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* BetrayalFic: The story parodies this sub-genre of fanfics.

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* BetrayalFic: The story parodies this sub-genre SubGenre of fanfics.
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* AllLovingHero: Ash's status as this causes more than one of Darkern's plans to go sideways, and he desperately tries to erase it.

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* AllLovingHero: Ash's status as this Ash displaying kindness to everyone he meets causes more than one of Darkern's plans to go sideways, and he desperately tries to erase it.this trait.



* CharacterCheck: Darkern's plotting is often foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.

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* CharacterCheck: Darkern's plotting is often foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear his mother Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.
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Island from Pokemon Snap is actually called Pokemon Island. Isla Sorna is from The Lost World 1995 and only appears in the narrative as a comparison.


* AesopAmnesia: [[spoiler:Having learned nothing from his tussle with Arceus, Darkern tries to apply his philosophy to the ''My Little Pony'' universe. This ends poorly for him.]]

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* AesopAmnesia: [[spoiler:Having Having learned nothing from his tussle with Arceus, Darkern tries to apply his philosophy to the ''My Little Pony'' universe.[[spoiler:the world of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]]]]. This ends poorly for him.]]



* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to Darkern after sending Ash to Isla Sorna, the island from ''Pokemon Snap''.

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* BlowingARaspberry: Arceus does this to blows a raspberry at Darkern after sending thwarting his attempt to prevent Ash to Isla Sorna, from communicating with his friends while he's on the island from ''Pokemon Snap''.



* CaughtMonologuing: Happens to Darkern quite a few times; he becomes so caught up in ranting about what he plans to do when he starts his latest edit of the Book he gives Arceus the chance to make a more suitable edit.

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* CaughtMonologuing: Happens to Darkern quite a few times; he becomes so frequently gets caught up in ranting about what he plans to do when he starts his latest edit of the Book he gives Book, giving Arceus the chance to make a more suitable edit.
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** When Ash fights and catches a Farfetch'd modeled after [[Anime/OnePiece Zoro]], Darkern whines about how it should be imitating a "real" swordsman like [[Manga/{{Berserk}} Guts]] or [[Manga/AttackOnTitan Levi]]. Arceus promptly quips that out of the three, Zoro probably requires the least amount of therapy.
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%%* DeadpanSnarker: Arceus.

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%%* * DeadpanSnarker: Arceus.Arceus ends up directing a lot of snark towards Darkern's antics.



%%* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Darkern loves doing this.
%%* RealityWritingBook: The Book of Fate.

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%%* * PunctuatedForEmphasis: Darkern loves doing this.
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does this in his speech; like pretty much everything else he does, it's done to make him look more threatening.
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RealityWritingBook: The Book of Fate.Fate is meant to chronicle everything that happens in its native reality, and writing in it ends up applying the changes written to that universe.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Arceus cuts Darken's attempt to give Ash a harem short by ending the sentence before Darken can write down the names of the people he wants in said harem. Arceus proceeds to [[{{Facepalm}} slap Himself with most of his arms]] over the realization that He could have prevented most of the edit war-caused shenanigans if He'd just used periods to curtail Darken's additions instead of trying to spin his sentences into sensical changes.

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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Arceus cuts Darken's attempt to give [[spoiler:give Ash a harem harem]] short by ending the sentence before Darken can write down the [[spoiler:the names of the people he wants in said harem. harem]]. Arceus proceeds to [[{{Facepalm}} slap Himself with most of his arms]] over the realization that He could have prevented most of the edit war-caused shenanigans if He'd just used periods to curtail Darken's additions instead of trying to spin his sentences into sensical changes.edits.



* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Darkern loves doing this.
* RealityWritingBook: The Book of Fate.

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* CharacterCheck: Often, Darkern's plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.

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* CharacterCheck: Often, Darkern's plotting is often foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.



* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Arceus cuts Darken's attempt to give Ash a harem short by ending the sentence before Darken can write down the names of the people he wants in said harem. Arceus proceeds to [[{{Facepalm}} slap Himself with most of his arms]] over the realization that He could have prevented most of the edit war-caused shenanigans if He'd just used periods to curtail Darken's additions instead of trying to spin his sentences into sensical changes.



* DeadpanSnarker: Arceus.

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* %%* DeadpanSnarker: Arceus.



* EveryoneIsBi: [[spoiler:What Darkern does in his final edit. His intent was to invoke GirlOnGirlIsHot, but he didn't specify who he wanted to be bi, and so now ''everyone'' in the world is bi.]]

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* EveryoneIsBi: [[spoiler:What Darkern does in his [[spoiler:Darken's final edit. edit to the Book of Fate makes ''everyone'' in the world bi. His intent was to invoke GirlOnGirlIsHot, GirlOnGirlIsHot concerning the members of Ash's harem, but he didn't specify who he wanted to be bi, and so now ''everyone'' in the world is bi.bisexual.]]
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* BigLittleSister: Misty grows to be taller than her older sisters after Arceus fixes one of the clocks in the Hall of Origins.
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* CharacterCheck: Often, Darkern's plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.


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* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler:Even if the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible to enter, Arceus isn't going to just leave an artifact of great importance out in the open. The ''real'' Book of Fate is in His nightstand.]]


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* EpicFail: Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[FailedASpotCheck He doesn't take]] [[WeaksauceWeakness Gyarados' species-wide 4x weakness to]] [[ElementalRockPaperScissors electricity]] [[CurbStompBattle into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.


