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''The (Edit) War for Ash’s Freedom to not be Betrayed'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' one-shot fic co-written by Crossoverpairinglover (the writer of ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'') and [=AceAmir=]. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12128915/1/The-Edit-War-for-Ash-s-Freedom-to-not-be-Betrayed here.]]

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''The (Edit) War for Ash’s Freedom to not be Betrayed'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' one-shot fic co-written by Crossoverpairinglover (the writer of ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'') and [=AceAmir=]. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12128915/1/The-Edit-War-for-Ash-s-Freedom-to-not-be-Betrayed here.]]
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** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[MissedASpotCheck He doesn't take]] [[WeaksauceWeakness Gyarados' species-wide 4x weakness to electricity]] [[CurbStompBattle into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.

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** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[MissedASpotCheck [[FailedASpotCheck He doesn't take]] [[WeaksauceWeakness Gyarados' species-wide 4x weakness to to]] [[ElementalRockPaperScissors electricity]] [[CurbStompBattle into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
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** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]

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** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]experience]], especially since the Pokémon here are flesh and blood, not data.



** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbStompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.

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** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[MissedASpotCheck He doesn't take]] [[WeaksauceWeakness Gyarados' species-wide 4x weakness to electricity]] [[CurbStompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
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* RuleOfSymbolism: When Ash arrives at the Tournament, he is wearing five gold rights with fragments from five elemental stones; Water Stone, Moon Stone, Dawn Stone, Leaf Stone and Fire Stone, each one representing one of his five lovers (Misty due to her favoured type, May due to Skitty, Dawn due to her name, Iris's preference for living wild, and Serena's Starter type).

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* RuleOfSymbolism: When Ash arrives at the Tournament, he is wearing five gold rights rings with fragments from five elemental stones; stones: Water Stone, Moon Stone, Dawn Stone, Leaf Stone and Fire Stone, each Stone. Each one representing represents one of his five lovers (Misty due to her favoured type, May due to Skitty, Dawn due to her name, Iris's preference for living wild, and Serena's Starter type).

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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[spoiler:After Arceus subverts Darkern's plans to make Ash's harem one full of girls he (Darkern) considers hot and powerful -- rather than ones who can reasonably be expected to be compatible with him -- Darkern tries to turn Ash's harem bisexual to invoke this trope as "compensation". However, Arceus points out that [[RealityEnsues making them all bi isn't the same thing as making them all attracted to one another]].]]

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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[spoiler:After Arceus subverts Darkern's plans to make Ash's harem one full of girls he (Darkern) considers hot and powerful -- rather than ones who can reasonably be expected to be compatible with him -- Darkern tries to turn Ash's harem bisexual to invoke this trope as "compensation". However, Arceus points out that [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome making them all bi isn't the same thing as making them all attracted to one another]].]]



* RealityEnsues:
** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]
** Often, Darkern’s plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she’s not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.
** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbStompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
** [[spoiler:Even if the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible to enter, Arceus isn’t going to just leave an artifact of great importance out in the open. The ''real'' Book of Fate is in his nightstand.]]


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]
** Often, Darkern's plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.
** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbStompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
** [[spoiler:Even if the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible to enter, Arceus isn't going to just leave an artifact of great importance out in the open. The ''real'' Book of Fate is in His nightstand.]]

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* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to Darkern after sending Ash to Isla Sorna, the island from Pokemon Snap.

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* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to Darkern after sending Ash to Isla Sorna, the island from Pokemon Snap.''Pokemon Snap''.



* CurbStompBattle: Ash delivers a few over the course of the fic.

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* DoNotTauntCthulhu: For repeatedly messing with the Book of Fate, Arceus ends up punting Darkern into Equestria.
* DyeHard: InUniverse; when Darkern tries to kill off Delia by writing "[Ash’s] mother had inexplicably died...", Arceus adds "...her hair bubblegum pink" to the end and prays that the book isn’t a GrammarNazi. Fortunately, it worked.

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* DoNotTauntCthulhu: For Darkern repeatedly messing with the Book of Fate, tries to defy Arceus over the course of the fic; at the end, he ends up punting Darkern [[spoiler:punted into Equestria.
Equestria]] for his troubles.
* DyeHard: InUniverse; when Darkern tries to kill off Delia by writing "[Ash’s] "[Ash's] mother had inexplicably died...", Arceus adds "...her hair bubblegum pink" to the end and prays that the book isn’t a GrammarNazi. Fortunately, it worked.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Darkern takes an interest in Ash's oversized bed, though Arceus doesn't know why. [[spoiler:It actually inspired his climactic scheme, to give Ash a harem of nubile women.]]

