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* AWizardDidIt: The lack of a LanguageBarrier when the Vikings and Columbians communicate is just hand-waved away as another perk of the Madrigal's Miracle. Written language is played straight and Hiccup needs Mirabel to translate and learn their alphabet.
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* AWizardDidIt: The lack of a LanguageBarrier when the Vikings and Columbians Colombians communicate is just hand-waved away as another perk of the Madrigal's Miracle. Written language is played straight and Hiccup needs Mirabel to translate and learn their alphabet.
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* GenerationXerox: Applies in two different forms to [[spoiler:Hiccup and Mirabel's triplets. Firstly, when they are about to be born, the rest of the family place bets on what the children will be- three boys, three girls, or a combination- with Bruno, Julieta and Pepa correctly betting that it will be two girls and a boy based on the precedent that they were the triplet children of the last Candle Holder and anticipate a similar 'sequence'. Later on, when the triplets have their gift ceremony, their youngest daughter Peep doesn't get her own gift, but unlike with Mirabel here everyone swiftly acts to accept her, Mirabel proclaiming that Peep will be the next Candle Holder]].
* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and Augustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every Madrigal adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and Augustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every Madrigal adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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** A mild example can be seen in Hiccup and Stoick. Despite having different beliefs, mindsets, and even appearances, the two are both stubborn men (something pointed out by both Mirabel and Gobber) who will do anything to protect the ones they love.
** Applies in two different forms to [[spoiler:Hiccup and Mirabel's triplets. Firstly, when they are about to be born, the rest of the family place bets on what the children will be- three boys, three girls, or a combination- with Bruno, Julieta and Pepa correctly betting that it will be two girls and a boy based on the precedent that they were the triplet children of the last Candle Holder and anticipate a similar 'sequence'. Later on, when the triplets have their gift ceremony, their youngest daughter Peep doesn't get her own gift, but unlike with Mirabel here everyone swiftly acts to accept her, Mirabel proclaiming that Peep will be the next Candle Holder]].
* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta andAugustin Agustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every Madrigal adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
** A mild example can be seen in Hiccup and Stoick. Despite having different beliefs, mindsets, and even appearances, the two are both stubborn men (something pointed out by both Mirabel and Gobber) who will do anything to protect the ones they love.
** Applies in two different forms to [[spoiler:Hiccup and Mirabel's triplets. Firstly, when they are about to be born, the rest of the family place bets on what the children will be- three boys, three girls, or a combination- with Bruno, Julieta and Pepa correctly betting that it will be two girls and a boy based on the precedent that they were the triplet children of the last Candle Holder and anticipate a similar 'sequence'. Later on, when the triplets have their gift ceremony, their youngest daughter Peep doesn't get her own gift, but unlike with Mirabel here everyone swiftly acts to accept her, Mirabel proclaiming that Peep will be the next Candle Holder]].
* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and
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* TheKindnapper: Stoick and (initially) Gobber believe that bringing Hiccup back to Berk is in the boy's best interest...unaware that Hiccup and Toothless have built a happy life in the Encanto that they won't willingly leave. Gobber quickly realizes that they're in the wrong when he sees how happy Hiccup truly is with the Madrigals, and tries his best to talk Stoick into leaving.
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* TheKindnapper: Stoick and (initially) Gobber believe that bringing Hiccup back to Berk is in the boy's best interest...unaware that Hiccup and Toothless have built a happy life in the Encanto that they won't willingly leave. Gobber quickly realizes that they're in the wrong when he sees how happy Hiccup truly is with the Madrigals, and tries his best to talk Stoick into leaving.
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** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, while Stoick and Astrid stubbornly remain committed to bringing him back.
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** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing always provided him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon time with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, while Stoick and Astrid stubbornly remain committed to bringing him back.
* PapaBear: Agustin is willing to stand up to ANYONE if it means protecting his kids [[spoiler: including his son-in-law]]. Stoick also applies, as he was willing to spend months on end sailing the archipelago (and then to Colombia) to find Hiccup, as well as fight the Madrigals when he thought they were holding him hostage.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When the Madrigals claim Hiccup as their own, Stoick retorts that he's Hiccup's biological father. This causes Mirabel to mercilessly tear into him, calling him out for his horrible treatment of Hiccup, stating that Hiccup is more loved in the Encanto than he ever was on Berk, and finishes with a PrecisionFStrike (startling the Vikings and Abuela while [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Camilo cracks up.]])
