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** When Tess approaches Ellie immediately afterwards, Joel (and the audience) incorrectly assumes she's trying to steal the sandwich and starts to protest.
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* Joel boosts Ellie up to grab a ladder, which she immediately drops on him when she sees something exciting. Joel is not amused.
* Ellie reads out an apocalypse pun from the pun book, and Joel actually enjoys it.
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* Joel boosts Ellie up to grab a ladder, which she immediately drops on him when she sees something exciting. Joel is not amused.
* Ellie reads out an apocalypse pun from the pun book, and Joel actually enjoys it.
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* When first confronting David and his henchmen when they're stealing her deer, Ellie lowers her voice to try to sound more intimidating. It ''really'' doesn't work. Even funnier when they turn around and clearly see that she's a tiny teenage girl ... and she keeps doing it anyway.
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[[folder:When We Are in Need]]
* When Ellie loads up a syringe with antibiotics, she realizes [[DidntThinkThisThrough she doesn't actually know how to administer antibiotics]]. She ends up jabbing Joel ''in the wound'', having apparently decided it's best to get it closest. Later, she does it again with the second dose.
* BlackComedy: The community prepares "venison," implying that David and James already came back with the deer. Just as they're sitting down to eat, David and James come back with the deer. Cue awkward silence.
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* When Ellie loads up a syringe with antibiotics, she realizes [[DidntThinkThisThrough she doesn't actually know how to administer antibiotics]]. She ends up jabbing Joel ''in the wound'', having apparently decided it's best to get it closest. Later, she does it again with the second dose.
* BlackComedy: The community prepares "venison," implying that David and James already came back with the deer. Just as they're sitting down to eat, David and James come back with the deer. Cue awkward silence.
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* Joel and Ellie arrive at the university, only to discover that the Fireflies are gone. All that's left of them is their monkey test subjects. While commenting on the situation, Ellie drops this gem:
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* Joel and Ellie arrive at the university, only to discover that the Fireflies are gone. All that's left of them is their monkey test subjects. While commenting on the situation, Ellie drops this gem:gem straight from the game:
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--->'''Ellie:''' Wow, congrats! [-Say congrats, Joel.-]\\
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'''Joel:''' ...congrats.
''[beat]''\\
'''Joel:''' ...congrats.
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* As Riley and Ellie are going through the book of puns, they come across a joke that references screenshots. After a beat of bemused silence, they both admit they do not know what screenshots are.
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* Ellie's sheer wonder at the escalator. As she plays around on it, she eagerly asks Riley if it is one of the four wonders of the mall, and after a moment, Riley concedes that there can be five wonders.
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* While standing in front of a Victoria's Secret storefront, Riley confesses to imagining Ellie wearing the displayed lingerie. Ellie then lingers by the storefront for a few moments longer, staring at the lingerie as if trying to imagine herself wearing it.
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* While standing in front of a Victoria's Secret storefront, Riley giggles as she confesses to imagining Ellie wearing the displayed lingerie. Ellie then lingers by the storefront for a few moments longer, staring at the lingerie as if trying to imagine herself wearing it.
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* While standing in front of a Victoria's Secret storefront, Riley confesses to imagining Ellie wearing the displayed lingerie. Ellie then lingers by the storefront for a few moments longer, staring at the lingerie as if trying to imagine herself wearing it.
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* While standing in front of a Victoria's Secret storefront, Riley confesses to imagining Ellie wearing the displayed lingerie. Ellie then lingers by the storefront for a few moments longer, staring at the lingerie as if trying to imagine herself wearing it.
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* While Joel is teaching Ellie how to shoot, she is unable to hit the target. Deciding to show her how it's done, he nails it in one shot and is rather smug about it. As they ride away, a closeup reveals that the target (made in the shape of a butt) has the word "asshole" written on it, and Joel has shot a hole directly in the middle.
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* While Joel is teaching Ellie how to shoot, shoot with a rifle, she is unable to hit the target. Deciding to show her how it's done, he nails it in one shot and is rather smug about it. As they ride away, a closeup reveals that the target (made in the shape of a butt) has the word "asshole" written on it, and Joel has shot a hole directly in the middle.middle.
