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** Ace takes one step further and outright attacks Drake in front of the crowd, fully intended to kill him right on the spot.
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** Ace takes goes one step further and outright attacks Drake in front of the crowd, fully intended intending to kill him right on the spot.
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** Drake was one of the best on Evulz team and having him redeemed will make him lose a valuable teammate.
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** Drake was one of the best on Evulz team Evulz' team, and having him redeemed will make him lose a valuable teammate.
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** Ace doesn't think it's fair that Drake should be able to do what he's done, then feel bad for a while and carry on as if nothing happened when there are people who ''haven't'' done anything wrong that are still suffering (especially if/when said suffering can be at least partly attributed to Drake).
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...until it turns out Ace is scheming to bring Drake down and faking support to get Drake to trust him.
** Drake really was trying to repent, but Ace's suspicion [[ThenLetMeBeEvil caused him to turn evil again]].
** Drake really was trying to repent, but Ace's suspicion [[ThenLetMeBeEvil caused him to turn evil again]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...until it turns out Ace is scheming to bring Drake down and faking support to get Drake to trust him.
**Subverted''': Drake really was trying to repent, but Ace's suspicion [[ThenLetMeBeEvil caused him to turn evil again]].
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** Ace is a VillainWithGoodPublicity who convinces the public that the various criminals he employs have "[[FalselyReformedCriminal turned over a new leaf]]".
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** Ace is a VillainWithGoodPublicity who convinces the public that the various criminals he employs have "[[FalselyReformedCriminal "[[FalselyReformedVillain turned over a new leaf]]".
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** Ace is a VillainWithGoodPublicity who convinces the public that the various criminals he employs have "[[FalselyReformedCriminal turned over a new leaf]]".
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* '''Subverted''':
** Ace supports Drake's redemption and Evulz wants nothing more to do with him.
** It is revealed that Drake was only [[FakeDefector pretending to feel remorse]] and is still the same CompleteMonster he always was. All of Ace's friends apologize for [[CassandraTruth not believing him sooner]].
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ...until it turns out Ace is scheming to bring Drake down and faking support to get Drake to trust him.
** Ace supports Drake's redemption and Evulz wants nothing more to do with him.
** It is revealed that Drake was only [[FakeDefector pretending to feel remorse]] and is still the same CompleteMonster he always was. All of Ace's friends apologize for [[CassandraTruth not believing him sooner]].
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ...until it turns out Ace is scheming to bring Drake down and faking support to get Drake to trust him.
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* '''Subverted''':
** Ace supports Drake's redemption and Evulz wants nothing more to do with him.
**'''Subverted''': It is revealed that Drake was only [[FakeDefector pretending to feel remorse]] and is still the same CompleteMonster he always was. All of Ace's friends apologize for [[CassandraTruth not believing him sooner]].
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** ...Subverted''': ...until it turns out Ace is scheming to bring Drake down and faking support to get Drake to trust him.
** Ace supports Drake's redemption and Evulz wants nothing more to do with him.
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** Ace deems Drake's crimes to be unforgivable because his victims include children.
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** Ace deems Drake's crimes to be unforgivable because his victims include children.[[WouldHurtAChild children]].
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** Drake helped Emperor Evulz commit genocide, or at least didn't object until after the fact, and Ace deems this unforgivable.
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** Drake helped Emperor Evulz commit genocide, or at least didn't object to it until after the fact, and Ace deems this unforgivable.to be unforgivable.
** Ace deems Drake's crimes to be unforgivable because his victims include children.
** Ace deems Drake's crimes to be unforgivable because his victims include children.
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** Drake helped Emperor Evulz commit genocide, or at least didn't object until after the fact, and Ace deems this unforgivable.
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** Ace believes that Drake's not putting in enough effort to make up for his past actions.
** Ace believes that Drake's attempts to make up for his past actions don't stem from genuine remorse and concern for his victims, but a [[SecretlySelfish selfish]] need to soothe his own conscience.
** Ace believes that Drake's attempts to make up for his past actions just serve to retraumatise his victims who, before Drake's HeelFaceTurn, had mostly managed to move on. In Ace's opinion, if Drake really regrets what he's done, he should just leave them alone.
** Ace believes that Drake's attempts to make up for his past actions don't stem from genuine remorse and concern for his victims, but a [[SecretlySelfish selfish]] need to soothe his own conscience.
** Ace believes that Drake's attempts to make up for his past actions just serve to retraumatise his victims who, before Drake's HeelFaceTurn, had mostly managed to move on. In Ace's opinion, if Drake really regrets what he's done, he should just leave them alone.
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** It is revealed that Drake was only [[HeelFaceMole pretending to feel remorse]] and is still the same CompleteMonster he always was. All of Ace's friends apologize for [[CassandraTruth not believing him sooner]].
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** It is revealed that Drake was only [[HeelFaceMole [[FakeDefector pretending to feel remorse]] and is still the same CompleteMonster he always was. All of Ace's friends apologize for [[CassandraTruth not believing him sooner]].
