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* DisappearedDad: [[spoiler:Dave's father. He walked out on their family when he and his sister were young, resulting in their mom suffering a breakdown.]]
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** Dave [[spoiler:not only had to watch his father walk out on their family, but his mother have a nervous breakdown which forced his sister to take care of them both. The trauma of which left him emotionally stunted.]]
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** Dave [[spoiler:not only [[spoiler:lost both of his parents when he was very young and had to watch be raised by his father walk out on their family, but his mother have a nervous breakdown which forced his sister to take care of them both. The trauma of which left him emotionally stunted.sister.]]
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** [=McGiggles=] has one where he breaks down crying about sleeping with a large number of married women and seeing that as the sole benefit to his celebrity status. [[spoiler:Unlike with Dave, his doesn't stick.]]
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** [=McGiggles=] has one where he breaks down crying about sleeping with a large number of married women and seeing that as the sole benefit to his celebrity status. [[spoiler:Unlike with Dave, [[IgnoredEpiphany his doesn't stick.]]]]]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler: [=McGiggles=] goes out of his way to attack some zombie children to relieve some pent-up frustration]]
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* MamaBear: Miss Caroline definitely counts, as she does everything to protect her class and keep them from finding out how much of a threat the zombies are, treating it like a game and even threatening to [[FedtotheBeast feed [=McGiggles=] to the zombies]]if he reveals they're real, all while jabbing his side with a broken souvenir.
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* MamaBear: Miss Caroline definitely counts, as she does everything to protect her class and keep them from finding out how much of a threat the zombies are, treating it like a game and even threatening to [[FedtotheBeast feed [=McGiggles=] to the zombies]]if zombies]] if he reveals they're real, all while jabbing his side with a broken souvenir.
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* Laughter: after Dave whipped his Eye, a Adult Boy ''Ricky'' laughs at Him too
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* DeadlyHug: A non lethal variant, but when Teddy McGiggles freaks out and begins shouting about the zombies, Miss Caroline embraces him, only to reveal she's pressing a sharpened edge of a souvenir into his side, demanding he not endanger her kids or put them in a state of fear, ordering him to pretend it's all a game and twists the souvenir against him to force him to stay in character.
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* DeadlyHug: A non lethal variant, but when Teddy McGiggles [=McGiggles=] freaks out and begins shouting about the zombies, Miss Caroline embraces him, only to reveal she's pressing a sharpened edge of a souvenir into his side, demanding he not endanger her kids or put them in a state of fear, ordering him to pretend it's all a game and twists the souvenir against him to force him to stay in character.
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* MamaBear: Miss Caroline definitely counts, as she does everything to protect her class and keep them from finding out how much of a threat the zombies are, treating it like a game and even threatening to [[FedtotheBeast feed McGiggles to the zombies]]if he reveals they're real, all while jabbing his side with a broken souvenir.
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* MamaBear: Miss Caroline definitely counts, as she does everything to protect her class and keep them from finding out how much of a threat the zombies are, treating it like a game and even threatening to [[FedtotheBeast feed McGiggles [=McGiggles=] to the zombies]]if he reveals they're real, all while jabbing his side with a broken souvenir.
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* SecurityCling: Miss Caroline seems to be giving Teddy McGiggles a hug when he's breaking down after cursing and yelling about the zombies. She speaks comfortingly, but her tone and words makes it clear that she believes he's a liability and if he puts her kids in danger, she will throw him to the zombies without hesitation.
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* SecurityCling: Miss Caroline seems to be giving Teddy McGiggles [=McGiggles=] a hug when he's breaking down after cursing and yelling about the zombies. She speaks comfortingly, but her tone and words makes it clear that she believes he's a liability and if he puts her kids in danger, she will throw him to the zombies without hesitation.
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* VorpalPillow: Attempted by McGiggles when Dave breaks into the gift shop and they fight. However, the pillow is a tiny gift shop souvenir and doesn't even cover half of Daves face.
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* VorpalPillow: Attempted by McGiggles [=McGiggles=] when Dave breaks into the gift shop and they fight. However, the pillow is a tiny gift shop souvenir and doesn't even cover half of Daves face.
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* BringmemyBrownPants: McGiggles admits to having shit himself at one point and that he was originally planning to blame Dave for the smell.
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* BringmemyBrownPants: McGiggles BringMeMyBrownPants: [=McGiggles=] admits to having shit himself at one point and that he was originally planning to blame Dave for the smell.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Miss Caroline gives one to [=McGiggles=] after he suggest she give him a blowjob.
