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'''Simpkins''': Ooh, sounds like it might've been very painful.
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'''Simpkins''': Ooh, sounds like it might've been very painful.''painful''.
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-->'''Charlie Bind:''' Just now, someone tried to shoot me.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[scoffs]'' Shoot you? Where?\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Schnitzelstrasse.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' Sounds like it might be very painful.
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[scoffs]'' Shoot you? Where?\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Schnitzelstrasse.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' Sounds like it might be very painful.
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* When Desmond and Charlie look for Carstairs at the warehouse, they see Harold's hat and coat resting on a bollard. Their first reaction?
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* When Desmond Simpkins and Charlie Bind look for Carstairs at the warehouse, they see Harold's hat and coat resting on a bollard. Their first reaction?
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** In the same scene, he, Desmond and Charlie find Milchmann dead. Then Desmond orders Charlie to write out the names of the villains that betrayed him.
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** In the same scene, he, Desmond Simpkins and Charlie Bind find Milchmann dead. Then Desmond Simpkins orders Charlie Bind to write out the names of the villains that betrayed him.
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* A woman suddenly appearing in Desmond's cupboard, and then after closing it, he reopens it to find it empty, sans a few clothes.
* Desmond's "[[BlatantLies incredible disguise]]" is {{brownface}} and a fez. [[TheDitz Charlie]] cannot tell the difference when Desmond stops him in the street, saying that "it was the hat".
* Desmond's "[[BlatantLies incredible disguise]]" is {{brownface}} and a fez. [[TheDitz Charlie]] cannot tell the difference when Desmond stops him in the street, saying that "it was the hat".
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* A woman suddenly appearing in Desmond's Simpkins' cupboard, and then after closing it, he reopens it to find it empty, sans a few clothes.
*Desmond's Simpkins' "[[BlatantLies incredible disguise]]" is {{brownface}} and a fez. [[TheDitz Charlie]] Bind]] cannot tell the difference when Desmond Simpkins stops him in the street, saying that "it was the hat".hat".
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'''Daphne Homeybutt:''' "Page One"...
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'''Daphne Homeybutt:''' "Page One"...One"...
* The head of the funhouse is Scottish.
* Harold trying to wrench the padlock open, and then pushes his foot on the other, pushing it open. Then he looks outside the door as if to say "I meant to do that."
** In the same scene, he, Desmond and Charlie find Milchmann dead. Then Desmond orders Charlie to write out the names of the villains that betrayed him.
--->'''Milchmann:''' ''[groans in pain]''
--->'''Charlie Bind:''' Sorry, say that again.
--->'''Milchmann:''' ''[groans the exact same way]''
--->'''Charlie Bind:''' ''(writes, then reads)'' ''[groans]'' Oh, [[NoodleIncident the Chinese again]]!
--->'''Milchmann:''' No! Not that!
* The Fat Man asks the disguised Harold, "Let me see your shimmy."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[offended]'' Certainly not!
-->'''Daphne:''' No, your dance!
* This CaptainObvious description of The Fat Man from the Chief.
-->'''The Chief:''' ''[The Fat Man's description]'' Male.
-->'''Desmond:''' "Male."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[to Charlie]'' "Male."
-->'''Charlie:''' ''[while writing down]'' Male.
-->'''The Chief:''' Fat.
-->'''Desmond:''' "Fat."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[to Charlie]'' "Fat."
-->'''Charlie:''' ''[while writing down]'' Fat.
-->'''Desmond:''' ''[disappointed]'' Is THAT it?
* A woman suddenly appearing in Desmond's cupboard, and then after closing it, he reopens it to find it empty, sans a few clothes.
* Desmond's "[[BlatantLies incredible disguise]]" is {{brownface}} and a fez. [[TheDitz Charlie]] cannot tell the difference when Desmond stops him in the street, saying that "it was the hat".
* The head of the funhouse is Scottish.
* Harold trying to wrench the padlock open, and then pushes his foot on the other, pushing it open. Then he looks outside the door as if to say "I meant to do that."