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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
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Darkern takes an interest in Ash's oversized bed, though Arceus doesn't know why. [[spoiler:It actually inspired his climactic scheme, to give Ash a harem of nubile women.]]



* MythologyGag: In the beginning, it's mentioned that Arceus has to deal with two concurrent yet separate incidents happening in the Kingdom of Vale (referencing how [[Anime/PokemonTheMovieBlackWhite the 14th movie]] was split into two movies with the same plot and slightly different characters) and a Meteonite incident that happened yet didn't happen (referencing a pair of unaired episodes that were eventually [[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from the show).

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In the beginning, it's mentioned that Arceus has to deal with two concurrent yet separate incidents happening in the Kingdom of Vale (referencing how [[Anime/PokemonTheMovieBlackWhite the 14th movie]] was split into two movies with the same plot and slightly different characters) and a Meteonite incident that happened yet didn't happen (referencing a pair of unaired episodes that were eventually [[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from the show).
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* RuleOfSymbolism: When Ash arrives at the Tournament, he is wearing five gold rights with fragments from five elemental stones; Water Stone, Moon Stone, Dawn Stone, Leaf Stone and Fire Stone, each one representing one of his five lovers (Misty due to her favoured type, May due to Skitty, Dawn due to her name, Iris's preference for living wild, and Serena's Starter type).
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* AllLovingHero: Darkern wants to erase this part of Ash's personality, and doesn't see the point of him helping out Professor Oak just because he can.

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* AllLovingHero: Darkern wants to erase this part of Ash's personality, status as this causes more than one of Darkern's plans to go sideways, and doesn't see the point of him helping out Professor Oak just because he can.desperately tries to erase it.

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** When pointing out how being hugged by a [[PoisonousPerson Muk]] could be considered suffering, Arceus muses that it could still be deadly to [[WesternAnimation/CaptainPlanetAndThePlaneteers Captain Planet]].



** Darkern also continually mentions high-ranked and "fierce OU" Pokemon and “downgrades” Ash makes from high-powered moves, taking a jab at overly competitive players.

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** Darkern also continually mentions high-ranked and "fierce OU" Pokemon and “downgrades” "downgrades" Ash makes from high-powered moves, taking a jab at overly competitive players.


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** Darkern disparages [[VideoGame/PokemonSunAndMoon Alola's]] worth simply because it doesn't follow the traditional "8 gyms" format, taking a jab at players who did the same. Arceus immediately points out that he hasn't even ''been'' to Alola, and asks why he's judging it despite that.
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* CanonForeigner: The [[Manga/OnePiece Zoro]]-Farfetch'd who wields three leeks ([[DualWielding one in each wing]], [[CutlassBetweenTheTeeth and one with his beak]]) would also later be caught by Ash in ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines''.
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* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to Darkern after sending Ash to the island from Pokemon Snap.

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* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to Darkern after sending Ash to the island from Pokemon Snap.
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler:While trying to give Ash a harem full of hot girls, Darkern writes in the book, "They will all be bisexual!" Since he didn't specify who "they" was referring to, "they" ends up being ''literally everyone in that universe.'']]


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* NarrativeProfanityFilter: When Arceus writes into the book that all Pokemon can only have 4 moves at a time, no exceptions, Darkern is not happy.
-->What followed was the nastiest, most vile curse word that Arceus had ever heard spoken. It was a sound beyond description, a cacophony of syllables and inflections so horrid, so utterly wretched that it could make the damned weep [[YourSoulIsMine and rend souls from their mortal bodies,]] leaving nothing but cold, chilled husks in its wake. Were Arceus a lesser deity, the curse might have even been able to damage Him, but as it was it simply made him slightly nauseous.

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* DoNotTauntCthulhu: For repeatedly messing with the Book of Fate, Arceus ends up punting Darkern into Equestria.



* LastSecondWordSwap: Arceus does this several times in the Book of Fate to prevent Darkern from making his preferred edits. When Darkern writes "Ash's first evolved Pokemon will be his Bu..." (referring to Bulbasaur), Arceus quickly finished it with "...bumbling Oshawott!"

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* LastSecondWordSwap: Arceus does this several times in the Book of Fate to prevent Darkern from making his preferred edits. When Darkern writes "Ash's first evolved Pokemon will be his Bu..." (referring to Bulbasaur), Arceus quickly finished finishes it with "...bumbling Oshawott!"
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* LastSecondWordSwap: Arceus does this several times in the Book of Fate to prevent Darkern from making his preferred edits. When Darkern writes "Ash's first evolved Pokemon will be his Bu..." (referring to Bulbasaur), Arceus quickly finished it with "...bumbling Oshawott!"
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* RealityWritingBook: The Book of Fate.

