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* ImpoverishedPatrician: Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count). However, the old glory of his family has long passed, and Kai is easily the poorest student in their class, despite most of them not being from nobility background.
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* ImpoverishedPatrician: ImpoverishedPatrician:
** Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count). However, the old glory of his family has long passed, and Kai is easily the poorest student in their class, despite most of them not being from nobility background.
** Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count). However, the old glory of his family has long passed, and Kai is easily the poorest student in their class, despite most of them not being from nobility background.
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* BlackSheep: Christian.
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* BlackSheep: Christian. Unlike all other men of the core family, he is not interested in working hard or increasing the family's wealth. He instead prefers to enjoy his life with traveling and plenty of women.
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* TheClan / BigScrewedUpFamily / DysfunctionalFamily: The Buddenbrooks. The Hagenströms are also TheClan, but definitely not so much of the other tropes.
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* TheClan / BigScrewedUpFamily / DysfunctionalFamily: TheClan: The Buddenbrooks. The Buddenbrooks and the Hagenströms are also TheClan, but definitely not so much two families of tradesmen, and the other tropes.novel follows both their fortunes across multiple generations.
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%%* ImpoverishedPatrician / LandPoor: Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count).
%%** Herr von Maiboom who married Tony's former classmate Armgard von Schilling is an overly indebted patrician and [[spoiler:commits suicide at the end.]]
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%%** Herr von Maiboom who married Tony's former classmate Armgard von Schilling is an overly indebted patrician and [[spoiler:commits suicide at the end.]]
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** Herr von Maiboom who married Tony's former classmate Armgard von Schilling is an overly indebted patrician and [[spoiler:commits suicide at the end.
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Determined it is missing a component to qualify for Delicate And Sickly. So, found another to replace it.
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* IllChild: Hanno has suffered from various diseases since he was a baby. A particularly nasty toothache almost killed him when he was a child, [[spoiler:And he dies of Typhus at the age of 16]].
* ImpoverishedPatrician / LandPoor: Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count).
** Herr von Maiboom who married Tony's former classmate Armgard von Schilling is an overly indebted patrician and [[spoiler:commits suicide at the end.]]
* ImpoverishedPatrician / LandPoor: Kai's father, who's a Graf (Count).
** Herr von Maiboom who married Tony's former classmate Armgard von Schilling is an overly indebted patrician and [[spoiler:commits suicide at the end.]]
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* SoapOperaDisease: Hanno has suffered from various diseases since he was a baby. A particularly nasty toothache almost killed him when he was a child, [[spoiler:and he dies of Typhus at the age of 16]].
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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: In the final confrontation between [[spoiler:Thomas and Christian]], this is said almost verbatim.
--> "You will not do it... I will declare you insane, I will let you be imprisoned, I will nullify you!"
--> "You will not do it... I will declare you insane, I will let you be imprisoned, I will nullify you!"
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* TheBoyWhoCriedWolf: Christian described all his illnesses to the whole family in great detail, to the point where nobody believed him anymore - that is, until he's actually hospitalized for his strong case of rheumatism.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Tony had a promising teenage romance with the aspiring doctor Morten, but as he didn't belong to the same social class, in the end she agreed to the ArrangedMarriage with Grünlich. While she never outright states it, she regrets not having waited for Morten he entire life. This is evidenced by her quoting Morten's political views for her entire life, and even using their inside jokes as "proverbs" even decades later.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Tony had a promising teenage romance with the aspiring doctor Morten, but as he didn't belong to the same social class, in the end she agreed to the ArrangedMarriage with Grünlich. While she never outright states it, she regrets not having waited for Morten he entire for the rest of her life. This is evidenced by her quoting Morten's political views for her entire life, and even using their inside jokes as "proverbs" even decades later.
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* WrongfullyCommitted: It's implied that this is what happened to [[spoiler:Thomas]] in the end. While he indeed had some mental health issues, he was never really insane, but his wife formed a pact with the treating doctor to keep him confined in an asylum.
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* WrongfullyCommitted: It's implied that this is what happened to [[spoiler:Thomas]] [[spoiler:Christian]] in the end. While he indeed had some mental health issues, he was never really insane, but his wife formed a pact with the treating doctor to keep him confined in an asylum.
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* SoBeautifulItsACurse: Tony tried to get hired as a proprietor in an English society, but claims that she didn't get the job due to her good looks.
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* The book starts with Gotthold, the first son of Johann, to be disinherited to keep the family wealth together. The rest of the book sees the family wealth slowly disintegrating, often towards malicious, fraudulent or deceptive friends and spouses.
* If Sesemi wishes people good luck or happiness, they always tend to become unlucky and unhappy in their lives.
