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* HeKnowsTooMuch:
** [[spoiler: Elderly midwife Hildegarde Vogel, as well as Dis, although in his absence, Wisbeech’s “beast” brutally murders Henry instead.]]
** [[spoiler: Elderly midwife Hildegarde Vogel, as well as Dis, although in his absence, Wisbeech’s “beast” brutally murders Henry instead.]]
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* HeKnowsTooMuch:
**HeKnowsTooMuch: [[spoiler: Elderly midwife Hildegarde Vogel, as well as Dis, although in his absence, Wisbeech’s “beast” brutally murders Henry instead.]]
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Viciously mugged on the way home, a thoroughly desolate Dis later sees in his mirror the reflection of a long-dead movie star whose name he can't quite place. A sudden visit from Louise Broomfield, who briefly takes away the pain of his mugging-induced headache, persuades him to consider the Ripstone case. The name of the missing boy's midwife, Hildegarde Vogel, leads Dis to Perfect Rest, a residential care home, one of whose carers, delicate-featured yet similarly deformed Constance Bell, seems strangely intimidated by the home's director, the coolly condescending Dr Leonard K Wisbeech. A nightly visit from numerous severely deformed apparitions heralds a shocking turning point in the troubled life of Nick Dismas…
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Viciously mugged on the way home, a thoroughly desolate Dis later sees in his mirror the reflection of a long-dead movie star whose name he can't quite place. A sudden visit from Louise Broomfield, who briefly takes away the pain of his mugging-induced headache, persuades him to consider the Ripstone case. The name of the missing boy's midwife, Hildegarde Vogel, leads Dis to Perfect Rest, a residential care home, one of whose carers, delicate-featured yet similarly deformed Constance Bell, seems strangely intimidated by the home's director, the coolly condescending Dr Leonard K Wisbeech. A nightly visit from numerous severely deformed apparitions heralds a shocking turning point in the troubled life of Nick Dismas…
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* BrokenTears: After his mugging on the beach, Dis, bruised, bloodied and devastated with humiliation, Dis returns to his basement flat and sobs unrestrainedly.
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* BrokenTears: After his mugging on the beach, Dis, bruised, bloodied and devastated with humiliation, Dis returns to his basement flat and sobs unrestrainedly.sobs.
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A 1999 novel by Creator/JamesHerbert. Alone in a murky, otherworldly cell, a deceased, unnamed man contemplates the depraved past life for which this "existence without hope" is his punishment. Two celestial visitors, dubbed Angel 1 and Angel 2, suddenly arrive with a proposition. He, and "one or two [[TitleDrop others]]" have qualified for a second chance at earthly life. Overcome, he tearfully accepts...
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A 1999 novel by Creator/JamesHerbert.
Alone in a murky, otherworldly cell, a deceased, unnamed man contemplates the depraved past life for which this "existence without hope" is his punishment. Two celestial visitors, dubbed Angel 1 and Angel 2, suddenly arrive with a proposition. He, and "one or two [[TitleDrop others]]" have qualified for a second chance at earthly life. Overcome, he tearfully accepts...
Alone in a murky, otherworldly cell, a deceased, unnamed man contemplates the depraved past life for which this "existence without hope" is his punishment. Two celestial visitors, dubbed Angel 1 and Angel 2, suddenly arrive with a proposition. He, and "one or two [[TitleDrop others]]" have qualified for a second chance at earthly life. Overcome, he tearfully accepts...
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* BrokenTears: Bruised, bloodied and devastated with humiliation, Dis returns to his basement flat and sobs unrestrainedly.
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* BrokenTears: Bruised, After his mugging on the beach, Dis, bruised, bloodied and devastated with humiliation, Dis returns to his basement flat and sobs unrestrainedly.
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* FriendOnTheForce: Dis and Detective Chief Superintendent Oliver Macaroon, having helped occasionally helped each other on their respective cases, share a mutual respect.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: Henry Solomon, bookkeeper for Dismas Investigations, and Ida Lambton, debt collector.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: Henry Solomon, bookkeeper for Dismas Investigations, and Ida Lambton, debt collector.Investigations.
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* SnuffFilm: [[spoiler: Secretly filmed footage of copulation between severely deformed patients is used to fund Dr Wisbeech’s studies in deformity. They occasionally include Snuff..]]
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* SnuffFilm: [[spoiler: Secretly filmed footage of copulation between severely deformed patients is used to fund Dr Wisbeech’s studies in deformity. They occasionally include Snuff..Snuff.]]
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* {{Reincarnation}}{{Reincarnation}}: The Five Hundred Year Plenary Indulgence offers earthly rebirth into circumstances to morally test the participant.
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* DisabledSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms. With his the bruises of his mugging still in evidence...
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* DisabledSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms. With his the bruises of his mugging still in evidence...
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-->'''Shelley Ripstone:''' Your poor face!
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* DisabledSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms.
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* DisabledSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms. With his the bruises of his mugging still in evidence...
-->'''Shelley Ripstone:''' Your poor face!
