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* ShootTheHostage: When a thug hold Ruby at knifepoint trying to get Hiveena to stand down, Hiveena shoots Ruby with magic, causing the thug to drop her and gets him away from her.
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* TeamBasedTournament: The main premise of ''War of the Lost City'' essentially acts as one of these. Team Flash and the Cult of Shadow were both summoned to the Lost City of Faust by the same unknown force. Upon both teams arriving, and Team Flash being joined by Fire Heart and Shining Soul, they are separated into two giant castles on opposite sides of the city, and the mysterious force then forces them to compete in three-on-three fights chosen at random, with the winner of each fight being whoever retrieves a hidden glowing orb first. From there, it is an all out war between the two teams, with them slowly learning the secrets of the city. The climax of the story eventually has the leaders of both teams, Flash and Shadow, respectively fighting the members of every other member of the opposing team all at once, and then one final match between the two of them to decide the ultimate winner.
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* OnlyTheLeadsGetADownerEnding: The ending of ''Season 9''. [[spoiler:It initially seems that by defeating Armalum and the LegionOfDoom, Flash has successfully prevented the future he was warned about so long ago and has constantly been reminded of, where [[HeroicSacrifice he must sacrifice himself to save everyone]]. However, it is revealed that due to Armalum seemingly killing [[TopGod Faust]], the whole world is starting to fall apart without a God to maintain it. Flash is the only one that can take her place due to wielding both the Sacred Light and Corrupted Shadow now, and says a tearful goodbye to his family and all of his closest friends, including his lover Twilight, before he proceeds to AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence, saving the entire world and everyone in it, but leaving behind his heartbroken friends, seemingly ending the series with an extremely BittersweetEnding]]. However, the next story, ''The Last Problem'', subverts this when it is revealed that [[spoiler:Flash's sacrifice restored Faust, and she managed to bring him back to life by rebuilding his body six months later, allowing Flash to rejoin Twilight and the others shortly after her coronation, and granting him the future he deserves and giving everyone a BelatedHappyEnding]].
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/541764/flash-sentry-chronicles-lightning-siege Flash Sentry Chronicles: Lightning Siege]]'': The seventh original story not based on the series. (29th in the series)
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* CartwrightCurse: This is brought up in ''Lightning Siege'' on how this seems to apply to Grand's family. [[spoiler:Lightning points out how both his mother and grandmother both died tragically in unexpected events, wondering if his family is "cursed" somehow so whoever marries them is doomed to die young, and is thus hesitant to ask Rarity to marry him because he doesn't want something to end up getting her killed. Fortunately, we do see that by ''The Last Problem'' they are HappilyMarried and Rarity is very much alive.]]
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* CatchPhrase: Before Grand Hoof goes into battle he says the phrase "count up your sins" to his opponent as a warning, since they'll need to explain them when they [[NeverSayDie get to the other side]]. This also doubles as a PreAsskickingOneliner. Since Grand Hoof is often viewed as the leader of the Royal Knights it also leads to a few of them [[BorrowedCatchPhrase using it themselves from time to time]].
* CharacterCatchphrase: Before Grand Hoof goes into battle he says the phrase "count up your sins" to his opponent as a warning, since they'll need to explain them when they [[NeverSayDie get to the other side]]. This also doubles as a PreAsskickingOneliner. Since Grand Hoof is often viewed as the leader of the Royal Knights it also leads to a few of them [[BorrowedCatchPhrase using it themselves from time to time]].
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* NeverMyFault: Grand Hoof's son Doom Raizer blames his father for everything that has ever happened to him in his life. This ranges from his childhood to the deaths of his mother and wife and even what has happened to his own son Lightning Blitz. While Grand admits he should have done a better job raising Doom and being in his life more, he also states he has brought his misfortune on himself. This is made prominent when Grand says his CatchPhrase "count up your sins" to Doom before their battle, and Doom responds that he has no sins.
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* NeverMyFault: Grand Hoof's son Doom Raizer blames his father for everything that has ever happened to him in his life. This ranges from his childhood to the deaths of his mother and wife and even what has happened to his own son Lightning Blitz. While Grand admits he should have done a better job raising Doom and being in his life more, he also states he has brought his misfortune on himself. This is made prominent when Grand says his CatchPhrase catchphrase "count up your sins" to Doom before their battle, and Doom responds that he has no sins.
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* AloneAmongTheCouples: Among the Rainbooms, Sunset is currently the only member of the Rainbooms who isn't a relationship with or has ShipTease with anyone.
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* AloneAmongTheCouples: This is done at various points across the series.
** Among the Rainbooms, Sunset is currently the only member of the Rainbooms who isn't a relationship with or has ShipTease withanyone.anyone.
** Applejack is the only member of the Mane 7 without a love interest until Rogue's introduction in "The Quest for the Golden Apple Tree". She herself admits that she always thought she would be the only one of her group of friends to go her whole life without someone liking her, and thus laughs to herself when [[spoiler:Rogue confesses his love to her and quickly steals a kiss from her]].
