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* CantKillYouStillNeedYou: Alexandria is quite accustomed to prioritising Endbringer battles over almost everything else, so even though she's basically certain that Taylor has become a villain, she doesn't bother trying to arrest her. She just advises her to keep any criminal activity low-key.
--> '''Alexandria:''' We'd like to have the option to ask you to join us at some point, if we need a large menace put down. And it would be much easier to do that if you haven't hurt a lot of people in the meantime.
--> '''Alexandria:''' We'd like to have the option to ask you to join us at some point, if we need a large menace put down. And it would be much easier to do that if you haven't hurt a lot of people in the meantime.
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** Alexandria is quite accustomed to prioritising Endbringer battles over almost everything else, so even though she's basically certain that Taylor has become a villain, she doesn't bother trying to arrest her. She just advises her to keep any criminal activity low-key.
--> ---> '''Alexandria:''' We'd like to have the option to ask you to join us at some point, if we need a large menace put down. And it would be much easier to do that if you haven't hurt a lot of people in the meantime.meantime.
** She later breaks off pursuit of Pwnage when she realises that [[spoiler:Taylor has built a weapon that has the Simurgh worried]].
** Alexandria is quite accustomed to prioritising Endbringer battles over almost everything else, so even though she's basically certain that Taylor has become a villain, she doesn't bother trying to arrest her. She just advises her to keep any criminal activity low-key.
** She later breaks off pursuit of Pwnage when she realises that [[spoiler:Taylor has built a weapon that has the Simurgh worried]].
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Completed as of August 19th, 2019 at 37 chapters. Also available at Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/trump-card-worm-au-complete.309036/ here]]) and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/trump-card-worm-au-complete.12689/ here]]).
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Completed as of August 19th, 2019 at 37 chapters. Also available at Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/trump-card-worm-au-complete.309036/ here]]) and Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/trump-card-worm-au-complete.12689/ here]]).
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10894754/1/Trump-Card Trump Card]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfiction by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, the author of ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm''. Taylor becomes a PowerCopying Trump and, after learning Sophia is Shadow Stalker, ends up calling herself Hax and joining forces with Uber and Leet to become team "Pwnage".
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10894754/1/Trump-Card Trump Card]]'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfiction by Tropers/{{ack1308}}, the author of ''Fanfic/SecurityWorm''.Tropers/{{ack1308}}. Taylor becomes a PowerCopying Trump and, after learning Sophia is Shadow Stalker, ends up calling herself Hax and joining forces with Uber and Leet to become team "Pwnage".
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* EveryoneHasStandards: When Kaiser decides to kidnap Taylor just for the purpose of using her as bait for Hax, Purity leaves, unwilling to take part in the kidnapping of a fifteen-year-old girl, no matter how much Kaiser swears she won't be harmed.
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* FromBadToWorse: The Empire kidnaps Taylor (not Alibi for once) in an effort to draw Hax out... [[spoiler: then the Simurgh gets spooked by Taylor's anti-Endbringer weapon and descends towards the Bay]].
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* FromBadToWorse: The Empire kidnaps Taylor (not Alibi for once) in an effort to draw Hax out... [[spoiler: then [[spoiler:then the Simurgh gets spooked by Taylor's anti-Endbringer weapon and descends towards the Bay]].
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*** Kaiser [[spoiler:kidnaps Taylor while attempting to bring in Hax, but she manages to copy Victor's power and immediately begins to steal the skills of all the Empire capes in the room, pretty much turning them inoffensive while she gets rescued. For bonus karma points, Victor himself is her biggest victim.]]
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*** When she fights Lung at the Ruby Dreams casino, she copies his power and transforms into a dragon as well, pummeling him and making him look like a chump.
*** Kaiser [[spoiler:kidnaps Taylor while attempting to bring in Hax, but she manages to copy Victor's power and immediately begins to steal the skills of all the Empire capes in the room, pretty much turning them inoffensive while she gets rescued. For bonus karma points, Victor himself is her biggestvictim.]]victim]].