-->'''Ellie:''' You... dick.
-->'''Ellie:''' You... dick.
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---> '''Ellie:''' You gonna shoot this thing or get it pregnant?
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---> '''Joel:''' Deep breath in, slow breath out. You squeeze the trigger like you love it. Gentle. Steady. Nice and slow--\\
'''Ellie:''' You gonna shoot this thing or get it pregnant?
'''Ellie:''' You gonna shoot this thing or get it pregnant?
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* Combined with a heartwarming moment. After Joel tells Ellie that Tommy will be taking her the rest of the way to the Fireflies and seemingly dissolves their surrogate father-daughter relationship, when Tommy and Ellie are getting ready to leave the next morning, they find Joel in the barn getting a horse ready.
-->'''Joel:''' You deserve a choice. I still think you'd be better off with Tommy--\\
'''Ellie:''' ''(shoves her supplies into Joel's chest)'' Let's go.
-->'''Joel:''' You deserve a choice. I still think you'd be better off with Tommy--\\
'''Ellie:''' ''(shoves her supplies into Joel's chest)'' Let's go.
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* Like in the game, in apropos of nothing, Ellie tries to learn how to whistle. She does not do well.
-->'''Joel''': You don't know how to whistle?\\
'''Ellie''': [[AskAStupidQuestion Does it sound like I know how to whistle?]]
-->'''Joel''': You don't know how to whistle?\\
'''Ellie''': [[AskAStupidQuestion Does it sound like I know how to whistle?]]
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* When asked by Ellie what Joel will do if the cure works and he can do whatever he wants, he says he'd probably buy a farm and ranch sheep.
-->'''Ellie:''' So. You and a buncha sheep. Romantic.
-->'''Ellie:''' So. You and a buncha sheep. Romantic.
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---> '''Ellie:''' You gonna shoot this thing or get it pregnant?
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--> '''Ellie:''' [[IncrediblyLanePun Dam.]]
--> '''Joel:''' You're no Will Livingston.
--> '''Joel:''' You're no Will Livingston.
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--> '''Ellie:''' [[IncrediblyLanePun Dam.]]
'''Ellie:''' Dam.
--> '''Joel:''' [[LamePunReaction You're no Will Livingston.]]
--> '''Joel:''' [[LamePunReaction You're no Will Livingston.]]
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* Joel and Ellie come across a hydroelectric dam and Ellie [[ObligatoryJoke just can't help herself.]]
--> '''Ellie:''' [[IncrediblyLanePun Dam.]]
--> '''Joel:''' You're no Will Livingston.
--> '''Ellie:''' (''shrugs'') Eh, who is.
--> '''Ellie:''' [[IncrediblyLanePun Dam.]]
--> '''Joel:''' You're no Will Livingston.
--> '''Ellie:''' (''shrugs'') Eh, who is.
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* Joel and Ellie arrive at the university, only to discover that the Fireflies are gone. All that's left of them is their monkey test subjects. While commenting on the situation, Ellie drops this gem:
--> '''Ellie:''' Maybe in all that research, they turned into fuckin' monkeys.
--> '''Ellie:''' Maybe in all that research, they turned into fuckin' monkeys.
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* Joel congratulates the pair on having found a safe place to hole up once the outbreak started. Marlon snarks that they came here before Joel was ''born'', to get away from people. Florence immediately retorts that she didn't want to.
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* Joel congratulates the pair on having found a safe place to hole up once the outbreak started. Marlon snarks that they came here before Joel was ''born'', to get away from people. Right after, Florence immediately retorts chimes in saying that she didn't want to.
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** There's a reason for that. While explaining, Joel makes sure to mention that [[BlatantLies everybody loved]] [[CrookedContractor contractors]], that Ellie of course buys hook, line and sinker. If you look closely, you can see Joel [[BatmanGambit smirking to himself]] after saying it.
