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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13053111/1/Your-Father-and-Mine Your Father and Mine]]'' is a ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'' fanfiction written on Website/FanfictionDotNet Platform/FanFictionDotNet by Redbayly.
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I have a mind-boggling number of tropes drafted for this fic, plus character pages. Just y'all wait...
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* YouDidntAsk: The reason why the states' existence wasn't publically known until very recently.
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* YouDidntAsk: The reason why the states' existence wasn't publically known until very recently.recently.
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* EmbarrassingMiddleName:
** America's eldest sons, Connecticut and Massachusetts, also known as Thomas ''Job-raked-out-of-the-ashes'' Jones and John ''If-Christ-had-not-died-for-thee-thou-hadst-been-damned'' Jones. To be fair, America was fairly sleep-deprived at the time and it forced Puritan memories at the forefront of his mind.
** England and Russia are very critical of a father calling his daughter Dorothy ''Exodus'' Jones, only for Kansas to tearfully reveal she picked the name herself. Cue awkwardness in the room.
** America's eldest sons, Connecticut and Massachusetts, also known as Thomas ''Job-raked-out-of-the-ashes'' Jones and John ''If-Christ-had-not-died-for-thee-thou-hadst-been-damned'' Jones. To be fair, America was fairly sleep-deprived at the time and it forced Puritan memories at the forefront of his mind.
** England and Russia are very critical of a father calling his daughter Dorothy ''Exodus'' Jones, only for Kansas to tearfully reveal she picked the name herself. Cue awkwardness in the room.
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* HonoraryUncle: How the states tend to interact with Nations whose immigrants left a deep influence on their culture.
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* HonoraryUncle: HonoraryUncle:
** How the states tend to interact with Nations whose immigrants left a deep influence on theirculture.culture.
** America's Founding Fathers also were rather doting towards his children, especially when said child personified their birth state.
** How the states tend to interact with Nations whose immigrants left a deep influence on their
** America's Founding Fathers also were rather doting towards his children, especially when said child personified their birth state.
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** From a technical viewpoint, France is this to America's states since their mother and stepmother was his former colony of Louisiana. It's played at his most straight with the current Louisiana, the former one's eldest daughter, as he constantly fawns over her foe being a beautiful, elegant young lady who puts her foes down in style.
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** From a technical viewpoint, France is this to America's states since their mother and stepmother was his former colony of Louisiana. It's played at his most straight with the current Louisiana, the former one's eldest daughter, as he constantly fawns over her foe being a beautiful, elegant young lady who puts her foes down in style.
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* QuestionableConsent: The circumstances in which Texas and California were conceived -- both America and Mexico were horrendously drunk at the time, to the point he completely blacked the night's events.
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* DotingGrandparent:
** From a technical viewpoint, France is this to America's states since their mother and stepmother was his former colony of Louisiana. It's played at his most straight with the current Louisiana, the former one's eldest daughter, as he constantly fawns over her foe being a beautiful, elegant young lady who puts her foes down in style.
** America doesn't want to introduce his grandson West British Florida to his brother England because the European Nation would go gaga over the kid. Sure enough, when it happens, England immediately hugs the micronation with all his might.
** From a technical viewpoint, France is this to America's states since their mother and stepmother was his former colony of Louisiana. It's played at his most straight with the current Louisiana, the former one's eldest daughter, as he constantly fawns over her foe being a beautiful, elegant young lady who puts her foes down in style.
** America doesn't want to introduce his grandson West British Florida to his brother England because the European Nation would go gaga over the kid. Sure enough, when it happens, England immediately hugs the micronation with all his might.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Turkey and Albania have no hesitations fighting Serbia or even ''Russia'' if Kosovo is insulted.
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* MalignedMixedMarriage: From the very beginning, several deputees were wary of America's new bride, but John Adams openly calls her a "Creole strumpet". And when he learns of her, England immediately despises Louise for her French ancestry.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: England is very much HatedByAll in North America, something that distresses him even if his StiffUpperLip won't let him admit it. So his reaction when introduced to West British Florida -- a micronation striving to join the British Commonwealth -- is to immediately grab the boy in a bone-crushing embrace.