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* BetrayalFic: The story parodies this sub-genre of fanfics.
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* AgeLift: Everyone gets this when Arceus unfreezes the FloatingTimeline.

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* AgeLift: Everyone gets this when Arceus unfreezes the FloatingTimeline.FloatingTimeline, though the impact differs between people affected.



* FloatingTimeline: The reason the anime has this is because Arceus accidentally froze time. He fixes it during the story, causing a sudden change in age for everyone.

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* FloatingTimeline: The reason the anime has this is because Arceus accidentally froze time. time at some point. He fixes it during the story, causing a sudden change in age for everyone.everyone to various degrees.
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler:Darkern's ultimate fate.]]
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* DeconstructionFic: Of the oh-so-prevalent [[DarkFic self-proclaimed "dark and edgy" fanfic]] in the ''Pokémon'' fandom, and possibly the genre as a whole.
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** A jab is made at [[GoddamnedBoss Whitney's Miltank]], which Darkern claims is a demon cow.

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** A jab is made at [[GoddamnedBoss Whitney's Miltank]], which Darkern claims is a demon cow. Though as it was ''Darkern'' saying it, the take that may not be particularly serious.
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* CaughtMonologuing: Happens to Darkern quite a few times; he becomes so caught up in ranting about what he plans to do when he starts his latest edit of the Book he gives Arceus the chance to make a more suitable edit.
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* ShipperOnDeck: In a sense; [[spoiler:where Darkern tried to give Ash a harem consisting of powerful women such as Cynthia, Sabrina, Clair, and Hilda, Arceus is able to take advantage of Darkern's rants to write Misty, May, Dawn, Iris and Serena's names in the book instead, arguing that Ash has formed a genuine emotional connection to them before any of this happened where he hasn't even met Hilda and only briefly interacted with many of the other women, who are also notably older than Ash anyway]].
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* CurbstompBattle: Ash delivers a few over the course of the fic.

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* CurbstompBattle: CurbStompBattle: Ash delivers a few over the course of the fic.



** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbstompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]

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** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbstompBattle [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]



** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbstompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.

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** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbstompBattle [[CurbStompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
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* MundaneMadeAwesome: Invoked and subverted. Darkern writes his last edit with exaggerated movements that are meant to look grandiose, but look more silly than anything else coming from him.


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** Darkern is described as making the final stroke of his last edit "as if he [were writing] in a Franchise/DeathNote".
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[spoiler:After Arceus subverts Darkern's plans to make Ash's harem one full of girls he (Darkern) considers hot and powerful -- rather than ones who can reasonably be expected to be compatible with him -- Darkern tries to turn Ash's harem bisexual to invoke this trope as "compensation". However, Arceus points out that [[RealityEnsues making them all bi isn't the same thing as making them all attracted to one another]].]]
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* UnwittingPawn: Everyone in the anime universe is this to Darkern and Arceus in their war. This is easily demonstrated when they're both trying to get Ash to say something at once; he ends up spouting a stream of gibberish, much to his surprise, before deciding that he must have too many ideas to use and tried to say them all at once.

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* UnwittingPawn: Everyone and everything in the anime universe is this to Darkern and Arceus in their war. This is easily demonstrated when they're both trying to get Ash to say something at once; he ends up spouting a stream of gibberish, much to his surprise, before deciding that he must have too many ideas to use and tried to say them all at once.

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* IWantGrandkids: [[spoiler:The reason why Delia suggests to Serena that she go visit Ash at his training grounds at the end.]]



* TomesOfProphecyAndFate: The Book of Fate contains everything that has happened, is currently happening, and will update itself when new things happen in the ''Pokemon'' anime universe. [[spoiler:Versions of the book also exist for AUs.]]
* {{Troll}}: Some of Arceus' actions against Darkern give him this portrayal; for example, replacing the Riolu Darkern keeps trying to give him with Rufflet, and then ''Relicanth.''

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* TomesOfProphecyAndFate: The Book of Fate contains everything that has happened, is currently happening, and will update itself when new things happen in the ''Pokemon'' anime universe. [[spoiler:Versions of the book also exist for AUs.[=AUs=].]]
* {{Troll}}: Some of Arceus' actions against Darkern give him Him this portrayal; for example, replacing the Riolu Darkern keeps trying to give him Ash with Rufflet, and then ''Relicanth.''
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* Foreshadowing: Darkern takes an interest in Ash's oversized bed, though Arceus doesn't know why. [[spoiler:It actually inspired his climactic scheme, to give Ash a harem of nubile women.]]

