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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.
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* LotsAndLotsOfCharacters: The story has at least thirty five named [=OCs=].
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* AdultFear: Friedrich constantly worries that he'll strike his wife or daughter in one of his UnstoppableRage phases. [[spoiler:His fears prove true. It's possible that Michael engineered it.]]
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* AbsenteeActor: Olaf is not even mentioned once in the story.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", as opposed to "Westerguard". Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Royal The royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", as opposed to "Westerguard". Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Weselton duty in the eyes of Islander Navy. Not only the place is a week's swim from the capital, it's full of Weste, most of whom don't know Islander language.
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* ReassignedToAntarctica: Weselton duty in the eyes of Islander Navy. Not only is the place is a week's swim from the capital, it's full of Weste, most of whom don't know Islander language.
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* XanatosSpeedChess: Hans outright admits that he doesn't have any plan and just works with what he has.
-->'''Hans''': ''Planned''? [[spoiler:Dear Anna]], I thought you'd know me better! There's no ''plan''. I make it all up as I go along!
-->'''Hans''': ''Planned''? [[spoiler:Dear Anna]], I thought you'd know me better! There's no ''plan''. I make it all up as I go along!
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* XanatosSpeedChess: XanatosSpeedChess:
** Hans outright admits that he doesn't have any plan and just works with what he has.
-->'''Hans''': --->'''Hans''': ''Planned''? [[spoiler:Dear Anna]], I thought you'd know me better! There's no ''plan''. I make it all up as I go along!
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, is said to look like elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Kai's father, baron Hakan Madsen, is said to look like an elder statesman despite being in early forties, largely due to the fact that he grayed early.
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* OhCrap: Three times in "''Steel and ice''":
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* OhCrap: Three Multiple times in "''Steel and ice''":
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* OriginalCharacter: The story is full of those.
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* OriginalCharacter: The story is full of those.new characters not in the source material.
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* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: At first, Southern Isles plot and Weselton plot. Now Southern Isles became one of main plots.
* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Ferdinand and Hans appearance-wise, and Michael and Hans character-wise.
** Explicitly averted with Kai Madsen and his father. The former is mentioned to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook Younger Than He Looks]], while baron Madsen quite the opposite.
* UncannyFamilyResemblance: Ferdinand and Hans appearance-wise, and Michael and Hans character-wise.
** Explicitly averted with Kai Madsen and his father. The former is mentioned to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook Younger Than He Looks]], while baron Madsen quite the opposite.
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%%Administrivia/ZeroContextExample**Ferdinand and Hans appearance-wise, and Michael and Hans character-wise.
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** Conversely, ''Fighting the waves'' is DarkerAndEdgier than rest of the fic.
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* HappilyMarried: Friedrich and Lisa, despite his issues.
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* IdiotBall: Prince Charles of Weselton seems to have caught it when Kai and Kristoff arrived. Honestly. He's [[spoiler:at war]] with the queen who can control ice, he knows what happened to Hans, and he knows that Elsa's patience has it's limits. And he still prolongs the negotiations to get better terms and claims that Elsa's ''weak''. His own son calls him out on this.
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* IdiotBall: Prince Charles of Weselton seems to have caught it when Kai and Kristoff arrived. Honestly. He's [[spoiler:at war]] with the queen who can control ice, he knows what happened to Hans, and he knows that Elsa's patience has it's its limits. And he still prolongs the negotiations to get better terms and claims that Elsa's ''weak''. His own son calls him out on this.
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* TheSpymaster: colonel Hunter for Weselton and general-baron Madsen for Arendelle. The latter is much more likable, and seems better (or more loyal) at his job.
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** Explicitely averted with Kai Madsen and his father. The former is mentioned to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook Younger Than He Looks]], while baron Madsen quite the opposite.
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** Explicitely Explicitly averted with Kai Madsen and his father. The former is mentioned to be [[YoungerThanTheyLook Younger Than He Looks]], while baron Madsen quite the opposite.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the Weste are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: Downplayed. Ugly parts of the [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]] are shown, with the ship sequester being more bloody than anticipated, and revolutionaries firing at once-friends, although only briefly visited, and the revolution is shown to have popular support.