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* HatedByAll: The North American states and Native tribes ''loathe'' England for being a powerful colonial empire that caused a lot of misery for their people out of greed. It's so bad that he genuinely fears for his life when invited to celebrate Thanksgiving, since they will be in attendance and able to hurt him.
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* ImmortalsFearDeath: Part of the reason why the Confederacy became so ruthless was how precarious her existence was, since she was constantly redefining herself, and she hated that.
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* ObnoxiousInLaws: America's wife was ''deeply'' hostile by the prospect of meeting his siblings England and Canada, encouraging him to mistrust them and secretly destroying the letters they tried to send. On England's side, he considers the Confederacy a manipulative witch unworthy of America's love -- it's implied part of this comes from her being related to France.
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* YokoOhNo: America's children are happy to fling a heap of scorn on his late wife, holding her responsible for the Civil War in spite of America's protests that the situation was a great deal more complicated. Her reputation worsens when she's revealed to have contributed to America's isolation and estrangement from his family, leading England to blame the "half-French slattern" for stealing his adopted brother.
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* YokoOhNo: America's children are happy to fling a heap of scorn on his late wife, holding her responsible for the Civil War in spite of America's protests that the situation was a great deal more complicated. Her reputation worsens when she's revealed to have contributed to America's isolation and estrangement from his family, leading England to blame the "half-French slattern" for stealing his adopted brother.brother.
* YouDidntAsk: The reason why the states' existence wasn't publically known until very recently.
* YouDidntAsk: The reason why the states' existence wasn't publically known until very recently.
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* MeaningfulName:
** ''Louise Anne''tte Dubois, formerly the Territory of ''Louisiana''.
** America's Founding Fathers suggested for his firstborn daughter's human alias to be "Athena", since he was a TrulySingleParent to her. America seriously considers it before arguing he might have more daughters in the future and he's not giving them all the same name.
** ''Louise Anne''tte Dubois, formerly the Territory of ''Louisiana''.
** America's Founding Fathers suggested for his firstborn daughter's human alias to be "Athena", since he was a TrulySingleParent to her. America seriously considers it before arguing he might have more daughters in the future and he's not giving them all the same name.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: InUniverse.
** Following the reveal that America and Canada are Scandia's children, the Nordics briefly ponder over the possibility of their countries raising the North American twins and forging alliances with the Native tribes against the European colonial empires.
** A depressed France laments he never got to care for the Territory of Louisiana, but muses it might have been for the best considering his track records with his former colonies -- who hate his guts out, so there's no guarantee of a timeline in which raising Louise Annette would have turned out well.
** Following the reveal that America and Canada are Scandia's children, the Nordics briefly ponder over the possibility of their countries raising the North American twins and forging alliances with the Native tribes against the European colonial empires.
** A depressed France laments he never got to care for the Territory of Louisiana, but muses it might have been for the best considering his track records with his former colonies -- who hate his guts out, so there's no guarantee of a timeline in which raising Louise Annette would have turned out well.
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** After the Second World War, Japan basically is ''persona non grata'' for the other Asian countries. He acknowledges he fully deserves it.
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** After the Second World War, Japan basically is ''persona non grata'' for the other Asian countries. He acknowledges he fully deserves it.it.
* YokoOhNo: America's children are happy to fling a heap of scorn on his late wife, holding her responsible for the Civil War in spite of America's protests that the situation was a great deal more complicated. Her reputation worsens when she's revealed to have contributed to America's isolation and estrangement from his family, leading England to blame the "half-French slattern" for stealing his adopted brother.
* YokoOhNo: America's children are happy to fling a heap of scorn on his late wife, holding her responsible for the Civil War in spite of America's protests that the situation was a great deal more complicated. Her reputation worsens when she's revealed to have contributed to America's isolation and estrangement from his family, leading England to blame the "half-French slattern" for stealing his adopted brother.
