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* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone to loudly ask her to shut up.
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* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone Estelle's father to loudly ask her to shut up.
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* A tone-setting bit of BlackComedy at the beginning: Right after the burning of Jennifer, a vendor starts going around hocking "popped maize" (usherette tray and all) for people to snack on while they wait for the burning of her father.
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* Jennifer being too busy RevelingInTheNewForm to really care that the hotel she's in is burning down around her, even flirting with Wally as he's frantically attempting to find them a way out.
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--> "For tonight I merry merry be, Tomorrow I'll be sober!"
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* One of the victims of Jennifer's curse decides he'd rather die in the [[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar Civil War]] than spend another second with his shrewish wife.
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* One of the victims of Jennifer's curse decides he'd rather die in the [[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar Civil War]] than spend another second with his shrewish wife. Who accuses him of “running off to war like a coward!”
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* Jennifer going a bit overboard for her precious ''EmbarrassingNickname Wally]]'', by using her magic to make ''EVERYONE'' in the state vote for him. Naturally, he's horrified.
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* Jennifer going a bit overboard for her precious ''EmbarrassingNickname ''[[EmbarrassingNickname Wally]]'', by using her magic to make ''EVERYONE'' in the state vote for him. Naturally, he's horrified.
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* Jennifer going a bit overboard for her precious ''Wally'', by using her magic to make ''EVERYONE'' in the state vote for him. Naturally, he's horrified.
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* Jennifer going a bit overboard for her precious ''Wally'', ''EmbarrassingNickname Wally]]'', by using her magic to make ''EVERYONE'' in the state vote for him. Naturally, he's horrified.
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* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone to loudly ask her to shut up.
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* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone to loudly ask her to shut up.up.
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* One of the victims of Jennifer's curse decides he'd rather die in the CivilWar than spend another second with his shrewish wife.
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* One of the victims of Jennifer's curse decides he'd rather die in the CivilWar [[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanCivilWar Civil War]] than spend another second with his shrewish wife.
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* One of the victims of Jennifer's curse decides he'd rather die in the CivilWar than spend another second with his shrewish wife.
* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone to loudly ask her to shut up.
* After Wally ditches his wedding to Estelle to marry Jennifer, the singer makes another attempt to sing, "I Love You Truly," only for someone to loudly ask her to shut up.
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** Like his singing, if you want to call it that.
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** Like his singing, [[HollywoodToneDeaf if you want to call it that.that]].
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* Jennifer going a bit overboard for her precious ''Wally'', by using her magic to make ''EVERYONE'' in the state vote for him. Naturally, he's horrified.
--> '''Wallace''': What if she runs me for President?!
--> '''Wallace''': What if she runs me for President?!
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* When Wallace points out Daniel is still suffering from his inebriation.
--> '''Wallace''': I'm afraid you've got a hangover.
--> '''Daniel''': Don't tell me what I've got! I invented the hangover. It was in 1892... B.C.
** Heck all of intoxicated Daniel.
** Like his singing, if you want to call it that.
--> "For tonight I merry merry be, Tomorrow I'll be sober!"
--> '''Wallace''': I'm afraid you've got a hangover.
--> '''Daniel''': Don't tell me what I've got! I invented the hangover. It was in 1892... B.C.
** Heck all of intoxicated Daniel.
** Like his singing, if you want to call it that.
--> "For tonight I merry merry be, Tomorrow I'll be sober!"
