'''Steve:''' "...but I hate you more, you moron... *Dies*"
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-->'''Steve:''' "...but I hate you more, you fucking moron... *Dies*"
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