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When the Madrigals claim Hiccup as their own, Stoick retorts that he's Hiccup's biological father. This causes Mirabel to father...not knowing that Hiccup told the Madrigals about all of the abuse Stoick had put him through. She snaps, and mercilessly tear tears into him, calling him out for his horrible treatment of Hiccup, stating that Hiccup is more loved in the Encanto than he ever was on Berk, and finishes with a PrecisionFStrike (startling the Vikings and Abuela while [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Camilo cracks up.]])
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* TheRunaway: Hiccup. When he was outed as a "traitor" and disowned by Stoick, Hiccup had to save Toothless from a public execution and escape. For his and Toothless' safety, they had to not only leave Berk, but the archipelago entirely.
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** Hiccup. When he was outed as a "traitor" and disowned by Stoick, Hiccup had to save Toothless from a public execution and escape. For his and Toothless' safety, they had to not only leave Berk, but the archipelago entirely.
** Later PlayedForLaughs when [[spoiler: Camilo sneaks along with his cousins to go to Berk and fight the Red Death.]]
** Hiccup. When he was outed as a "traitor" and disowned by Stoick, Hiccup had to save Toothless from a public execution and escape. For his and Toothless' safety, they had to not only leave Berk, but the archipelago entirely.
** Later PlayedForLaughs when [[spoiler: Camilo sneaks along with his cousins to go to Berk and fight the Red Death.]]
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* UnskilledButStrong: When the Madrigals do battle with Stoick's party, they are able to overwhelm them with their various gifts. Unfortunately for them, none of the Madrigals are fighters and are [[CripplingOverspecialization one-trick ponies]] when it comes to using their abilities defensively, while the Vikings [[StrongAndSkilled are all stronger and have more fighting experience]], so all they have to do is [[VictoryByEndurance tough it out until the Madrigals exhaust themselves]].
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* UnskilledButStrong: When the Madrigals do battle with Stoick's party, they are able to overwhelm them with their various gifts. Unfortunately for them, none of the Madrigals are fighters and are [[CripplingOverspecialization one-trick ponies]] when it comes to using their abilities defensively, while the Vikings [[StrongAndSkilled are all stronger and have more fighting experience]], so all they have to do is [[VictoryByEndurance tough it out until the Madrigals exhaust themselves]]. A particularly specific example is Luisa, whose enhanced strength has only ever been used for manual labour but can take a punch to the face from [[spoiler:Stoick or Drago]] without flinching.
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is a {{crossover}} fanfiction between ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is a {{crossover}} fanfiction between ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] Creator/{{HotPatooty}} and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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** The Madrigal family does not like being called "witches."
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* LanguageBarrier: Zigzagged. Thanks to the magic in Encanto, Hiccup can understand its residents' words and they can in turn understand him. However, he can't read the language.
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* TearsOfJoy: PlayedForLaughs. Hiccup cries over how good the food in Encanto is compared to the awful food served in Berk.
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** Mirabel, as in canon, is a normally a kind, optimistic, and helpful girl. But the second she sees anyone hurting her family or boyfriend... [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Back. Off.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: In this version of the story, Hiccup and Toothless are discovered before Hiccup learned where the nest was. As such, once they escape, Hiccup decides to simply sever his ties to Berk and leave the archipelago. This results in the Vikings continuing their war with the dragons for another year.
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* ForWantOfANail: In this version of the story, Hiccup and Toothless are discovered before Hiccup learned where the nest was. As such, once they escape, Hiccup decides to simply sever his ties to Berk and leave the archipelago. This results in the Vikings continuing their war with the dragons for another year.year before [[spoiler: Astrid trains a Deadly Nadder and uses her to find the nest]].
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** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, Stoick and Astrid stubbornly committed to bringing him back.
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** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, while Stoick and Astrid stubbornly remain committed to bringing him back.
* PrecisionFStrike: Mirabel has a few choice words for Stoick when she finally meets him...
