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* LeanAndMean: Fan art shows Tiffany as this.
* MissingMom: Jorge's mom died when he was little.
* MissingMom: Jorge's mom died when he was little.
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* {{Animorphism}}
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* AuthorAppeal
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* BrokenBird / TroubledButCute: Jorge, who's mother is dead, father pressures him to be perfect, and has powers he doesn't want.
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* CoyGirlishFlirtPose: Invoked by Angela when she's trying to flirt with Jorge.
* CuteAndPsycho: Tiffany.
* DarkActionGirl: Tiffany.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Jorge, who dresses up like {{Franchise/Zorro}}.
* EvilRedhead: Tiffany.
* CuteAndPsycho: Tiffany.
* DarkActionGirl: Tiffany.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Jorge, who dresses up like {{Franchise/Zorro}}.
* EvilRedhead: Tiffany.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal / LonelyRichKid: Jorge.
* LatinLover / ChickMagnet / KidAnova: Jorge.
-->>Why is everyone fall for Jorge?
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* LatinLover / ChickMagnet / KidAnova: Jorge.
-->>Why is everyone fall for Jorge?
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* MorningRoutine: Chapter 4.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Jorge, though he's in middle school.
* PrettyBoy: Jorge and Tony.
* PrettyBoy: Jorge and Tony.
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* SharpDressedMan / BadassInANiceSuit: Jorge was a SharpDressedMan during ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'', so there's no doubt he'll be one here. He's also an AdaptationalBadass, invoking the latter trope.
* ShoppingMontage: Achmed invokes this with Sam.
* ShoppingMontage: Achmed invokes this with Sam.
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* SharpDressedMan / BadassInANiceSuit: SharpDressedMan: Jorge was a SharpDressedMan during ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'', so there's no doubt he'll be one here. He's also an AdaptationalBadass, invoking the latter trope.
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* SongFic
* TallDarkAndHandsome: Jorge. Angela even lampshades it!
* TallDarkAndHandsome: Jorge. Angela even lampshades it!
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* [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield Where The Hell Is Bricksfield?]]: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
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* [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield Where The Hell Is Bricksfield?]]: TroubledButCute: Jorge, who's mother is dead, father pressures him to be perfect, and has powers he doesn't want.
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
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* AlphaBitch: Tiffany Stevens, [[UpToEleven to the Nth degree.]]
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* AlphaBitch: Tiffany Stevens, [[UpToEleven to the Nth degree.]]
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* TheCheerleader: The first chapter describes Tiffany Stevens as one of these.
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* {{Megane}}: Jorge Garcia.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent / WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld: Jorge, though he's in middle school.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent / WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld: OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: Jorge, though he's in middle school.
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's HoYay but no slash, and no MarySue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez [[RunningOnAllFours on all fours]], but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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TSLOTBK is different from most fanfictions written by teenage girls. There's HoYay but no slash, and no MarySue. It's late 2008, and Jorge Garcia had just outran Pablo Sanchez [[RunningOnAllFours on all fours]], but he doesn't know why. He finds out he has magic powers, and that the reason he outran Pablo was because he was so powerful. He uses his powers to defeat an AlphaBitch, Tiffany Stevens, all the while, trying to live a normal life. What's more, Achmed starts a budding romance with Samantha Pearce, even though Tiffany is his girlfriend.
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* SixStudentClique:
** The Head: Jorge
** The Muscle: Achmed
** The Quirk: Tony
** The Pretty One: Angela
** The Smart One: Dmitri
** The Wild One: Sam
** The Head: Jorge
** The Muscle: Achmed
** The Quirk: Tony
** The Pretty One: Angela
** The Smart One: Dmitri
** The Wild One: Sam
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* SpoiledSweet: Jorge, at least compared to his ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'' [[SpoiledBrat counterpart]].
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* MrFanservice: All the guys except Pablo, Reese, and ''[[NerdsAreSexy maybe]]'' Dmitri. Jorge is an {{egregious}} case of this.
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* MrFanservice: All the guys except Pablo, Reese, and ''[[NerdsAreSexy maybe]]'' Dmitri. Jorge is an {{egregious}} JustForFun/{{egregious}} case of this.
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->Why is everyone fall for Jorge?
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* SharpDressedMan / BadassInANiceSuit: Jorge was a SharpDressedMan during BackyardSports, so there's no doubt he'll be one here. He's also an AdaptationalBadass, invoking the latter trope.
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* SharpDressedMan / BadassInANiceSuit: Jorge was a SharpDressedMan during BackyardSports, ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'', so there's no doubt he'll be one here. He's also an AdaptationalBadass, invoking the latter trope.
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* SpoiledSweet: Jorge, at least compared to his BackyardSports [[SpoiledBrat counterpart]].
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* SpoiledSweet: Jorge, at least compared to his BackyardSports ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'' [[SpoiledBrat counterpart]].
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''The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids'' is probably the most famous ''BackyardSports'' FanFic [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative that doesn't have anything to do with sports]]. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, who started publishing it from November 2011 to June 2012.
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''The Secret Life of the Backyard Kids'' is probably the most famous ''BackyardSports'' ''VideoGame/BackyardSports'' FanFic [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative that doesn't have anything to do with sports]]. It was written by a girl known as rose64bud in deviantART, Website/DeviantART, who started publishing it from November 2011 to June 2012.
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* [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield Where The Hell Is Bricksfield?]]: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.
* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.
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* [[WhereTheHellIsSpringfield Where The Hell Is Bricksfield?]]: Apparently, Bricksfield is a county in Seattle.
* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.Seattle.
* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Jorge went from a SpoiledBrat NeatFreak to a {{Badass}} who outran Pablo Sanchez ''on all fours.''
* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[note]]He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]][[/note]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[note]]He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]][[/note]] {{Badass}} AntiHero.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Jorge went from a SpoiledBrat NeatFreak to a {{Badass}} badass who outran Pablo Sanchez ''on all fours.''
* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[note]]He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]][[/note]]{{Badass}} badass AntiHero.
* AdrenalineMakeover: Samantha Pearce goes from "cute surfer girl" to "rock chick." Subverted in that she (apparently_ only looks that way in Chapter 9. Jorge might be an even better example, despite being male, going from DirtyCoward PrettyBoy to a TallDarkAndHandsome [[note]]He had the appearance, but not the [[AloofBigBrother attitude]][[/note]]
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* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.
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* WomanInBlack: Tiffany, in Chapter six.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Jorge, who dresses up like {{Zorro}}.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Jorge, who dresses up like {{Zorro}}.{{Franchise/Zorro}}.
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* {{Expy}}: Jorge is a male version of Franchise/SailorMoon crossed with {{Zorro}}.
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* {{Expy}}: Jorge is a male version of Franchise/SailorMoon crossed with {{Zorro}}.{{Franchise/Zorro}}.
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* {{Expy}}: Jorge is a male version of SailorMoon crossed with {{Zorro}}.
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* {{Expy}}: Jorge is a male version of SailorMoon Franchise/SailorMoon crossed with {{Zorro}}.