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All around us, there's a hidden war being fought. One side wants to [[MindRape control our minds]] to create utopia, and the other is fighting for us to be miserable if we chose. It's being fought with state-of-the-art technology in the nano, in ''us.'' Our bodies. Our brains. And if any of the lose, it could mean madness for them.
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All around us, there's a hidden war being fought. One side wants to [[MindRape control our minds]] to create utopia, [[UtopiaJustifiesTheMeans utopia]], and the other is fighting for us to be miserable if we chose. It's being fought with state-of-the-art technology in the nano, in ''us.'' Our bodies. Our brains. And if any of the lose, it could mean madness for them.
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* TheHedonist: Nijinsky, as a stark contrast to Vincent. Other characters hint that he's really enjoys seeking pleasure, and [[ReallyGetsAround he's hinted to be promiscuous]], especially with men with an "edge" to them.
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* TheHedonist: Nijinsky, as a stark contrast to Vincent. Other characters hint that he's really enjoys seeking pleasure, and [[ReallyGetsAround he's hinted to be promiscuous]], especially with [[AllGuysWantBadBoys men with an "edge" to them.them]].
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Inverted, because it is [[spoiler:Plath]] to [[spoiler:Keats]].
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* SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Inverted, because it is [[spoiler:Plath]] TheHedonist: Nijinsky, as a stark contrast to [[spoiler:Keats]].Vincent. Other characters hint that he's really enjoys seeking pleasure, and [[ReallyGetsAround he's hinted to be promiscuous]], especially with men with an "edge" to them.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Possibly Vincent and Nijinsky. Especially when they're [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple arguing]] about whether to [[spoiler:send Keats and Plath in on a direct attack on the Twins]]. Vincent addresses Nijinsky by the name Shane, which [[YaoiFangirl some]] might move up to HoYay. YMMV though.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Possibly Vincent and Nijinsky. Especially when they're [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple arguing]] about whether to [[spoiler:send Keats and Plath in on a direct attack on the Twins]]. Vincent addresses Nijinsky by the name Shane, which [[YaoiFangirl some]] might move up to HoYay. YMMV though.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Possibly Vincent and Nijinsky. Especially when they're [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple arguing]] about whether to [[spoiler:send Keats and Plath in on a direct attack on the Twins]]. Vincent addresses Nijinsky by the name Shane, which [[YaoiFangirl some]] might move up to HoYay. YMMV though.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[Creator/SylviaPlath Plath]], [[Creator/JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[Theatre/{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[Creator/SylviaPlath Plath]], [[Creator/JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} [[Literate/{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[Theatre/{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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->''"In this war, there are only two outcomes: victory or madness."''
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All around us, there's a hidden war being fought. One side wants to control our minds to create utopia, and the other is fighting for us to be miserable if we chose. It's being fought with state-of-the-art technology in the nano, in ''us.'' Our bodies. Our brains. And if any of the lose, it could mean madness for them.
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->''"In this war, there are only two outcomes: victory [[HappilyEverAfter victory]] or madness.[[WarIsHell madness]]."''
All around us, there's a hidden war being fought. One side wants to [[MindRape control ourminds minds]] to create utopia, and the other is fighting for us to be miserable if we chose. It's being fought with state-of-the-art technology in the nano, in ''us.'' Our bodies. Our brains. And if any of the lose, it could mean madness for them.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[Creator/JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath [[Creator/SylviaPlath Plath]], [[Creator/JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} [[Theatre/{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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''BZRK'', written by Michael Grant (husband of Creator/KAApplegate, co-author of Literature/{{Animorphs}}, Literature/{{Everworld}}, and Literature/{{Remnants}} and author of {{Literature/Gone}}) is a ([[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids ostensibly]]) YoungAdult series about a group of freedom fighters fighting against the Armstrong twins in a micro-war to save human free will. Teenagers Noah and Sadie are recruited after both are dragged into the war after family tragedies and they find themselves in a high-tech conspiracy where there's even doubt on whether or not the ''good guys'' are all that good.
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''BZRK'', written by Michael Grant MichaelGrant (husband of Creator/KAApplegate, co-author of Literature/{{Animorphs}}, Literature/{{Everworld}}, and Literature/{{Remnants}} and author of {{Literature/Gone}}) is a ([[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids ostensibly]]) YoungAdult series about a group of freedom fighters fighting against the Armstrong twins in a micro-war to save human free will. Teenagers Noah and Sadie are recruited after both are dragged into the war after family tragedies and they find themselves in a high-tech conspiracy where there's even doubt on whether or not the ''good guys'' are all that good.
