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** The new version has twenty chapters as of November 2023 and it's already over 110,000 words.
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** The new version has nineteen chapters as of Spetember 2023 and it's already nearly 110,000 words.
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** The new version has nineteen twenty chapters as of Spetember November 2023 and it's already nearly over 110,000 words.
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--> Clara: There's a new age of heroes on the horizon. Those [[ComicBook/FantasticFour four astronauts]], [[ComicBook/IronMan that rich guy in Malibu with his fancy armor]], a couple of vigilantes in New York. [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Warren_Worthington_III One with wings]], and one that can [[Franchise/SpiderMan climb walls and spin webs]]. I've even heard about sightings of some [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk green monster]] and [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor a blond guy with a funny hammer]] in the Southwest.
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--> Clara: There's a new age of heroes on the horizon. Those [[ComicBook/FantasticFour four astronauts]], [[ComicBook/IronMan that rich guy in Malibu with his fancy armor]], a couple of vigilantes in New York. [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Warren_Worthington_III One with wings]], and one that can [[Franchise/SpiderMan [[ComicBook/SpiderMan climb walls and spin webs]]. I've even heard about sightings of some [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk green monster]] and [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor a blond guy with a funny hammer]] in the Southwest.
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** The new version has eighteen chapters as of July 2023 and it's already over 100,000 words.
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** The new version has sixteen chapters as of February 2023 and it's already over 90,000 words.
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** The new version has sixteen eighteen chapters as of February July 2023 and it's already over 90,000 100,000 words.
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* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Much like [[spoiler:her brother Sabertooth, Clara has a powerful regenerative healing factor. Clara herself claims it’s not quite as powerful as Victor’s, but it’s still quite powerful in her own right.]]
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* AlliterativeName: In her cameo in chapter 16, Star Sign is established to have the name Lisa Leialoha.
** In Chapter 16, Firefall appears alongside her young sidekick: [[http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix6/star_sign_pointmen.html Star Sign]]. They are seen in Hawaii battling [[http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix/joystk.htm Joystick]]. Star Sign first appeared in ''Avengers: The Initiative'' #14 (August 2008), and Joystick debuted in ''Amazing Scarlet Spider'' #2 (December 1995).
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** In Chapter 16, Star Sign is given the name Lisa Leialoha.
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** In Chapter 15, there is a scene of Spider-Man joining forces with the previously mentioned Captain Brooklyn and Captain Manhattan to take on a pair of supervillains: Carapace and the Spot. Captain Manhattan first appeared in ''D.P.7" #30 (December 1988). Carapace first appeared in ''Amazing Spider-Man'' #583 (March 2009). The Spot first appeared in ''Peter Parker, the Spectacular Spider-Man'' #98 (January 1985).
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** In Chapter 15, there is a scene of Spider-Man joining forces with the previously mentioned Captain Brooklyn and [[https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Captain_Manhattan_(Earth-148611) Captain Manhattan Manhattan]] to take on a pair of supervillains: Carapace [[http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix6/carapacespdrmn.htm Carapace]] and [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spot_(comics) the Spot.Spot]]. Captain Manhattan first appeared in ''D.P.7" 7'' #30 (December 1988). Carapace first appeared in ''Amazing Spider-Man'' #583 (March 2009). The Spot first appeared in ''Peter Parker, the Spectacular Spider-Man'' #98 (January 1985).
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** In Chapter 15, there is a scene of Spider-Man joining forces with the previously mentioned Captain Brooklyn and Captain Manhattan to take on a pair of supervillains: Carapace and the Spot. Captain Manhattan first appeared in ''D.P.7" #30 (December 1988). Carapace first appeared in ''Amazing Spider-Man'' #583 (March 2009). The Spot first appeared in ''Peter Parker, the Spectacular Spider-Man'' #98 (January 1985).
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** In Chapter 15, Captains Manhattan and Brooklyn are established to be named respectively Gary Hernandez and Thomas Mancini. Their comic counterparts were unnamed.
