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* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
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* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells hells, a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
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* AIIsACrapshoot: for both voidwatch and omnitech this is the case for different reasons.
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* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself an "Anti Skill issue." he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis, the ''fist of recursion''.
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: what Veylis Avendaer, aka the leader of the high flame guild and daughter of Jaus ''Crownbearer'' Avendaer, tried to do to him. [[spoiler: it didn't quite work out.]]
* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself an " Anti Skill issue." he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis, the '' fist of recursion''.
* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
* TheAce: Zein thousand hands is called by the author himself an " Anti Skill issue." he also said that the same applies to an even greater extent to her daughter Veylis, the '' fist of recursion''.
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* AdvancedAncientHumans: void watch is this to a T.
* BloodKnight: Avo and Draus are always looking to fight each other and others. Draus, in particular, goes out alone and kills syndicates by the groups for fun. The only ones in Avo's carde that aren't at least a little bloodthirsty are Kae and Essus.
* BadassLongcoat: Avo likes to wear these.
* BeenThereShapedHistory:
* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
* TheBeautifulElite: The eight guilds of the city all have incredible gene and body modification technology so that they come out looking beautiful and graceful no matter what.
* BodyHorror: The protagonist himself is a biologically engineered man-eating monstrosity, but thanks to the extensive possibilities with Bioware and flesh-grafting, one can find a wide range of biologically structured wonders, the prime experts in the field of biotechnologies are the No-Dragons (aka sang) one of the eight guilds that control [[MegaCity new Vultan]].
* BadassTransplant: Almost any transplant counts here. For example, we have the :
* BloodKnight: Avo and Draus are always looking to fight each other and others. Draus, in particular, goes out alone and kills syndicates by the groups for fun. The only ones in Avo's carde that aren't at least a little bloodthirsty are Kae and Essus.
* BadassLongcoat: Avo likes to wear these.
* BeenThereShapedHistory:
* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
* TheBeautifulElite: The eight guilds of the city all have incredible gene and body modification technology so that they come out looking beautiful and graceful no matter what.
* BodyHorror: The protagonist himself is a biologically engineered man-eating monstrosity, but thanks to the extensive possibilities with Bioware and flesh-grafting, one can find a wide range of biologically structured wonders, the prime experts in the field of biotechnologies are the No-Dragons (aka sang) one of the eight guilds that control [[MegaCity new Vultan]].
* BadassTransplant: Almost any transplant counts here. For example, we have the :
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* AdvancedAncientHumans: void watch is this to a T.
* BloodKnight: AvoAscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: What Veylis Avendaer, aka the leader of the high flame guild and Draus are always looking daughter of Jaus ''Crownbearer'' Avendaer, tried to fight each other and others. Draus, in particular, goes out alone and kills syndicates by the groups for fun. The only ones in Avo's carde that aren't at least a little bloodthirsty are Kae and Essus.
*do to him. [[spoiler: it didn't quite work out.]]
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* BeenThereShapedHistory:
* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
* TheBeautifulElite: The eight guilds of the city all have incredible gene and body modification technology so that they come out looking beautiful and graceful no matter what.
* BodyHorror: The protagonist himself is a biologically engineered man-eating monstrosity, but thanks to the extensive possibilities with Bioware and flesh-grafting, one can find a wide range of biologically structured wonders, the prime experts in the field of biotechnologies are the No-Dragons (aka sang) one of the eight guilds that control [[MegaCity new Vultan]].
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* BloodKnight: Avo
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* BeenThereShapedHistory:
* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
* TheBeautifulElite: The eight guilds of the city all have incredible gene and body modification technology so that they come out looking beautiful and graceful no matter what.
* BodyHorror: The protagonist himself is a biologically engineered man-eating monstrosity, but thanks to the extensive possibilities with Bioware and flesh-grafting, one can find a wide range of biologically structured wonders, the prime experts in the field of biotechnologies are the No-Dragons (aka sang) one of the eight guilds that control [[MegaCity new Vultan]].
