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* 'Her [[{{Gainaxing}} big fat breasts flooped]] as she ran into the door.'
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* 'Her [[{{Gainaxing}} big fat breasts flooped]] flooped as she ran into the door.'
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* How awkward the [=OCs=]' names sound in Japanese, case in point ''Reicheru Ketsuekineko-oni'', ''Minna'' (informal way of saying "everyone"), ''Tenshikuzu'' (roughly "angel trash") and ''Amirru'' (straight-up impossible in Japanese since you can't double the "r" sound).
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* Man Without A Body's Dramatic Reading. All of it. But special mentions go to:
* His pronunciation of Reicheru's VerbalTic, while's lampooning how stupid it is- "Nyaaaah!"
* His pronunciation of Reicheru's VerbalTic, while's lampooning how stupid it is- "Nyaaaah!"
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* Man Without A Body's Dramatic Reading. All of it. But special mentions go to:
* Hismention goes to his pronunciation of Reicheru's VerbalTic, while's lampooning how stupid it is- "Nyaaaah!"
* His
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* ""NO NUTS CAN GO NEAR MY MOUTH ESPECIALLY PENUTS!" Alucard shot up like a jack in the box and vomited like the exorcist girl."
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* ""NO NUTS CAN GO NEAR MY MOUTH ESPECIALLY PENUTS!" Alucard shot up like a jack in the box and vomited like the exorcist girl.""
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* "You can't beat me! [[{{Metaphorgotten}} I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat eat!]]"
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* "You can't beat me! [[{{Metaphorgotten}} I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat to eat!]]"
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--->'''Reicheru''': ""Hey, I think I'll order the duck."
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--->'''Reicheru''': ""Hey, "Hey, I think I'll order the duck."
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* Reicheru recounts her having sex with Inuyasha: "I had a wonderful dream that we were having sex in my mouse on my bed."
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* "There was a sharp pain in Reicheru's lushious chest*
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* "There was a sharp pain in Reicheru's lushious chest*chest"
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* Rin and Shippo's introduction in Chapter 7: "It was Rin and Shippo, they were 18 and in love with each other."
* Also in Chapter 7, we get a brief glimpse of Sesshomaru tormenting Kagome before the story cuts back to Reicheru's baby shower. MoodWhiplash indeed.
* "There was a sharp pain in Reicheru's lushious chest*
* Also in Chapter 7, we get a brief glimpse of Sesshomaru tormenting Kagome before the story cuts back to Reicheru's baby shower. MoodWhiplash indeed.
* "There was a sharp pain in Reicheru's lushious chest*
* [[spoiler:Korra]] being referred to by the narrative as Sesshomaru's "dirty bitch mistress."
* A lot of the metaphors in the story in general are this.
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* [[Anime/ElfenLied Kouta]] works at "Ke Efu Shi" and gives Reicheru a music box. ''By putting it in her takeout meal.''
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* [[Anime/ElfenLied Kouta]] works at "Ke Efu Shi" and gives Reicheru a music box. ''By putting it in her takeout meal.''''
* Goku and Lucy having sex in the sky.
** ""OH MY GOD!" Goku screamed and he came in the sky sending liquified pleasure all over the townsfulk below."
* ""NO NUTS CAN GO NEAR MY MOUTH ESPECIALLY PENUTS!" Alucard shot up like a jack in the box and vomited like the exorcist girl."
* Goku and Lucy having sex in the sky.
** ""OH MY GOD!" Goku screamed and he came in the sky sending liquified pleasure all over the townsfulk below."
* ""NO NUTS CAN GO NEAR MY MOUTH ESPECIALLY PENUTS!" Alucard shot up like a jack in the box and vomited like the exorcist girl."
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Added some stuff here because this fic is freaking hilarious and it needs more attention.
* Similarly, the author occasionally misspelling "back" as "black" creates some very funny lines:
** "She leaned black on the bed and let him into her."
** This bit about Reicheru's father: "Now that he was black, she didn't know what to do."
** This gem:
-->'''Reicheru''': "We have bigger problems on our hands, now. Sesshomaru the Vampire Lord is black."
** "She leaned black on the bed and let him into her."
** This bit about Reicheru's father: "Now that he was black, she didn't know what to do."
** This gem:
-->'''Reicheru''': "We have bigger problems on our hands, now. Sesshomaru the Vampire Lord is black."
