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-->'''Ellie:''' It wasn't that bad.\\
'''Tess:''' ''You'' try walking up fifty flights of stairs with knees like ours and see how ''you'' feel.
'''Tess:''' ''You'' try walking up fifty flights of stairs with knees like ours and see how ''you'' feel.
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'''Ellie:''' Come on, it wasn't that bad.\\
'''Tess:''' ''You'' try
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-->'''Tess:''' It's the long way or the we're fucking dead way.\\
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-->'''Tess:''' It's the long way or the we're fucking dead we're-fucking-dead way.\\
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* Ellie asks for a gun. Joel and Tess [[IncrediblyLamePun shoot down]] her request immediately.
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* Ellie asks for a gun. Joel and Tess [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} shoot down]] her request immediately.
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'''Joel/Tess:''' ''[at the same time]'' Absolutely not./No.\\
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-->'''Ellie''' (''while ringing the bell''): [[SayingSoundEffectsOutLoud Ding Ding!]]\\
'''Ellie (normal voice)''': Yes sir, I would like your finest suite please.\\
'''Ellie (deepened voice)''': Yes ma'am. Would you like me to take your luggage?\\
'''Ellie (in a fake Southern accent)''': Yes ma'am. Right away ma'am. ''begins to push luggage cart''\\
'''Joel''': You're a weird kid.\\
'''Ellie''' (''while pushing luggage cart''): [[NoYou You're a weird kid.]]
'''Ellie (normal voice)''': Yes sir, I would like your finest suite please.\\
'''Ellie (deepened voice)''': Yes ma'am. Would you like me to take your luggage?\\
'''Ellie (in a fake Southern accent)''': Yes ma'am. Right away ma'am. ''begins to push luggage cart''\\
'''Joel''': You're a weird kid.\\
'''Ellie''' (''while pushing luggage cart''): [[NoYou You're a weird kid.]]
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'''Joel''':
'''Joel:''' You're a weird kid.\\
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'''Tess:''' You try walking up fifty flights of stairs with knees like ours and see how you feel.
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'''Tess:''' You ''You'' try walking up fifty flights of stairs with knees like ours and see how you ''you'' feel.
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--> '''Joel''': [[GlobalIgnorance Jakarta. Where is that, Middle East?]]\\
'''Tommy''': Doesn't ring a bell. Definitely a country. Or maybe a part of Asia?\\
'''Sarah''': Jakarta isn't a country. Being a part of Asia isn't mutually exclusive with being a country, and in fact, it's the capital of Indonesia.\\
'''Tommy''': [[DeadpanSnarker Shit. Hope for us yet.]]
'''Tommy''': Doesn't ring a bell. Definitely a country. Or maybe a part of Asia?\\
'''Sarah''': Jakarta isn't a country. Being a part of Asia isn't mutually exclusive with being a country, and in fact, it's the capital of Indonesia.\\
'''Tommy''': [[DeadpanSnarker Shit. Hope for us yet.]]
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--> '''Joel''': '''Joel:''' [[GlobalIgnorance Jakarta. Where is that, Middle East?]]\\
'''Tommy''': '''Tommy:''' Doesn't ring a bell. Definitely a country. Or maybe a part of Asia?\\
'''Sarah''': '''Sarah:''' Jakarta isn't a country. Being a part of Asia isn't mutually exclusive with being a country, and in fact, it's the capital of Indonesia.\\
'''Tommy''': '''Tommy:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Shit. Hope for us yet.]]
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--> '''Sarah''': [[SarcasmMode Drugs. I sell hardcore drugs.]]\\
'''Joel''': Better than what I do.
'''Joel''': Better than what I do.
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--> '''Sarah''': '''Sarah:''' [[SarcasmMode Drugs. I sell hardcore drugs.]]\\
'''Joel''': '''Joel:''' Better than what I do.
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-->'''Firefly''': Count slowly from one to ten.\\
'''Ellie''': [[MotorMouth OneTwoThreeFour-]]\\
'''Firefly''': ''Slowly.'' And clearly.\\
'''Ellie''': One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck. You.]] ''[[[FlippingTheBird flips the bird]]]''
'''Ellie''': [[MotorMouth OneTwoThreeFour-]]\\
'''Firefly''': ''Slowly.'' And clearly.\\
'''Ellie''': One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. Seven. Eight. [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck. You.]] ''[[[FlippingTheBird flips the bird]]]''
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-->'''Radio Operator''': If I'm not at the radio, Gabriela is or my son. The smart one, not the other one, God bless him.
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-->'''Radio Operator''': Operator:''' If I'm not at the radio, Gabriela is or my son. The smart one, not the other one, God bless him.
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-->'''Marlene''' (''angrily''): Kim, you don't have a [[ClusterFBomb fucking ear on your fucking head!]] Could you ''please''?
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--->'''Ellie''': ''Really?!'' That fast?
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'''Joel:''' Absolutely not.\\
'''Tess (at the same time as Joel):''' No.\\
'''Tess (at the same time as Joel):''' No.\\
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'''Tess (at the same time as Joel):''' No.
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* Joel's establishing character moment of what he thinks of the Fireflies:
--> '''Firefly:''' Hey, friend. Don't worry, I don't want anything. But if you're feeling lost...
--> '''Joel:''' You tell me to look for the light and I'll break your jaw.
--> '''Firefly:''' Hey, friend. Don't worry, I don't want anything. But if you're feeling lost...
--> '''Joel:''' You tell me to look for the light and I'll break your jaw.
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Point out that people "shoot down" a request for a gun—pun.
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* Ellie asks for a gun. Joel and Tess shoot down her request immediately.
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* Ellie asks for a gun. Joel and Tess [[IncrediblyLamePun shoot down down]] her request immediately.
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* Bill tries to intimidate Frank into leaving after he asks for some food.
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* Bill tries to intimidate Frank into leaving after he asks for some food.food, right after being lucky enough to get out of the trap hole.
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'''Frank''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Well, Arby's didn't have free lunch. It was a restaurant.]]
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'''Frank''': (As he is at gunpoint) [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Well, Arby's didn't have free lunch. It was a restaurant.]]
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* Joel, Tess, and Ellie wind up stumbling upon a soldier while he's peeing. The little dance he does while trying to zip himself back up is worth a chuckle.
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* While the situation turns violent in the end, the scene where Joel, Tess, and Ellie wind up stumbling upon a soldier while he's peeing.peeing starts the scene in a funny direction. The little dance he does while trying to zip himself back up is worth a chuckle.
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JFP is an index that's since been renamed anyway
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* Ellie gains her [[JustForPun proficiency for puns]] this episode when it's revealed she has acquired a joke book full of them.
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* Ellie gains her [[JustForPun [[PungeonMaster proficiency for puns]] this episode when it's revealed she has acquired a joke book full of them.
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--->'''Ellie:''' Too soon?
--->'''Joel:''' [[ActuallyPrettyFunny No, it's topical.]]
--->'''Joel:''' [[ActuallyPrettyFunny No, it's topical.]]
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'''Tess:''' No.
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-->'''Ellie:''' Fuck, seriously? Well if it had to be one of us...
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-->'''Ellie:''' Fuck, seriously? Well ''seriously?'' Well, if it had to be one of us...