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Downplayed with the [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]].On one hand, it seems It's oddly neat - although it helps that the Weste are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, other hand, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and another ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if is shown, although only briefly visited.
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Downplayed with the [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]].
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: Few chapters end like this, notably ''Best laid plans...'' and ''Fugitives''.
* ContinuationFic: As is clear in description.
* ContinuationFic: As is clear in description.
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* EvilMentor: Berg turns out to be this for Kai. Played with in that he's honestly sorry for it.
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* BerserkButton:
** Both Friedrich and Anna are prone to outbursts of hate whenever they have some news about Hans, although it's more [[UnstoppableRage visible]] with Friedrich.
** Both Friedrich and Anna are prone to outbursts of hate whenever they have some news about Hans, although it's more [[UnstoppableRage visible]] with Friedrich.
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**BerserkButton: Both Friedrich and Anna are prone to outbursts of hate whenever they have some news about Hans, although it's more [[UnstoppableRage visible]] with Friedrich.
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Has been a DeadFic since 2015.
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* DeadFic: Hasn't been updated since early 2015, and seeing how the author hasn't written anything since 2016, unlikely to ever be finished.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Eric's wife (and Hans' sister) is cheating on him with colonel Hunter. She might also cheat on him with Felix Drachner, although it's not confirmed.
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* BadassGay: Prince Ferdinand. Even with one hand, he still manages to survive a giant storm and defeat two huge, armed guardsmen with no weapons.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Kai has his moments, especially his antics on the horse (he can't ride at all). Surprisingly, Anna isn't.
** Ferdinand is a borderline example, what with his first attempt to apologize to Anna:
-->''Princess, I... Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is... ''[[GratuitousGerman Verdammt]]''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
** Ferdinand is a borderline example, what with his first attempt to apologize to Anna:
-->''Princess, I... Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is... ''[[GratuitousGerman Verdammt]]''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
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* OutOfCharacter: Anna gets hit with it hard, with most of her {{Adorkable}} qualities disappearing.
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* OutOfCharacter: Anna gets hit with it hard, with most of her {{Adorkable}} dorky qualities disappearing.
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Not in film. In a novel called Frozen Heart which may or may not be canon.
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The story picks up two months after the end of the movie. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
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The story picks up two months after the end of the movie. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
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* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", as opposed to "Westerguard" as it was in the film. Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Royal family of the Isles is called "von Schwalbe", as opposed to "Westerguard" as it was in the film."Westerguard". Westerguard, on the other hand, turns into an island that Hans rules for his brother.
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'''The page contains unmarked spoilers for ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''.'''
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.
The story picks up two months after the end of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.
The story picks up two months after the end of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
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'''The page contains unmarked spoilers for ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''.''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}''.'''
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' ''{{WesternAnimation/Frozen|2013}}'' ContinuationFic by Mapograph with massive (and by massive we mean ''[[LotsAndLotsOfCharacters massive]]'') number of {{OC}}s and a complicated GambitPileup in place.
The story picks up two months after the end of''Disney/{{Frozen}}''.the movie. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10862383/1/What-about-Witch-Queen What about Witch Queen?]]'' is
The story picks up two months after the end of
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The story picks up two months after the end of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, king Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans' and Friedrich's siblings decide to use resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
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The story picks up two months after the end of ''Disney/{{Frozen}}''. Prince Hans arrives in the capital of the Southern Isles, arrested. His older brother, king King Friedrich, is torn between punishing him as he should, and his fourteen very vocal siblings who demand justice to be served... to Elsa. Some of Hans' Hans and Friedrich's siblings decide to use the resulting chaos for their own schemes, and Hans has his own plans as well. Meanwhile, in Arendelle, there is a faction in the army that demands Elsa's powers to be put for a good use as a tool of war - and they don't feel like accepting "no" as an answer. And then there's mysterious smuggler Felix Drachner, who appears to have his hand everywhere, but how could he profit from the steadily growing chaos?