** During ''Jakhowl's Rising'', Springer feels this way compared to all his friends, and the rest of Ponyville. When he first met everyone and made friends with them, they were all single and seemed perfectly happy, so he thought they were all he would ever need. But then over the years, they all slowly found someone they loved and got into relationships, becoming even happier as a result. Now, when Springer sees a couple being affectionate with each other through town, he feels a hollowness in his heart, knowing he can never have what they do due to him being TheLastOfHisKind. [[spoiler:This is then subverted when he meets Mirage in Aurarora, with the two growing close, having several ShipTease moments together, and eventually becoming an OfficialCouple in "Jakhowls in Equestria".]]
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** During ''Jakhowl's Rising'', Springer feels this way compared to all his friends, and the rest of Ponyville. When he first met everyone and made friends with them, they were all single and seemed perfectly happy, so he thought they were all he would ever need. But then over the years, they all slowly found someone they loved and got into relationships, becoming even happier as a result. Now, when Springer sees a couple being affectionate with each other through town, he feels a hollowness in his heart, knowing he can never have what they do due to him being TheLastOfHisKind. [[spoiler:This is then subverted when he meets Mirage in Aurarora, with the two growing close, having several ShipTease moments together, and eventually becoming an OfficialCouple in "Jakhowls in Equestria".]]
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* BabiesEverAfter: ''The Last Problem'' reveals this has happened to several couples during the scenes that take place after the TimeSkip.
** All of the Mane Six are married to their love interests and now have multiple kids.
** Ace and Mira [[MaybeEverAfter are implied to now be together]] and Mira is seen taking care of an egg which is implied to be their unborn child.
** Ruby and [[spoiler:Sombra]] are shown to now have a daughter together.
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** The events from the tv show and movies are retold with Flash Sentry now playing a main role.
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**WhamShot: In "Seven On One: War's End Part 1", after Cold Steel, Fire Heart, and Ruby Scarlet have been defeated by Shadow Corruptor, [[spoiler:Sombra]] heads to the recovery room to check up on them... only to find it empty.empty.
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* {{Interquel}}: [=Banshee531=] confirmed all future stories after ''The Last Problem'' that are set between Twilight's Coronation and the future from ''The Last Problem''.
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Despite ''The Last Problem'' being set as the GrandFinale of the series, [=Banshee531=] stated he's not done with the series as he currently developed is developing future stories that sets are set between Twilight's Coronation and the future from ''The Last Problem''.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/528118/flash-sentry-defender-of-the-peace-s9 Flash Sentry, Defender of the Peace S9]]'': The events of Season 9 are retold. (27th and final in the series)
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/539119/flash-sentry-chronicles-the-last-problem Flash Sentry Chronicles: The Last Problem]]'': A retelling of [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS9E26TheLastProblem The Last Problem]]. (28th in the series)
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* BackToTheEarlyInstallment: In "Let's Do the Time Warp Again", several characters are pulled into time portals when The Temporal Scroller that Twilight, Starlight, and Trixie were working on is sabotaged by [[spoiler:Armalum]]. This ends up sending Trixie, Pinkie, and Fluttershy back in time to right after Celestia banished Luna to the moon, and sends Flash and the CMC to the Changelings invading Canterlot during the Royal Wedding.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: When Trixie, Pinkie, and Fluttershy are sent back in time during "Let's Do the Time Warp Again", they meet Princess Celestia right after she banished Nightmare Moon. They inform her that her sister will return after she asks them about her fate, but in a thousand years. They also plant the idea of Canterlot in her mind when she initially thinks of repairing her old castle, and convince her to leave the Elements of Harmony in the castle so they can be found when they are needed.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Among the completed stories, the series currently has a little over 2.5 million words, and is still going strong. %%Currently 2,618,759 words in total.
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** Spike goes through this situation in ''Dragon's Awakening'' when he seeing his true origin and his past life as [[spoiler:Silverbolt]] while being trapped in Malafear's book.
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** Spike goes through this situation in ''Dragon's Awakening'' when he seeing sees the origins of Malafear and the connection he has to him via his true origin and his past life as biologically dad [[spoiler:Silverbolt]] while being trapped in Malafear's book.
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* ProphecyTwist: Throughout ''Jakhowls Rising'' a great prophecy is mentioned, which was foretold long ago by Crystal Clair's ancestor, who was Aurarora's most powerful {{seer|s}}. It was foretold of the eventual arrival of a jakhowl like no other, one that would "awaken a form greater than any other jakhowl, and would use it to defeat the greatest threat the jakhowls had ever faced and lead us into a golden age." For awhile, many of the jakhowls in Aurarora thought the prophecy was referring to Razor Fang, due to him having access to a Mega Mode, until it was revealed Springer had acquired his own Mega Mode a year before Razor did, with some assuming the "greatest threat" had already passed. However, it is eventually revealed [[spoiler:Razor Fang himself is the greatest threat to the jakhowls, due to his obsession with leading them to a war against Equestria that would have killed them all, and in order to stop him, Springer unlocked a new form beyond his Mega Mode thanks to his bond with Ace and Mira]].
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: This is the main conflict of ''Jakhowls Rising'', when [[spoiler:Razor Fang murders Sirius, and [[FrameUp frames]] the ponies and Springer as the culprits, so that he can declare himself the new leader, since he believes he is destined to lead Aurarora into a golden age due to a prophecy. However, his first order is to have every Jakhowl prepare for war with Equestria, due to his misguided belief the ponies are their enemies, which would have resulted in his entire tribe being wiped out]].
