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The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids is probably the most famous BackyardSports FanFic [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative that doesn't have anything to do with sports]]. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, who started publishing it from November 2011 to June 2012.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]]. {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He [[note]]He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]]. attitude]][[/note]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or, on his ''really'' bad days, type IV.[[hottip:*: In Chapter 6, he ''destroys his dad's car and one window in his bank.'' Although to be fair, his dad is a {{Jerkass}}.]]
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or, on his ''really'' bad days, type IV.[[hottip:*: In [[note]]In Chapter 6, he ''destroys his dad's car and one window in his bank.'' Although to be fair, his dad is a {{Jerkass}}.]][[/note]]
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* FanficChopSuey
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* ClingyJealousGirl / ShallowLoveInterest: Angela
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* ClingyJealousGirl / ShallowLoveInterest: SatelliteLoveInterest: Angela
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted by Tiffany, played straight by Jorge. Also, the above aversion lead to a string of events in story.
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Averted by Tiffany, played straight by Jorge. Also, the above aversion lead to a string of events in story. [[spoiler: Lola]], too, after [[spoiler: her]] fight.
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* CuteAndPysco: Tiffany.
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* CuteAndPysco: CuteAndPsycho: Tiffany.
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* SpoiledSweet: Jorge, at least compared to his BackyardSports [[SpoiledBrat counterpart]].
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's HoYay but no slash, and no MarySue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez [[RunningOnAllFours on all fours]], but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch CompleteMonster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's HoYay but no slash, and no MarySue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez [[RunningOnAllFours on all fours]], but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch CompleteMonster, AlphaBitch, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Jorge went from a SpoiledBrat NeatFreak to a BadassSpaniard who outran Pablo Sanchez ''on all fours.''
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* AdaptationalBadass: Jorge went from a SpoiledBrat NeatFreak to a BadassSpaniard {{Badass}} who outran Pablo Sanchez ''on all fours.''
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[LatinLover appearance]], but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]]. {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[LatinLover appearance]], appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]]. {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[LatinLover appearance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude]].]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[LatinLover appearance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude]].]] [[AloofBigBrother attitude]]. {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude]].]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], [[LatinLover appearance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude]].]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome[[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude.]]]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome[[hottip:*: TallDarkAndHandsome [[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude.]]]] tude]].]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome[[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]] [[TallDarkAndSnarky tude.]]]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome[[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]] [[TallDarkAndSnarky atti]][[TallDarkAndSnarky tude.]]]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome[[hottip:*: He had the [[ShinyMidnightBlack appear]][[LatinLover ance]], but not the [[TheProudElite atti]] [[TallDarkAndSnarky tude.]]]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* CoolLoser: Jorge is handsome, rich, and charismatic, so it's jarring that he's bullied by Tiffany Stevens and close friends with nerds Dmitri and Reese.
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The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids is probably the most famous Backyard Sports Fan Fic that doesn't have anything to do with sports. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, who started publishing it from November 2011 to June 2012.
TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's Ho Yay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez on all fours, but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch CompleteMonster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's Ho Yay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez on all fours, but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch CompleteMonster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids is probably the most famous Backyard Sports Fan Fic BackyardSports FanFic [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative that doesn't have anything to do with sports.sports]]. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, who started publishing it from November 2011 to June 2012.
TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There'sHo Yay HoYay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. MarySue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez [[RunningOnAllFours on all fours, fours]], but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch CompleteMonster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's Ho Yay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez on all fours, but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch Complete Monster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
Also, in a (probable) life-threatening situation for Jorge, he transforms into a panther to protect himself, and gains Super Strength and Super Speed from the experience. He tries to live a normal life while his shell peeks out, and tries to keep his identity secret from his friends Dmitri, Achmed, Angela, Reese, and Tony. But Tiffany is always after him...
