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* '''GenderFlipped''': Alex is a HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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* '''GenderFlipped''': '''GenderInverted''': Alex is a HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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** The designated BlackMage of the team is Heinrich the [[BlackKnight dark knight]] who [[MagicKnight fights with a hammer]] and is is noticeably male.
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** The designated BlackMage of the team is Heinrich the [[BlackKnight dark knight]] who [[MagicKnight fights with a hammer]] and is is noticeably male.
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* '''Averted''': Marcy is an ActionGirl who fights with her fists.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** The designated BlackMage of the team is Heinrich the [[BlackKnight dark knight]] who [[MagicKnight fights with a hammer]] and is is noticeably male.
** Marcy is an ActionGirl who fights with her fists.
** The designated BlackMage of the team is Heinrich the [[BlackKnight dark knight]] who [[MagicKnight fights with a hammer]] and is is noticeably male.
** Marcy is an ActionGirl who fights with her fists.
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** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy ji]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes her to near unconsciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
--> [[TheLeader Hiro]]: Day one and already starting shit? Not a good impression.\\
--> [[TheLeader Hiro]]: Day one and already starting shit? Not a good impression.\\
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** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy ji]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes is ordered by the no-nonsense Hiro to choke her to near unconsciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
--> [[TheLeader Hiro]]: Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk... Day one and already starting shit? Not a good impression.\\
--> [[TheLeader Hiro]]: Tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk... Day one and already starting shit? Not a good impression.\\
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Hiro: Good. Don't you dare do it ever again. Romano, put her down.
* '''Discussed''': "Ah -- she blew up the dragon. Don't get on her bad side, boys."
* '''Discussed''': "Ah -- she blew up the dragon. Don't get on her bad side, boys."
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Hiro: Good. Don't you dare do it ever again. Romano, Romaji, put her down.
*'''Discussed''': '''Discussed''':
** "Ah -- she blew up the dragon. Don't get on her bad side, boys.""
** Romaji is seen being more aloof and cold around her, seemingly despising her. This conversation comes into play:
--> [[TheLancer Lance]]: Romaji? You uh... Alright?\\
Romaji: ...\\
Lance: Shit, he's always been like this ever since we got Marcy on board.\\
Hiro: Ah, don't worry. [[DefrostingIceQueen Romaji's definitely gonna warm up to her]]. [[TemptingFate Right Romaji]]?
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** "Ah -- she blew up the dragon. Don't get on her bad side, boys.
** Romaji is seen being more aloof and cold around her, seemingly despising her. This conversation comes into play:
--> [[TheLancer Lance]]: Romaji? You uh... Alright?\\
Romaji: ...\\
Lance: Shit, he's always been like this ever since we got Marcy on board.\\
Hiro: Ah, don't worry. [[DefrostingIceQueen Romaji's definitely gonna warm up to her]]. [[TemptingFate Right Romaji]]?
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** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy no]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes her to half consciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
--> Romano: Attitude on day one? Not a good impression.\\
--> Romano: Attitude on day one? Not a good impression.\\
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** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy no]] ji]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes her to half consciousness near unconsciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
-->Romano: Attitude on day one? [[TheLeader Hiro]]: Day one and already starting shit? Not a good impression.\\
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Romano: Good. Don't do it ever again.
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--> Romano: Starting shit on day one? Not a good impression.\\
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--> Romano: Starting shit Attitude on day one? Not a good impression.\\
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* '''Exploited''': The {{Leader}} of the group especifically looks for a short and HotBlooded mage because that will mean she is the better suited for the BigGuy role.
* '''Defied''': Marcy is an ActualPacifist and refuses to learn magic meant to hurt people.
* '''Defied''': Marcy is an ActualPacifist and refuses to learn magic meant to hurt people.
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* '''Exploited''': The {{Leader}} of the group especifically looks for a short and HotBlooded mage because that will mean she is the better suited for the BigGuy TheBigGuy role.
*'''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Marcy is an ActualPacifist and refuses to learn magic meant to hurtpeople.people.
** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy no]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes her to half consciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
--> Romano: Starting shit on day one? Not a good impression.\\
Marcy: Ack! I... I get it!\\
Romano: Good. Don't do it ever again.
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** Marcy is an ActualPacifist and refuses to learn magic meant to hurt
** Otherwise, [[TheQuietOne Ro]][[GeniusBruiser ma]][[TheBigGuy no]] takes none of her bullshit from day one and chokes her to half consciousness to let her know that this team isn't for fucking around.
--> Romano: Starting shit on day one? Not a good impression.\\
Marcy: Ack! I... I get it!\\
Romano: Good. Don't do it ever again.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her friends are always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her friends are always there to remind her to save her powers for the real badguys.guys.
** See Defied 2.
** Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her friends are always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad
** See Defied 2.
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** Marcy can crush bludgeon, or otherwise attack enemies with her barriers.
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** Marcy can crush crush, bludgeon, or otherwise attack enemies with her barriers.
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** Marcy can crush enemies with her barriers.
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** Marcy can crush bludgeon, or otherwise attack enemies with her barriers.
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** Alex is a GentlemanWizard, who is calm and cool even when he fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]]!
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** Alex is a GentlemanWizard, who is calm and cool even when he fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]]!fire]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': ???Marcy is a literal IceQueen (who does not suffer [[SurroundedByIdiots "fools"]] lightly) and ''can'' use her powers constructively (such as by building temporary bridges or cover), but prefers to fight with them.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Marcy using PersonalityPowers makes her a much easier character to comprehend, since she uses a visual metaphor every time her magic comes into play.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': '''Plot Foundation''': Marcy using PersonalityPowers makes her a much easier character to comprehend, since she uses a visual metaphor every time her magic comes into play.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Holy crap, did she just turn Evulz into a toad?" "Yup."
* '''Played For Laughs''': A couple of {{Mooks}} [[AmusingInjuries learn the hard way]] that it'd be a bad idea to [[MuggingTheMonster attack Marcy.]]
* '''Played For Drama''': Marcy is a GlassCannon due to her abilities, which puts her in a lot of danger if she's left vulnerable in combat.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Marcy using PersonalityPowers makes her a much easier character to comprehend, since she uses a visual metaphor every time her magic comes into play.
* '''Played For Drama''': Marcy is a GlassCannon due to her abilities, which puts her in a lot of danger if she's left vulnerable in combat.
* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': Marcy using PersonalityPowers makes her a much easier character to comprehend, since she uses a visual metaphor every time her magic comes into play.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her friend is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her friend is friends are always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???The {{Leader}} of the group especifically looks for a short and HotBlooded mage because that will mean she is the better suited for the BigGuy role.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama friend is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Implied''': Marcy is a side character who is not shown fighting, but she recalls a NoodleIncident where she blew a dragon up.
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* '''Implied''': Marcy is a side character who is not shown fighting, but she recalls a NoodleIncident where she blew a dragon up.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "What, do I look like the healing type to you?"
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "What, do I look like the healing type to you?"
** "What, do I look like the healing type to you?"
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** The creators wants an ActionGirl, but ExecutiveMeddling has a [[WouldNotHitAGirl no woman-hitting policy.]] This trope is an easy compromise because as a GlassCannon, she is dish out a lot of damage while her frail body means someone else has to take the hit instead.
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** The creators wants want an ActionGirl, but ExecutiveMeddling has a [[WouldNotHitAGirl no woman-hitting policy.]] This trope is an easy compromise because as a GlassCannon, she is dish out a lot of damage while her frail body means someone else has to take the hit instead.
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* '''Enforced''': "We need [[AnAdventurerIsYou a nuker in the player's party]] and we need [[AffirmativeActionGirl more female characters.]] How about a female mage?
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "We need [[AnAdventurerIsYou a nuker in the player's party]] and we need [[AffirmativeActionGirl more female characters.]] How about a femalemage?mage?
** The creators wants an ActionGirl, but ExecutiveMeddling has a [[WouldNotHitAGirl no woman-hitting policy.]] This trope is an easy compromise because as a GlassCannon, she is dish out a lot of damage while her frail body means someone else has to take the hit instead.