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-->''Princess, I… Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is… ''[[GratuitousGerman Verdammt]]''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
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-->''Princess, I… I... Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is… is... ''[[GratuitousGerman Verdammt]]''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
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* ArrangedMarriage: Played for laughs. Kai's father wants to arrange marrying Kai with Elsa. Kai is... less than thrilled. Rather terrified.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Played for laughs. Kai's father wants to arrange marrying Kai with to Elsa. Kai is... less than thrilled. Rather terrified.
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** Kai and king Charles both mention Elsa organizing weekly ice rinks in castle courtyard, like the one she made in the end of the film.
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** Kai and king King Charles both mention Elsa organizing weekly ice rinks in castle courtyard, like the one she made in the end of the film.
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** ''Lucky Zephyr'' leaves Koenigsberg just before Friedrich orders to close the port, taking Hans with it.
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** ''Lucky Zephyr'' leaves Koenigsberg just before Friedrich gives orders to close the port, taking Hans with it.
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* EvilPrince: Michael, even moreso than Hans. He wants to take over the Isles and has no qualms about murdering his own brother or sending eleven-year-own girl to almost certain death.
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* FollowTheLeader: in-universe, Kai mentions briefly that young ladies in Arendelle started to dress in the same style Elsa does (which is more than a bit revealing compared to their usual attire), to men's considerable chargin.
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* FollowTheLeader: in-universe, Kai mentions briefly that young ladies in Arendelle started to dress in the same style Elsa does (which is more than a bit revealing compared to their usual attire), to the men's considerable chargin.chagrin.
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** Entire Arendelle-Weselton situation. From bunch of soldiers planning to start a war to actual war nobody wanted.
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** Entire The entire Arendelle-Weselton situation. From situation, from a bunch of soldiers planning to start a war to an actual war nobody wanted.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Friedrich's daughter's name is Anna (although everybody calls her Annie), and Hans' late father shares the name with very much alive admiral Klaus Hauser.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Friedrich's daughter's name is Anna (although everybody calls her Annie), and Hans' Hans's late father shares the name with the very much alive admiral Admiral Klaus Hauser.
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** In Southern Islands, there are the princes, Friedrich's wife and daughter, captain Braun, sergeant Schneider, Valdemar Schwalzmaar and his wife, Gunther, admiral Hauser and everybody on the island of Westerguard.
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** In the Southern Islands, Isles, there are the princes, Friedrich's wife and daughter, captain Braun, sergeant Schneider, Valdemar Schwalzmaar and his wife, Gunther, admiral Hauser and everybody on the island of Westerguard.
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Mechanical Horse, instead...
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* AutomatonHorses: Snow horses. Justified in that they aren't real horses, but {{Snowlem}}s made by Elsa.
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* MechanicalHorse: Snow horses. They aren't real horses, but {{Snowlem}}s made by Elsa.
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** Please, don't threaten Anna when Kristoff's nearby. Don't even suggest threatening Anna.
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** In a bit of FridgeBrilliance, with how power hungry Hans is, it would seem fit for him to introduce himself to Anna as a ruler of Westerguard rather than one of many princes of the Isles.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Eric lampshades in his head that confronting Margaret about her plans when [[HaveYouToldAnyoneElse they're alone]] might not have been his smartest idea ever. The only thing to say in his defense was that he was mostly drunk at this moment.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: It's implied that Von Schwalbe family is this. Among who we get to see of them, Hans attempted regicide, Michael considers killing his younger brother or seven-year-old niece to be par for the course, Margaret schemes to prolong a war and Friedrich has occasional attacks of UnstoppableRage during which he can't even recognize whom he's attacking.
When one of them has a mental breakdown, the others rush to him... because they want to grab the throne for themselves. Out of all of them, Ferdinand stands out like a WhiteSheep, and he considers his brother hugging him to be suspicious.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: It's implied that Von Schwalbe family is this. Among who we get to see of them, Hans attempted regicide, Michael considers killing his younger brother or seven-year-old niece to be par for the course, Margaret schemes to prolong a war and Friedrich has occasional attacks of UnstoppableRage during which he can't even recognize whom he's attacking.
attacking. When one of them has a mental breakdown, the others rush to him... because they want to grab the throne for themselves. Out of all of them, Ferdinand stands out like a WhiteSheep, and he considers his brother hugging him to be suspicious.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: It's implied that Von Schwalbe family is this. Among who we get to see of them, Hans attempted regicide, Michael considers killing his younger brother or seven-year-old niece to be par for the course, Margaret schemes to prolong a war and Friedrich has occasional attacks of UnstoppableRage during which he can't even recognize whom he's attacking.