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* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Subverted. Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience]], especially since the Pokémon here are flesh and blood, not data.

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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[spoiler:After Arceus subverts Darkern's plans to make Ash's harem one full of girls he (Darkern) considers hot and powerful -- rather than ones who can reasonably be expected to be compatible with him -- Darkern tries to turn Ash's harem bisexual to invoke this trope as "compensation". However, Arceus points out that [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome making them all bi isn't the same thing as making them all attracted to one another]].]]

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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: [[spoiler:After Arceus subverts Darkern's plans to make Ash's harem one full of girls he (Darkern) considers hot and powerful -- rather than ones who can reasonably be expected to be compatible with him -- Darkern tries to turn Ash's harem bisexual to invoke this trope as "compensation". However, Arceus points out that [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome making them all bi isn't the same thing as making them all attracted to one another]].another.]]



* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Ash, a trainer who's traveled to many different regions and placed high in a number of leagues, battles a trio of jerks who have never challenged a league before. The hipsters send out powerful OU tier Pokemon, while Ash sends out Unfezant. [[CurbStompBattle Ash still wipes the floor with them, because tier lists aren't a good substitute for actual battle experience]], especially since the Pokémon here are flesh and blood, not data.
** Often, Darkern's plotting is foiled by characters acting, well, in-character. For example, an attempt to get Ash to go to [[VideoGame/PokemonColosseum Orre]] is ruined when [[MamaBear Delia]] declares she's not letting Ash go anywhere ''near'' that crime-ridden cesspool of a region.
** Darkern tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Gyarados. [[FailedASpotCheck He doesn't take]] [[WeaksauceWeakness Gyarados' species-wide 4x weakness to]] [[ElementalRockPaperScissors electricity]] [[CurbStompBattle into account.]] And when he tries to kill Pikachu with a herd of Rock- and Ground-types, Ash (who has all his Pokemon with him at the time) merely commands his Water- and Grass-types to counter them.
** [[spoiler:Even if the Hall of Origins is nigh-impossible to enter, Arceus isn't going to just leave an artifact of great importance out in the open. The ''real'' Book of Fate is in His nightstand.]]
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: The hipsters mocking Ash for never winning a League are stopped in their tracks when Ash asks if they've ever actually competed in a League before.
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* StopHavingFunGuys: InUniverse; Darkern comes off as a stereotypical competitive ''Pokémon'' player at times, complaining whenever Ash catches or uses a Pokémon that isn't considered top tier on Website/{{Smogon}}.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Darkern Edgier is the living embodiment of this, as his name demonstrates.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Darkern Edgier is the living embodiment of this, as his [[PunnyName name demonstrates.]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Darkern doesn't see the point in Ash doing ''anything'' that doesn't relate to him getting molded into the edgelord's idea of a powerful trainer, such as helping Professor Oak around the lab.
-->'''Darkern:''' What was the point of that!?\\
'''Arceus:''' Does kindness need a point? Ash is helping a friend, and an elderly one at that. He even gets to see his Pokemon more, which is always good. Sure, he sees them between adventures, which take longer to prepare for than most people realize, but more time is always nice.\\
'''Darkern:''' But where's the catalyst to prove everyone wrong? The anger? The drama!?
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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Darkern believes in this, and that only by using his RealityWarler powers to put Ash through horrible torment like trying to kill his Pokemon or getting his loved ones to betray him can he mold Ash into the ultimate trainer. Arceus disagrees and stops him whenever he can.

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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Darkern believes in this, and that the only by using his RealityWarler powers way to put mold Ash into the ultimate trainer is by putting him through horrible torment torment, like trying to kill his Pokemon or getting his loved ones to betray him can he mold Ash into the ultimate trainer.him. Arceus disagrees and stops him whenever he can.

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* BigBad: Darkern Edgier is a mysterious masked man who tries to use the Book of Fate to reshape the anime-verse the way he wants, transforming Ash into a hyper-masculine, super-skilled trainer by having him undergo torment to harden him.



* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Darkern believes in this, and that only by using his RealityWarler powers to put Ash through horrible torment like trying to kill his Pokemon or getting his loved ones to betray him can he mold Ash into the ultimate trainer. Arceus disagrees and stops him whenever he can.



** A jab is made at [[GoddamnedBoss Whitney's Miltank]], which Darkern claims is a demon cow. Though as it was ''Darkern'' saying it, the take that may not be particularly serious.

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** A jab is made at [[GoddamnedBoss Whitney's Miltank]], which Darkern claims is a demon cow. Though as it was ''Darkern'' ''[[StrawFan Darkern]]'' saying it, the take that may not be particularly serious.
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''The (Edit) War for Ash’s Freedom to not be Betrayed'' is a ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' one-shot fic co-written by Crossoverpairinglover (the writer of ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'') and [=AceAmir=]. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12128915/1/The-Edit-War-for-Ash-s-Freedom-to-not-be-Betrayed here.]]

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''The (Edit) War for Ash’s Freedom to not be Betrayed'' is a ''Anime/PokemonTheSeries'' one-shot fic co-written by Crossoverpairinglover Creator/{{Crossoverpairinglover}} (the writer of ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'') and [=AceAmir=]. It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12128915/1/The-Edit-War-for-Ash-s-Freedom-to-not-be-Betrayed here.]]
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* BiggerIsBetterInBed: Defied; Darkern tries to give Ash a larger penis during his edits, but Arceus thwarts all his attempts.

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