** And then that [[GoneHorriblyRight comes back to bite him]], as by the time Ellie makes the same joke at the university, he's clearly had enough.
** And then that [[GoneHorriblyRight comes back to bite him]], as by the time Ellie makes the same joke at the university, he's clearly had enough.
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* When Marlon asks Joel why they need directions if they already have a map, Ellie snaps that they must have "missed all the street signs in the enormous fucking forest". Marlon's reply is to look over at Florence and melodramatically and sarcastically say "Ho-ly!" while Florence chuckles.
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* When Marlon asks Joel why they need directions if they already have a map, Ellie snaps that they must have "missed all the street signs in the enormous fucking forest". Marlon's reply is to look over at Florence and melodramatically and sarcastically say "Ho-''ly!"'' while Florence chuckles.
* Joel congratulates the pair on having found a safe place to hole up once the outbreak started. Marlon snarks that they came here before Joel was ''born'', to get away from people. Florence immediately retorts that she didn't want to.
* Joel congratulates the pair on having found a safe place to hole up once the outbreak started. Marlon snarks that they came here before Joel was ''born'', to get away from people. Florence immediately retorts that she didn't want to.
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* The elderly couple have never heard of the Fireflies.
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* When Marlon asks Joel why they need directions if they already have a map, Ellie snaps that they must have "missed all the street signs in the enormous fucking forest". Marlon's reply is to look over at Florence and melodramatically and sarcastically say "Ho-ly!" while Florence chuckles.
* Marlon calls Ellie a "little psycho" after she insults their age - really, the fact that both he and Florence remain completely unbothered by the whole interaction is hilarious.
* The elderly couple have never heard of theFireflies.Fireflies:
* Marlon calls Ellie a "little psycho" after she insults their age - really, the fact that both he and Florence remain completely unbothered by the whole interaction is hilarious.
* The elderly couple have never heard of the
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-->'''Florence:''' There are firefly people?
-->''Marlon and Florence chuckle.''
-->''Marlon and Florence chuckle.''
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-->'''Florence:''' There are firefly people?
-->''Marlonpeople? ''[she and Marlon and Florence chuckle.''chuckle]''
-->''Marlon
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* Joel explains to Ellie that he used to be a contractor before the outbreak begins. Ellie, who finds the idea very fascinating, begins to jokingly call Joel "The Contractor" as if it's a nickname/moniker of a badass contract killer.
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--> '''Ellie:''' Are you gonna hit that thing or get it pregnant?
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--> '''Ellie:''' Are you You gonna hit that shoot this thing or get it pregnant?
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* Tommy is not pleased when Maria agrees with Joel's description of Jackson society as communism.
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* Maria and Tommy is not pleased when Maria agrees with Joel's description of are describing how Jackson society functions as communism.a society, we get this wonderfully awkward conversation [[PatrioticFervor between the two Texan brothers:]]
--> '''Tommy:''' It's collective ownership.
--> '''Joel:''' So...you're communists.
--> '''Tommy:''' [[ImplausibleDeniability No...nothing like that.]]
--> '''Maria:''' No...it is like that. This is a commune. [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin We're communists.]]
--> ''Joel just gives Tommy an "I told you so" smirk while Tommy looks away awkwardly.''
--> '''Tommy:''' It's collective ownership.
--> '''Joel:''' So...you're communists.
--> '''Tommy:''' [[ImplausibleDeniability No...nothing like that.]]
--> '''Maria:''' No...it is like that. This is a commune. [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin We're communists.]]
--> ''Joel just gives Tommy an "I told you so" smirk while Tommy looks away awkwardly.''
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* An old man, Marlon, comes home to find that Joel and Ellie are holding him and his wife Florence at gunpoint. Far from being afraid, Florence has made the invaders soup.
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* An old man, Marlon, comes home to find that Joel and Ellie are holding him and his wife Florence at gunpoint. Far from being afraid, Florence has made the invaders soup.''soup''.
-->'''Marlon:''' ''[sneers at Joel, then turns to Florence]'' Why didn't ya shoot 'im?