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out exactly as they were at the start of the first film: Astrid is a ruthless ChildSoldier and Snotlout is a chauvinistic narcissist and relentless bully (even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with their dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out exactly as they were at the start of the first film: Astrid is a ruthless ChildSoldier and [[FantasticRacism who hates dragons]] while Snotlout is a chauvinistic narcissist and relentless bully (even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with their dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone.]]
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is a {{crossover]} fanfiction between ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is a {{crossover]} {{crossover}} fanfiction between ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}''/''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' {{Crossover}} fanfic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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''The Dragon and the Butterfly'' is an ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}''/''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' {{Crossover}} fanfic a {{crossover]} fanfiction between ''WesternAnimation/{{Encanto}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon'' by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/HotPatooty/pseuds/HotPatooty HotPatooty]] and is the first installment in the ''Fanfic/TheDragonAndTheButterflySaga''. It that can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36588493/chapters/91257112 here]].
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* ForWantOfANail: In this version of the story, Hiccup and Toothless are discovered before Hiccup learned where the nest was. As such, once they escape, Hiccup decides to simply sever his ties to Berk and leave the archipelago. This results in the Vikings continuing their war with the dragons for another year.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and Agustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and Agustin Augustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every Madrigal adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* DecoyDamsel: Throughout the battle between the Madrigals and the Vikings, both parties are trying to get to the critically injured Hiccup (the Madrigals so they can heal him, the Vikings so they can abduct him). Ultimately, [[spoiler: Mirabel has Camilo pose as the unconscious Hiccup while she takes the real Hiccup away from the battle. This allows her to heal him with Julieta's arepas, as well as reunite with Toothless]].
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Ultimately averted, as WordofGod states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Ultimately averted, as WordofGod WordOfGod states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* TheRunaway: Hiccup. When he was outed as a "traitor" and disowned by Stoick, Hiccup had to save Toothless from a public execution and escape. For his and Tootless' safety, they had to not only leave Berk, but the archipelago entirely.
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* TheRunaway: Hiccup. When he was outed as a "traitor" and disowned by Stoick, Hiccup had to save Toothless from a public execution and escape. For his and Tootless' Toothless' safety, they had to not only leave Berk, but the archipelago entirely.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out exactly as they were at the start of the first film (with Snotlout even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with their dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone.]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out exactly as they were at the start of the first film (with film: Astrid is a ruthless ChildSoldier and Snotlout even is a chauvinistic narcissist and relentless bully (even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with their dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone.]]
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** When Mirabel gives Hiccup [[ParentalNeglect the first birthday present he's had in 'years']], Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Mirabel ends her ReasonYouSuckSpeech to Stoick with [[BilingualBonus a curse in Spanish]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When the Madrigals claim Hiccup as their own, Stoick retorts that he's Hiccup's biological father. This causes Mirabel to ''let him have it'', calling him out for his horrible treatment of Hiccup his entire life, stating that Hiccup is more loved in the Encanto than he ever was on Berk, and finishes with a PrecisionFStrike (startling the Vikings and Abuela while [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Camilo ''cracks up''.]])
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When the Madrigals claim Hiccup as their own, Stoick retorts that he's Hiccup's biological father. This causes Mirabel to ''let him have it'', mercilessly tear into him, calling him out for his horrible treatment of Hiccup his entire life, Hiccup, stating that Hiccup is more loved in the Encanto than he ever was on Berk, and finishes with a PrecisionFStrike (startling the Vikings and Abuela while [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Camilo ''cracks up''.cracks up.]])
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** When Mirabel gives Hiccup [[ParentalNeglect the first birthday present he's had in ''years'']], Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
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** When Mirabel gives Hiccup [[ParentalNeglect the first birthday present he's had in ''years'']], 'years']], Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
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* HappilyAdopted: Sometime after Hiccup [[spoiler: becomes Mirabel's official boyfriend]], the Madrigals basically adopt him. And he couldn't be happier.