* If Sesemi wishes people good luck or happiness, they always tend to become unlucky and unhappy in their lives.
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* ArcWords: Sesemi: "Be happy, my ''good'' child!" [[spoiler:Ironic, as every kid she wished this to suffered from livelong unhappiness.]]
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* CheckovsClassroom: Tony's teenage lover Morten studied medicine and explained to her what a pulmonic edema is. [[spoiler:Decades later, her mother dies from it and Tony is still able to correctly detect the disease and its symptoms.]]
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* CheckovsClassroom: ChekhovsClassroom: Tony's teenage lover Morten studied medicine and explained to her what a pulmonic edema is. [[spoiler:Decades later, her mother dies from it and Tony is still able to correctly detect the disease and its symptoms.]]
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* CheckovsClassroom: Tony's teenage lover Morten studied medicine and explained to her what a pulmonic edema is. [[spoiler:Decades later, her mother dies from it and Tony is still able to correctly detect the disease and its symptoms.]]
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Herrmann's mother was Jewish, it's stated verbatim in the book that his father married into a Jewish family.
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* AmbiguouslyJewish: It's not mentioned directly, but you can find pointed out the one or other time that Hermann Hagenström's nose is hooked — a typical Jewish stereotype.
** Earlier drafts of the book contained more jabs at them, like one character stating that the German revolution (of 1848) was cooked up, or at least inspired at "Jewish teatables in Berlin".
** Earlier drafts of the book contained more jabs at them, like one character stating that the German revolution (of 1848) was cooked up, or at least inspired at "Jewish teatables in Berlin".
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Poor, poor Elisabeth. [[spoiler:First, her youngest daughter Clara dies offscreen at a rather young age, and later, she has to experience the sudden death of her first-born Thomas.]]
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Nevermind, it was just a malapropism of "conflict".
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* {{Neologism}}: In the original German version, one character says: "Einen ''congflick'', da verstehe ich mich drauf!"[[note]]In the English version: "“A congflick, I tell you, 'nd I know something about what that means.[[/note]] This word doesn't exist anywhere outside of this novel, and it's uncertain what it was supposed to mean.
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* {{Neologism}}: In the original German version, one character says: "Einen ''congflick'', da verstehe ich mich drauf!"[[note]]In the English version: "“A congflick, I tell you, 'nd I know something about what that means.[[/note]] This word doesn't exist anywhere outside of this novel, and it's uncertain what it was supposed to mean.
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* DisinheritedChild: Gotthold Buddenbrooks, the son of Johann's first marriage, is cut off from the will, officially to "keep the family wealth together".
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* DisinheritedChild: Gotthold Buddenbrooks, Buddenbrook, the son of Johann's first marriage, is cut off from the will, officially to "keep the family wealth together".
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Tony had a promising teenage romance with the aspiring soctor Morten, but as he didn't belong to the same social class, in the end she agreed to the ArrangedMarriage with Grünlich. While she never outright states it, she regrets not having waited for Morten he entire life. This is evidenced by her quoting Morten's political views for her entire life, and even using their inside jokes as "proverbs" even decades later.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Tony had a promising teenage romance with the aspiring soctor doctor Morten, but as he didn't belong to the same social class, in the end she agreed to the ArrangedMarriage with Grünlich. While she never outright states it, she regrets not having waited for Morten he entire life. This is evidenced by her quoting Morten's political views for her entire life, and even using their inside jokes as "proverbs" even decades later.
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* DisinheritedChild: Gotthold Buddenbrooks, the son of Johann's first marriage, is cut off from the will, officially to "keep the family wealth together".
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* DramaticIrony: Quite a lot. Prominent example: If Sesemi wishes people good luck or happiness, they always tend to become unlucky and unhappy in their lives.
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* DramaticIrony: Quite a lot. Prominent example: lot.
* The book starts with Gotthold, the first son of Johann, to be disinherited to keep the family wealth together. The rest of the book sees the family wealth slowly disintegrating, often towards malicious, fraudulent or deceptive friends and spouses.
* If Sesemi wishes people good luck or happiness, they always tend to become unlucky and unhappy in their lives.
* The book starts with Gotthold, the first son of Johann, to be disinherited to keep the family wealth together. The rest of the book sees the family wealth slowly disintegrating, often towards malicious, fraudulent or deceptive friends and spouses.
* If Sesemi wishes people good luck or happiness, they always tend to become unlucky and unhappy in their lives.
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* {{Understatement}}: The novel starts with what Johann Buddenbrook describes as "nothing but a modest lunch" - the meal would spread from the afternoon to the late evening and feature various dishes, many of them quite expensive, elaborate and/or rare.
