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* In Chapter 9.2 Ilya proudly reveals the "gattai" move she and Shirou have developed. Shirou is obviously less than enthused with her interpreting it as proof of their deep affections for one another. Then Kirito wants to try it out, despite Ilya's warnings to not raise any flags. And then he suggests Asuna gattai with Shirou as well.

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* In Chapter 9.2 Ilya proudly reveals the "gattai" move she and Shirou have developed. Shirou is obviously less than enthused with her interpreting that she interprets it as proof of their deep affections for one another. Then Kirito wants to try it out, despite Ilya's warnings to not raise any against raising flags. And then he suggests Asuna gattai with Shirou as well.

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** The Laughing Coffin summons a demon and it promptly breaks free and leaves. Their reaction? Shrug their shoulders since it's really not their problem any longer.

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** The Laughing Coffin summons a demon and it promptly breaks free and leaves. Their reaction? Shrug their shoulders since it's really not their problem any longer.longer.
* Chapter 16.4:
** Kirito is still spreading his "108 Skills of the Sixth Ranger" nonsense, and is amused that everyone seems to be taking it seriously. Shirou glares at him whenever he makes up some new "fact."
** What was Kirito doing before he got the call about the children? Math homework. Ellis Bell won't teach him more [Numerology] until he passes a literal trigonometry test.
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---> (''muffled'') "Thfee Thword Thyle, Onee-Geehlee!"\\

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---> (''muffled'') "Thfee Thword Thyle, Onee-Geehlee!"\\






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---> (''muffled'') "Thfee Thword Thyle, Onee-Geehlee!"

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---> (''muffled'') "Thfee Thword Thyle, Onee-Geehlee!"Onee-Geehlee!"\\
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"You know," Kirito said, "It's actually super-embarrassing when you just look serious during a gag like that."\\
"That just means your soul doesn't burn hot enough." Shirou blandly replied.\\
Kirito blinked, before grinning. "Well at least you get these jokes. I tried it on Asuna-ojou-sama and she just asked me what I thought I was doing."
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* Chapter 17.4:
** After Klein's guild one-shots the [King Krab] boss, the entire Front Line decides to have a beach party. In no small part because of the boss's drops.
--->The Floor Boss who ruled over the 20th Floor, called [King Krab]. After being magnificently defeated by the wisdom of the [Fuurinkazan], the primary drop had been a literal ton of the mysterious food ingredient, [Krab Meat?] (The question mark was in the original).
** It's mentioned that Kirito's swim trunks are, of course, all black. Meanwhile, Asuna's bikini is red (for the guild) with... black highlights. [[ShipTease Kirito refuses to ask what the reasoning behind the color scheme is]]. He spends the entire party trying ''very hard'' to keep his eyes on her face.
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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''[[{{Megalodon}} giant sharks]]'' pulling them along.

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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''[[{{Megalodon}} giant sharks]]'' ''giant sharks'' pulling them along.
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* Chapter 18.1:

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* Chapter 18.1:17.3:
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** Kirito remembers Ellis Bell, his NPC magecraft trainer, going on a long rant about Fate and numerology before awkwardly turning the lecture into a quiz "as if the writer had remembered there was supposed to be player interaction." Kirito also notes that he's a reasonably advanced NPC; he seems robotic, but he can respond well to most questions. Friendly reminder that's ''Kayaba'', personally mentoring Kirito. He's so stiff he is mistaken for an NPC.
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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''giant sharks'' pulling them along.

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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''giant sharks'' ''[[{{Megalodon}} giant sharks]]'' pulling them along.
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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''giant sharks''.

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** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''giant sharks''.sharks'' pulling them along.
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* Chapter 18.1:
** Rosalia describes Kuradeel's standard expression as being "really serious about something probably creepy, like taking upskirt pictures of girls."
** No one in Illya's guild bothered getting good at boatmaking, so their "yacht" is apparently just two tiers up from the basic canoes. But they can still move at a decent clip because of Silica's ''giant sharks''.
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* Chapter 17.1:
** Kibau and Klein got into a competition for who could make the best ship for the new ocean floor. Kibau was excited when Klein's ship exploded, since it gave him the lead... cue Klein unveiling a ''rocket ship''. The second one crashed, but the third worked perfectly and mapped almost ninety percent of the floor. Oh, and they named it [Boaty [=McBoatFace=] III].
** Diabel isn't completely certain that the Moonlit Black Cats have what it takes to be Front Liners, but he has to admit he ''really'' likes the chair Keita made for him.
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** Before Shirou will make a sword for Diabel, he requests they fight, so that he can figure out what Diabel really needs. Cut to a few minutes later, where Diabel is just sitting down, still stunned by how ''completely'' he got curb-stomped.

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* Ilya in 3.1 talking down to Kibaou. Note the statement below and her normal body size compared to his.

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* Ilya in Chapter 3.1 talking down to Kibaou. Note the statement below and her normal body size compared to his.



* Liz being tossed around like a sack of potatoes in 5:4.

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* Liz being tossed around like a sack of potatoes in 5:4.Chapter 5.4.
* In Chapter 6.2, Ilya acts like a BrattyHalfPint when other people invite Shirou to join their guilds.
--> "Shirou!" Ilya was seriously pouting now, hands thrust down by her sides as she stood rigidly, "I don't like it when you tease me like this!" She had a tremulous, wide-eyed look as she stared at Shirou. Asuna thought she'd never looked more like a little girl than right now, reacting pitifully to getting teased.\\
With a sigh that was kind rather than exasperated, Shirou reached out in front of him and decisively tapped a menu selection.\\
"Hooray!" Ilya shouted, breaking forward as she half-ran and half-skipped to throw her arms around Shirou's neck and hug him.