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* TheKindnapper: Stoick and (initially) Gobber believe that bringing Hiccup back to Berk is in the boy's best interest...unaware that Hiccup and Toothless have built a happy life in the Encanto that they won't willingly leave. Gobber quickly realizes that they're in the wrong when he sees how happy Hiccup truly is with the Madrigals, and tries his best to talk Stoick into leaving.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Mirabel ends her ReasonYouSuckSpeech to Stoick with [[BilingualBonus a curse in Spanish]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: When the Madrigals claim Hiccup as their own, Stoick retorts that he's Hiccup's biological father. This causes Mirabel to ''let him have it'', calling him out for his horrible treatment of Hiccup his entire life, stating that Hiccup is more loved in the Encanto than he ever was on Berk, and finishes with a PrecisionFStrike (startling the Vikings and Abuela while [[ActuallyPrettyFunny Camilo ''cracks up''.]])
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* AbusiveParents: Stoick qualifies, although [[HeelFaceTurn he gets better]]. As in canon, the chief neglects his son (allowing him to be chastised and beaten by the rest of their people) and disowns him once he's discovered to be a "traitor". His HeroicBSOD helps him see how wrong his actions were, and he spends the majority of the Berk arc trying to reconnect with Hiccup.
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* AbusiveParents: Stoick qualifies, although but [[HeelFaceTurn he gets better]]. As in canon, the chief neglects his son (allowing him to be chastised chastised, bullied and beaten by the rest of their people) and disowns him once he's discovered to be a "traitor". His HeroicBSOD helps him see how wrong his actions were, and he spends the majority of the Berk arc trying to reconnect with Hiccup.
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** When Mirabel gives Hiccup [[ParentalNeglect the first birthday present he's had in years]], Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash he tells the Madrigals the reason for Stoick's actions.]]
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash he tells the Madrigals the reason for Stoick's actions.]]
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** When Mirabel gives Hiccup [[ParentalNeglect the first birthday present he's had in years]], ''years'']], Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash hetells needs to tell the Madrigals the reason for Stoick's actions.]]
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash he
** Fishlegs is mostly a helpful, scholarly boy who prefers to run from danger than fight it. But when Astrid [[spoiler: attempts to kidnap Mirabel to lure Hiccup to Berk]], he [[EveryoneHasStandards puts his foot down]] and tells her off for it.
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* DemotedToExtra: With Alvin and Dagur absent from the story, Heather barely has a presence in the story, being a refugee from the Screaming Death's rampage and becomes Fishleg's girlfriend by the time Hiccup marries Mirabel.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Stoick rationalizes Hiccup leaving Berk as just some good ole' teenage rebellion and that by the time he finds him, they can kill the Night Fury as a bonding exercise and things will go back to the way they were. When Stoick tries to apologize, he botches it completely when he offers to help him kill Toothless.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Stoick rationalizes Hiccup leaving Berk as just some good ole' teenage rebellion and that by the time he finds him, they can kill the Night Fury as a bonding exercise and things will go back to the way they were. When Stoick tries to apologize, he botches it completely when he offers to take him away from the "witches" and help him kill Toothless.
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* CatlikeDragons: When Alma finds the Hotburple stealing the town's silverware, it immediately reminds her of her childhood pet Oso, a cat that was so fat and lazy, it looked more like a small bear than a house-cat.The narrative also describes Toothless as cat-like at one point.
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* CatlikeDragons: When Alma finds the Hotburple stealing the town's silverware, it immediately reminds her of her childhood pet Oso, a cat that was so fat and lazy, it looked more like a small bear than a house-cat. The narrative also describes Toothless as cat-like at one point.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Eret is a dragon-trapper by profession and thus doesn't value dragon life all that much, seeing the Screaming Death sinking dragon-inhabited islands as a business opportunity. It's when he finds out that it has also been sinking human-inhabited islands, leaving entire villages dead and/or homeless does it take the proverbial wind out of his sails.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards:
** Camilo is a noted lover of pranks, and is initially thrilled when the twins become his minions. However, when he learns that they've set up a prank that could maim or kill its victim, he runs for Mirabel's help and later chastises the twins for attempting murder.
** Eret is a dragon-trapper by profession and thus doesn't value dragon life all that much, seeing the Screaming Death sinking dragon-inhabited islands as a business opportunity. It's when he finds out that it has also been sinking human-inhabited islands, leaving entire villages dead and/or homeless does it take the proverbial wind out of his sails.