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** In the comics, Captain Manhattan was presumably a white man. In this story, he's Latino.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: In one of the flash-forwards, the Devil-Hunter is revealed to be named John Gabriel. This was because his early appearances in the comics revealed his deceased wife was named Andrea Gabriel. This is why the author went with Gabriel as a surname. The comics had actually gone back on forth on whether Gabriel was his first or last name.]]
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: This story likes to give full names to characters that never got one in the comics. For example, [[spoiler: In in one of the flash-forwards, the Devil-Hunter is revealed to be named John Gabriel. This was because his early appearances in the comics revealed his deceased wife was named Andrea Gabriel. This is why the author went with Gabriel as a surname. The comics had actually gone back on and forth on whether Gabriel was his the Devil-Hunter's first or last name.name, but his early appearances established he had a wife named Andrea Gabriel, hence why Gabriel is his surname in this story.]]
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** First Line member Firefall's race was unknown in the comics as she was never shown as having any kind of human form. In this story, she's Native Hawaiian.
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** First Line member Firefall's race was unknown in the comics as she was never shown as having any kind of human form. In fact, ''Marvel: The Lost Generation'' implied she might not even be human, due to her being shown to have green skin and pointed ears. In this story, she's Native Hawaiian.
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* ShoutOut: In chapter four, Craig Starr describes [[spoiler: Bounty]] as the lovechild of Samus Aran and the Predator.
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* ShoutOut: In chapter four, Craig Starr describes [[spoiler: Bounty]] as the lovechild of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Samus_Aran Samus Aran Aran]] and the Predator.[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Predator_(fictional_species) yautja]].
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** The new version has fourteen chapters as of August 2022 and it's already over 75,000 words.
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** The new version has fourteen fifteen chapters as of August December 2022 and it's already over 75,000 81,000 words.
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* MeaningfulName: In the ''Night of the Daemons'' storyline, the Brotherhood travel to a fictional village in Scotland called Dreagmore. The name comes from the word ''dreagag'', the Scottish Gaelic word for "meteorite". The storyline centers around a meteorite that is believed to have magical properties.
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*** In the same chapter, Paul Starr sees footage of Iron Man battling [[https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Milos_Masaryk_(Earth-616) Milos Masaryk, the original Unicorn]]. Masaryk debuted in ''Tales of Suspense'' #56 (August 1964).
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*** In the same chapter, Paul Starr sees footage of Iron Man battling [[https://marvel.fandom.com/wiki/Milos_Masaryk_(Earth-616) Milos Masaryk, the original Unicorn]]. Masaryk debuted in ''Tales of Suspense'' ''ComicBook/TalesOfSuspense'' #56 (August 1964).
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* WrenchWench: Lila plays this role when it comes to maintaining the spaceship.
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* WrenchWench: Lila plays this role when it comes to maintaining the spaceship.spaceship.
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** At the end of chapter eleven, it was announced that chapter twelve will begin a storyline called ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Night_of_the_Demons_(1988_film) "Night of the Daemons"]]''
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** At Chapter 12 sees the end beginning of chapter eleven, it was announced that chapter twelve will begin a storyline called ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Night_of_the_Demons_(1988_film) "Night of the Daemons"]]''
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** In Chapter 13, Alisabeth Daemon is shown speaking to [[http://www.marvunapp.com/Appendix/ktharamod.htm Kthara]], who first appeared in ''Marvel Spotlight'' #24 (October 1975).
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*** In her thoughts, she mentions the unveiling of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_Torch_(android) Jim Hammond, the original Human Torch]]. Hammond debuted in ''Marvel Comics'' #1 (October 1939).
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*** In her thoughts, she mentions the unveiling of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Human_Torch_(android) Jim Hammond, the original Human Torch]]. Hammond debuted in ''Marvel Comics'' #1 (October 1939). ''The [=SuperStarr Chronicles=]: 1939'' reveals that Clara witnessed said unveiling.
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* {{Crossover}}: In ''1939'', it's revealed that the original Human Torch's unveiling was also witnessed by [[spoiler: Cliff Secord and Jenny Blake from the film version of ''The Rocketeer''.]]
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** Chapter 6 introduces Roger Gruenwald, a Bayville High student.
