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--> '' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.''the woman has quite literally seen almost everything there is to see. She calls everyone in the leading group "kids" because that is what they are to her.
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--> '' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.''the woman has quite literally seen almost everything there is to see. She calls everyone in the leading group "kids" because that is what they are to her.
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--> ''' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.'''
the woman has quite literally seen almost everything there is to see. She calls everyone in the leading group "kids" because that is what they are to her.
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--> ''' '' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.'''
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help in getting up.
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help in getting up.
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** Meanwhile, in regards to Omni tech, according to the author, their tech is less actual tech and more art squiggles and drawings. That only works if produced by their custom-made heavens. Otherwise, it just doesn't work at all. all the while they call what they are doing ''True Science''. it isn't that at all.
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* CyberSpace: the Nether is A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds. It functions as the internet of godclads basically.
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* CyberSpace: the Nether is A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; existence and is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost It is almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds. It functions as the internet Internet of the godclads basically.world.
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* CoolOldLady: there are a number of cool old ladies in the world of godclads. the ones we as readers are most well acquainted with are :
** Quail Tavers - the most legendary squire in the megacity of New Vultan. this is her introduction scene.
--> ''' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.'''
the woman has quite literally seen almost everything there is to see. She calls everyone in the leading group "kids" because that is what they are to her.
** The other extraordinary old lady we see in the story is old Lady Zein, an almost certainly insane drug-overusing old lady that can kick almost everyone's ass, has seen everything in the world, has a future seeing heaven and a sword made out of a god, and is in the top 5 best fighters in the world.
** Quail Tavers - the most legendary squire in the megacity of New Vultan. this is her introduction scene.
--> ''' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.'''
the woman has quite literally seen almost everything there is to see. She calls everyone in the leading group "kids" because that is what they are to her.
** The other extraordinary old lady we see in the story is old Lady Zein, an almost certainly insane drug-overusing old lady that can kick almost everyone's ass, has seen everything in the world, has a future seeing heaven and a sword made out of a god, and is in the top 5 best fighters in the world.
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* AIIsACrapshoot:AIIsACrapshoot: for both voidwatch and omnitech this is the case for different reasons.
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In the greatest megacity in the known world New vultan. Avo - a man-eating ghoul that ghost jacks for a living finds himself risen from the dead due to his father's dead ghost and the mission it left him - to save this scum city and become God.
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In the greatest megacity in the known world world, New vultan. Avo - a man-eating ghoul that ghost jacks for a living living, finds himself risen from the dead due to his father's dead ghost and the mission it left him - to save this scum city and become God.
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]].
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]].Wiki]] that needs desperate help in getting up.
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* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage ti tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself as "Anti skill issue.", he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself as "Anti skill issue.", he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis
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* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage ti to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himselfas "Anti skill an " Anti Skill issue.", " he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis Veylis, the '' fist of recursion''.
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself
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** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's own mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user, and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should sequences of memory go missing.
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** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's own mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user, user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences of memory go missing.
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* DeityOfHumanOrigin: what the Gods of Godclads are - a soul that is infused with a storyline - a myth so to speak. And as such every God has its beginnings in human worship and death. It is also what godclads themselves are - as human that have taken the shattered pieces of the Gods they broke and have now mantled the pieces to their own souls - thus becoming immortal and impossible beings. Able to display almost almighty miracles one and all (even if differing in scale each and every one of them.)
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* DeityOfHumanOrigin: what the Gods of Godclads are - a soul that is infused with a storyline - a myth so to speak. myth. And as such such, every God has its beginnings in human worship and death. It is also what godclads themselves are - as human humans that have taken the shattered pieces of the Gods they broke and have now mantled the pieces to their own souls - thus becoming immortal and impossible beings. Able to display almost almighty miracles miracles, one and all (even if differing in scale each and every one of them.differs in scale.)
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* FantasticDrug: there are several such drugs in godclads.examples include - Joy, Suncloud and more.
** Joy makes you really happy and slows down the heart rate - as a consequence of that it is the single most used drug in the setting.
** Suncloud is a nano drug that kind of melds into your mind - gives onea combination between super hallucinations and lucid dreaming.
** Numb is an emotion killer and it also helps one sleep better. Its a regulated drug by choice of the guilds. Tho many people use it when their nightmares get to be too much for them to handle.