-->'''Dis:''' Kind of spoils my looks, doesn't it?
-->'''Shelley Ripstone:''' Your poor face!
-->'''Dis:''' Kind of spoils my looks, doesn't it?
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* DisabledSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Dis's first person narration is replete with witheringly grim witticisms.
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Thirty-two year-old Brighton-based private investigator Nick Dismas, "Dis" to his friends, is offered a case concerning a missing person; a baby who eighteen years ago apparently died, but whose mother, Shelly Ripstone, now intuitively believes him to be alive, a suspicion endorsed by local clairvoyant Louise Broomfield. Dis, deformed from birth with spinal curvature, an overlapping brow and a withered leg, as well as a missing eye lost in a childhood incident, goes about sundry duties with unflinching reflection on his lifelong rejection and humiliation. Viciously mugged on the way home, a thoroughly desolate Dis later sees in his mirror the reflection of a long-dead movie star whose name he can't quite place. A sudden visit from Louise Broomfield, who briefly takes away the pain of his mugging-induced headache, persuades him to consider the Ripstone case. The name of the missing boy's midwife, Hildegarde Vogel, leads Dis to Perfect Rest, a residential care home, one of whose carers, delicate-featured yet similarly deformed Constance Bell, seems strangely intimidated by the home's director, the coolly condescending Dr Leonard K Wisbeech. A nightly visit from numerous severely deformed apparitions heralds a shocking turning point in the troubled life of Nick Dismas…
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Thirty-two year-old Brighton-based private investigator Nick Dismas, "Dis" to his friends, is offered a case concerning a missing person; a baby who eighteen years ago apparently died, but whose mother, Shelly Ripstone, now intuitively believes him to be alive, a suspicion endorsed by local clairvoyant Louise Broomfield. Dis, deformed from birth with spinal curvature, an overlapping brow and a withered leg, as well as a missing eye lost in a childhood incident, goes about sundry duties with unflinching reflection on his lifelong rejection and humiliation.
Viciously mugged on the way home, a thoroughly desolate Dis later sees in his mirror the reflection of a long-dead movie star whose name he can't quite place. A sudden visit from Louise Broomfield, who briefly takes away the pain of his mugging-induced headache, persuades him to consider the Ripstone case. The name of the missing boy's midwife, Hildegarde Vogel, leads Dis to Perfect Rest, a residential care home, one of whose carers, delicate-featured yet similarly deformed Constance Bell, seems strangely intimidated by the home's director, the coolly condescending Dr Leonard K Wisbeech. A nightly visit from numerous severely deformed apparitions heralds a shocking turning point in the troubled life of Nick Dismas…
Viciously mugged on the way home, a thoroughly desolate Dis later sees in his mirror the reflection of a long-dead movie star whose name he can't quite place. A sudden visit from Louise Broomfield, who briefly takes away the pain of his mugging-induced headache, persuades him to consider the Ripstone case. The name of the missing boy's midwife, Hildegarde Vogel, leads Dis to Perfect Rest, a residential care home, one of whose carers, delicate-featured yet similarly deformed Constance Bell, seems strangely intimidated by the home's director, the coolly condescending Dr Leonard K Wisbeech. A nightly visit from numerous severely deformed apparitions heralds a shocking turning point in the troubled life of Nick Dismas…
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** Dis's muggers spitefully address him as "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Quozzie]]".
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** Dis's muggers spitefully address him as "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDameDisney Quozzie]]".
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!! "''Well, who the f**k needs the tropes!''":
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!! "''Well, who the f**k fuck needs the tropes!''":
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* BattleAmongstTheFlames: In the rear wing of Perfect Rest, a studio in which Dr Wisbeech allows [[spoiler: production of lavish pornographic films of copulation between his deformed test subjects]], catches fire. On defensive eye injury from Dis, [[spoiler: Wisbeech's ferociously powerful, insanely vicious "beast"]] pursues Nick in search of revenge, and hinders the escape of Dis and Constance.
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* BattleAmongstTheFlames: In the rear wing of Perfect Rest, a studio in which Dr Wisbeech allows [[spoiler: production of lavish pornographic films of copulation between his deformed test subjects]], catches fire. On defensive eye injury from Dis, [[spoiler: Wisbeech's ferociously powerful, insanely vicious "beast"]] pursues Nick in search of seeks revenge, and hinders the escape of Dis and Constance.
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** Dis's muggers spitefully address him as "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Quozzie]]"
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** Dis's muggers spitefully address him as "[[WesternAnimation/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame Quozzie]]"Quozzie]]".
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* PetTheDog: The unnamed movie star, from [[spoiler: Dis]] is reincarnated, while an unashamedly ruthless, selfish, unscrupulous hedonist, had a blindness-threatened young boy flown to New York for surgery.
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* PetTheDog: The unnamed movie star, from whom [[spoiler: Dis]] is reincarnated, while an unashamedly ruthless, selfish, unscrupulous hedonist, had a blindness-threatened young boy flown to New York for surgery.