*** Kaiser [[spoiler:kidnaps Taylor while attempting to bring in Hax, but she manages to copy Victor's power and immediately begins to steal the skills of all the Empire capes in the room, pretty much turning them inoffensive while she gets rescued. For bonus karma points, Victor himself is her biggest
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* ShoutOut: When Alexandria finds Alibi [[spoiler:when the Simurgh comes for her]] and tries to take her to safety, Alibi thinks [[Film/{{Spaceballs}} "You idiot, you've just captured the stunt double."]]
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* FireForgedFriends: When Coil offers several million dollars to Uber and Leet if they sell Hax out to him, they fake considering the offer before telling him to go to hell and kicking him hard enough to break several ribs, because Hax is their friend.
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* ShootTheMessenger: When Lung sees the video of [[spoiler:Hax overpowering him and planting his face in the ground]], the computer doesn't survive.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: The guards at [[spoiler:the Ruby Dreams casino]] are called in after the robbery, to have a very bad time of things. Some don't survive.
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* BrainBleach: One PHO poster refers to [[spoiler:Taylor and Lung's BehemothBattle]] as "a dragon mating ritual", and another poster promptly decries that as "an image I can't unsee."
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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Taylor generally enjoys seeing how impressed people are by the stunts she pulls off, but she [[HeadDesk drops her forehead into the desk]] when someone praises her for putting [[spoiler:Lung "the slant"]] in his place.
--> ''Seriously, do '''all''' the idiots come out to play when this sort of thing happens?''
--> ''Seriously, do '''all''' the idiots come out to play when this sort of thing happens?''
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* BehemothBattle: Pwnage's "Plan D" for robbing the Ruby Dreams casino is that Lung arrives and Taylor uses his power to fight him while everyone else gets away. [[spoiler:She and Lung both grow large enough to shatter buildings, and both struggle to do lasting harm to each other, but her Tinkertech and her superior grasp of what his power can do let her gain the upper hand until everyone is clear. And the video footage is ''extremely'' popular.]]
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* ClipItsWings: When Lung escalates far enough, he grows draconic wings. [[spoiler:Taylor examines his power and takes a different option, giving herself a tail covered in spines, which she uses to grapple and shred his wings.]]
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* ExperienceBooster: Judicious use of Uber's power helps Taylor to train various skills permanently, not keeping the power full time, but tapping it periodically to ensure she's practising correctly.
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* AntiMagic: Oni Lee routinely blows up his residual selves after teleporting. When his teleportation power is blocked, he quickly gets himself killed permanently without ever realising what happened.
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* TeleportInterdiction: Oni Lee routinely blows up his residual selves after teleporting. [[spoiler:When his power is blocked by L33t's rebuilt teleport jammer, he quickly gets himself killed permanently without ever realising what happened.]]
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* OnSecondThought: Regent definitely doesn't want to be part of provoking Lung by robbing the Ruby Dreams casino; then he hears how large the take is likely to be, and he's in.
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* NoSell: The Manton field generator means that Taylor can basically do this to any Manton limited power.
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** The Manton field generator means that Taylor can basically do this to any Manton limited power.
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** Regent is quite annoyed when his power doesn't seem to work on Hax even though he can feel her nerves firing. In reality, she had simply locked her armour servos, so her arms ''couldn't'' move.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Tattletale and Hax can read each other, and read each other's reactions to reading each other, to the point where within seconds of Hax sharing her power, they can hold detailed private conversations with just a few tiny gestures. (But only Hax can switch powers to quickly get rid of the Thinker headache afterwards.)
--> Tattletale grinned, and I wondered if she had been following my thought processes. She hadn't been, I realised, as soon as the thought crossed my mind, but she had a good idea of the direction in which they had been going.
--> Tattletale grinned, and I wondered if she had been following my thought processes. She hadn't been, I realised, as soon as the thought crossed my mind, but she had a good idea of the direction in which they had been going.
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* KnowAGuyWhoKnowsAGuy: It's rumoured that people have gone into Grue's darkness and never come out again; L33t "heard it from someone who said they talked to someone who saw it happen." Uber and Taylor are skeptical.
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* KnowAGuyWhoKnowsAGuy: It's rumoured that people have gone into Grue's darkness and never come out again; L33t "heard it from someone who said they talked to someone who saw it happen." Uber and Taylor are skeptical.