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: Darkern takes an interest in Ash's oversized bed, though Arceus doesn't know why. [[spoiler:It actually inspired his climactic scheme, to give Ash a harem of nubile women.]]
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''The (Edit) War for Ash’s Freedom to not be Betrayed'' is a ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' one-shot fic co-written by Crossoverpairinglover (the writer of ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'') and [=AceAmir=]. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12128915/1/The-Edit-War-for-Ash-s-Freedom-to-not-be-Betrayed here.]]

One day in the Hall of Origins, [[{{God}} Arceus]] discovers an intruder trying to tamper with the Book of Fate. The intruder, [[MeaningfulName Darkern Edgier]], wants to turn Ash into a "true" Pokemon Trainer by -- [[TakeThat like many an "edgy" fanfic writer]] -- having all his loved ones betray him and putting him through all sorts of gruesome torment. Arceus, however, is having none of it. Thus, the titular edit war begins, with Darkern trying to make his fantasy a reality and Arceus trying to keep things the way they are. Who will come out on top?

!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AesopAmnesia: [[spoiler:Having learned nothing from his tussle with Arceus, Darkern tries to apply his philosophy to the ''My Little Pony'' universe. This ends poorly for him.]]
* AgeLift: Everyone gets this when Arceus unfreezes the FloatingTimeline.
* AllForNothing: [[spoiler:Darkern was never editing the canon universe, so even if he'd gone through with everything he'd wanted, the anime would've remained unchanged.]]
* AllLovingHero: Darkern wants to erase this part of Ash's personality, and doesn't see the point of him helping out Professor Oak just because he can.
* AuthorAppeal: [[spoiler:[[HaremGenre Ash ends up with a harem at the end]]. This being written by the author of ''Pokemon Reset Bloodlines'', this is hardly a surprise.]]
* BeyondTheImpossible: Entry into the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible, but Darkern managed to do it anyways.
* BigNo: Darkern lets one out after learning [[spoiler:his plan was AllForNothing.]]
* ClicheStorm: InUniverse, this is what Darkern wants to turn the anime into.
* ColorCodedForYourConvenience: Darkern's entries in the Book of Fate are red, while Arceus' are blue.
* CoughSnarkCough: When Darkern implies that all of Ash's adventures have ended in failure, Arceus does something to this effect, mentioning the Orange Islands and the Battle Frontier.
* CrossoverPunchline: [[spoiler:The fic ends with Darkern getting turned into a decorative statue by [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Twilight Sparkle and her friends]].]]
* CurbstompBattle: Ash delivers a few over the course of the fic.
** [[spoiler:Darkern becomes a lawn ornament within an hour of arriving on Equestria.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: Darkern Edgier is the living embodiment of this, as his name demonstrates.
* DeadpanSnarker: Arceus.
* DyeHard: InUniverse; when Darkern tries to kill off Delia by writing "[Ash’s] mother had inexplicably died...", Arceus adds "...her hair bubblegum pink" to the end and prays that the book isn’t a GrammarNazi. Fortunately, it worked.
* EveryoneIsBi: [[spoiler:What Darkern does in his final edit. His intent was to invoke GirlOnGirlIsHot, but he didn't specify who he wanted to be bi, and so now ''everyone'' in the world is bi.]]
* Foreshadowing: Darkern takes an interest in Ash's oversized bed, though Arceus doesn't know why. [[spoiler:It actually inspired his climactic scheme, to give Ash a harem of nubile women.]]
** When Darkern calls Arceus a damned horse god, Arceus corrects him (He's apparently a llama) and says that he's in the wrong world for a horse god. [[spoiler:At the end, Arceus sends Darkern to one such world; specifically, the world of the god-princesses [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Celestia and Luna]].]]
* FloatingTimeline: The reason the anime has this is because Arceus accidentally froze time. He fixes it during the story, causing a sudden change in age for everyone.
* TheGenieKnowsJackNicholson: Arceus' references to other works, which is justified by His ability to enter other dimensions.
* HaremGenre: [[spoiler:What Darkern tries to turn the story into at the climax. He succeeds, [[PyrrhicVictory but not in a way he likes.]]]]
* {{Hipster}}: A trio of these end up confronting Ash as a result of the Edit War. Arceus decides to check later if hipsters are supposed to exist in the anime universe.
* {{Hypocrite}}: The hipsters who berate Ash for always losing every league have never actually challenged a league themselves.
* {{Irony}}: Darkern, for all his attempts to get Ash to "grow up", acts incredibly immature.
