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* PrimalScene: Taken UpToEleven in the "Sins of Omission" chapter where every single one of Hawke's family walk in on her and Michael, played for laughs. See InterruptedIntimacy.
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* PrimalScene: Taken UpToEleven in In the "Sins of Omission" chapter where every single one of Hawke's family walk in on her and Michael, played for laughs. See InterruptedIntimacy.
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** She also nicknames her younger brother [[Disney/TheSwordInTheStone Wart.]]
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** She also nicknames her younger brother [[Disney/TheSwordInTheStone [[WesternAnimation/TheSwordInTheStone Wart.]]
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Kitty references this to Sister Petrice, but [[HilarityEnsues being a Silly!Hawke...]]:
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: Kitty references this to Sister Petrice, but [[HilarityEnsues being a Silly!Hawke...]]:
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
* InterruptedIntimacy: Becomes something of a RunningGag in the 1st Act with Kitty and Michael, since this is a {{shipping}} fic.
* InsistentTerminology: Kitty really doesn't like it when Michael calls her Hawke. See LastNameBasis.
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
* InterruptedIntimacy: Becomes something of a RunningGag in the 1st Act with Kitty and Michael, since this is a {{shipping}} fic.
* InsistentTerminology: Kitty really doesn't like it when Michael calls her Hawke. See LastNameBasis.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: InsistentTerminology: Kitty references this to Sister Petrice, but [[HilarityEnsues being a Silly!Hawke...]]:
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
really doesn't like it when Michael calls her Hawke.
* InterruptedIntimacy: Becomes something of a RunningGag in the 1st Act with Kitty and Michael, since this isa a[[invoked]] {{shipping}} fic.
* InsistentTerminology: Kitty really doesn't like it when Michael calls her Hawke. See LastNameBasis.fic.
-->'''Hawke:''' Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don't play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn't count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I'm a bit confused now]].
* InterruptedIntimacy: Becomes something of a RunningGag in the 1st Act with Kitty and Michael, since this is
* InsistentTerminology: Kitty really doesn't like it when Michael calls her Hawke. See LastNameBasis.
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* OncePerEpisode: Once a chapter Michael will accidentally call Kitty [[LastNameBasis 'Hawke']].
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* OncePerEpisode: OncePerEpisode:
** Once achapter chapter, Michael will accidentally call Kitty [[LastNameBasis 'Hawke']]."Hawke"]].
** Once a
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* PrimalScene: Taken UpToEleven in the 'Sins of Omission' chapter where every single one of Hawke's family walk in on her and Michael, played for laughs. See InterruptedIntimacy.
* PunnyName: Hawke's nickname is [[TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]]. Also, see ShoutOut.
* PunnyName: Hawke's nickname is [[TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]]. Also, see ShoutOut.
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* PrimalScene: Taken UpToEleven in the 'Sins "Sins of Omission' Omission" chapter where every single one of Hawke's family walk in on her and Michael, played for laughs. See InterruptedIntimacy.
* PunnyName: Hawke's nickname is[[TheWrightBrothers [[UsefulNotes/TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]]. Also, see ShoutOut.
* PunnyName: Hawke's nickname is
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* RunningGag: In the 1st Act after 'Sins of Omission' Kitty and Michael will attempt to do the deed, only to be interrupted at the last minute. See InterruptedIntimacy.
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* RunningGag: RunningGag:
** In the 1st Act after 'Sins of Omission' Kitty and Michael will attempt to do the deed, only to be interrupted at the lastminute. See InterruptedIntimacy.minute.
** In the 1st Act after 'Sins of Omission' Kitty and Michael will attempt to do the deed, only to be interrupted at the last
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** Also, Kitty doesn't like it when Michael [[LastNameBasis calls her 'Hawke']]. See OncePerEpisode.
* ShoutOut: The fic's chapter titles are based off episodes from the Burn Notice series.
** Hawke's name is [[TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]].
* ShoutOut: The fic's chapter titles are based off episodes from the Burn Notice series.
** Hawke's name is [[TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]].
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** Also, Kitty doesn't like it when Michael [[LastNameBasis calls her 'Hawke']]. See OncePerEpisode.
"Hawke"]].
*ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The fic's chapter titles are based off episodes from theBurn Notice ''Burn Notice'' series.