** "We need [[AnAdventurerIsYou a nuker in the player's party]] and we need [[AffirmativeActionGirl more female characters.]] How about a female
** The creators wants an ActionGirl, but ExecutiveMeddling has a [[WouldNotHitAGirl no woman-hitting policy.]] This trope is an easy compromise because as a GlassCannon, she is dish out a lot of damage while her frail body means someone else has to take the hit instead.
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** Alex is a HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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** Alex is a GentlemanWizard, who is calm and cool even when he fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]]!
* '''GenderFlipped''': Alex is a HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
* '''GenderFlipped''': Alex is a HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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* '''Averted''': Magic is not used, or the only mage with offensive spells is a man.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
Marcy has mood swings. Sometimes, she is sweet and friendly, other times, she is rather rude.
* '''Averted''':Magic Marcy is not used, or the only mage an ActionGirl who fights with offensive spells is a man.her fists.
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* '''Implied''': Marcy is a side character who is not shown fighting, but she recalls a NoodleIncident where she blew a dragon up.
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** Alex is a {{HotBlooded}} guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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** Alex is a {{HotBlooded}} HotBlooded guy who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]].
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
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* '''Deconstructed''': Marcy can destroy towns with little effort, and she has an extremely short temper. She leaves a wake of ruin wherever she goes, and no one has the nuts to call her out. Then, after a particularly bad outburst, she's out of energy when the army of Emperor Evulz attacks.
* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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** "Oh, come on, when have I been irrationally violent? I mean, within the last... um... Half an hour?"
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** "Oh, come on, when have I been irrationally violent? I mean, within the last... um... Half an hour?" hour?"
* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Conversed''':'''Conversed''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Marcy can destroy towns with little effort, and she has an extremely short temper. She leaves a wake of ruin wherever she goes, and no one has the nuts to call her out. Then, after a particularly bad outburst, she's out of energy when the army of Emperor Evulz attacks.
* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
* '''Deconstructed''': Marcy can destroy towns with little effort, and she has an extremely short temper. She leaves a wake of ruin wherever she goes, and no one has the nuts to call her out. Then, after a particularly bad outburst, she's out of energy when the army of Emperor Evulz attacks.
* '''Reconstructed''': Marcy is extremely destructive and short tempered, but her Nakama is always there to remind her to save her powers for the real bad guys.
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** "Oh, come on, when have I been irrationally violent? I mean, within the last... um... Half an hour?"
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* '''Inverted''': The healer is the feisty one, while Marcy is [[TheIngenue sweet]] and [[ShrinkingViolet shy.]]
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** The healer is the feisty one, while Marcy is [[TheIngenue sweet]] and [[ShrinkingViolet shy.]]
** The healer is the feisty one, while Marcy is [[TheIngenue sweet]] and [[ShrinkingViolet shy.]]
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...until [[MagikarpPower she gains experience and becomes the magic powerhouse]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...Subverted''':
** ...until [[MagikarpPower she gains experience and becomes the magic powerhouse]].
** ...until [[MagikarpPower she gains experience and becomes the magic powerhouse]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': Marcy is a DarkActionGirl who fights by [[StuffBlowingUp blowing things up with her mind.]] [[HeroicSociopath Cackling gleefully the whole time.]]
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* '''Exaggerated''': Marcy is a DarkActionGirl who fights by [[StuffBlowingUp blowing things up with her mind.]] [[HeroicSociopath [[SociopathicHero Cackling gleefully the whole time.]]
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* '''Straight''': Marcy is a {{Tsundere}}ish HotWitch who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]] and is contrasted with [[StaffChick healer]] [[MysteriousWaif Melody.]]
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* '''Straight''': Marcy is a {{Tsundere}}ish HotWitch who fights [[PlayingWithFire with fire]] and is contrasted with [[StaffChick [[WhiteMage healer]] [[MysteriousWaif Melody.]]
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** StaffChickWhiteMagicianGirl
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* '''Discussed''': "Ah -- she blew up the dragon. Don't get on her bad side, boys."