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There are a lot of moment in the fanfiction Haunted House.
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There are a lot of moment eerie moments in the fanfiction Haunted House.
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** The Tsviets are not directly punished for their mistakes. If one messes up, the Restrictors punish the other two.
*** Nero is made to suffocate for several minutes while Rosso watches because she failed a mission.
*** Nero is made to suffocate for several minutes while Rosso watches because she failed a mission.
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** The Tsviets are not directly punished for their mistakes. If one of them messes up, the Restrictors punish the other two.
*** Because she failed her mission, Rosso is forced to watch while Nero is made to suffocate for severalminutes while Rosso watches because she failed a mission.minutes.
*** Because she failed her mission, Rosso is forced to watch while Nero is made to suffocate for several
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* Aeris' Healing Rain doesn't sit well with those born with Jenova's DNA.
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* Aeris' Healing Rain doesn't sit well with those born with Jenova's DNA.When Sephiroth, Genesis, and the Tsviets are exposed to healing rain, the high quantity of Jenova cells in their bodies causes them to literally start melting away layer by layer.
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** Aeris' Healing Rain doesn't sit well with those born with Jenova's DNA.
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There are a lot of moment in the fanfiction Haunted House.House.
* The legions of the mako undead show up a couple times
* Just about anything having to do with Deepground
** The Tsviets are not directly punished for their mistakes. If one messes up, the Restrictors punish the other two.
*** Nero is made to suffocate for several minutes while Rosso watches because she failed a mission.
*** When a Restrictor catches Weiss and Rosso confessing their feelings for each other, Rosso is tortured and Weiss is forced watch.
** Aeris' Healing Rain doesn't sit well with those born with Jenova's DNA.
* The legions of the mako undead show up a couple times
* Just about anything having to do with Deepground
** The Tsviets are not directly punished for their mistakes. If one messes up, the Restrictors punish the other two.
*** Nero is made to suffocate for several minutes while Rosso watches because she failed a mission.
*** When a Restrictor catches Weiss and Rosso confessing their feelings for each other, Rosso is tortured and Weiss is forced watch.
** Aeris' Healing Rain doesn't sit well with those born with Jenova's DNA.
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There are a lot of moment in the fanfiction Haunted House.