** In the same scene, he, Desmond and Charlie find Milchmann dead. Then Desmond orders Charlie to write out the names of the villains that betrayed him.
--->'''Milchmann:''' ''[groans in pain]''
--->'''Charlie Bind:''' Sorry, say that again.
--->'''Milchmann:''' ''[groans the exact same way]''
--->'''Charlie Bind:''' ''(writes, then reads)'' ''[groans]'' Oh, [[NoodleIncident the Chinese again]]!
--->'''Milchmann:''' No! Not that!
* The Fat Man asks the disguised Harold, "Let me see your shimmy."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[offended]'' Certainly not!
-->'''Daphne:''' No, your dance!
* This CaptainObvious description of The Fat Man from the Chief.
-->'''The Chief:''' ''[The Fat Man's description]'' Male.
-->'''Desmond:''' "Male."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[to Charlie]'' "Male."
-->'''Charlie:''' ''[while writing down]'' Male.
-->'''The Chief:''' Fat.
-->'''Desmond:''' "Fat."
-->'''Harold:''' ''[to Charlie]'' "Fat."
-->'''Charlie:''' ''[while writing down]'' Fat.
-->'''Desmond:''' ''[disappointed]'' Is THAT it?
* A woman suddenly appearing in Desmond's cupboard, and then after closing it, he reopens it to find it empty, sans a few clothes.
* Desmond's "[[BlatantLies incredible disguise]]" is {{brownface}} and a fez. [[TheDitz Charlie]] cannot tell the difference when Desmond stops him in the street, saying that "it was the hat".
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* Why on earth would Milshman think to stand directly next to the explosion?
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* Why on earth would Milshman Milchmann think to stand directly next to the explosion?
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'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Shnitzel-Strauss.\\
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'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Shnitzel-Strauss.Schnitzelstrasse.\\
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* The GenreBlindness of the heroes.
* Carstairs' many disguises, especially the large-breasted prostitute.
* Why on earth would Milshman think to stand directly next to the explosion?
* This:
-->'''Charlie Bind:''' Just now, someone tried to shoot me.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[scoffs]'' Shoot you? Where?\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Shnitzel-Strauss.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' Sounds like it might be very painful.
* When Desmond and Charlie look for Carstairs at the warehouse, they see Harold's hat and coat resting on a bollard. Their first reaction?
-->'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[whispering]'' There's someone there.\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' Who is it? Is it Carstairs?\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' No, but it appears to be a short man standing on one leg.
* When Crow mind-controls Daphne:
-->'''Dr Crow:''' You are now under my control.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' I am now under your control.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' No. ''You'' will obey everything I say.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' ''[crossly]'' Why did I even bother?! ''(smacks the machine)''\\
''(Daphne's eyes become much more blank)''\\
'''Daphne Homeybutt:''' "Page One"...
* Carstairs' many disguises, especially the large-breasted prostitute.
* Why on earth would Milshman think to stand directly next to the explosion?
* This:
-->'''Charlie Bind:''' Just now, someone tried to shoot me.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[scoffs]'' Shoot you? Where?\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' In the Shnitzel-Strauss.\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' Sounds like it might be very painful.
* When Desmond and Charlie look for Carstairs at the warehouse, they see Harold's hat and coat resting on a bollard. Their first reaction?
-->'''Desmond Simpkins:''' ''[whispering]'' There's someone there.\\
'''Charlie Bind:''' Who is it? Is it Carstairs?\\
'''Desmond Simpkins:''' No, but it appears to be a short man standing on one leg.
* When Crow mind-controls Daphne:
-->'''Dr Crow:''' You are now under my control.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' I am now under your control.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' No. ''You'' will obey everything I say.\\
'''Daphne Honeybutt:''' You will obey everything I say.\\
'''Dr Crow:''' ''[crossly]'' Why did I even bother?! ''(smacks the machine)''\\
''(Daphne's eyes become much more blank)''\\
'''Daphne Homeybutt:''' "Page One"...
