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* AdaptationalHeroism: While Chloe was far more antagonistic to her peers in canon due to her elitist mindset, her initial behavior in this fic is more the result of her belief than things have to be "orderly", [[WellIntentionedExtremist and that making the class dynamic neat and organized is "for their own good"]]. [[spoiler:In addition, while Chloe still betrayed Marinette and worked with Hawkmoth as Miracle Queen, instead of being defeated by Ladybug and Chat Noir and later trying to steal the Miracle Box on her own, Chloe breaks free of Hawkmoth's control, and then becomes the next Guardian after Ladybug relinquishes authority of the Miracle Box to her.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: While Chloe was far more antagonistic to her peers in canon due to her elitist mindset, her initial behavior in this fic is more the result of her belief than that things have to be "orderly", [[WellIntentionedExtremist and that making the class dynamic neat and organized is "for their own good"]]. [[spoiler:In addition, while Chloe still betrayed Marinette and worked with Hawkmoth as Miracle Queen, instead of being defeated by Ladybug and Chat Noir and later trying to steal the Miracle Box on her own, Chloe breaks free of Hawkmoth's control, and then becomes the next Guardian after Ladybug relinquishes authority of the Miracle Box to her.]]
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon, as a result of forcing Sabrina to do all of her schoolwork, Chloe is borderline illiterate. Here, she's far more intelligent than Marinette initially believes, being very skilled in subjects like math and science. However... see BrilliantButLazy below.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: In canon, as a result of [[HomeworkSlave forcing Sabrina to do all of her schoolwork, schoolwork]], Chloe is borderline illiterate. Here, she's far more intelligent than Marinette initially believes, being very skilled in subjects like math and science. However... see BrilliantButLazy below.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: AdaptationalSexuality:
** Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
** Marinette comes out as bisexual in this story, when she showed no interest in any girls in canon.
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-->'''Chloe:''' *snorts in derision* Come on, they aren't gay. There was a whole arc where Akiko was trying to gather the courage to ask out Satoshi, remember?
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-->'''Chloe:''' *snorts ''[snorts in derision* derision]'' Come on, they aren't gay. There was a whole arc where Akiko was trying to gather the courage to ask out Satoshi, remember?
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see [[ShowWithinAShow Show Within A Show]] below) with Chloe, Lila attempts to get a rise out of her by describing the series as "being about a couple of dykes". It doesn't work because Chloe has no idea what the slur even means.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: PoliticallyIncorrectVillain:
** When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see[[ShowWithinAShow Show Within A Show]] ShowWithinAShow below) with Chloe, Lila attempts to get a rise out of her by describing the series as "being about a couple of dykes". It doesn't work because Chloe has no idea what the slur even means.
** When talking about ''Princess Yuri'' (see
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* {{Catchphrase}}: Su-Han's go-to insult for anyone who gets in his way is "insolent child".
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* {{Catchphrase}}: CharacterCatchphrase: Su-Han's go-to insult for anyone who gets in his way is "insolent child".
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