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* SpurnedIntoSuicide: When Tony made up her mind to marry Morten instead of her admirer Grünlich, her father informs her that Grünlich threatened to kill himself, should he not be able to marry Tony. Her father appeals to her "Christian morals" and implies that she would kill Grünlich if she didn't marry him. Eventually she gives in and agrees to the ArrangedMarriage.
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* TheOneThatGotAway: Tony had a promising teenage romance with the aspiring soctor Morten, but as he didn't belong to the same social class, in the end she agreed to the ArrangedMarriage with Grünlich. While she never outright states it, she regrets not having waited for Morten he entire life. This is evidenced by her quoting Morten's political views for her entire life, and even using their inside jokes as "proverbs" even decades later.
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* LandOfOneCity: The novel takes place in Lübeck, which was a free city state until 1866. In the beginning of the book, various characters discuss whether Lübeck should join the Prussia-dominated Zollverein (and thus cease full sovereignty) or remain independent. In the end of the book, Lübeck is a federal state of the German Empire, and Hanno notes how the free and liberal spirit of the Hanseatic society was replaced by the militaristic, hierarchical culture of the Prussians, especially in school.
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* IllChild: Hanno has suffered from various diseases since he was a baby. A particularly nasty toothache almost killed him when he was a child, [[spoiler:And he dies of Typhus at the age of 16]].
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* GenerationalSagaGenerationalSaga: The novel spans across four generations of the Buddenbrooks family, starting from Johann, the grandson of the company founder, to his great-grandson Hanno.
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* {{Doorstopper}}
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* {{Doorstopper}}{{Doorstopper}}: The German edition of the book has 680 pages.
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* AtomicFBomb: When Tony catches her second husband in the act with their (female) cook, a row ensues, which culminates in Permaneder insulting her, "Go to hell, you dirty swinish slut!" Divorce ensues.
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* AtomicFBomb: When Tony catches her second husband in the act at his AttemptedRape with their (female) cook, a row ensues, which culminates in Permaneder insulting her, "Go to hell, you dirty swinish slut!" Divorce ensues.
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Pretty sure Permaneder is catholic (like 99% of all ethnic Bavarians), but his religion is not relevant to the trope anyway, as he's not a strong follower.
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* {{Oktoberfest}}: Tony's second husband, Permaneder, is a Protestant Bavarian who likes drinking beer more than doing business.
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* {{Oktoberfest}}: Tony's second husband, Permaneder, is a Protestant Bavarian who likes drinking beer more than doing business.
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* SpoiledBrat: Young Tony is like this
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* SpoiledBrat: Young Tony is like thisthis. She regularly plays mean pranks on older or otherwise disadvantaged people, and whenever someone threatens her with consequences, she'd just answer along the line of "you know how powerful my family is? Come on, just try to make me do anything!"
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* InadequateInheritor: Hanno
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* InadequateInheritor: HannoThomas perceives his son Hanno as this. Hanno lacks the strong will and commitment necessary to prevail in a hard business environment - for instance, he starts crying whenever he has to speak to people - and prefers to play music, something other Buddenbrooks never had any talent for.
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* WrongfullyCommitted: It's implied that this is what happened to [[spoiler:Thomas]] in the end. While he indeed had some mental health issues, he was never really insane, but his wife formed a pact with the treating doctor to keep him confined in an asylum.
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Hanno is pretty much the exact opposite of a cloudcuckoolander. I assume that the original trooper meant Christian in the first place and just miswrote.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Hanno. It's not funny.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: Hanno. It's not funny.Christian is this in earlier stages of his life. He is described to have an eerie talent to imitate people perfectly, and instead of working in the family business, he prefers to go on adventures in England and Chile.
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* NeatFreak: Thomas. His morning routine gets longer and longer during his life, until he needs a full one and a half hours. Furthermore, he is said to change his garment three times a day, sometimes in the middle of important meetings.
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** Dentist Mr. Brecht; his name translates to "break it" in English.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted, there are three Buddenbrooks named Johann, not counting the firm's founder Johan.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted, there are three Buddenbrooks named Johann, not counting the firm's founder Johan. However, they are mostly distinguished by their called name: One is regularly called "Johann", the other "Jean", and the third "Hanno".
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* ValuesDissonance: Deliberately invoked by the author in multiple occasions. For instance, he writes that Tony is regularly described as "frivolous" by her relatives, and that this was a serious and barely surpassable insult in the time of the narration.
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Adult Fear has been cut and is being dewicked.
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* AdultFear: Ruin, burnout, early death