** Camilo is a noted lover of pranks, and is initially thrilled when the twins become his minions. However, when he learns that they've set up a prank that could maim or kill its victim, he runs for Mirabel's help and later chastises the twins for attempting murder.
** Eret is a dragon-trapper by profession and thus doesn't value dragon life all that much, seeing the Screaming Death sinking dragon-inhabited islands as a business opportunity. It's when he finds out that it has also been sinking human-inhabited islands, leaving entire villages dead and/or homeless does it take the proverbial wind out of his sails.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsasPeople). Julieta and Agustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsasPeople).ParentsAsPeople). Julieta and Agustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* TheOnlyOneITrust: Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, Stoick and Astrid stubbornly committed to bringing him back.
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* TheOnlyOneITrust: TheOnlyOneITrust:
** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, Stoick and Astrid stubbornly committed to bringing him back.
** Astrid is initially wary of telling anyone about her plan to find the dragon nest [[spoiler: especially because she stole Hiccup's notebook and trained a dragon to find it]]. After spending months working with Fishlegs, though, she [[spoiler: introduces him to Stormfly]] and admits that she trusts him now.
** Gobber is the only one in Stoick's party Hiccup is willing to listen to, because he was the only person from Berk who was providing him with protection and support. After spending an afternoon with him and Mirabel, Gobber is also the only one who wants to respect Hiccup's wishes, Stoick and Astrid stubbornly committed to bringing him back.
** Astrid is initially wary of telling anyone about her plan to find the dragon nest [[spoiler: especially because she stole Hiccup's notebook and trained a dragon to find it]]. After spending months working with Fishlegs, though, she [[spoiler: introduces him to Stormfly]] and admits that she trusts him now.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out the fic exactly as they were at the start of the first HTTYD movie (with Snotlout even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone]]
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out the fic exactly as they were at the start of the first HTTYD movie film (with Snotlout even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with their dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone]]everyone.]]
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny:
** When Mirabel gives Hiccup the first birthday present he's had in years, Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash he tells the Madrigals the reason for Stoick's actions.]]
** When Mirabel gives Hiccup the first birthday present he's had in years, Camilo asks aloud if he's going to cry. Hiccup responds with a BigShutUp. Everyone, even Camilo, cracks up.
** Downplayed: After [[spoiler: Stoick tries to kill Mirabel's Stormcutter]], the Madrigals question his actions. When it's suggested that he's simply crazy, Camilo shifts into a very short version of Stoick and mocks him, calling him "Stoick the Emotionally Unstable." Gobber finds it funny, but doesn't laugh as [[MoodWhiplash he tells the Madrigals the reason for Stoick's actions.]]
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Isabela's power to summon plants might seem harmless enough, but [[spoiler:when confronting the Berkians who attacked Hiccup, Snotlout in particular gets assaulted by vines and cacti more than once]].
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: BewareTheNiceOnes:
** Isabela's power to summon plants might seem harmless enough, but [[spoiler:when confronting the Berkians who attacked Hiccup, Snotlout in particular gets assaulted by vines and cacti more thanonce]].once]].
** Mirabel, as in canon, is a normally a kind, optimistic, and helpful girl. But the second she sees anyone hurting her family or boyfriend... [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Back. Off.]]
** Isabela's power to summon plants might seem harmless enough, but [[spoiler:when confronting the Berkians who attacked Hiccup, Snotlout in particular gets assaulted by vines and cacti more than
** Mirabel, as in canon, is a normally a kind, optimistic, and helpful girl. But the second she sees anyone hurting her family or boyfriend... [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Back. Off.]]
** Isabela ultimately [[spoiler: bonds with her Snaptrapper by sharing how much she cares for her sisters, and how she never wants to let them down again]].
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* CutenessProximity: The various Madrigal's reactions in learning about Hiccup and Mirabel's mutual crushes on each other can be summed up in a {{Squee}} because of just how ''goddamn cute'' they think it is.
