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I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice and he runs an orphanage later. But I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship. Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
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** I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice and he runs an orphanage later. But I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship. Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
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I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice and he runs an orphanage later. But I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
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I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice and he runs an orphanage later. But I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
apprenticeship. Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
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I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice. And he runs an orphanage later, but I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
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I know they state he's a friendless magician's apprentice. And apprentice and he runs an orphanage later, but later. But I think either A.) He was an early 20th-century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
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* where did Nicolas come from?
I know they state he's a friendless magicians apprentice. And he runs an orphanage later, but I think either
A.) He was an early 20th century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw ups and makes him a shit parent.
I know they state he's a friendless magicians apprentice. And he runs an orphanage later, but I think either
A.) He was an early 20th century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw ups and makes him a shit parent.
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* where Where did Nicolas come from?
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Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so manyscrew ups screw-ups and makes him a shit parent.
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Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many
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*where did Nicolas come from?
I know they state he's a friendless magicians apprentice. And he runs an orphanage later, but I think either
A.) He was an early 20th century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw ups and makes him a shit parent.
I know they state he's a friendless magicians apprentice. And he runs an orphanage later, but I think either
A.) He was an early 20th century orphan who was apprenticed-out, but to get apprenticed out to a magician sounds like something they wouldn't do unless Nicolas was already weirdly into magic, or had messed up so bad at a real apprenticeship.
Or B.) He's the magician's illegitimate child which I can see as the only reason he puts up with so many screw ups and makes him a shit parent.