**Reicheru somehow being pregnant two chapters later and said "aborition" never being brought up again also makes for some unintentional humor.
* Reicheru's extremely nonchalant reaction to [[spoiler: giving birth to a god and her baby disappearing shortly after being born.]]
--->'''Reicheru''': ""Hey, I think I'll order the duck."
--->'''Reicheru''': ""Hey, I think I'll order the duck."
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* In Chapter 30, a new character is introduced- Shartara or "Shart-san".
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* In Chapter 30, a new character is introduced- Shartara or "Shart-san"."Shart-san".
* To demonstrate her [[SarcasmMode brilliant mastery]] of the Japanese language, the author refers to David's Bridal as "David's Buraidaru" and KFC as "Ke Efu Shi."
** The author's claim that [[BlatantLies she could translate the entire fic into Japanese if she wanted to.]]
* [[Anime/ElfenLied Kouta]] works at "Ke Efu Shi" and gives Reicheru a music box. ''By putting it in her takeout meal.''
* To demonstrate her [[SarcasmMode brilliant mastery]] of the Japanese language, the author refers to David's Bridal as "David's Buraidaru" and KFC as "Ke Efu Shi."
** The author's claim that [[BlatantLies she could translate the entire fic into Japanese if she wanted to.]]
* [[Anime/ElfenLied Kouta]] works at "Ke Efu Shi" and gives Reicheru a music box. ''By putting it in her takeout meal.''
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* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch]].'
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* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch]].lunch.'
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* 'It was Princess Monokoke. (her English name is [[FailOSuckyName Mary Laceheart]].)'
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* 'It was Princess Monokoke. (her English name is [[FailOSuckyName Mary Laceheart]].Laceheart.)'
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* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch.]]'
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* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch.]]'lunch]].'
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-->'''Goku''': "I've travled into the future and I met this beauti[[FreudianSlip fuk]] woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
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-->'''Goku''': "I've travled into the future and I met this beauti[[FreudianSlip fuk]] beauti{{f|reudianSlip}}uk woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
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* [[NoSympathy Their response]] to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
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* [[NoSympathy Their response]] to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
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* "Okay then!" Aza [[FreudianSlip boobed.]]
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* "Okay then!" Aza [[FreudianSlip boobed.]]boobed]].
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* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]
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* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]line]].
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* "Okay then!" Aza [[FreudianSlip boobed.]]
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* Sebastian from Black Butler taking out Minna and Yuki by ''throwing a banana at them''.
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* Sebastian from Black Butler taking out Minna and Yuki by ''throwing a banana at them''.them''.
* In Chapter 30, a new character is introduced- Shartara or "Shart-san".
* In Chapter 30, a new character is introduced- Shartara or "Shart-san".
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** Hell, just the fact that Reicheru's father is ''Goku.''
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* Reicheru's Dad (who is apparently Goku) explaining to Lucy why he hates Reicheru:
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* Reicheru's Dad (who is apparently Goku) [[FlatWhat Goku]]) explaining to Lucy why he hates Reicheru:
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* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]
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* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]]]
* Sebastian from Black Butler taking out Minna and Yuki by ''throwing a banana at them''.
* Sebastian from Black Butler taking out Minna and Yuki by ''throwing a banana at them''.
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** After she has sex with Inuyasha, Denmark bursts in and shouts at Reicheru, who replies, [[NeverMyFault "It's all my Dad's fault!"]]
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* Alucard (yes, that one) who is apparently Reicheru and Yuki's cousin, apparently had sex with Yuki off-page. {{Squick}}.
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* Korra's Mexican restaurant is called 'Les Tacos'.
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* Korra's Mexican restaurant is called 'Les Tacos'. Tacos' and serves duck.
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* '"imam go tease auntie Minna-san!" she ran into the room swaying back and forth like a [[{{Metaphorgotten}} green boat with legs]].'
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* '"imam '"imma go tease auntie Minna-san!" she ran into the room swaying back and forth like a [[{{Metaphorgotten}} green boat with legs]].'
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* ManWithoutABody's Dramatic Reading. All of it. But special mentions go to:
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* ManWithoutABody's Man Without A Body's Dramatic Reading. All of it. But special mentions go to:
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* Their response to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
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* [[NoSympathy Their response response]] to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
** 'She put her boody hands all over the car and got up to the window.'
** 'She put her boody hands all over the car and got up to the window.'
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* "Nyuuuu!" followed by ManWithoutABody's annotation snarking, "Just what this story needed. More nonsensical onomatopoeia."