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** Plainly averted with Iowa when Taiwan draws yaoi porn about America and Russia having a steamy makeout session -- hey, her dad didn't have a lot of luck with women, so that might be better for him to try his hand with a dude! Kosovo is appaled by her sheer nonchalance.
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SecretKeeper: Iceland for Canada and America's half-Nordic parentage. He's pretty anxious about revealing his knowledge, until he cannot go anymore -- fortunately, the Nordics are more dismayed about the fact they never took him seriously when he tried to tell them about another continent.
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StacysMom: Nevada is mother to the micronation Molossia and acknowledged as very beautiful, to the point that Seborga tries hitting on her.
*TangledFamilyTree
TangledFamilyTree: Oh boy! So you have European Nations considering themselves godparents or HonoraryUncle to the states they influenced through immigration, the North American twins being half-Nordic through their father, the Ancient European Nations screwing each other a lot -- yes, in both senses -- and making everyone more or less related...
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ThisIsGonnaSuck: America insists his idea of inviting all the Nations for a corporate camping retreat is going to be a success. Considering all the historical and current animosity between everyone, his children are not as enthusiastic.
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TrulySingleParent: The Thirteen Colonies were born in the same way that Zeus sired Athena -- America ''was'' pretty chuffed about becoming a dad, but he found the process quite painful.
*WeUsedToBeFriendsWackyParentSeriousChild: Zigzagged regarding America who's his cheery, goofy and slightly CloudCuckooLander self, but is able to be pretty serious and whose children can be just as insane as him, when they are not suffering from genuine mental illness.
* WeUsedToBeFriends:
** Russia and America were penpals and enjoyed it immensely, until Russia went communist. Their relationship is still rather tense in the modern era.
** After the Second World War, Japan basically is ''persona non grata'' for the other Asian countries. He acknowledges he fully deserves it.
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** Russia and America were penpals and enjoyed it immensely, until Russia went communist. Their relationship is still rather tense in the modern era.
** After the Second World War, Japan basically is ''persona non grata'' for the other Asian countries. He acknowledges he fully deserves it.
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** None of the United Kingdom siblings is able to peg a father for themselves or the others -- Britannia ''really'' enjoyed cavorting around.
* INeverGotAnyLetters: England and Canada ''tried'' to reconcile with America, only for his wife to intercept the mail and burn it as she was paranoid about them hurting him and the children again.
* LastOfItsKind: China used to have several siblings until the Qin dynasty threw the basis for a unified country, with his brothers and sisters choosing to dissolve and never reincarnate while he was left the only Ancient Chinese Nation.
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** First Nation used to be the personification of North America before she gave birth to her youngest children, the twins who later became Canada and the United States. And when a Nation produce a child to replace them, they start to decline...
** The Confederacy to America's children. They generally avoid to speak about her, since she's a ''major'' cause for dissension in the family.
** Saami to the Nordic Nations. They hesitate before trying to reconnect with her, since their governments are pretty racist towards her people, but she reassures them that she can tell the difference between her sons and the people who hurt her.
** Japan has extremely blurry memories of his mother dating from before the Yayoi period and isn't holding hope for her to be still alive in the modern era. WordOfGod identified her as the Ainu culture.
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ParentalSexualitySquick:
** England staunchly rejects his brother Scotland's confession that Britannia would enjoy cavorting around, outright assaulting his sibling and screaming he was a virgin birth.
** A variant with France who doesn't care about his mother Gaul sharing his hedonistic tendances -- what mortifies him is her having an affair with England's mother, leading him to lament her lack of discerning taste.
*ReallyGetsAroundReallyGetsAround:
** Subverted with America -- you would think he's a genuine Casanova since he produced fifty children, but he only slept with ''two'' partners and was faithful to his wife for sixty decades.