** Nova is a combat drug - it will increase muscle density for a while , but it won't do that to bone. It can also make ones heart explode.
** Joy makes you really happy and slows down the heart rate - as a consequence of that it is the single most used drug in the setting.
** Suncloud is a nano drug that kind of melds into your mind - gives onea combination between super hallucinations and lucid dreaming.
** Numb is an emotion killer and it also helps one sleep better. Its a regulated drug by choice of the guilds. Tho many people use it when their nightmares get to be too much for them to handle.
** Nova is a combat drug - it will increase muscle density for a while , but it won't do that to bone. It can also make ones heart explode.
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* FantasticDrug: there are several such drugs in godclads.examples include - Joy, Suncloud Suncloud, and more.
** Joy makes youreally happy and slows down the heart rate - as a consequence of that rate; consequently, it is the single most used drug in the setting.
** Suncloud is anano drug nano-drug that kind of melds into your mind - gives onea one combination between super hallucinations and lucid dreaming.
** Numb is an emotionkiller killer, and it also helps one sleep better. Its It's a regulated drug by choice of the guilds. Tho However, many people use it when their nightmares get to be too much for them to handle.
** Nova is a combat drug - it will increase muscle density for a while, but it won't do that to bone. It can also make ones one's heart explode.
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* Gorn: the story is very bloody and comes with Avo having a blood heaven.
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* Gorn: the story is very bloody and comes with Avo having a blood heaven.
* HorrifyingHero: Avo is a very horrifying creature, and he only gets more and more terrible as the story goes on.
* HorrifyingHero: Avo is a very horrifying creature, and he only gets more and more terrible as the story goes on.
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** the fact that Kae was one of if not the head of the project that Avo's frame the stillborn was made from.
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* MessianicArchetype: Jaus Avendaer is this. A simple slave that found a great civilization sleeping away and with them rose to overthrow the gods themselves and becoming the leader of the world after that. Things happen and he died but his name is worshipped as a god himself. Much to his hate - the man did not want to be a God.
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* MessianicArchetype: Jaus Avendaer is this. A simple slave that who found a great civilization sleeping away and with them rose to overthrow the gods themselves and becoming became the leader of the world after that. world's leader. Things happen happen, and he died dies, but his name is worshipped as a god himself.god. Much to his hate - the man did not want to be a God.
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: what veylis avendaer aka the leader of the highflame guild and daughter of Jaus ''Crownbearer'' Avendaer tried to do to him. [[spoiler: it didn't quite work out.]]
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: what veylis avendaer Veylis Avendaer, aka the leader of the highflame high flame guild and daughter of Jaus ''Crownbearer'' Avendaer Avendaer, tried to do to him. [[spoiler: it didn't quite work out.]]
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* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself as "Anti skill issue."
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* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself as "Anti skill issue."", he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[ https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]].
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[ https://godclads.[[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]].
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This an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] and [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]]. Mammal is also working on publishing the first book of god clads on Amazon this year or the next.
It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 4-5 extra chapters a week.
It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 4-5 extra chapters a week.
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This is an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] and [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]]. Mammal is also working on publishing the first book of god clads on Amazon this year or the next. \n
It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around4-5 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[ https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]].
It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around
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** Joy makes you really happy and slows down the heart rate - as a consequence of that it is the single most used drug in the setting.
** Suncloud is a nano drug that kind of melds into your mind - gives onea combination between super hallucinations and lucid dreaming.
** Numb is an emotion killer and it also helps one sleep better. Its a regulated drug by choice of the guilds. Tho many people use it when their nightmares get to be too much for them to handle.
** Nova is a combat drug - it will increase muscle density for a while , but it won't do that to bone. It can also make ones heart explode.
** Suncloud is a nano drug that kind of melds into your mind - gives onea combination between super hallucinations and lucid dreaming.
** Numb is an emotion killer and it also helps one sleep better. Its a regulated drug by choice of the guilds. Tho many people use it when their nightmares get to be too much for them to handle.
** Nova is a combat drug - it will increase muscle density for a while , but it won't do that to bone. It can also make ones heart explode.
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--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a flat.
Even if she weres stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
Most if not all of the guilds Fated have some version of being a designer baby.
