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** Among the things Magnus finds attractive about him are his black hair and blue eyes, that he is a Count, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers that his name is Axel]]. He also plans their planning session for the escape as a romantic dinner and the Count still doesn't quite get it. Until Magnus spells it out that "seeing him again after" is the reward for helping with the rescue. Then Axel is ''very'' receptive especially after he assumed Magnus turning down money was a sign of patriotism.
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** Among the things Magnus finds attractive about him are his black hair and blue eyes, that he is a Count, and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers that his name is Axel]].Axel. He also plans their planning session for the escape as a romantic dinner and the Count still doesn't quite get it. Until Magnus spells it out that "seeing him again after" is the reward for helping with the rescue. Then Axel is ''very'' receptive especially after he assumed Magnus turning down money was a sign of patriotism.
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* Magnus spends most of the story on choosing a birthday present to give to Alec. Elyaas (who is a demon) advices him to get a mixtape.
-->'''Elyaas''': "Kids love mixtapes. They are the cool 'in' thing right now.
-->'''Magnus''': "Was the last time you were summoned in the 80's"
--> '''Elyaas''': "It might have been"
-->'''Elyaas''': "Kids love mixtapes. They are the cool 'in' thing right now.
-->'''Magnus''': "Was the last time you were summoned in the 80's"
--> '''Elyaas''': "It might have been"
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** Edmund notes he'd love to meet a woman who cheats at cards since the only one he knows is a man named Granville's aunt Millicent. Magnus is surprised at the idea of Shadowhunters playing cards since he assumed their idea of fun is weapon's training and going on about their own superiority over everyone else.
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** Edmund notes he'd love to meet a woman who cheats at cards since the only one he knows is a man named Granville's aunt Millicent. Magnus is surprised at the idea of Shadowhunters playing cards since he assumed their idea of fun is weapon's weapons training and going on about their own superiority over everyone else.
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* The story starts when Magnus takes note of James Herondale drunkly shooting up the card club he's at because Ragnar bet the Shadowhunter couldn't shoot the lights off a chandelier in his state. Oh and it was about twenty minutes after he started doing for Bane to notice [[SkewedPriorities because he was too captivated by the room's decor.]]
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* The story starts when Magnus takes note of James Herondale drunkly shooting up the card club he's at because Ragnar Ragnor bet the Shadowhunter couldn't shoot the lights off a chandelier in his state. Oh and it was took about twenty minutes after he started doing for Bane to notice [[SkewedPriorities because he was too captivated by the room's decor.]]
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* Magnus meeting a group of Circle members in 1989 which includes Lucian Greymark (aka the future Luke Galloway), Stephen Herondale, and Maryse and Robert Lightwood. Despite the tense situation (they're trying to execute a pack of werewolves who have loose connections tot he ones who killed Valentine's father) there's a couple of funny moments:
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* Magnus meeting a group of Circle members in 1989 which includes Lucian Greymark Graymark (aka the future Luke Galloway), Stephen Herondale, and Maryse and Robert Lightwood. Despite the tense situation (they're trying to execute a pack of werewolves who have loose connections tot he to the ones who killed Valentine's father) there's a couple of funny moments:
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* The short are recovered voicemail from Magnus' phone from various characters following Magnus and Alec's brief falling out in ''City of Lost Souls''.
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* The short are This story consists of recovered voicemail voicemails from Magnus' phone from various characters following Magnus and Alec's brief falling out in ''City of Lost Souls''.Souls''. Some are absolutely hilarious.
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*** Another message has Izzy showing up at Magnus' house and telling him she's breaking down the door. After a {{Beat}} she admits she would've already done that but Magnus' apartment is warded, calling him a "stupid warlock cheater" for it and ''demanding'' he open let the Shadowhunter in so Izzy can kill him.
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*** Another message has Izzy showing up at Magnus' house and telling him she's breaking down the door. After a {{Beat}} she admits she would've already done that but Magnus' apartment is warded, calling him a "stupid warlock cheater" for it and ''demanding'' he open let the Shadowhunter her in so Izzy that she can kill him.