* BadassTransplant: Almost any transplant counts here. For example, we have
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* BeyondTheImpossible: Every miracle used by the gods or the godclads takes almost if not just zero consideration to the laws of the natural world, instead working on myth logic and such.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: every miracle used by the gods or the godclads takes almost if not just zero consideration to the laws of the natural world, instead working on myth logic and such.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: every miracle usedBloodKnight: Avo and Draus are always looking to fight each other and others. Draus, in particular, goes out alone and kills syndicates by the gods or the godclads takes almost if not just zero consideration to the laws of the natural world, instead working on myth logic groups for fun. The only ones in Avo's carde that aren't at least a little bloodthirsty are Kae and such.Essus.
*BewareTheSillyOnes:BodyHorror: The protagonist himself is a biologically engineered man-eating monstrosity, but thanks to the extensive possibilities with Bioware and flesh-grafting, one can find a wide range of biologically structured wonders, the prime experts in the field of biotechnologies are the No-Dragons (aka sang) one of the eight guilds that control [[MegaCity new Vultan]].
* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: every miracle used
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* BrainComputerInterface: The meta minds interface between the real and the nether. The noosphere or the ansible from [[AdvancedAncientHumans Voidwatch]] connects one's mind to several virtual spaces that do the same thing.
** Metamind: A phantasmal mind-enhancing construct held together by ghosts. It is created by forking a copied instance of one's mind, rooting it a body, killing said body, and stitching a new, parallel mind to the original, thus giving a "twin-stacked of thought" to the user and offloading any potential mental trauma. With the cloned mind serving as the core, the external layer is layered in the memory of flowing ghosts, allowing an obfuscating function and preventing mem-lock. The Meta also allows for cognitive repair functions and the resequencing of a mind should memory sequences go missing.
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* CyberSpace: the Nether is A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence and is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. It is almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds. It functions as the Internet of the godclads world.
* CyberPunk:
* CrapsackWorld: The world of god-clads is fucked right to the bone. The majority of the people living in the megacities are without any rights as human beings, existing as drug addicts and fuel for the higher-ups to power up their heavens and hells, dying in droves in abject poverty or blood sports if they are lucky, not to mention that reality is breaking almost every day given the sunderwilds (a reality wound that covers the majority of the planet).
* CoolOldLady: there are a number of cool old ladies in the world of godclads. the ones we as readers are most well acquainted with are :
** Quail Tavers - the most legendary squire in the megacity of New Vultan. this is her introduction scene.
--> '' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.''
** The other extraordinary old lady we see in the story is old Lady Zein, an almost certainly insane drug-overusing old lady that can kick almost everyone's ass, has seen everything in the world, has a future seeing heaven and a sword made out of a god, and is in the top 5 best fighters in the world.
* CorporateWarfare: The eight guilds are the ruling class of new vultan and all hate each other. Each guild is the equivalent of a continent and is massive, both size and resource-wise.
* CosmicKeystone: [[spoiler: The Flayed Ladder is one of these. Its a device that acts as a key to shape reality in any way shape or form the one who has it wants. Voidwatch wants to use it to turn back the clock so that their greatest mistake never happens and all the other guilds have their own utopia in mind with it.]]
* CyberPunk:
* CrapsackWorld: The world of god-clads is fucked right to the bone. The majority of the people living in the megacities are without any rights as human beings, existing as drug addicts and fuel for the higher-ups to power up their heavens and hells, dying in droves in abject poverty or blood sports if they are lucky, not to mention that reality is breaking almost every day given the sunderwilds (a reality wound that covers the majority of the planet).
* CoolOldLady: there are a number of cool old ladies in the world of godclads. the ones we as readers are most well acquainted with are :
** Quail Tavers - the most legendary squire in the megacity of New Vultan. this is her introduction scene.
--> '' Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.''
** The other extraordinary old lady we see in the story is old Lady Zein, an almost certainly insane drug-overusing old lady that can kick almost everyone's ass, has seen everything in the world, has a future seeing heaven and a sword made out of a god, and is in the top 5 best fighters in the world.
* CorporateWarfare: The eight guilds are the ruling class of new vultan and all hate each other. Each guild is the equivalent of a continent and is massive, both size and resource-wise.