Even if she weres stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
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--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a
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* BioAugmentation:BioAugmentation: The Sang (No-dragon) grafter ravuca is a doctor that does bodily improvement via this method.
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* DesignerBabies: Due to the "womb rash" (a deadly condition triggered by either physical touch or lust; there is no known cure), even the mere thought of having sex can kill you. Babies have been mainly vat-grown for a while now. Of course, the guilds in the tiers also practice genetic modification for the best outcome of looks, abilities, and more.
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* DesignerBabies: Due to the "womb rash" (a deadly condition triggered by either physical touch or lust; there is no known cure), even the mere thought of having sex can kill you. Babies have been mainly vat-grown for a while now. Of course, the guilds in the tiers also practice genetic modification for the best outcome of looks, abilities, and more. An example of such is arbel Greatling .
--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a flat.
Even if she weres stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
Most if not all of the guilds Fated have some version of being a designer baby.
--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a flat.
Even if she weres stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
Most if not all of the guilds Fated have some version of being a designer baby.
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** Chapter 8-14 The Inverted Dreamer (I) - [[spoiler: “Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a god!”]]
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--> ''“Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a
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** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I - [[spoiler:"Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."]]
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** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I - [[spoiler:"Avo -
--> ''"Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."]]"''
--> ''"Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+.
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** Chapter 8-14 The Inverted Dreamer (I) - [[spoiler: -->“Did “Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a god!”]]
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--> "Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."
--> "Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."
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--> "Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."
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** Chapter 8-14 The Inverted Dreamer (I) - [[spoiler:''' “Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a god!”''']]
** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I - [[spoiler: '''Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+''']]
** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I - [[spoiler: '''Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+''']]
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** Chapter 8-14 The Inverted Dreamer (I) - [[spoiler:''' “Did [[spoiler: -->“Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a god!”''']]
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** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I -[[spoiler: '''Avo [[spoiler:"Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+''']]me?+."]]
** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I -
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--> "Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."
--> "Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."
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** Chapter 13-8 The Enemies of My Enemy I - [[spoiler: '''Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+''']]
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** Nether: A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds.
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* CyberSpace: the Nether is this.A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds. It functions as the internet of godclads basically.
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** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's own mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user, and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should sequences of memory go missing.
** Nether: A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds.
** Nether: A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence; is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. Almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds.
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** Dive: To cast deep into your subconsciousness and ride one's mind like a vehicle through the Nether, traveling from memory to memory; alternatively, it means a contracted gig commissioned to a Necrojack or a team of street squires.
** [[ScienceWizard Agnos]]: An agnostic of the old faiths–the few people who are permitted to know scripture under their pact with Jaus and the Guilds. Are unaffiliated to all factions and perform metaphysical tunings and maintenance for Liminal Frames, Heavens, and Hells
** Half-strand: An extremely derogatory term with two layers to its meaning. The first is someone with missing half a genetic strand; predating this slur, the earlier version was derived by meaning that "half someone's father's genetic material spilled out of their mother, resulting in a half-finished subhuman at most."
** [[ScienceWizard Agnos]]: An agnostic of the old faiths–the few people who are permitted to know scripture under their pact with Jaus and the Guilds. Are unaffiliated to all factions and perform metaphysical tunings and maintenance for Liminal Frames, Heavens, and Hells
** Half-strand: An extremely derogatory term with two layers to its meaning. The first is someone with missing half a genetic strand; predating this slur, the earlier version was derived by meaning that "half someone's father's genetic material spilled out of their mother, resulting in a half-finished subhuman at most."
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* DeityOfHumanOrigin: what the Gods of Godclads are - a soul that is infused with a storyline - a myth so to speak. And as such every God has its beginnings in human worship and death. It is also what godclads themselves are - as human that have taken the shattered pieces of the Gods they broke and have now mantled the pieces to their own souls - thus becoming immortal and impossible beings. Able to display almost almighty miracles one and all (even if differing in scale each and every one of them.)
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* MessianicArchetype: Jaus Avendaer is this. A simple slave that found a great civilization sleeping away and with them rose to overthrow the gods themselves and becoming the leader of the world after that. Things happen and he died but his name is worshipped as a god himself. Much to his hate - the man did not want to be a God.