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''BZRK'', written by Michael Grant (husband of Creator/KAApplegate, co-author of Literature/{{Animorphs}}, Literature/{{Everworld}}, and Litearture/{{Remnants}} and author of {{Literature/Gone}}) is a ([[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids ostensibly]]) YoungAdult series about a group of freedom fighters fighting against the Armstrong twins in a micro-war to save human free will. Teenagers Noah and Sadie are recruited after both are dragged into the war after family tragedies and they find themselves in a high-tech conspiracy where there's even doubt on whether or not the ''good guys'' are all that good.
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''BZRK'', written by Michael Grant (husband of Creator/KAApplegate, co-author of Literature/{{Animorphs}}, Literature/{{Everworld}}, and Litearture/{{Remnants}} Literature/{{Remnants}} and author of {{Literature/Gone}}) is a ([[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids ostensibly]]) YoungAdult series about a group of freedom fighters fighting against the Armstrong twins in a micro-war to save human free will. Teenagers Noah and Sadie are recruited after both are dragged into the war after family tragedies and they find themselves in a high-tech conspiracy where there's even doubt on whether or not the ''good guys'' are all that good.
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''BZRK'', written by Michael Grant (husband of KAApplegate, Creator/KAApplegate, co-author of Literature/{{Animorphs}}, Literature/{{Everworld}}, and {{Remnants}} Litearture/{{Remnants}} and author of {{Literature/Gone}}) is a ([[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForKids ostensibly]]) YoungAdult series about a group of freedom fighters fighting against the Armstrong twins in a micro-war to save human free will. Teenagers Noah and Sadie are recruited after both are dragged into the war after family tragedies and they find themselves in a high-tech conspiracy where there's even doubt on whether or not the ''good guys'' are all that good.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats [[Creator/JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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**Unless you think Lear is Tatiana Featherstonehaugh. (Never confirmed, and sort of unlikely, but Vincent suspected and she was doing something really important.)
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: [[spoiler:Plath again about above mentioned SheIsNotMyGirlfriend]]
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*SheIsNotMyGirlfriend: Inverted, because it is [[spoiler:Plath]] to [[spoiler:Keats]].
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* BlueEyes: Noah has been described as having a pair of very brilliant ones. His blue eyes fulfill Types 1, 2, and 3, based on which point you're on at the story.
-->But of course it was those eyes that drew you in. Where had he gotten eyes that blue? They looked unnatural. Like someone wearing tinted contact lenses ... You wouldn't know whether you were looking into profound depths or maybe just into a very crazy place.
-->But of course it was those eyes that drew you in. Where had he gotten eyes that blue? They looked unnatural. Like someone wearing tinted contact lenses ... You wouldn't know whether you were looking into profound depths or maybe just into a very crazy place.
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* AntiHero: Vincent, who [[spoiler:killed a woman in the first chapter in which he appeared,]] which did nothing to reassure the reader that the side of the biotic twitchers was the 'good' side, which leads to...
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* [[LastOfHisKind Last of Her Kind]]: [[spoiler:Sadie, after the plane accident that kills her father and brother.]]
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. Subverted in that we know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. Subverted in that we We do, however, know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes: Vincent, who [[spoiler:killed a woman in the first chapter in which he appeared,]] which did nothing to reassure the reader that the side of the biotic twitchers was the 'good' side, which leads to...
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Accidental Pervert is when these sort of things happen to a character all of the time; because Vincent doesn\'t end up with any other situation besides that one, it doesn\'t work.
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* AccidentalPervert: Also a CrowningMomentOfFunny. Vincent walks in on Sadie in the bathtub. Sadie is naked. Vincent barely notices until she points it out.
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* NakedFirstImpression: When Vincent first meets Sadie, she's in the bathtub. He does not realize this until Sadie points this out, leading to this whole scene being a CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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* AcceptablePoliticalTargets: Hitler Hound! Another CrowningMomentOfFunny.
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* [[Spoiler:DownerEnding:]] [[spoiler: BZRK fails their objective to protect the president. Ophelia has her legs blown off and has apparently gone mad. Vincent loses a biot and falls into a depression. At least everyone is alive, more or less.]]
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* BlackAndGreyMorality: The Armstrong Gift Corporation is pretty evil, but BZRK (the good guys) pretty much do anything in order to defeat them.
