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* BerserkButton: Do ''not'' call Ray "Baby Rocket." He much prefers the nickname "Rocket Ray."
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* BerserkButton: BerserkButton:
** Do ''not'' call Ray "Baby Rocket." He much prefers the nickname "Rocket Ray."
** Do ''not'' call Ray "Baby Rocket." He much prefers the nickname "Rocket Ray."
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Plenty of characters from the series fit this, but none more than the main character, Ray.
** Not only is he [[MadeOfIron absorb a ridiculous amount of damage]], he can hold off a monster that is ''easily a thousand times his mass'' from crushing him.
** Not only is he [[MadeOfIron absorb a ridiculous amount of damage]], he can hold off a monster that is ''easily a thousand times his mass'' from crushing him.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Plenty of characters from the series fit this, but none more than the main character, Ray.
**Ray. Not only is he [[MadeOfIron absorb a ridiculous amount of damage]], he can hold off a monster that is ''easily a thousand times his mass'' from crushing him.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Plenty of characters enjoy throwing one-liners during fight scenes.
-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
** Both Ray and Stephen like to monologue and analyse their opponents' psyche and styles to let them know that they pose no threat.
-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
** Both Ray and Stephen like to monologue and analyse their opponents' psyche and styles to let them know that they pose no threat.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Plenty of characters enjoy throwing one-liners during fight scenes.
-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
**Both Ray and Stephen like to monologue and analyse their opponents' psyche and styles to let them know that they pose no threat.
-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
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%%** Plenty of characters enjoy throwing one-liners during fight scenes.
%%-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
%%-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
%%-->'''The Bull''': Bull...'''''SWEEP!'''''
%%-->'''Ray''': Your move names '''SUCK!'''
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* DavidVersusGoliath: Ray vs. [[spoiler:The Bull.]]
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Ray is an especially talented brawler, with no formal training in combat. [[UnskilledButStrong Despite the lack of technique]], he is quite [[TheGift gifted]] and has strong HeroicResolve. He also has a very mean hook.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: GoodOldFisticuffs:
** Ray is an especially talented brawler, with no formal training in combat. [[UnskilledButStrong Despite the lack of technique]], he is quite [[TheGift gifted]] and has strong HeroicResolve. He also has a very mean hook.
** Ray is an especially talented brawler, with no formal training in combat. [[UnskilledButStrong Despite the lack of technique]], he is quite [[TheGift gifted]] and has strong HeroicResolve. He also has a very mean hook.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Ray has a reputation as a ferocious street fighter and a delinquent, but to those who really know him, he is actually a very kind guy.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: JerkWithAHeartOfGold:
** Ray has a reputation as a ferocious street fighter and a delinquent, but to those who really know him, he is actually a very kind guy.
** Ray has a reputation as a ferocious street fighter and a delinquent, but to those who really know him, he is actually a very kind guy.
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* OldFriendNewGender: In Book 2, [[spoiler:Ray transforms in front of Wendy, eliciting a very strong reaction from her.]]
** And following the laws of GenderBender, [[spoiler:Wendy ''loves'' the new look.]]
** And following the laws of GenderBender, [[spoiler:Wendy ''loves'' the new look.]]
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* OldFriendNewGender: In Book 2, [[spoiler:Ray transforms in front of Wendy, eliciting a very strong reaction from her.]]
**]] And following the laws of GenderBender, [[spoiler:Wendy ''loves'' the new look.]]
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* PunchedAcrossTheRoom: When Ray fought The Bull, he is hit ''so hard'' that he is sent flying into a jungle gym across the field.
** Fortunately, Ray is MadeOfIron, but sadly the [[StrongFleshWeakSteel jungle gym was not.]]
** Fortunately, Ray is MadeOfIron, but sadly the [[StrongFleshWeakSteel jungle gym was not.]]
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* PunchedAcrossTheRoom: When Ray fought The Bull, he is hit ''so hard'' that he is sent flying into a jungle gym across the field.
**field. Fortunately, Ray is MadeOfIron, but sadly the [[StrongFleshWeakSteel jungle gym was not.]]
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* SmallGirlBigGun: Magical Girl Sunshine Sirius Form.
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* CasualDangerDialog: Plenty of characters enjoy throwing one-liners during fight scenes.
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* CasualDangerDialog: CasualDangerDialogue: Plenty of characters enjoy throwing one-liners during fight scenes.
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* CurseCutShort: Some of the expressions are cut short to add to its humor while maintaining clean dialogue. As the company is known for its child-friendly content, it is also a form of GettingCrapPastTheRadar.
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* CurseCutShort: Some of the expressions are cut short to add to its humor while maintaining clean dialogue. As the company is known for its child-friendly content, it is also a form of GettingCrapPastTheRadar.
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Hidden Heart Of Gold / Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.
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* JerkassFacade: Ray has a very mean look when things [[LetsGetDangerous get serious]].
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* RedBaron: Ray is more infamously known by his nicknames: Rocket Ray / the Baby Rocket, because of the power of his punches.
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* BreakThemByTalking: Stephen does this to [[spoiler:Sidewinder]], the VillainOfTheWeek of Book 2 by reminding [[spoiler:Sidewinder of his boxing past and how he quit after losing his championship belt]]. He ends up sobbing afterwards.
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Sirius, in both Star and Magical Girl forms.
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* SmallGirlBigGun: Magical Girl Sunshine Sirius Form.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Magical Girl Sunshine has several powers and attacks that can easily level city blocks.
** Even Ray [[spoiler:in his male human form]] is shown to be able to [[FoeTossingCharge beat up and defeat]] waves upon waves of {{Mooks}} with ease.
** Even Ray [[spoiler:in his male human form]] is shown to be able to [[FoeTossingCharge beat up and defeat]] waves upon waves of {{Mooks}} with ease.
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* RareMaleExample: The male lead gets [[spoiler:MagicalGirl]] powers.
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* GottaCatchThemAll: Ray has to save and collect 13 stars. He usually manages to save one to two per book.
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* MrExposition: Sol tends to be the one to explain the rules of being a Star Knight, as well as how Black Stars are defeated.
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* TheWatson: Ray and Wendy play this role to allow the stars to [[MrExposition explain key plot points to the reader.]]
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* TheDreaded: Ray has developed such a fierce and frightful reputation as a street brawler that gangs tend to leave his school alone. Even the sight of him is enough to cause gangsters to give up.
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* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: Ray is an [[ConvenientlyAnOrphan Orphaned]] [[{{Delinquents}} Delinquent]] HenshinHero JerkWithAHeartOfGold [[IncorruptiblePurePureness and a good moral compass]] who is also a [[spoiler:GenderBender GirlyBruiser MagicalGirl]]