** Britannia, to England's utter horror.
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** First Nation used to be the personification of North America before she gave birth to her youngest children, the twins who later became Canada and the United States. And when a Nation produce a child to replace them, they start to decline...
** The Confederacy to America's children. They generally avoid to speak about her, since she's a ''major'' cause for dissension in the family.
** Saami to the Nordic Nations. They hesitate before trying to reconnect with her, since their governments are pretty racist towards her people, but she reassures them that she can tell the difference between her sons and the people who hurt her.
** Japan has extremely blurry memories of his mother dating from before the Yayoi period and isn't holding hope for her to be still alive in the modern era. WordOfGod identified her as the Ainu culture.
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** England staunchly rejects his brother Scotland's confession that Britannia would enjoy cavorting around, outright assaulting his sibling and screaming he was a virgin birth.
** A variant with France who doesn't care about his mother Gaul sharing his hedonistic tendances -- what mortifies him is her having an affair with England's mother, leading him to lament her lack of discerning taste.
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** Subverted with America -- you would think he's a genuine Casanova since he produced fifty children, but he only slept with ''two'' partners and was faithful to his wife for sixty decades.
** Britannia, to England's utter horror.
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* CainAndAbel: When you have half a hundred siblings, you ''will'' seek to murder some of them, that's kinda impossible to avoid.
* FreudianExcuse:
** The Thirteen Colonies are deeply hostile towards England for waging war against their father America and hurting their lands -- they felt every bit of it and they were ''young children'' at the time.
** The Native tribes as a rule loathe the former colonial empires who drove their people away from their ancestral lands, reduced them to poverty, exposed them to diseases and stole their youngest brothers America and Canada to brainwash them into hating their older siblings.
** Nobody was aware of the Territory of Louisiana having a personification, so she was left on her own until she met America. It made her ''deeply'' clingy and paranoid about foreign influences stealing him away.
** The Thirteen Colonies are deeply hostile towards England for waging war against their father America and hurting their lands -- they felt every bit of it and they were ''young children'' at the time.
** The Native tribes as a rule loathe the former colonial empires who drove their people away from their ancestral lands, reduced them to poverty, exposed them to diseases and stole their youngest brothers America and Canada to brainwash them into hating their older siblings.
** Nobody was aware of the Territory of Louisiana having a personification, so she was left on her own until she met America. It made her ''deeply'' clingy and paranoid about foreign influences stealing him away.
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* IncurableCoughOfDeath
IncurableCoughOfDeath: China is shown sneezing a lot in the latest chapters. He staunchly insists he merely suffers from allergies, but the events in the story are unfolding in 2019, meaning he's in the early stages of COVID-19.
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InternalizedCategorism: As the Confederacy was growing as a distinct culture, she started to resent several of his biological children for showing African features -- something they got from ''her'', since she used to be the Territory of Louisiana, a melting pot of Natives, Blacks and Europeans, and appeared having mixed ancestry as a consequence.
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KnightOfCerebus: When the matter of America's late wife is on the table, the narrative quickly loses any hint of humor.
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LongLostRelative:
** The North American twins to the Nordics, since they share a progenitor. Iceland was the only one to be aware of the relationship for a long time.
** Turns out that the Confederacy formerly was the Territory of Louisiana, a French colony sold to America. France is horror-struck when he learns he unwittingly neglected and sold his own daughter.
*MassiveNumberedSiblingsMassiveNumberedSiblings: Really, America? ''Fifty'' children? Other Nations are very much aghast in front of how many states he raised.
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** The North American twins to the Nordics, since they share a progenitor. Iceland was the only one to be aware of the relationship for a long time.
** Turns out that the Confederacy formerly was the Territory of Louisiana, a French colony sold to America. France is horror-struck when he learns he unwittingly neglected and sold his own daughter.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13053111/1/Your-Father-and-Mine Your Father and Mine]]'' is a ''Webcomic/HetaliaAisPowers'' ''Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers'' fanfiction written on Website/FanfictionDotNet by Redbayly.
