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There is also a sequel called ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30978026/chapters/76510859 Paying for Your Mistakes]]'', which centers around the fallout from [[spoiler:Chloe's time as Miracle Queen and subsequently becoming the next Guardian]]. Tropes listed under the folder for this fic relating to the events of the previous fic will be unblocked. YouHaveBeenWarned.
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There is also a sequel called ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30978026/chapters/76510859 Paying for Your Mistakes]]'', which centers around the fallout from [[spoiler:Chloe's time as Miracle Queen and subsequently becoming the next Guardian]]. Tropes listed under the folder for this fic relating to the events of the previous fic will be unblocked. YouHaveBeenWarned.Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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There is also a sequel called ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30978026/chapters/76510859 Paying for Your Mistakes]]'', which centers around the fallout from [[spoiler:Chloe's time as Miracle Queen and subsequently becoming the next Guardian]].
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There is also a sequel called ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30978026/chapters/76510859 Paying for Your Mistakes]]'', which centers around the fallout from [[spoiler:Chloe's time as Miracle Queen and subsequently becoming the next Guardian]]. Tropes listed under the folder for this fic relating to the events of the previous fic will be unblocked. YouHaveBeenWarned.
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* AdaptationExpansion: The reason for Chloe's initial hostility towards Marinette is due to misunderstanding minor things Marinette does like being late to class or missing a homework assignment being an attempt to spite her.
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* AdaptationExpansion: AdaptationalExplanation: The reason for Chloe's initial hostility towards Marinette is due to misunderstanding minor things Marinette does like being late to class or missing a homework assignment being an attempt to spite her.her.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Adrien, or rather Adrienne, comes out as transgender, and starts using she/her pronouns.
* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Adrien, or rather Adrienne, comes out as transgender, and starts using she/her pronouns.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity: Adrien, or rather Adrienne, comes out as transgender, and starts using she/her pronouns.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Chloe gradually makes an attempt to better herself in this fic.
* AdaptationalProtagonist: Chloe is the center focus in this fic.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Chloe and Marinette, two bitter enemies in canon, [[spoiler:eventually develop feelings for each other]].
* AdaptationalProtagonist: Chloe is the center focus in this fic.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Chloe and Marinette, two bitter enemies in canon, [[spoiler:eventually develop feelings for each other]].
* AffectionateNickname: Marinette starts calling Chloe "Chlo".
* JerkassHasAPoint: Alya may be jumping the gun by refusing to give Chloe any credit, but she isn't wrong to question her spending more time with Marinette, given how much time she's spent bullying her.
* PointOfDivergence: Marinette befriending Chloe leads to several changes, the biggest being that [[spoiler:Marinette makes Chloe the next Guardian at the end]].
* PointOfDivergence: Marinette befriending Chloe leads to several changes, the biggest being that [[spoiler:Marinette makes Chloe the next Guardian at the end]].
* AdaptationalWimp: Because Chloe is the Guardian now, Ladybug lacks the ability to use her yo-yo to grab Miraculous from the Miracle Box, meaning she still has to go to the Guardian for a Miraculous.
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Canon Zoe was willing to put up with her half-sister's attitude, but the Zoe in this fic is initially far more hostile to Chloe. It's [[JustifiedTrope justified]], because she's naturally angry at Chloe for [[spoiler:allegedly siding with Hawkmoth]].
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Canon Zoe was willing to put up with her half-sister's attitude, but the Zoe in this fic is initially far more hostile to Chloe. It's [[JustifiedTrope justified]], because she's naturally angry at Chloe for [[spoiler:allegedly allegedly siding with Hawkmoth]].Hawkmoth.
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Not counting all the times she was akumatized in canon, Chloe only used the Bee Miraculous. Here, in order to protect her identity in front of Cat Noir, she temporarily uses the Horse Miraculous.
* AffectionateNickname: Marinette starts calling Chloe "Honey" in addition to just "Chlo".
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Not counting all the times she was akumatized in canon, Chloe only used the Bee Miraculous. Here, in order to protect her identity in front of Cat Noir, she temporarily uses the Horse Miraculous.
* AffectionateNickname: Marinette starts calling Chloe "Honey" in addition to just "Chlo".
** Zoe still moves to Paris.
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** An amnesiac Fu is still akumatized
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** An amnesiac Fu is still akumatizedakumatized.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Marinette never told Chloe about Feast being defeated and the Guardians being freed months ago until they met Su-Han.
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: LockedOutOfTheLoop:
** Chloe never knew she had a half-sister until Audrey introduced her to Zoe.
** Marinette never told Chloe about Feast being defeated and the Guardians being freed months ago until they met Su-Han.
** Chloe never knew she had a half-sister until Audrey introduced her to Zoe.
** Marinette never told Chloe about Feast being defeated and the Guardians being freed months ago until they met Su-Han.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: While Chloe was far more antagonistic to her peers in canon due to her elitist mindset, her initial behavior in this fic is more the result of her belief than things have to be "orderly", [[WellIntentionedExtremist and that making the class dynamic neat and organized is "for their own good"]]. [[spoiler:In addition, while Chloe still betrayed Marinette and worked with Hawkmoth as Miracle Queen, instead of being defeated by Ladybug and Chat Noir and later trying to steal the Miracle Box on her own, Chloe breaks free of Hawkmoth's control, and then becomes the next Guardian after Ladybug relinquishes authority of the Miracle Box to her.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: While Chloe was far more antagonistic to her peers in canon due to her elitist mindset, her initial behavior in this fic is more the result of her belief than that things have to be "orderly", [[WellIntentionedExtremist and that making the class dynamic neat and organized is "for their own good"]]. [[spoiler:In addition, while Chloe still betrayed Marinette and worked with Hawkmoth as Miracle Queen, instead of being defeated by Ladybug and Chat Noir and later trying to steal the Miracle Box on her own, Chloe breaks free of Hawkmoth's control, and then becomes the next Guardian after Ladybug relinquishes authority of the Miracle Box to her.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon, as a result of forcing Sabrina to do all of her schoolwork, Chloe is borderline illiterate. Here, she's far more intelligent than Marinette initially believes, being very skilled in subjects like math and science. However... see BrilliantButLazy below.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon, as a result of [[HomeworkSlave forcing Sabrina to do all of her schoolwork, schoolwork]], Chloe is borderline illiterate. Here, she's far more intelligent than Marinette initially believes, being very skilled in subjects like math and science. However... see BrilliantButLazy below.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: AdaptationalSexuality:
** Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
** Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
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-->'''Chloe:''' *snorts in derision* Come on, they aren't gay. There was a whole arc where Akiko was trying to gather the courage to ask out Satoshi, remember?
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-->'''Chloe:''' *snorts ''[snorts in derision* derision]'' Come on, they aren't gay. There was a whole arc where Akiko was trying to gather the courage to ask out Satoshi, remember?
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see [[ShowWithinAShow Show Within A Show]] below) with Chloe, Lila attempts to get a rise out of her by describing the series as "being about a couple of dykes". It doesn't work because Chloe has no idea what the slur even means.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: PoliticallyIncorrectVillain:
** When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see[[ShowWithinAShow Show Within A Show]] ShowWithinAShow below) with Chloe, Lila attempts to get a rise out of her by describing the series as "being about a couple of dykes". It doesn't work because Chloe has no idea what the slur even means.
** When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see
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* {{Catchphrase}}: Su-Han's go-to insult for anyone who gets in his way is "insolent child".
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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: Su-Han's go-to insult for anyone who gets in his way is "insolent child".
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