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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], the way she was dodging there was a chance that he might have accidently touched and killed her instead of the staff hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], with the way she was dodging there was a chance that he might have accidently touched and killed her instead of the staff hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed him out of the way.
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* While the threat of Jeerleader was finally over with; Randy stopping the Akumatized villain in his civilian identity has caused him to be placed on Shadow Moth's hit list, with the villain being furious over the fact that his near victory was robbed by an average teenager in his eyes. Considering this is a guy who isn't very picky with choosing his victims, there is no telling what Gabriel will do get his revenge on Randy.
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* While the threat of Jeerleader was finally over with; Randy stopping the Akumatized villain in his civilian identity has caused him to be placed on Shadow Moth's hit list, with the villain being furious over the fact that his near victory was robbed by an average teenager in his eyes. Considering this is a guy who isn't very picky with choosing his victims, there is no telling what Gabriel will do get his revenge on Randy.Randy.
* Cecil's severe bullying of Marinette poses as a case of RealismInducedHorror.
* Cecil's severe bullying of Marinette poses as a case of RealismInducedHorror.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up on time.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by to Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader the Akumatized villain to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up on time.
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** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not made her more stronger but also causing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] to the point that she had no qualms in killing the Parisian duo. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
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** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not only made her more stronger but also causing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]] to the point that she had no qualms in killing the Parisian duo. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance he might have accidently killed her instead hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance that he might have accidently touched and killed her instead of the staff hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance he may have accidently killed her instead hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also causing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]]. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also causing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]]. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
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* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance he may might have accidently killed her instead hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which notmakes made her more stronger but also causing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]].sanity]] to the point that she had no qualms in killing the Parisian duo. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not
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-->'''Marinette''': This place is a lot more dangerous than Paris, isn't it?
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-->'''Marinette''': This place is a lot more dangerous than Paris, isn't it?it?
* While the threat of Jeerleader was finally over with; Randy stopping the Akumatized villain in his civilian identity has caused him to be placed on Shadow Moth's hit list, with the villain being furious over the fact that his near victory was robbed by an average teenager in his eyes. Considering this is a guy who isn't very picky with choosing his victims, there is no telling what Gabriel will do get his revenge on Randy.
* While the threat of Jeerleader was finally over with; Randy stopping the Akumatized villain in his civilian identity has caused him to be placed on Shadow Moth's hit list, with the villain being furious over the fact that his near victory was robbed by an average teenager in his eyes. Considering this is a guy who isn't very picky with choosing his victims, there is no telling what Gabriel will do get his revenge on Randy.
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* The fact that Gabriel now has set his sights on the chaos pearls is unsettling enough for there is no telling how much damage he cause if he ever gets his hands on those.
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* The fact that Gabriel has now has set his sights on the chaos pearls is unsettling enough for there is no telling how much damage he can cause if he ever gets his hands on those.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up on it.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up on it.
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* The revelation of the Purple Shogun, a past user of the Butterfly Miraculous, can be described as this. The Nomicon and Ninja Prime showed Randy a scene where the Purple Shogun used his Miraculous to give powers to the villagers to fight alongside the Ninja; while it was cool at first, it turned [[MoodWhiplash nightmarish]] when the Shogun vanished and the people drove into despair for they missed the power they onced had. This made them vulnerable enough to be stanked by the Sorcerer into butterfly monsters that razed the village. While the Ninja was successful in destanking them, the carnage occured was so intense that it caused Randy's feet to buckle.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up enough.
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** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up enough.
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** The fact that Jeerleader came close to killing Ladybug and Chat Noir is terrifying alone
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** The fact that Jeerleader came close to killing Ladybug and Chat Noir is terrifying aloneas it makes clear the type of Akumatized villains that Ladybug and Chat Noir will be facing during their time in Norrisville. Gabriel only recently discovered the amount of negative energy is far greater than it was in Paris. As Marinette puts it:
-->'''Marinette''': This place is a lot more dangerous than Paris, isn't it?
-->'''Marinette''': This place is a lot more dangerous than Paris, isn't it?
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** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also drive
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** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also drivecausing her to [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly go off the deep end.]] The story even describes her as slowly [[SanitySlippage losing her sanity]]. Even more unsettling, Shadow Moth continues to encourage this, not giving a damn that his latest target may lose herself or not.
** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up enough.
** The fact that Jeerleader came close to killing Ladybug and Chat Noir is terrifying alone
** Jeerleader finally drove the Parisian duo into a corner by having them surrounded in a flame circle so hot that the heat can be felt through their indestructible suits. Ladybug couldn't do anything but apologize by Jeerleader for yelling at her, only for Jeerleader to angrily brush it off as she prepares to ''kill'' the French heroes and she would've been successful in doing it had Randy not showed up enough.
** The fact that Jeerleader came close to killing Ladybug and Chat Noir is terrifying alone
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While this fanfic does have some HeartWarming moments, it's not afraid to enter the DarkerAndEdgier territory or the BloodierAndGorier
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While this fanfic does have some HeartWarming moments, Heartwarming moments; it's not afraid to enter the DarkerAndEdgier territory or the BloodierAndGorierBloodierAndGorier one.
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* The fact that Gabriel now has set his sights on the chaos pearls is unsettling enough for there is no telling how much damage he cause if he ever gets his hands on those.
* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance he may have accidently killed her instead hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also drive
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* The fact that Gabriel now has set his sights on the chaos pearls is unsettling enough for there is no telling how much damage he cause if he ever gets his hands on those.
* Theresa's Akumatization into Jeerleader; bad enough she can make people do what she wants with her CompellingVoice, she also has pyrokinesis which she uses in conjunction with her twirling skills. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero When Ladybug yells at Jeerleader instead of helping her]], the Akumatized villain loses it and punches the herione so hard that she broke her nose, causing it to ''bleed''. You've read it right, folks! Jeerleader caused Ladybug to bleed! This action caused Chat Noir to angrily bash Jeerleader's head with his baton which only made Jeerleader even angrier. [[FromBadToWorse It gets even worse when he tries to use his Cataclysm to destroy the villainess's staff]], but the way she was dodging there was a chance he may have accidently killed her instead hadn't Rena Rouge and Ninja pushed out of the way.
** What's even more frightening was the fact that as the fight went on, Jeerleader dwelled deeper and deeper into her rage which not makes her more stronger but also drive
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While this fanfic does have some Heartwarming moments, it's not afraid to enter the DarkerAndEdgier territory or the BloodierAndGorier
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While this fanfic does have some Heartwarming HeartWarming moments, it's not afraid to enter the DarkerAndEdgier territory or the BloodierAndGorier
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While this fanfic does have some Heartwarming moments, it's not afraid to enter the DarkerAndEdgier territory or the BloodierAndGorier
