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* ''Manga/ThePromisedNeverland'': [[spoiler: When Norman tries to escape the farm by climbing the wall-- only to find himself facing a steep drop in all directions.]]
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* ''Manga/ThePromisedNeverland'': [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When Norman tries to escape the farm by climbing the wall-- only to find himself facing a steep drop in all directions.]]
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-->'''Antoine''': WHO PUTS A DOOR LIKE ZAT IN A PLACE LIKE ZIS?!
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** One of the sheer-wall variety [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMeVUXQjooA&feature=youtu.be&t=182]], apparently a side-effect of [[spoiler:the continual changes in the architecture]]. The hero is saved when he jumps to [[spoiler:a chimney sliding into place]].
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** One of the sheer-wall variety [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YMeVUXQjooA&feature=youtu.be&t=182]], be&t=182s]], apparently a side-effect of [[spoiler:the continual changes in the architecture]]. The hero is saved when he jumps to [[spoiler:a chimney sliding into place]].
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* ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'': The Ankh-Morpork prison cells in ''Literature/GoingPostal'' are designed with a single loose block that the prisoner can pry out with a spoon and elbow grease. Prying out the block reveals, rather than a tunnel, a new block with fresh mortar and a brand new spoon. The same cell also has a grate in the floor that a previous prisoner slipped through. When asked whether it leads to the river, the guards merely say "You'd think that, wouldn't you".
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* ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'': The Ankh-Morpork prison cells in ''Literature/GoingPostal'' are designed with a single loose block that the prisoner can pry out with a spoon and elbow grease. Prying out the block reveals, rather than a tunnel, a new block with fresh mortar and a brand new spoon. The same cell also has a grate in the floor that a previous prisoner slipped through. When asked whether it leads to the river, the guards merely say say, "You'd think that, wouldn't you".you."
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* ''WesternAnimation/TheFlintstones'' Trying to escape the lair of Dr. Sinister, Fred and Barney run through a door and shut it behind them. [[DoorFocus (Beat.)]] Then they run back out, slamming the door to keep the snarling crocosauruses from catching them.
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* ''WesternAnimation/TheFlintstones'' Trying to escape the lair of Dr. Sinister, Fred and Barney run through a door and shut it behind them. [[DoorFocus (Beat.)]] ([[DoorFocus Beat]]) Then they run back out, slamming the door to keep the snarling crocosauruses from catching them.
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You've been held prisoner in some kind of base or headquarters, but you've broken out of your cell. You run headlong through the place, find a door, thrust it open, and you're –
– face-to-face with a pack of snarling tigers. Or a ticking bomb. Or a thousand-foot drop.
– face-to-face with a pack of snarling tigers. Or a ticking bomb. Or a thousand-foot drop.
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You've been held prisoner in some kind of base or headquarters, but you've broken out of your cell. You run headlong through the place, find a door, thrust it open, and you're –
– face-to-faceyou're…
…face-to-face with a pack of snarling tigers. Or a ticking bomb. Or a thousand-foot drop.
– face-to-face
…face-to-face with a pack of snarling tigers. Or a ticking bomb. Or a thousand-foot drop.
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* Detective Eddie Valiant, while sleuthing ''Film/WhoFramedRogerRabbit'', mistakes the ButterFace Lena Hyena for Jessica Rabbit, and flees from this haywire StalkerWithACrush. Eddie finds a door labeled as a men's rest room, and runs in, shutting the door behind him. Only then does Eddie notice the room is outside the towering building, and that it has no floor. GravityIsAHarshMistress takes it from there.
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* ''Film/WhoFramedRogerRabbit'': Detective Eddie Valiant, while sleuthing ''Film/WhoFramedRogerRabbit'', the eponymous question, mistakes the ButterFace Lena Hyena for Jessica Rabbit, and flees from this haywire StalkerWithACrush. Eddie finds a door labeled as a men's rest room, and runs in, shutting the door behind him. Only then does Eddie notice the room is outside the towering building, and that it has no floor. GravityIsAHarshMistress takes it from there.
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* ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'': The Ankh-Morpork prison cells in ''Literature/GoingPostal'' are designed with a single loose block that the prisoner can pry out with a spoon and elbow grease. Prying out the block reveals, rather than a tunnel, a new block with fresh mortar and a brand new spoon.
** The same cell also has a grate in the floor that a previous prisoner slipped through. When asked whether it leads to the river, the guards merely say "You'd think that, wouldn't you".
** The same cell also has a grate in the floor that a previous prisoner slipped through. When asked whether it leads to the river, the guards merely say "You'd think that, wouldn't you".
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* ''Literature/{{Discworld}}'': The Ankh-Morpork prison cells in ''Literature/GoingPostal'' are designed with a single loose block that the prisoner can pry out with a spoon and elbow grease. Prying out the block reveals, rather than a tunnel, a new block with fresh mortar and a brand new spoon.
**spoon. The same cell also has a grate in the floor that a previous prisoner slipped through. When asked whether it leads to the river, the guards merely say "You'd think that, wouldn't you".
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* ''WesternAnimation/TheFlintstones'' Trying to escape the lair of Dr. Sinister, Fred and Barney run through a door and shut it behind them. [[DoorFocus (Beat.)]] Then they run back out, slamming the door to keep the snarling crocosauruses from catching them.
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* ''WesternAnimation/TheFlintstones'' Trying to escape the lair of Dr. Sinister, Fred and Barney run through a door and shut it behind them. [[DoorFocus (Beat.)]] Then they run back out, slamming the door to keep the snarling crocosauruses from catching them.