* CosmicKeystone: [[spoiler: The Flayed Ladder is one of these. Its a device that acts as a key to shape reality in any way shape or form the one who has it wants. Voidwatch wants to use it to turn back the clock so that their greatest mistake never happens and all the other guilds have their own utopia in mind with it.]]
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** Quail Tavers - the most legendary squire in the megacity of New Vultan. this is her introduction scene.
---> ''Most squires died within three months on the job. Veterans made it over two years. Legends ten. Quail Tavers was rumored to be over four hundred. There was something to be said about an ancient still thriving in a profession that butchered the young by the billions.''
** The other extraordinary old lady we see in the story is old Lady Zein, an almost certainly insane drug-overusing old lady that can kick almost everyone's ass, has seen everything in the world, has a future seeing heaven and a sword made out of a god, and is in the top 5 best fighters in the world.
* CorporateWarfare: The eight guilds are the ruling class of new vultan and all hate each other. Each guild is the equivalent of a continent and is massive, both size and resource-wise.
* CosmicKeystone: [[spoiler: The Flayed Ladder is one of these. Its a device that acts as a key to shape reality in any way shape or form the one who has it wants. Voidwatch wants to use it to turn back the clock so that their greatest mistake never happens and all the other guilds have their own utopia in mind with it.]]
* CrapsackWorld: The world of god-clads is fucked right to the bone. The majority of the people living in the megacities are without any rights as human beings, existing as drug addicts and fuel for the higher-ups to power up their heavens and hells, dying in droves in abject poverty or blood sports if they are lucky, not to mention that reality is breaking almost every day given the sunderwilds (a reality wound that covers the majority of the planet).
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* CyberSpace: The Nether is A ghost-mind network that runs in a parallel plane to existence and is connected in a grand weave of loci, ghosts, and moving minds. It is almost like a living organism due to how it is formed from countless living minds. It functions as the Internet of the godclads world.
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* DeityOfHumanOrigin: what the Gods of Godclads are - a soul that is infused with a storyline - a myth. And as such, every God has its beginnings in human worship and death. It is also what godclads themselves are - as humans that have taken the shattered pieces of the Gods they broke and have now mantled the pieces to their souls - thus becoming immortal and impossible beings. Able to display almost almighty miracles, one and all (even if each one differs in scale.)
* DeityOfHumanOrigin: What the Gods of Godclads are - a soul that is infused with a storyline - a myth. And as such, every God has its beginnings in human worship and death. It is also what godclads themselves are - as humans that have taken the shattered pieces of the Gods they broke and have now mantled the pieces to their souls - thus becoming immortal and impossible beings. Able to display almost almighty miracles, one and all (even if each one differs in scale.)
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* FantasticDrug: there are several such drugs in godclads.examples include - Joy, Suncloud, and more.
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* AGodAmI: This can be literal with Godclads (colloquially called ‘clads). After getting a liminal frame implanted with access to heavens and hells a ‘clad can get into a phase of god complex (expected when one is using the powers of actual gods at will) that makes the whole category a group of… eccentric people, at least those that survive and manage to tone down, if partially, their new (if justified) arrogance at their apparent immortality
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* HorrifyingTheHorror: the first time the sangist inside Avo sees a raptured heaven, it is immediately struck with horror and fear that it begs him not to let him see it.
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* LikeASonToMe: Walton's relationship with Avo.
* TheReveal: there are several such in the story. Examples include:
** Avo finds out that his entire memory is a well-constructed fake.
** Walton reveals himself as a low master - specifically the famine of defiance.
** The Hungers reveal the actual purpose of the ghouls - country to what Avo believed that the purpose of them was to defeat the guilds and take back noloth - the Hungers reveal that the ghouls are meant to be trash bins for the hunger's pain and suffering and similar such things.
** The fact that Kae was one of if not the head of the project that Avo's frame of the stillborn was made from.
* TheReveal: there are several such in the story. Examples include:
** Avo finds out that his entire memory is a well-constructed fake.
** Walton reveals himself as a low master - specifically the famine of defiance.
** The Hungers reveal the actual purpose of the ghouls - country to what Avo believed that the purpose of them was to defeat the guilds and take back noloth - the Hungers reveal that the ghouls are meant to be trash bins for the hunger's pain and suffering and similar such things.