When one of them has a mental breakdown, the others rush to him... because they want to grab the throne for themselves. Out of all of them, Ferdinand stands out like a WhiteSheep, and he considers his brother hugging him to be suspicious.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Ferdinand figures out that Michael is up to something when the prince hugs him (Michael was pretending to be happy upon seeing him). Anna notices that it says [[BigScrewedUpFamily something]] about von Schwalbes if Ferdinand considers a hug to be suspicious.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Baron Madsen is certainly on Arendelle side, but Olafsen implies it's implied that the man doesn't shy away from political assassination or torture if he believes it to be for the kingdom's good.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Seeker, ever since she appears in the story.
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-->'''Ferdinand''': He [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness hugged]] me!
-->'''Seeker''':Truly, a mark of suspicious activity.
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-->'''Ferdinand''': He [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness hugged]] me!
-->'''Seeker''':Truly, a mark of suspicious activity.
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** Author outright stated that [[CoolShip pendulum ship]] that tried to escape the sequester is ChekhovsGun waiting to be fired.
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** Author outright stated that The [[CoolShip pendulum ship]] that tried to escape the sequester is ChekhovsGun waiting later used [[spoiler:by Anna, Ferdinand and Seeker to be fired.escape Westerguard.]]
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** [[spoiler:Anna's and Ferdinand's]] escape from the palace is shaping up like this. From being held hostage with possibility of being killed in a few days to being trapped on [[spoiler:pirate ship whose crew will murder them the moment Anna and Ferdinand reveal they know that the ship is a pirate one.]]
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* NoNameGiven: Weseton's Weselton's scout captain and Meyer's superior is never named.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized[=/=]TheRevolutionWillNotBeVillified: Zig-zagged with [[spoiler:secession of Westerguard]]. On one hand, it seems oddly neat - although it helps that the locals Weste are all with revolutionists, and they are 90% of local population. On the other, ship sequester proves to be more bloody than anticipated, and ugly part of revolution - firing at once-friends - if briefly visited.
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* {{Snowlem}}: Snow horses, made by Elsa. They look kind of like horses, but freeze the ground under them, need no rest, and are frighteningly fast.
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* {{Snowlem}}: {{Snowlem}}:
** Snow horses, made by Elsa. They look kind of like horses, but freeze the ground under them, need no rest, and are frighteninglyfast.fast.
** Seeker, sometimes referred to as "snow greyhound". Like snow horses, she can freeze the ground under herself and needs no rest, but she can speak and has an attitude.
** Snow horses, made by Elsa. They look kind of like horses, but freeze the ground under them, need no rest, and are frighteningly
** Seeker, sometimes referred to as "snow greyhound". Like snow horses, she can freeze the ground under herself and needs no rest, but she can speak and has an attitude.
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* TalkingAnimal: Seeker, although she's a {{Snowlem}}, so "animal" part is debatable.
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-->''Princess, I… Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is… ''Verdammt''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
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-->''Princess, I… Well, I believe one of us, von Schwalbes, that is, should finally say that to you, because, well, it's a disgrace that it's been over three months and we remained silent, that is, I understand Friedrich, that is the king, I mean His Majesty, had his reasons and that politics stand in his way, because not everybody would be happy about it, it being what I'm about to say, that is… ''Verdammt''.''[[GratuitousGerman Verdammt]]''. (...) I'm rambling, am I not?''
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* PrecisionFStrike: The first and only so far use of an F-word in story comes when a men sent to [[spoiler:kill Elsa]] discovers he can't do this, despite his would-be victim already missing part of the brain, the spine and connection between head and the rest of the body.
--> ''You don't have a spine, you don't have a brain, you don't have your throat and you're still goddamn moving?! What the fuck are you?!''
--> ''You don't have a spine, you don't have a brain, you don't have your throat and you're still goddamn moving?! What the fuck are you?!''