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* "Nyuuuu!" followed by ManWithoutABody's Man Without A Body's annotation snarking, "Just what this story needed. More nonsensical onomatopoeia."
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* 'Her [[Gainaxing big fat breasts flooped]] as she ran into the door.'
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* 'Her [[Gainaxing [[{{Gainaxing}} big fat breasts flooped]] as she ran into the door.'
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* 'The phone rang. It was loud and obnoxious.'
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* 'The phone rang. It was loud and obnoxious.'obonxious.'
* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]
* Reicheru was very confused [[FantasticRacism like a Chinese man in a place like England]]'- Man Without A Body [[SanitySlippage can be heard losing his mind after he reads that line.]]
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*** 'The world seemed to stop and the angles began to cry.'
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* "You can't beat me! [[Metaphorgotten I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat eat!]]"
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* "You can't beat me! [[Metaphorgotten [[{{Metaphorgotten}} I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat eat!]]"
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* Minna-chan gets amnesia. By ''watching Pokémon.''
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* The "subplot" in which Minna-chan gets amnesia. By ''watching Pokémon.''
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"I've travled into the future and I met this beautifuk woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
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-->'''Goku''': "I've travled into the future and I met this beautifuk beauti[[FreudianSlip fuk]] woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
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* Reicheru at one point being described as a 'curvy meatloaf' in the narration.
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* Wedding being repeatedly misspelled as 'weeding'.
* Their response to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
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* 'Elaine groggily opened her eyes and speaked [[LogicBomb like a kitten]]. "oh Oka-san your so squishy!"'
** '"GAAHHP!" she squished her face with her kitty-fists and feel into Reicheru's chest."' Seriously, GAAHHP?!
* '"imam go tease auntie Minna-san!" she ran into the room swaying back and forth like a [[{{Metaphorgotten}} green boat with legs]].'
* "Nyuuuu!" followed by ManWithoutABody's annotation snarking, "Just what this story needed. More nonsensical onomatopoeia."
* 'Reicheru tored appart the package. "What is it?" Yuki stuck it in her mouth and she felt it with her tounge. Then, Yuki took it out again. "it's a crystal figureine of Rhianna! Thank you!"' How could she tell?
* 'Her [[Gainaxing big fat breasts flooped]] as she ran into the door.'
* Reicheru at one point being described as a 'curvy meatloaf' in thenarration.narration.
* 'The phone rang. It was loud and obnoxious.'
* Their response to stumbling across Zombie!Kagome? [[NoKillLikeOverkill "RUN IT THE FUCK OVER!"]]
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* 'Elaine groggily opened her eyes and speaked [[LogicBomb like a kitten]]. "oh Oka-san your so squishy!"'
** '"GAAHHP!" she squished her face with her kitty-fists and feel into Reicheru's chest."' Seriously, GAAHHP?!
* '"imam go tease auntie Minna-san!" she ran into the room swaying back and forth like a [[{{Metaphorgotten}} green boat with legs]].'
* "Nyuuuu!" followed by ManWithoutABody's annotation snarking, "Just what this story needed. More nonsensical onomatopoeia."
* 'Reicheru tored appart the package. "What is it?" Yuki stuck it in her mouth and she felt it with her tounge. Then, Yuki took it out again. "it's a crystal figureine of Rhianna! Thank you!"' How could she tell?
* 'Her [[Gainaxing big fat breasts flooped]] as she ran into the door.'
* Reicheru at one point being described as a 'curvy meatloaf' in the
* 'The phone rang. It was loud and obnoxious.'
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* ManWithoutABody's Dramatic Reading. All of it. But special mentions go to:
* His pronunciation of Reicheru's VerbalTic, while's lampooning how stupid it is- "Nyaaaah!"
* Reicheru ''licking the wall'' in chapter 3.
* '"Yes, he is the most terrible man. I always feel like he watching me, even on the toilet." they both heartidly laughed.
* 'Her silouette looked like that of a nakid women'
* 'Inuyasha took out his big gargantuine dick and touched it.'
** Boyd.
*** Valumptuios.
*** 'They were in love, and they started humping'.
* The repeated misspelling of Angel as 'Angle' makes for some funny lines:
** '"No." Korra stood up. "I AM an angle! [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I'm not crazy!]] That's right, everyone, now you know my secret! I am PART ANGLE!"'