** The fact that Kae was one of if not the head of the project that Avo's frame of the stillborn was made from.
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* TheReveal: there are several such in the story. Examples include:
** Avo finds out that his entire memory is a well-constructed fake.
** Walton reveals himself as a low master - specifically the famine of defiance.
** The Hungers reveal the actual purpose of the ghouls - country to what Avo believed that the purpose of them was to defeat the guilds and take back noloth - the Hungers reveal that the ghouls are meant to be trash bins for the hunger's pain and suffering and similar such things.
** The fact that Kae was one of if not the head of the project that Avo's frame of the stillborn was made from.
* MechanicalMuscles: There are several people in the mega city of new vultan that has abandoned base biology in favour to metal and more. The one in the main cast that has fully done this is dice. Who has become a full body aug in a metal suit called the rigjumper.
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* MechanicalMuscles: there are several people in the mega city of new vultan that has abandoned base biology in favour to metal and more. The one in the main cast that has fully done this is dice. Who has become a full body aug in a metal suit called the rigjumper.
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* MistakenForBadass: chambers. Just full on chambers
* MoralityChip: in Avo's memories walton had installed such a thing for avo to be able to integrate and interface with the city of new vultan without causing problems. (What with avos cannibal eating and general phycology)
* TransHumanism: as a cyberpunk staple, this is also in god-clads. From the metal infusion or replacement parts to the mind additions or the biological upgrades, there is little you cannot replace or upgrade about yourself in new Vultan.
* ThePowerOfBlood: avo's wound-shaper is a heaven of blood and architecture. It can do all sorts of stuff with blood. Stuff that should not be possible.
* MoralityChip: in Avo's memories walton had installed such a thing for avo to be able to integrate and interface with the city of new vultan without causing problems. (What with avos cannibal eating and general phycology)
* TransHumanism: as a cyberpunk staple, this is also in god-clads. From the metal infusion or replacement parts to the mind additions or the biological upgrades, there is little you cannot replace or upgrade about yourself in new Vultan.
* ThePowerOfBlood: avo's wound-shaper is a heaven of blood and architecture. It can do all sorts of stuff with blood. Stuff that should not be possible.
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* PiecesOfGod: Heavens are pieces of fallen gods that the people of Idheim implant into themselves to become godclads.
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* PiecesOfGod: Heavens are pieces of fallen gods that the people of Idheim implant into themselves to become godclads.
* PhysicalGod: pretty much all god clads are that to one level or another.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Avo and Darus.
* PhysicalGod: pretty much all god clads are that to one level or another.
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--> ''“Did you hear me, ‘Walton?’ You gave our greatest instrument to a creature that was less than a slave. Less than a dog! They were made to express our hate! Our hate! Our boundless hate for the world! To bleed the betrayers forever! Lick sacks of fucking waste-trauma! And you made the meat meant to carry our excess metaphorical shit a god!”''
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--> ''"Avo could feel the sneer building on D'Rongo's face. +No. Of course you're not. You're too good for that. And you killed my Incubi. All at once. All without the Exorcists noticing.+ Her features softened. A chuckle of genuine amusement filled her mind. +Ah. The answer is obvious. Welcome to my mind then, Priest of Noloth. Come to strike another bargain with me?+."''
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* WombHorror: Wombrash is a metaphysical contagion that leaked into the world after the Rupturing of the Heavens of Lust, Love, and Fertility. Due to this, the Physical Intimacy Ban is in full effect for New Vultun and the surrounding areas. All lustful activities must be conducted using proxies in the Nether. Any physical intimacy will trigger an outbreak of the rash, which causes a body's biomass to begin producing womb sores that incubate half-formed homunculi. The transmission vectors of womb rash are: physical, auditory, and visual. All physical intimacy in reality, constitutes a felony of the highest order and will be monitored by Guild Exorcists.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness
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* WombHorror: Wombrash is a metaphysical contagion that leaked into the world after the Rupturing of the Heavens of Lust, Love, and Fertility. Due to this, the Physical Intimacy Ban is in full effect for New Vultun and the surrounding areas. All lustful activities must be conducted using proxies in the Nether. Any physical intimacy will trigger an outbreak of the rash, which causes a body's biomass to begin producing womb sores that incubate half-formed homunculi. The transmission vectors of womb rash are: physical, auditory, and visual. All physical intimacy in reality, constitutes a felony of the highest order and will be monitored by Guild Exorcists.
