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A character abruptly stops what they were doing out of shock.
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A character abruptly stops what they were are doing out to highlight the impact of shock.something they've just been told.
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Laconic-ing.
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of something said or done to them.
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of what was said.
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of what was said.something said or done to them.
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of what was said.
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of what was said.said.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[StoppedDeadInTheirTracks HERE]].-]
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When someone stops what they are doing abruptly, usually simple walking, to highlight the impact of what was said.