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* PetTheDog: The unnamed movie star, from [[spoiler: Dis]] is reincarnated, while an unashamedly ruthless, selfish, unscrupulous hedonist, had a blindness-threatened young boy flown to New York for surgery.
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* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Louise believes Shelley's recommendation to Dismas Investigations to hint Dis's innate vocation to take the case. On so doing, he reveals [[spoiler: Perfect Rest's inhumane confinement of numerous severely deformed people]]. On a near-drowning in the nearby river, a sudden memory of his previous life indicates [[spoiler: his bodily inhibitions, and rescue of others with similar affliction, to be part of a redemptive test]].
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* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Louise believes In Shelley's recommendation to Dismas Investigations to hint Investigations, Louise apprehends Dis's innate vocation to take the case. On so doing, he reveals [[spoiler: Perfect Rest's inhumane confinement of numerous severely deformed people]]. On a near-drowning in the nearby river, a sudden memory of his previous life indicates [[spoiler: his bodily inhibitions, and rescue of others with similar affliction, to be part of a redemptive test]].
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** A ferociously powerful, insanely vicious deformed man, known only as "the beast," is directed by [[spoiler: Wisbeech]] to murder [[spoiler: Dis]], but instead finds [[spoiler: Henry]].
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** A ferociously powerful, insanely vicious deformed man, known only as "the beast," is directed by [[spoiler: Wisbeech]] to murder scare off [[spoiler: Dis]], but instead finds [[spoiler: Henry]].
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* BattleAmongTheFlames: In the rear wing of Perfect Rest, a studio in which Dr Wisbeech allows [[spoiler: production of lavish pornographic films of copulation between his deformed test subjects]], catches fire. On defensive eye injury from Dis, [[spoiler: Wisbeech's ferociously powerful, insanely vicious "beast"]] pursues Nick in search of revenge, and hinders the escape of Dis and Constance.
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* BattleAmongTheFlames: BattleAmongstTheFlames: In the rear wing of Perfect Rest, a studio in which Dr Wisbeech allows [[spoiler: production of lavish pornographic films of copulation between his deformed test subjects]], catches fire. On defensive eye injury from Dis, [[spoiler: Wisbeech's ferociously powerful, insanely vicious "beast"]] pursues Nick in search of revenge, and hinders the escape of Dis and Constance.
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* BattleAmongTheFlames: In the rear wing of Perfect Rest, a studio in which Dr Wisbeech allows [[spoiler: production of lavish pornographic films of copulation between his deformed test subjects]], catches fire. On defensive eye injury from Dis, [[spoiler: Wisbeech's ferociously powerful, insanely vicious "beast"]] pursues Nick in search of revenge, and hinders the escape of Dis and Constance.
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* MamaBear: Despite [[spoiler: a fire raging through Perfect Rest]], Constance is determined to save Michael, a deformed patient in her care; Dis just as much so.
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* MamaBear: Despite [[spoiler: a fire raging through the secret wing of Perfect Rest]], Constance is determined to save Michael, a deformed patient in her care; Dis just as much so.
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* ClosetGay: Henry, seemingly terrified of upsetting his loving yet overbearing mother, refuses to openly admit his homosexuality. Under the pretence of working late, he secretly meets a rent boy in the agency building.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch:
** [[spoiler: Elderly midwife Hildegarde Vogel, as well as Dis, although in his absence, Wisbeech’s “beast” brutally murders Henry instead.]]
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: [[spoiler: Elderly midwife Hildegarde Vogel, as well as Dis, although in his absence, Wisbeech’s “beast” brutally murders Henry instead.]]
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* RapeAsDrama: When Dis was eleven, a "pervert, who wanted sex with a freak" tried to molest him.
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** When Dis was eleven, a "pervert, who wanted sex with a freak" tried to molesthim.him.
** In the secret wing of Perfect Rest, [[spoiler: Dr Wisbeech, to fund his studies, oversees lavishly produced footage of drug-coerced copulation between deformed test subjects. In these, he includes his ward Constance.]]
** When Dis was eleven, a "pervert, who wanted sex with a freak" tried to molest
** In the secret wing of Perfect Rest, [[spoiler: Dr Wisbeech, to fund his studies, oversees lavishly produced footage of drug-coerced copulation between deformed test subjects. In these, he includes his ward Constance.]]
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* AxeCrazy: Beneath the wing of Perfect Rest which holds numerous [[spoiler: severely deformed youths and children]] are inmates known simply as "[[TitleDrop others]]": [[spoiler: severely people who also happen to be homicidally insane]].
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* AxeCrazy: Beneath the wing of Perfect Rest which holds numerous [[spoiler: severely deformed youths and children]] are inmates known simply as "[[TitleDrop others]]": [[spoiler: severely deformed people who also happen to be homicidally insane]].
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: When several "others" escape into the studio where Dr Wisbeech and Head Nurse Rachel plan to oversee production of a SnuffFilm, [[spoiler: the two meet a sticky end.]]