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* [[spoiler: The final scene, which has Scion/Goldburn/Daniel turn Accord's office walls purple with yellow plka-dots (that aren't even uniform in size). He reacts as well as you might expect. Goldburn calling him "uncle Accord" only increases the humor]].
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* [[spoiler: The final scene, which has Scion/Goldburn/Daniel turn Accord's office walls purple with yellow plka-dots polka-dots (that aren't even uniform in size). He reacts as well as you might expect. Goldburn calling him "uncle Accord" only increases the humor]].
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* [[spoiler: The final scene, which has Scion/Goldburn/Daniel turn [[SuperOCD Accord's]] office walls purple with yellow plka-dots (that aren't even uniform in size). He reacts as well as you might expect. Goldburn calling him "uncle Accord" only increases the humor]].
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* [[spoiler: The final scene, which has Scion/Goldburn/Daniel turn [[SuperOCD Accord's]] Accord's office walls purple with yellow plka-dots (that aren't even uniform in size). He reacts as well as you might expect. Goldburn calling him "uncle Accord" only increases the humor]].
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* [[spoiler:Abaddon apparently thinks that talking to a wall would be more interesting that talking to Scion]].
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* [[spoiler:Abaddon apparently thinks that talking to a wall would be more interesting that talking to Scion]].Scion]].
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* Benny is into ATLA, but when Taylor first hears him talking about it, she thinks it involves alcohol due misunderstanding all the talk of "benders".
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* Benny is into ATLA, [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender ATLA]], but when Taylor first hears him talking about it, she thinks it involves alcohol due misunderstanding all the talk of "benders".
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* Benny is into ATLA, but when Taylor first hears him talking about it, she thinks it involves alcohol.
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* Benny is into ATLA, but when Taylor first hears him talking about it, she thinks it involves alcohol.
** Later, he starts getting the other kids into it, even incorporating bending moves into power-use.
** Later, he starts getting the other kids into it, even incorporating bending moves into power-use.
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* When Taylor and the Finislators start going out on patrol, Taylor can't help but feel they forgot something. When Miss Militia asks for their names after beating Kaiser, she realizes that they forgot to choose hero names!
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* Conny bluntly asks Panacea if she can make her a boy.
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* [[spoiler:Abaddon apparently thinks that talking to a wall would be more interesting that talking to Scion]].
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* Sam slipping the Trio laxative-laced chocolates.
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* Sam grabs Coil as a Valentine's Day present for Tattletale. Lisa has a SpitTake when Sam shows up holding Coil outside her window and says this.
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* Some of Taylor's thoughts can be quite funny, particularly Palm and Forehead's forbidden love affair.
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* Some of Taylor's thoughts can be quite funny, particularly Palm and Forehead's forbidden love affair.affair.
* Conny bluntly asks Panacea if she can make her a boy.
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As a fanfic based on a rather... strange idea AND being wackier than canon, this was bound to happen.
* [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/learning-to-be-human-worm-altpower-taylor-friendly-teenager-endbringers-au.383350/page-33#post-21972013 The Talk]]. Just... the sheer concept of it.
* Taylor's increasingly futile attempt at denying the fact that she's a mother hen and eventual just give it up.
* Some of Taylor's thoughts can be quite funny, particularly Palm and Forehead's forbidden love affair.
* [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/learning-to-be-human-worm-altpower-taylor-friendly-teenager-endbringers-au.383350/page-33#post-21972013 The Talk]]. Just... the sheer concept of it.
* Taylor's increasingly futile attempt at denying the fact that she's a mother hen and eventual just give it up.
* Some of Taylor's thoughts can be quite funny, particularly Palm and Forehead's forbidden love affair.