Also, in a (probable) life-threatening situation for Jorge, he transforms into a panther to protect himself, and gains Super Strength and Super Speed from the experience. He tries to live a normal life while his shell peeks out, and tries to keep his identity secret from his friends Dmitri, Achmed, Angela, Reese, and Tony. But Tiffany is always after him...
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's Ho Yay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez on all fours, but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch Complete Monster, CompleteMonster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
Also, in a (probable) life-threatening situation for Jorge, he transforms into a panther to protect himself, and gainsSuper Strength SuperStrength and Super Speed SuperSpeed from the experience. He tries to live a normal life while his shell peeks out, and tries to keep his identity secret from his friends Dmitri, Achmed, Angela, Reese, and Tony. But Tiffany is always after him...
Also, in a (probable) life-threatening situation for Jorge, he transforms into a panther to protect himself, and gains
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* HairOfGold: Samantha Pearce.
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* {{Megane}}: Jorge and Dmitri. Jorge is described as wearing glasses in the first chapter, at least.
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* {{Megane}}: Jorge and Dmitri. Jorge is described as wearing glasses in the first chapter, at least.Garcia.
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* {{Shorttank}}: Sam, the plucky {{Tomboy}} who just moved to Brickfield.Bricksfield.
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* [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield Where The Hell Is Bricksfield?]]: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
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The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids is probably the most famous Backyard Sports Fan Fic that doesn't have anything to do with sports. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, who started publishing it in from November 2011 and has yet to complete it.
June 2012.
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** The Head: Jorge
** The Muscle: Achmed
** The Quirk: Tony
** The Pretty One: Angela
** The Smart One: Dmitri
** The Wild One: Sam
** The Head: Jorge
** The Muscle: Achmed
** The Quirk: Tony
** The Pretty One: Angela
** The Smart One: Dmitri
** The Wild One: Sam
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or, on his ''really'' bad days, type IV.[[hottip:*: In Chapter 6, he ''destroys his dad's car and one window in his bank.'' Although to be fair, his dad is a {{Jerkass}}.]]-]
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or, on his ''really'' bad days, type IV.[[hottip:*: In Chapter 6, he ''destroys his dad's car and one window in his bank.'' Although to be fair, his dad is a {{Jerkass}}.]]-] ]]
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or even IV.
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* AntiHero: Jorge's starts out as a Type I, and is usually a Type II but on his bad days he's a Type III or even or, on his ''really'' bad days, type IV.[[hottip:*: In Chapter 6, he ''destroys his dad's car and one window in his bank.'' Although to be fair, his dad is a {{Jerkass}}.]]-]
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I found a Nightmare Fuel Unleaded wick. Wasn\'t that two or three renames ago?
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* TransformationSequence: Jorge gets a [[NightmareFuelUnleaded rather]] [[BodyHorror disturbing]] [[{{Animorphism}} one]].
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* TransformationSequence: Jorge gets a [[NightmareFuelUnleaded [[NightmareFuel rather]] [[BodyHorror disturbing]] [[{{Animorphism}} one]].
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* CompleteMonster: Tiffany wants to turn Jorge into a mindless beast ''because she can.'' Need we say more?
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* EvilIsSexy: Tiffany Stevens.
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* HollywoodHomely: In Chapter 4, Angela explains how she can't see how the TallDarkAndHandsome Jorge would want to go out with a MoeBlob like her, however, in the first chapter, she is described as being "quite pretty, with long brown hair and bright brown eyes."
* HoYay: Jorge and Tony. Just to drive home how close they are, they sing the Ronettes classic "Be My Baby."
* HoYay: Jorge and Tony. Just to drive home how close they are, they sing the Ronettes classic "Be My Baby."
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* MagnificentBitch / ManipulativeBitch: Tiffany.
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* TheWoobie: Jorge
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's Ho Yay but no slash, and no Mary Sue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez on all fours, but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an Alpha Bitch AlphaBitch Complete Monster, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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* RichBitch: Tiffany Stevens. Jorge is a subversion, what with him being a GoodIsNotNice JerkWithAHeartOfGold.