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* At first it doesn't make sense that Wester Drumlins is still attached to the National Grid (which allows for the final climactic scene in the cellar) after being abandoned for so many years, but someone in the past likely arranged for the electricity to be kept on, since they knew it was crucial for the time loop.
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* At first it doesn't make sense that Wester Drumlins is still attached to the National Grid (which allows for the final climactic scene in the cellar) after being abandoned for so many years, but it's likely that someone in the past likely (probably Billy) arranged for the electricity to be kept on, since they knew it was crucial for the time loop.
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* At first it doesn't make sense that Wester Drumlins is still attached to the National Grid (which allows for the final climactic scene in the cellar) after being abandoned for so many years, but then you realise that someone in the past likely paid to keep the electricity on, since they knew it was crucial for the time loop.
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* At first it doesn't make sense that Wester Drumlins is still attached to the National Grid (which allows for the final climactic scene in the cellar) after being abandoned for so many years, but then you realise that someone in the past likely paid to keep arranged for the electricity to be kept on, since they knew it was crucial for the time loop.
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* At first it doesn't make sense that Wester Drumlins is still attached to the National Grid (which allows for the final climactic scene in the cellar) after being abandoned for so many years, but then you realise that someone in the past likely paid to keep the electricity on, since they knew it was crucial for the time loop.
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** The Lonely Assassins game shows what happened to the Angels. Someone bought Wester Drumlins and disturbed the statues.
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** The ''The Lonely Assassins Assassins'' game shows what happened to the Angels. Someone bought Wester Drumlins and disturbed the statues.
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* Why, at the beginning of the episode, does one of the Angels chuck a rock at Sally's head, rather than the old reliable method of sneaking up on her and sending her back in time?
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** He's also very nervy and jumpy, which at first only adds to the viewer's suspicion of him...until we learn the full truth of what happened to Kathy and his promise to her. She likely warned her grandson that the house was dangerous, in order to make sure what happened to her didn't repeat with him, and he's clearly eager to get in, deliver the letter and get out again as soon as possible.
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* This episode was made in 2007. The video store isn't likely to stay in business long.
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* This episode was made in 2007. The video store isn't likely to stay in business long.
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* When meeting up to view the DVD and the Easter egg of the Doctor, why do Sally and Larry go ''back'' to the creepy house where several people have already disappeared, and which seems to be a base of operations for the monsters hunting her?
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* When meeting up to view the DVD and the Easter egg of the Doctor, why do Sally and Larry go ''back'' to the creepy house where several people have already disappeared, and which seems to be a base of operations for the monsters hunting her?her, as opposed to going somewhere with plenty of witnesses?
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** The Lonely Assassins game shows what happened to the Angels. Someone bought Wester Drumlins and disturbed the statues.
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** Insect vision is very different to mammalian, so unless the insects are swarming around the Angel, they probably wouldn't see it at all. It's also never explained how ''much'' of an Angel you have to see in order for it to turn to stone.
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** Insect vision is very different to mammalian, so unless the insects are swarming around the Angel, they probably wouldn't see it at all. It's also never explained how ''much'' of an Angel you have to see in order for it to turn to stone.stone.
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* The DVD conversation ends shortly after Sally tells Larry to look at the Angel, meaning he can't write any more of her side of the script.
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* The When Sally and the Doctor are communicating via the DVD conversation ends conversation, the Doctor reaches the end of the transcript shortly after Sally tells Larry (who is writing down her side of the conversation) to look at not take his eyes off the Angel, meaning he can't see to write any more of her side of the script.
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** Also, the four angels all conveniently standing around the TARDIS when it takes off makes the Doctor look ''very'' lucky to have planned that out in advance. But it's entirely possible that the folder she gives him also has a note on what happened with the angels, meaning that he would know in advance what would happen to them.
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** Also, the four angels all conveniently standing around within each other's eyesight when the TARDIS when it takes off leaves without them makes the Doctor look ''very'' lucky to have planned that out in advance. But it's entirely possible that the folder she Sally gives him also has a note on what happened with the angels, happened, meaning that he would know in advance what would happen not to them.instruct them on how to use the TARDIS without it leaving them behind.