** Hawke's name is[[TheWrightBrothers [[UsefulNotes/TheWrightBrothers Kitty Hawke]].
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** The fic's chapter titles are based off episodes from the
** Hawke's name is
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!!'''The Spy Who Came To Kirkwall contains examples of:'''
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-->'''Kitty''':''"...And if (Michael) is naughty I promise he'll be suitably punished. We'll start with paddles and work up to horsewhips."''\\
(cue one of Michael's [[DoubleTake trademarked]] [[FlatWhat expressions]])\\
(cue one of Michael's [[DoubleTake trademarked]] [[FlatWhat expressions]])\\
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(cue
''[cue one of Michael's [[DoubleTake trademarked]] [[FlatWhat
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* DeadpanSnarker: This is [[Series/BurnNotice Michael Westen]], after all.
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* DeadpanSnarker: DeadpanSnarker:
** This is [[Series/BurnNotice Michael Westen]], after all.
** This is [[Series/BurnNotice Michael Westen]], after all.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: Happens to some of the female characters whenever Michael takes his shirt off. Even the female Guards under Captain Aveline aren't immune.
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* DistractedByTheSexy: DistractedByTheSexy:
** Happens to some of the female characters whenever Michael takes his shirt off. Even the female Guards under Captain Aveline aren't immune.
** Happens to some of the female characters whenever Michael takes his shirt off. Even the female Guards under Captain Aveline aren't immune.
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-->'''Michael''':''"The key to hand-to-hand combat is to be able to close the distance between you and your opponent without putting them on their guard. The IDF uses a form of this called Krav Magra. It's useful against just about any opponent.-"''\\
(Michael sidesteps the Tal-Vashioth's attack and plunges his combat knife into its arm. The Tal-Vashioth [[NoSell glared at the blade stuck in his arm]], and then directed his glare to [[OhCrap Michael]], then backhanded the burned spy.)\\
''"-Unfortunately, no amount of military training can prepare you to go toe to toe with a 8 foot tall minotaur hell bent on turning you into red paste."''
(Michael sidesteps the Tal-Vashioth's attack and plunges his combat knife into its arm. The Tal-Vashioth [[NoSell glared at the blade stuck in his arm]], and then directed his glare to [[OhCrap Michael]], then backhanded the burned spy.)\\
''"-Unfortunately, no amount of military training can prepare you to go toe to toe with a 8 foot tall minotaur hell bent on turning you into red paste."''
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(Michael
''[Michael sidesteps the Tal-Vashioth's attack and plunges his combat knife into its arm. The Tal-Vashioth [[NoSell
''"-Unfortunately,
'''Michael:''' Unfortunately, no amount of military training can prepare you to go
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-->'''Hawke''':'':Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don’t play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. And I know that you know that I know. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn’t count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I’m a bit confused now]]."''\\
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-->'''Michael''':''"My name is Michael Westen, and I used to be a spy, until-"''\\
phone rings, he answers\\
''"We're putting you in a [[Videogame/DragonAgeII videogame universe]] courtesy of a NegativeSpaceWedgie using AppliedPhlebotinum as a weak cover for a [[SelfInsertFic self-insert pairing]] fantasy of a [[SelfDeprecation washed-up barely competent short story author]] trying to relive his glory days [[NoFourthWall writing fanfiction]]..."''\\
''{{beat}}''\\
''"[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking You're blacklisted]]."''\\
phone rings, he answers\\
''"We're putting you in a [[Videogame/DragonAgeII videogame universe]] courtesy of a NegativeSpaceWedgie using AppliedPhlebotinum as a weak cover for a [[SelfInsertFic self-insert pairing]] fantasy of a [[SelfDeprecation washed-up barely competent short story author]] trying to relive his glory days [[NoFourthWall writing fanfiction]]..."''\\
''{{beat}}''\\
''"[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking You're blacklisted]]."''\\
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phone
''[phone rings, he
''"We're
'''Phone:''' We're putting you in a [[Videogame/DragonAgeII videogame universe]] courtesy of a NegativeSpaceWedgie using AppliedPhlebotinum as a weak cover for a [[SelfInsertFic self-insert pairing]] fantasy of a [[SelfDeprecation washed-up barely competent short story author]] trying to relive his glory days [[NoFourthWall writing fanfiction]]...
''{{beat}}''\\
''"[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking
'''Michael:''' [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking You're
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-->'''Hawke''':''“Oh, come on Sister Petrice. Don’t play innocent or string me along. You know that I know. [[GenreSavvy And I know that you know that I know]]. [[OverlyLongGag What you didn’t count on what that I knew that you would know that I know]]...Alright, [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} give us a minute, I’m a bit confused now]].”''\\
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