* MythologyGag: In the beginning, it's mentioned that Arceus has to deal with two concurrent yet separate incidents happening in the Kingdom of Vale (referencing how [[Anime/PokemonTheMovieBlackWhite the 14th movie]] was split into two movies with the same plot and slightly different characters) and a Meteonite incident that happened yet didn't happen (referencing a pair of unaired episodes that were eventually [[{{Retcon}} retconned]] from the show).
** To train for the upcoming tournament, Professor Oak suggests that Ash go to an island [[VideoGame/PokemonSnap that he once sent Ash's friend Todd Snap to to get photos of the native Pokemon]].
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the last time Ash trained at Professor Oak's lab, evil spirits got loose and Team Rocket tripled his insurance policies.
* NotSoAboveItAll: Arceus, the Creator of Everything and the more mature one between him and Darkern...blows a raspberry.
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Darkern loves doing this.
* RealityEnsues:
** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbstompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience.]]
** Often, Darkern’s plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she’s not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.
** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[CurbstompBattle He doesn't take Gyarados' 4x weakness to electricity into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
** [[spoiler:Even if the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible to enter, Arceus isn’t going to just leave an artifact of great importance out in the open. The ''real'' Book of Fate is in his nightstand.]]
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: Darkern Edgier's preferred color palette.
* ShoutOut:
** When Arceus hears that Darkern wants to turn Ash into a great warrior who is undefeatable in battle, He responds that, in order to do that, [[Webcomic/OnePunchMan he'd have to go bald and lose all sense of joy.]]
** At one point, Arceus asks Darkern if he’s related to [[WebVideo/AtopTheFourthWall Crazy Steve a]][[ComicBook/AllStarBatmanAndRobinTheBoyWonder nd Bonkers Betty]].
** Ash encounters [[Film/SnakesOnAPlane a crashed plane with an Ekans in it.]]
** [[spoiler:The last exchange Darkern and Arceus have before the former is kicked out of the Pokemon dimension is a reference to the LukeIAmYourFather reveal from ''Franchise/StarWars''.]]
* StatusQuoIsGod: [[spoiler:Darkern tries to take solace in the fact he subverted this...until Arceus reveals that he never really altered canon at all.]]
* TakeOurWordForIt: The vile curse word uttered by Darkern, which would have damaged Arceus had He been a lesser deity.
* TakeThat:
** The entire fic is one against those who use DarkerAndEdgier in their fanworks to an unrealistic and childish degree.
** Darkern also continually mentions high-ranked and "fierce OU" Pokemon and “downgrades” Ash makes from high-powered moves, taking a jab at overly competitive players.
** One occurs against ''Fanfic/AshesOfThePast'', when Arceus briefly mentions a terrible timeline where the entire Squirtle line became anime fanatics.
** Arceus tells Darkern that, if he likes pain so much, He could always send him to [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eiken_(manga) Zashono Academy.]]
** A jab is made at [[GoddamnedBoss Whitney's Miltank]], which Darkern claims is a demon cow.
* TomesOfProphecyAndFate: The Book of Fate contains everything that has happened, is currently happening, and will update itself when new things happen in the ''Pokemon'' anime universe. [[spoiler:Versions of the book also exist for AUs.]]
* {{Troll}}: Some of Arceus' actions against Darkern give him this portrayal; for example, replacing the Riolu Darkern keeps trying to give him with Rufflet, and then ''Relicanth.''
* UltimateShowdownOfUltimateDestiny: The huge tournament Darkern uses to give Ash a goal is billed as this.
* UnwittingPawn: Everyone in the anime universe is this to Darkern and Arceus in their war. This is easily demonstrated when they're both trying to get Ash to say something at once; he ends up spouting a stream of gibberish, much to his surprise, before deciding that he must have too many ideas to use and tried to say them all at once.
* VillainBall: Arceus notes that Darkern's plot would probably be a bit more successful if he didn't keep reading out loud.
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Remember what you said, about this not being canon? Well, without realizing it you were more on the nose than you might have realized."]]
* WideEyedIdealist: Another thing getting in the way of Darkern's re-shaping of the Pokemon anime: Ash's near-lack of pessimism.
* WillfullyWeak: It's noted that Arceus could just destroy Darkern where he stands, but holds back because He doesn't want to risk damaging the Book of Fate.
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