-->'''Florence:''' ''[completely calm]'' The gun's all the way over there. ''[Marlon rolls his eyes]'' He didn't hurt me, by the way.
-->'''Marlon:''' Yeah, I got eyes. ''[looks down and sees two bowls on the table]'' You made him soup?!
-->'''Florence:''' ''[slightly defensively]'' Yeah, I ''did''. It's cold out!
-->'''Marlon:''' ''[sneers at Joel, then turns to Florence]'' Why didn't ya shoot 'im?
-->'''Florence:''' ''[completely calm]'' The gun's all the way over there. ''[Marlon rolls his eyes]'' He didn't hurt me, by the way.
-->'''Marlon:''' Yeah, I got eyes. ''[looks down and sees two bowls on the table]'' You made him soup?!
-->'''Florence:''' ''[slightly defensively]'' Yeah, I ''did''. It's cold out!
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* Frank's reaction to Bill trying to shoot down his request for paint and gasoline to beautify their neighborhood.
--> '''Frank''': Bill, if you say ''resource management'', so help me, I will run through one of your tripwires.
* Bill's reaction to Frank explaining his intention to fix up the boutique in their town.
--> '''Bill''': The boutique? Are-are we hosting formal garden parties now?
* This exchange between Bill and Frank.
--> '''Frank''': We're gonna make friends, and we will invite them to visit.\\
'''Bill''': We don't have friends, Frank. We will never have friends because there are no friends to be had.\\
'''Frank''': (turns and walks away) Well, I've actually been talking to a nice woman on the radio.\\
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'''Bill''': YOU [[BigWhat WHAT?!]]
--> '''Frank''': Bill, if you say ''resource management'', so help me, I will run through one of your tripwires.
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--> '''Bill''': The boutique? Are-are we hosting formal garden parties now?
* This exchange between Bill and Frank.
--> '''Frank''': We're gonna make friends, and we will invite them to visit.\\
'''Bill''': We don't have friends, Frank. We will never have friends because there are no friends to be had.\\
'''Frank''': (turns and walks away) Well, I've actually been talking to a nice woman on the radio.\\
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-->'''Tommy:''' We're just tryna scare off those who might wanna try us is all.
-->'''Ellie''' Well, you got a couple of 90-year-olds shitting themselves out there.
-->'''Tommy:''' We're just tryna scare off those who might wanna try us is all.
-->'''Ellie''' Well, you got a couple of 90-year-olds shitting themselves out there.
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* Ellie discovers diva cups, courtesy of a gift from Maria.
-->'''Ellie:''' Oh! (squishes the cup with a bemused smile) Gross.
-->'''Ellie:''' Oh! (squishes the cup with a bemused smile) Gross.
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* Ellie discovers diva cups, [=DivaCups=], courtesy of a gift from Maria.
-->'''Ellie:''' Oh!(squishes ''(squishes the cup with a bemused smile) smile)'' Gross.
-->'''Ellie:''' Oh!
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* An old man comes home to find that Joel and Ellie are holding him and his wife at gunpoint. Far from being afraid, the wife has made the invaders soup.
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* An old man man, Marlon, comes home to find that Joel and Ellie are holding him and his wife Florence at gunpoint. Far from being afraid, the wife Florence has made the invaders soup.
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-->'''Old woman:''' There are firefly people?
-->''The woman and her husband chuckle.''
-->''The woman and her husband chuckle.''
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* While teaching Ellie how to shoot she is unable to hit the target. Deciding to show her how its done he nails it in one shot and is rather smug about it. A close up of the target reveals that it looks like a butt and Joel shot it right in the middle. The kicker? Asshole is written on the target.
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* While Joel is teaching Ellie how to shoot shoot, she is unable to hit the target. Deciding to show her how its done it's done, he nails it in one shot and is rather smug about it. A close up of the target As they ride away, a closeup reveals that it looks like a butt and Joel shot it right the target (made in the middle. The kicker? Asshole is shape of a butt) has the word "asshole" written on it, and Joel has shot a hole directly in the target.middle.