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* Brainwashed: {{Brainwashed}}: Anya and Jessica, who were both programmed by Vincent and Bug Man, respectively, to "love" them. Vincent so he can get access to Anya's technology, Bug Man for selfish reasons. Vincent at least tries not to take advantage of Anya.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/Dracula Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. Subverted in that we know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/Dracula [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. Subverted in that we know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one. Subverted in that we know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* NomDeGuerre: Everyone on the biot side has one.one, named after famous figures who descended into madness or were mad to begin with; [[SylviaPlath Plath]], [[JohnKeats Keats]], [[Theatre/TheRiteOfSpring Nijinsky]], [[VincentVanGogh Vincent]], [[{{Misery}} Wilkes]], [[{{Hamlet}} Ophelia]], [[Literature/Dracula Renfield]], [[EmperorCaligula Caligula]], and [[Theatre/KingLear Lear]]. Subverted in that we know most of the twitchers' real names during their point of views (with the exception of Ophelia, Caligula, Lear, and other minor characters such as Dr. Pound). Bug Man's real name is given as well, and the reader learns of Alex Cotton's real name before his identity as [[spoiler: Kerouac]] is revealed.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: [[spoiler: Wilkes and Renfield.]]
* FriendsWithBenefits: [[spoiler: Wilkes and Renfield.]]
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: When the events of the book actually take place is never really said, but apart from the nanomachines everything is pretty much exactly the same as present day. There are casual references to modern pop culture (the {{Saw}} series of movies, for one) and things like Starbucks, but none of the mentioned heads of state match up with their current real-life counterparts, either.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Vincent, who despite his anhedonia is explicitly stated in the book to be, well, not asexual.
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* AndIMustScream: Doubles up as HighOctaneNightmareFuel and YMMV, but, imagine this:
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* AndIMustScream: Doubles up as HighOctaneNightmareFuel and YMMV, but, imagine this:AndIMustScream:
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* MindControlConspiracyMindControlConspiracy: The whole premise.
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* CainAndAbel: Averted. Stone is wistfully envious of Sadie's freedom but is not resentful in any way.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Averted with Noah. He still leaves home though. (Then again, he didn't have much to stay for.)
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* Brainwashed: Anya and Jessica, who were both programmed by Vincent and Bug Man, respectively, to "love" them. Vincent so he can get access to Anya's technology, Bug Man for selfish reasons. Vincent at least tries not to take advantage of Anya.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
--->'''Vincent''': There is to me.
* CainAndAbel:Averted. Subverted. Stone is wistfully envious of Sadie's freedom but is not resentful in any way.
* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Averted with Noah. He still leaves home though. (Then again, he didn't have much to stay for.)way.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Vincent to Anya, Bug Man to Jessica. (Both rewire the women's brains so that they "love" the men. Vincent so he can get access to Anya's technology, Bug Man for selfish reasons.)
** A difference that Vincent is aware of. He tries not to take advantage of Anya for this very reason.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
--->'''Vincent''': There is to me.
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** A difference that Vincent is aware of. He tries not to take advantage of Anya for this very reason.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
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-->'''Vincent''': [[FauxYay Jin, take my hand.]]
-->'''Nijinsky''': Oh, how I've waited for this moment.
-->'''Vincent''': [[FauxYay Jin, take my hand.]]
-->'''Nijinsky''': Oh, how I've waited for this moment.
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* Foil: Wilkes and Ophelia, Vincent and Nijinsky.
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* AcceptablePoliticalTargets: Hitler Hound! Another CrowningMomentOfFunny.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: Possibly Vincent and Nijinsky. Especially when they're [[LikeAnOldMarriedCouple arguing]] about whether to [[spoiler:send Keats and Plath in on a direct attack on the Twins]]. Vincent addresses Nijinsky by the name Shane, which [[YaoiFangirl some]] might move up to HoYay. YMMV though.
** A difference that Vincent is aware of. He tries not to take advantage of Anya for this very reason.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
--->'''Vincent''': There is to me.
--->'''Anya''': And whether or not it's real, Vincent, whether it's my true desires or something you've done to me, in the end, there's no difference.
--->'''Vincent''': There is to me.
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* MercyKill: When Vincent [[spoiler:is about to have his biots killed]], he requests that Caligula kill him rather than allow him to go mad.
-->'''Vincent''': Madness or death. Make it death.
-->'''Vincent''': Madness or death. Make it death.
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* MercyKill: When Vincent [[spoiler:is [[spoiler:Vincent is about to have his biots killed]], he requests that Caligula kill him rather than allow him to go mad.
-->'''Vincent''': -->[[spoiler:'''Vincent''']]: Madness or death. Make it death.death.
** [[spoiler:[[ItGotBetter He gets better.]] ]]
** [[spoiler:[[ItGotBetter He gets better.]] ]]
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* ReverseMole: [[spoiler:Dietrich]], as Nijinsky finds out. Much to his delight.
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** Also, possibly Ophelia. Though in the first book, it's not explicitly stated. However, she does say, "I don't hit on boys," in response to Wilkes asking whether she's hit on Vincent. A few pages later, when they are discussing what comes after death, Wilkes says, "A bunch of hot guy virgins ... A couple girls, too, maybe, just because life is short and try everything, right?" which Ophelia pointedly ignores.