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Main page is [[Fanfic/GuideMeHome here]].
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware that she and Hakoda are already acquainted is comic gold.
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware that she and Hakoda are already acquainted acquainted, is comic gold.
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware than she and Hakoda are already acquainted is comic gold.
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware than that she and Hakoda are already acquainted is comic gold.
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware than she and Hakoda are already [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean acquainted]] is comic gold.
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** The whole scene when Zuko tries to introduce Ursa to everyone, unaware than she and Hakoda are already [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean acquainted]] acquainted is comic gold.
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Main page is [[Fanfic/GuideMeHome here]].
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---> '''Zuko''': ...my...
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---> '''Zuko''': ...my...mother. *beat* ''Wait!''
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---> '''Zuko''': ...my...mother. *beat* ''Wait!''
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** [[BlatantLies It helps him practice his precision firebending!]]
