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--> '''Fluttershy''': YOU DID THIS TO ME YOU BIG…LUNK-HEADED…BRUTE! NO! YOU KEEP BREATHING! THAT'S RIGHT; TRY TO KEEP BREATHING WHILE I STRANGLE YOUR STUPID HEAD OFF OF YOUR BIG…FAT…RED NECK! LET GO OF ME, YOU NAGS! I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HIM! LET ME UP SO I CAN STRANGLE MY HUSBAND!\\
--> '''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.\\
(Everyone else present gives a silent FlatWhat.)
--> '''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.\\
(Everyone else present gives a silent FlatWhat.)
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--> '''Fluttershy''': YOU DID THIS TO ME YOU BIG…LUNK-HEADED…BRUTE! NO! YOU KEEP BREATHING! THAT'S RIGHT; TRY TO KEEP BREATHING WHILE I STRANGLE YOUR STUPID HEAD OFF OF YOUR BIG…FAT…RED NECK! LET GO OF ME, YOU NAGS! I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HIM! LET ME UP SO I CAN STRANGLE MY HUSBAND!\\
HUSBAND!
--> '''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' myfirst.\\
first.
--> (Everyone else present gives a silent FlatWhat.)
--> '''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my
--> (Everyone else present gives a silent FlatWhat.)
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'''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.
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--> '''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.\\
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-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
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-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I Um…I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if um…me…I guess…if…if that's okay is with you
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--> '''Fluttershy''': YOU DID THIS TO ME YOU BIG... LUNK-HEADED... BRUTE! NO! YOU KEEP BREATHING! THAT'S RIGHT, TRY TO KEEP BREATHING WHILE I STRANGLE YOUR STUPID HEAD OFF OF YOUR BIG... FAT... RED NECK! LET GO OF ME YOU NAGS! I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HIM! LET ME UP SO I CAN STRANGLE MY HUSBAND!\\
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--> '''Fluttershy''': YOU DID THIS TO ME YOU BIG... LUNK-HEADED... BRUTE! BIG…LUNK-HEADED…BRUTE! NO! YOU KEEP BREATHING! THAT'S RIGHT, RIGHT; TRY TO KEEP BREATHING WHILE I STRANGLE YOUR STUPID HEAD OFF OF YOUR BIG... FAT... RED BIG…FAT…RED NECK! LET GO OF ME ME, YOU NAGS! I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HIM! LET ME UP SO I CAN STRANGLE MY HUSBAND!\\
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* Caramel's absent-mindedness in the first chapter.
* Cabbage Leaf introducing herself to the parents-to-be:
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
* Cabbage Leaf introducing herself to the parents-to-be:
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
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* This... just this
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
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* This... just this
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who'sThere's something amusing about the blink-and-you'll-miss-it reference to Soarin's [[BigEater eating habits]] having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay iscaught up with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
him.
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
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'''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.
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'''Granny Smith''': Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first.first.
* This... just this
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
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* This... just this
-->'''Cabbage Leaf''': Hey there! So, everypony here who's having a foal, please raise your hoof.
-->'''Fluttershy''': *raises hoof* Um... I suppose that could be um... me... I guess... if... if that's okay is with you
** Keep in mind, she says this ''while in labor''
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