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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables, causing one of the grain sacks he’s carrying bursts open. Yingyong happily starts munching on the contents, nearly knocking Atuat over with his tongue.
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables, causing one of the grain sacks he’s carrying bursts to burst open. Yingyong happily starts munching on the contents, nearly knocking Atuat over with his tongue.
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables. causing one of the grain sacks he’s carrying bursts open. Yingyong happily starts munching on the contents, nearly knocking Atuat over with his tongue.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables. stables, causing one of the grain sacks he’s carrying bursts open. Yingyong happily starts munching on the contents, nearly knocking Atuat over with his tongue.
** This happens ''in front of the FireLord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.Lord''.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire
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--> '''Zoryu''': I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group! //
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--> '''Zoryu''': I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group! //group!\\
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--> '''Zoryu''': '''I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group!'''
'''Kyoshi''': '''We’ll, uh, be careful.'''
'''Kyoshi''': '''We’ll, uh, be careful.'''
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--> '''Zoryu''': '''I I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group!'''
group! //
'''Kyoshi''':'''We’ll, We’ll, uh, be careful.'''
'''Kyoshi''':
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables.
stables. causing one of the grain sacks he’s carrying bursts open. Yingyong happily starts munching on the contents, nearly knocking Atuat over with his tongue.
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save hiscountry.country.
--> '''Zoryu''': '''I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group!'''
'''Kyoshi''': '''We’ll, uh, be careful.'''
** This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his
--> '''Zoryu''': '''I was going to give a great big speech about how the fate of my nation rests on the shoulders of this group!'''
'''Kyoshi''': '''We’ll, uh, be careful.'''
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--> This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together,
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* Atuat is positively gleeful about going on an adventure as an official companion of the Avatar, and declares she's going to commission a commemorative painting of them together,together. Her excited shouting startles Yingyong into squashing Jinpa against the wall of the palace stables.
-->''This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
-->''This happens ''in front of the Fire Lord'', who is understandably dismayed at the prospect of trusting this group to save his country.
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* After hiking for an hour to reach a spiritual site so that he can guide her into communing with Kuruk, Nyahitha points out to Kyoshi a spot nearby where she could park a sky bison if she had one. Confused, she reveals that she has access to one, but assumed the walk was part of the spiritual exercise. Nyathia’s angry reaction prompts her to irritably wonder if, between all the people she knows who covet them, the world would be happier if the Avatar just reincarnated as a sky bison.
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* After hiking for an hour to reach a spiritual site so that he can guide her into communing with Kuruk, Nyahitha points out to Kyoshi a spot nearby where she could park a sky bison if she had one. Confused, she reveals that she has access to one, but assumed the walk was part of the spiritual exercise. Nyathia’s Nyahitha’s angry reaction prompts her to irritably wonder if, between all the people she knows who covet them, the world would be happier if the Avatar just reincarnated as a sky bison.
