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* When Rose and Dream enter Jed's dream, Jed declares himself The Sandman (his superhero alias)... to the actual Sandman.
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* When Rose and Dream enter Jed's dream, Jed declares himself The Sandman (his superhero alias)... to the actual Sandman. It is increasingly clear that Dream is becoming immensely delighted by this.
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* Almost everything Shaxberd says in that scene is in iambic pentameter, which Shakespeare is known for using. The line "In Faustus, when you wrote..." is made into iambic pentameter by having Shaxberd stammer and repeat the word "in" five times.
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* Alex, sympathizing with Dream, goes down to the dome to ask if he's all right. Dream gives stares at him as if to ask "Well, how do you ''think'' I'm doing?" Even Alex backpedals, immediately realising what a stupid question it was.
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* Alex, sympathizing with Dream, goes down to the dome to ask if he's all right. Dream gives just stares at him as if to ask "Well, how do you ''think'' I'm doing?" Even Alex backpedals, immediately realising what a stupid question it was.
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* Alex, sympathizing with Dream, goes down to the dome to ask if he's all right. Dream gives him a DeathGlare that just ''screams'' "Well, what the hell do ''you'' think?"
* During the tragic scene where Alex shoots Jessamy, one of the guards proffers a trash can for the corpse. Alex walks past, too lost in thought to notice, and the guard just looks annoyed.
* The modern guards think Dream is "one of them Draculas."
* During the tragic scene where Alex shoots Jessamy, one of the guards proffers a trash can for the corpse. Alex walks past, too lost in thought to notice, and the guard just looks annoyed.
* The modern guards think Dream is "one of them Draculas."
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* Alex, sympathizing with Dream, goes down to the dome to ask if he's all right. Dream gives stares at him a DeathGlare that just ''screams'' as if to ask "Well, how do you ''think'' I'm doing?" Even Alex backpedals, immediately realising what the hell do ''you'' think?"
a stupid question it was.
* During the tragic scene where Alex shoots Jessamy, one of the guardsproffers grabs a trash can waste-paper basket for the corpse. Alex walks past, completely blanks him, too lost in thought to notice, notice and too compassionate to simply discard the body of the bird he has now killed, but the guard just looks annoyed.
annoyed at being ignored.
*The One of the guards in the modern guards think Dream day thinks that the prisoner they guard is "one of them Draculas."
* During the tragic scene where Alex shoots Jessamy, one of the guards
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