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BigScrewedUpFamily: So America has a lot of Native siblings who rather justificably hate the Europeans, half a hundred kids constantly squabbling with each other and suffering from various quirks and mental illnesses, and he used to be married to ''the Confederacy''.
** The Europeans are potentially related to each other, something that upset them a lot since it means they would have to call family people they cannot stand -- just look at England and France.
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ChocolateBaby: Nation genetics can be pretty weird, and several of America's children closely look like European Nations such as Prussia and Belgium courtesy of their immigrants strongly influencing them.
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DisappearedDad:
** Scandia -- the progenitor to the Nordic Nations -- had a fling with First Nation and left before anyone except for Iceland could learn he had sired America and Canada.
** France is rather anguished to learn he was one to the Territory of Louisiana, as he had no idea whatsoever she existed and missed her wedding and her becoming a mother as a consequence, learning of her only decades after her demise.
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DotingParent: America is nothing but a proud papa to his questionably sane offspring.
*EveryoneHasStandards
EveryoneHasStandards: Several European Nations are stunned to learn just ''how many'' childen America has produced. Two or three are alright, but ''fifty'' are really a lot.
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HiddenDepths: Before they learned of his children's existence, other Nations saw America as helplessly goofy and lacking in responsability. Seeing him interact with the states show he actually can be quite serious and is hiding heavy baggage regarding his failed marriage.
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HonoraryUncle: How the states tend to interact with Nations whose immigrants left a deep influence on their culture.
*ImmortalProcreationClauseImmortalProcreationClause: Nations reproducing tend to depend on the potential for a culture to develop into something new rather than sex. Before America's children were revealed to the world, the mainstream opinion was that Nations were infertile.
** The Europeans are potentially related to each other, something that upset them a lot since it means they would have to call family people they cannot stand -- just look at England and France.
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** Scandia -- the progenitor to the Nordic Nations -- had a fling with First Nation and left before anyone except for Iceland could learn he had sired America and Canada.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13053111/1/Your-Father-and-Mine Your Father and Mine]]'' is a ''Webcomic/HetaliaAisPowers'' fanfiction written on Website/FanfictionDotNet by Redbayly.
In which America's fifty children -- each personifying one of his states -- are not a secret, that's just he didn't care about explaining their existence to the other Nations. Yet as with every secret, it's bound to get dragged in daylight one day, and considering the American Nations' general temperament, it happens... explosively so.
And with this reveal, the door is opened for a great deal of truths about America to be unveiled too.
!Contains the following tropes
* BigScrewedUpFamily
* ChocolateBaby
* DisappearedDad
* DotingParent
* EveryoneHasStandards
* HiddenDepths
* HonoraryUncle
* ImmortalProcreationClause
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
* InternalizedCategorism
* KnightOfCerebus
* LongLostRelative
* MassiveNumberedSiblings
* MissingMom
* StacysMom
* TangledFamilyTree
* TrulySingleParent
* WackyParentSeriousChild
* WeUsedToBeFriends
In which America's fifty children -- each personifying one of his states -- are not a secret, that's just he didn't care about explaining their existence to the other Nations. Yet as with every secret, it's bound to get dragged in daylight one day, and considering the American Nations' general temperament, it happens... explosively so.
And with this reveal, the door is opened for a great deal of truths about America to be unveiled too.
!Contains the following tropes
* BigScrewedUpFamily
* ChocolateBaby
* DisappearedDad
* DotingParent
* EveryoneHasStandards
* HiddenDepths
* HonoraryUncle
* ImmortalProcreationClause
* IncurableCoughOfDeath
* InternalizedCategorism
* KnightOfCerebus
* LongLostRelative
* MassiveNumberedSiblings
* MissingMom
* StacysMom
* TangledFamilyTree
* TrulySingleParent
* WackyParentSeriousChild
* WeUsedToBeFriends