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--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a flat. Even if she weres stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
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--> ''Abrel Greatling's body was a morphology of expense and transhuman artistry. From skin to sinew, her make was quality and efficiency, with even the oxygen burning at nearly a thousand the efficiency of a flat. Even if she weres were stripped of her Frame, she would have walked a god among the baselines. She could have sprinted for a week without tiring–strained against tons and only failed against the limitations of physics instead of her own tendons.''
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* DoorStopper: The story, as of this very moment, is 850 thousand words long and is far from being finished, and this is on the publicly published side. These numbers also don't include the Patreon updates.
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* DoorStopper: The story, as of this very moment, is 850 thousand around a million + words long and is far from being finished, and this is on the publicly published side. These numbers also don't include the Patreon updates.
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*ElementalMotifs: ElementalMotifs: Avo is often described in such a way. Especially once he gets his mind burned and imprinted with Ignorance. His elemental motif is flame.
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* MasterSwordsman: Zian Thousand Hands - [[spoiler: the wife of [[MessianicArchetype Jaus]] ]] is an ardent student and supporter of the art of the cut.
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* MasterSwordsman: Zian Thousand Hands - [[spoiler: the wife of [[MessianicArchetype Jaus]] ]] is an ardent student and supporter of the art of the cut. She called an unparalleled warrior and the best person to have ever picked a blade by several people.
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* MechanicalMuscles:MechanicalMuscles: there are several people in the mega city of new vultan that has abandoned base biology in favour to metal and more. The one in the main cast that has fully done this is dice. Who has become a full body aug in a metal suit called the rigjumper.
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MistakenForBadass: chambers. Just full on chambers
*MoralityChip: MoralityChip: in Avo's memories walton had installed such a thing for avo to be able to integrate and interface with the city of new vultan without causing problems. (What with avos cannibal eating and general phycology)
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* ReasonYouSuckSpeech:ReasonYouSuckSpeech: Avo has for sure given some straight up roasts of such a level to several people.
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It also has a [[https://discord.com/invite/f8bjdMKW discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 20-21 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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It also has a [[https://discord.com/invite/f8bjdMKW discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 20-21 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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This is an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] and [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]].
Mammal has also published the first book of the godclads series - the broken cage on Amazon in both [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1 E-Book format]] and [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1Audio Audiobook format]]
Mammal has also published the first book of the godclads series - the broken cage on Amazon in both [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1 E-Book format]] and [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1Audio Audiobook format]]
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This is an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] here]]) and [[https://www.Website/RoyalRoad ([[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]].
here]]). Mammal has also published the first book of the godclads series - the broken cage series, "The Broken Cage", on Amazon in both [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1 E-Book format]] and [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1Audio Audiobook format]]
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 20-21 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw com/invite/f8bjdMKW discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 20-21 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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It also has a [[https://discord.gg/h9PRjAXw discord]] and [[https://www.patreon.com/user?u=84402213 patreon]] that he posts on around 11-12 20-21 extra chapters a week. This work also has a [[https://godclads.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page Wiki]] that needs desperate help getting up.
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This is an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] and [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]]. Mammal is also working on publishing the first book of god clads on Amazon this year or the next.
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This is an original fiction by [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/members/ostensiblemammalian.542596/ ostensible mammalian]] it is found in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/godclads-a-godpunk-progression-science-fantasy-story.1048894/ spacebattles]] and [[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/59663/godclads-monster-mceldritchcyberpunkprogression royal road]]. road]].
Mammalis has also working on publishing published the first book of god clads the godclads series - the broken cage on Amazon this year or the next.
in both [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1 E-Book format]] and [[https://mybook.to/Godclads1Audio Audiobook format]]
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