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* The entirety of [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-86/ this page.]] The artwork works perfectly.
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* The entirety of [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-86/ this page.]] The artwork works perfectly.perfectly.
* During Deacon's session with Maven, he eventually reaches the part where he and Jeff start to have a sexual relationship. As the flashback concludes with Deacon imploring to touch Jeff's body more (with a shot of Deacon shedding his outfit as Jeff lays in bed), the next panel cuts back to the office, where Maven has a completely hilarious look of shock on her face.
** [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-48/ Maven is, in fact, flappable.]]
* Deacon's attempts to appear congenial and non-threatening to Jeff (hampered by him chasing down and slamming Jeff against a wall like a rag doll when they first meet).
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-29/ This page]], simply for the first four panels alone.
--> [Deacon stands and watches Jeff pee at a urinal]
--> '''Jeff''': You want to hold it or something?
--> '''Deacon''' (smiling smugly): Would you ''like'' me to hold your penis?
* During Deacon's session with Maven, he eventually reaches the part where he and Jeff start to have a sexual relationship. As the flashback concludes with Deacon imploring to touch Jeff's body more (with a shot of Deacon shedding his outfit as Jeff lays in bed), the next panel cuts back to the office, where Maven has a completely hilarious look of shock on her face.
** [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-48/ Maven is, in fact, flappable.]]
* Deacon's attempts to appear congenial and non-threatening to Jeff (hampered by him chasing down and slamming Jeff against a wall like a rag doll when they first meet).
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-29/ This page]], simply for the first four panels alone.
--> [Deacon stands and watches Jeff pee at a urinal]
--> '''Jeff''': You want to hold it or something?
--> '''Deacon''' (smiling smugly): Would you ''like'' me to hold your penis?
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* After Jeff gives the override code for Deacon to rescue him, [[TheScrappy Maven]] tries to countermand the order. Before she can get it out, Deacon jabs her in the throat. Almost every page from then on has a shot of Maven collapsed against a wall, unable to speak, clutching at her throat in pain.
* The entirety of [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-86/ this page.]] The artwork works perfectly.
* The entirety of [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/artifice-page-86/ this page.]] The artwork works perfectly.