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* Ilya in 3:1 talking down to Kibaou. Note the statement below and her normal body size compared to his.

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* Ilya in 3:1 3.1 talking down to Kibaou. Note the statement below and her normal body size compared to his.



* Chapter 5.1
** Griselda and Grimlock's first attempt at learning magecraft is from a Rincewind expy who has MAGUSS on his hat. When the luggage stalks them, Grimlock declares it's time to leave.

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1, Griselda and Grimlock's first attempt at learning magecraft is from a Rincewind expy who has MAGUSS on his hat. When the luggage stalks them, Grimlock declares it's time to leave.

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** When given three weapons to hold by Shirou, Kirito imitates a certain [[Manga/OnePiece three-sword style swordsman]].

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** When given three weapons blades to hold by Shirou, Kirito imitates holds one in each hand and the last in his mouth before imitating a certain [[Manga/OnePiece three-sword style swordsman]].swordsman]].
---> (''muffled'') "Thfee Thword Thyle, Onee-Geehlee!"
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* In Chapter 8.3 Hexidecimal shamefacedly admits he married a BrawnHilda-type NPC, so he could game the inventory system. One Snow remembers her as the one with the large... strength scores. Hexi only barely manages to stop the 2D waifu jokes...

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* In Chapter 8.3 Hexidecimal shamefacedly admits he married a BrawnHilda-type NPC, so he could game the inventory system. One Snow remembers her as the one with the large... [[LastSecondWordSwap strength scores.scores]]. Hexi only barely manages to stop the 2D waifu jokes...



* Whenever Ilya and Liz are alone with each other, they go off on one another. It's telling that Argo ends up arriving at the latter's shop and she's getting ready to chuck a hammer at Ilya, who is standing on a table with her tongue sticking out.

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* Whenever Ilya and Liz are alone with each other, they go off on one another. It's telling that when Argo ends up arriving at visits the latter's shop and she's shop, Liz's getting ready to chuck a hammer at Ilya, who is standing on a table with her tongue sticking out.
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* Diabel's reactions to whenever the Ninja Guild vows their allegiance to him. It's getting to the point where he can't really tell them apart.

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* Diabel's reactions to whenever the Ninja Guild [Fuumanin] vows their allegiance to him. It's getting to the point where he can't really tell them apart.
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* In Chapter 8.3 Hexidecimal shamefacedly admits he married a {{Brawnhilda}}-type NPC, so he could game the inventory system. One Snow remembers her as the one with the large... strength scores. Hexi only barely manages to stop the 2D waifu jokes...

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* In Chapter 8.3 Hexidecimal shamefacedly admits he married a {{Brawnhilda}}-type BrawnHilda-type NPC, so he could game the inventory system. One Snow remembers her as the one with the large... strength scores. Hexi only barely manages to stop the 2D waifu jokes...



* In 10.1 Liz and the others find themselves in the middle of a [ChainOfDeals] quest. The example she and the others use to explain the concept to Asuna starts with, 'a guy needs spark plugs to fix his car, but the only person who has spark plugs will trade them for a widget, and the person with a widget...' and so forth, and so forth, and ends with 'TIME PARADOX!'. Fast forward several chapters later and the narration finds her in a seemingly serious discussion with Shirou, only for:
--> '''Shirou:''' (confused) Wait. Was the quest to fix [[BrickJoke Merlin's car]], then?\\

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* In 10.1 Liz and the others find themselves in the middle of a [ChainOfDeals] quest. The example she and the others use to explain the concept to Asuna starts with, 'a guy needs spark plugs to fix his car, but the only person who has spark plugs will trade them for a widget, and the person with a widget...' and so forth, and so forth, and ends with 'TIME PARADOX!'. Fast forward several chapters later and the narration finds her in a seemingly serious discussion with Shirou, only for:
Shirou:
--> '''Shirou:''' (confused) (''confused'') Wait. Was the quest to fix [[BrickJoke Merlin's car]], then?\\



** By now Shirou [[OneHitKill one-shotting]] bosses has become so common that it's a widespread rumor whenever a dungeon gets cleared quickly.

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** By now now, Shirou [[OneHitKill one-shotting]] bosses has become so common that it's a widespread rumor whenever a dungeon gets cleared quickly.



** When given three weapons to hold by Shirou, Kirito imitates a certain three-sword style swordsman.

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** When given three weapons to hold by Shirou, Kirito imitates a certain [[Manga/OnePiece three-sword style swordsman.swordsman]].

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* Kirito and Ilya silently agree to one day see Asuna become the cat-eared {{Meido}} [Asunyan].



* Kirito and Ilya silently agree to one day see Asuna become the cat-maid Asu-nyan.
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* Chapter 15.3:
** Kirito reveals that the Ether version of the popular [Heat Hawk] spell is called [Psy Duck].
** When given three weapons to hold by Shirou, Kirito imitates a certain three-sword style swordsman.
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** The Laughing Coffin summons a demon and it promptly breaks free and leaves. Their reaction? Shrug their shoulders since it's really not their problem any longer.

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** The Laughing Coffin summons a demon and it promptly breaks free and leaves. Their reaction? Shrug their shoulders since it's really not their problem any longer.longer.
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* When Ilya gets the deed to a castle, she destroys the ruins and builds a new one that looks like a giant skull.
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* The 7F Boss is based on Tokiomi Tohsaka and is named [Omi The Fool]. Considering what happened to him, this is very fitting.

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