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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming, as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with their Sinners yet, their relationships with the Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men, while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with their shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Chief entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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* How the The Chief shows that they care about their care for Sinners in as early as Chapter One is heartwarming, as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, One, where they, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with their Sinners yet, their relationships with the Sinners are weak. The Chief weak and especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention meant to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted Sinners, the former telling the latter to stop his men, while Ted says he men only to be told that the men can't control his men be controlled like the Chief can control their controls Sinners with their shackles. shackles; the conversation itself marks a difference between [[AFatherToHisMen someone who cares for their people]] and [[BadBoss someone who doesn't]]. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given begin and given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. fight, which prompts the Chief to let Hella clean house. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Chief entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began it was a start to treat their better relationship as the Chief more favorably as time goes on.chapters go on.
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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with their Sinners yet, their relationships with the Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with their shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Chief entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming heartwarming, as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with their Sinners yet, their relationships with the Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men men, while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with their shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Chief entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Statue of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion [=DisCoins=], what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
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* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Statue of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of the things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion [=DisCoins=], what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
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* [=McQueen's=] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but shares her view that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=McQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment when in her presence]].
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* [=McQueen's=] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs connoisseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but shares her view that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=McQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment when in her presence]].presence]].
* While Cabernet's interrogation is filled with horror and sadness due to the pain she inflicted on her "ingredients" that [=McGrath=] stole from her, the ending lands on a somewhat good one as Cabernet sees Chief being the only person to understand her, not caring if they dislike her for what she's done. She does oblige the deal she makes with Chief on not eating other souls than theirs and is very doting and loving towards them, albeit a bit unhealthily at moments.
** Plus, the moments before she ruined Greg and Carly's life showed how peaceful but poor life they had together as a Syndican couple, with Greg cooking his girlfriend her favorite food and Carly trying to find a job for him despite graduating from the same prestigious culinary school as Kelvin because of their Syndican origins.
* While Cabernet's interrogation is filled with horror and sadness due to the pain she inflicted on her "ingredients" that [=McGrath=] stole from her, the ending lands on a somewhat good one as Cabernet sees Chief being the only person to understand her, not caring if they dislike her for what she's done. She does oblige the deal she makes with Chief on not eating other souls than theirs and is very doting and loving towards them, albeit a bit unhealthily at moments.
** Plus, the moments before she ruined Greg and Carly's life showed how peaceful but poor life they had together as a Syndican couple, with Greg cooking his girlfriend her favorite food and Carly trying to find a job for him despite graduating from the same prestigious culinary school as Kelvin because of their Syndican origins.
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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with his Sinners yet, his relationships with Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with his shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Cheif entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with his their Sinners yet, his their relationships with the Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with his their shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Cheif Chief entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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* [=McQueen's=] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but [[NotSoDifferent shares her view]] that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=McQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment when in her presence]].
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* [=McQueen's=] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but [[NotSoDifferent shares her view]] view that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[WhatYouAreInTheDark Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=McQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment when in her presence]].
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* How the Chief shows that they care about their Sinners in Chapter One is heartwarming as this is when Hella began to view the Chief more favorably. The context behind this is how the Chief, Hecate, and Hella go on their first mission together to follow up on a lead about Suspect R from SALVA. Since the Chief does not have strong bonds with his Sinners yet, his relationships with Sinners are weak. The Chief especially has a weak bond with Hella since the latter sees the former as an imprisoner. Hella grow to hate the Chief even more when they stop her from attacking an informant named Ted with their shackles, even when the Chief had good intention to save Hella from Ted's men. Noticing how Ted's men were being rude to Hecate and Hella because they are Sinners, the Chief and Ted went somewhere else to talk about Ted's men's harassment toward Sinners. The Chief wants Ted to stop his men while Ted says he can't control his men like the Chief can control their Sinners with his shackles. By the time both of them return, the fight between Hella and Ted's men was about to begin. Given how Sinners are often blamed for starting trouble, Hella thought that the Chief would side with Ted's men. She is proven wrong when the Chief sides with her after hearing Hecate's unbiased report on how Ted's men started the fight. While this alone wasn't enough to change Hella's attitude toward Cheif entirely as it would take several more chapters, Hella definitely began to treat the Chief more favorably as time goes on.
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The City that rises from hell might be home to psychotic criminals, corrupt officers, eldritch black rings and all sorts of nasty figures, but one would be surprised to learn that behind many of these ruthless outlaws and violence, lies [[AWorldHalfFull genuine humanity and heroism within there]]...
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* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Egg of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion [=DisCoins=], what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
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* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Egg Statue of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion [=DisCoins=], what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
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* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Egg of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion DisCoins, [=DisCoins=], what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
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!! Main Story
!! Events
* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Egg of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion DisCoins, what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
!! Interrogations
* [=MacQueen's] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but [[NotSoDifferent shares her view]] that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=MacQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment]].
!! Main Story
!! Events
* While exploring the museum during the Witching Hour event, you can meet and find a being named Egg of Truth, who pesters the Sinners with trivia questions while claiming to devour any who fail to answer them truthfully. One of things you can be asked about is what The Chief values the most. Amongst the options of 50 Million Hypercubes and A Billion DisCoins, what is the correct one? [[TrueCompanions "Sinner Companions"]].
!! Interrogations
* [=MacQueen's] flashback at the end of her interrogation shows her as a young artist being rejected by the conosseurs and moguls of Eastside, just like when we first saw it for the first time... except we are presented with a single art critic who not only silently appreciates her work, but [[NotSoDifferent shares her view]] that the Eastside's art critics should stop looking for names and renown when it comes to artistry and appreciate it for it's beauty and passion the artists put on their work. Who is that art critic? [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Lisa, the same Sinner who otherwise couldn't stand the presence of [=MacQueen=] around her and insulted her at every moment]].