** '"Don't be modest! You have the voice of an angle!" Minna cheered. "Yeah that's right-You have a better voice than me and I'M and angle!" Yuki smiled.
* "Don't do it, you're gregnant!"
* 'It was Princess Monokoke. (her English name is [[FailOSuckyName Mary Laceheart]].)'
* Alucard (yes, that one) who is apparently Reicheru and Yuki's cousin, apparently had sex with Yuki off-page. {{Squick}}.
* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch.]]'
* Reicheru SlutShaming Lucy, despite being pregnant with Inuyasha's baby, after cheating on Denmark with him.
* "You can't beat me! [[Metaphorgotten I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat eat!]]"
* Lucy giving Reicheru an 'aborition' with her mind.
* Korra tells Reicheru her family owns a Mexican restaurant (despite Korra being part 'angle' and part demon, apparently) and Reicheru replies, "My dad hates Mexicans. [[FelonyMisdemeanor He never took me to a Mexican restaurant!]]"
* Korra's Mexican restaurant is called 'Les Tacos'.
** "It's really hard being Mexican." Korra sighed.
* Minna-chan gets amnesia. By ''watching Pokémon.''
* "That's fucking disguesting!" Reicheru threw up in her [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] hands. "YOU NASTY DISK!"
** "SUCK IT DADDY!" Reicheru screamed as her father and Lucy flew into the air.
* Reicheru's Dad (who is apparently Goku) explaining to Lucy why he hates Reicheru:
"I've travled into the future and I met this beautifuk woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
** Lucy then reassuring Goku, "I wanna fuck that ugly face!"
* Reicheru at one point being described as a 'curvy meatloaf' in the narration.
* His pronunciation of Reicheru's VerbalTic, while's lampooning how stupid it is- "Nyaaaah!"
* Reicheru ''licking the wall'' in chapter 3.
* '"Yes, he is the most terrible man. I always feel like he watching me, even on the toilet." they both heartidly laughed.
* 'Her silouette looked like that of a nakid women'
* 'Inuyasha took out his big gargantuine dick and touched it.'
** Boyd.
*** Valumptuios.
*** 'They were in love, and they started humping'.
* The repeated misspelling of Angel as 'Angle' makes for some funny lines:
** '"No." Korra stood up. "I AM an angle! [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial I'm not crazy!]] That's right, everyone, now you know my secret! I am PART ANGLE!"'
** '"Don't be modest! You have the voice of an angle!" Minna cheered. "Yeah that's right-You have a better voice than me and I'M and angle!" Yuki smiled.
* "Don't do it, you're gregnant!"
* 'It was Princess Monokoke. (her English name is [[FailOSuckyName Mary Laceheart]].)'
* Alucard (yes, that one) who is apparently Reicheru and Yuki's cousin, apparently had sex with Yuki off-page. {{Squick}}.
* 'Reicheru, Minna and Yuki were [[FreudianSlip shitting]] at the lunchtable, [[CaptainObvious eating their lunch.]]'
* Reicheru SlutShaming Lucy, despite being pregnant with Inuyasha's baby, after cheating on Denmark with him.
* "You can't beat me! [[Metaphorgotten I have a heart stronger than anyone's will eat eat!]]"
* Lucy giving Reicheru an 'aborition' with her mind.
* Korra tells Reicheru her family owns a Mexican restaurant (despite Korra being part 'angle' and part demon, apparently) and Reicheru replies, "My dad hates Mexicans. [[FelonyMisdemeanor He never took me to a Mexican restaurant!]]"
* Korra's Mexican restaurant is called 'Les Tacos'.
** "It's really hard being Mexican." Korra sighed.
* Minna-chan gets amnesia. By ''watching Pokémon.''
* "That's fucking disguesting!" Reicheru threw up in her [[PrecisionFStrike fucking]] hands. "YOU NASTY DISK!"
** "SUCK IT DADDY!" Reicheru screamed as her father and Lucy flew into the air.
* Reicheru's Dad (who is apparently Goku) explaining to Lucy why he hates Reicheru:
"I've travled into the future and I met this beautifuk woman. That's when [[MisterSeahorse I]] had Reicheru. Until one day that little bitch killed her mother! I should have thrown her out into the streets after I found out she had a cat demen."
** Lucy then reassuring Goku, "I wanna fuck that ugly face!"
* Reicheru at one point being described as a 'curvy meatloaf' in the narration.