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* CutenessProximity: The various Madrigal's reactions in learning about Hiccup and Mirabel's mutual crushes on each other can be summed up in a {{Squee}} because of just how ''goddamn cute'' they think it is. [[spoiler: When Bruno reveals that Hiccup and Mirabel eventually marry, the entire family has this reaction in one way or another.]]
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsasPeople). Julieta and Agustin are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Alma leans more towards ParentsasPeople). Julieta and Agustin in particular are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. WordofGod states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Ultimately averted, as WordofGod states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* TemptingFate: When Stoick sees Camilo depicted on the family mural, Stoick compares him to the twins and thinks "The three must never meet." Wouldn't you know it, the twins assume he's Loki when they meet and become Camilo's pranking minions.
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* TemptingFate: TemptingFate:
** When Stoick sees Camilo depicted on the family mural, Stoick compares him to the twins and thinks "The three must never meet." Wouldn't you know it, the twins assume he's Loki when they meet and become Camilo's pranking minions.
** After Toothless tells him about the Red Death, Antonio is left sad about the situation yet terrified of the Queen. Toothless comforts him by telling him that they'll never have to deal with the Red Death. A few months later, Hiccup, Toothless and a few Madrigals head off to Berk to fight the Dragon Queen.
** When Stoick sees Camilo depicted on the family mural, Stoick compares him to the twins and thinks "The three must never meet." Wouldn't you know it, the twins assume he's Loki when they meet and become Camilo's pranking minions.
** After Toothless tells him about the Red Death, Antonio is left sad about the situation yet terrified of the Queen. Toothless comforts him by telling him that they'll never have to deal with the Red Death. A few months later, Hiccup, Toothless and a few Madrigals head off to Berk to fight the Dragon Queen.
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* AbusiveParents: Stoick qualifies, although [[FaceHeelTurn he gets better]]. As in canon, the chief neglects his son (allowing him to be chastised and beaten by the rest of their people) and disowns him once he's discovered to be a "traitor". His HeroicBSOD helps him see how wrong his actions were, and he spends the majority of the Berk arc trying to reconnect with Hiccup.
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* AbusiveParents: Stoick qualifies, although [[FaceHeelTurn [[HeelFaceTurn he gets better]]. As in canon, the chief neglects his son (allowing him to be chastised and beaten by the rest of their people) and disowns him once he's discovered to be a "traitor". His HeroicBSOD helps him see how wrong his actions were, and he spends the majority of the Berk arc trying to reconnect with Hiccup.
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* AbusiveParents: Stoick qualifies, although [[FaceHeelTurn he gets better]]. As in canon, the chief neglects his son (allowing him to be chastised and beaten by the rest of their people) and disowns him once he's discovered to be a "traitor". His HeroicBSOD helps him see how wrong his actions were, and he spends the majority of the Berk arc trying to reconnect with Hiccup.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Word of God states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Word of God WordofGod states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Astrid and Snotlout start out the fic exactly as they were at the start of the first HTTYD movie (with Snotlout even celebrating Hiccup's leaving by [[AndThereWasMuchRejoicing trying to throw a party]]). However, much like in the franchise, bonding with dragons (and the Madrigals) changes them both for the better. [[spoiler:Snotlout even apologizes to Hiccup (and later Isabela) for his behavior, to the shock of everyone]]
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** People, mainly Mirabel, playfully teasing Hiccup for not being able to read their language.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Pepa and Alma lean more towards Parents as People). Julieta and Agustin are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Pepa and Alma lean leans more towards Parents as People).ParentsasPeople). Julieta and Agustin are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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* HeroicBSOD: Basically the best description of Stoick's breakdown after Hiccup leaves Berk, as he can't properly comprehend how his son could abandon the village while ignoring his own role in it.
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* HeroicBSOD: Basically the best description of Stoick's breakdown after Hiccup leaves Berk, as he can't properly comprehend how his son could abandon the village while ignoring his own role in it. Gobber has one as well, though this is mostly out of grief/worry for Hiccup and anger at the village for driving him away.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her.
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* JealousRomanticWitness: Implied. Before even realizing that she was Hiccup's girlfriend, Astrid singles out Mirabel [[JerkassToOne as her least favorite person]] just by looking at her. Word of God states in the chapter notes that this is not the case.
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* CatlikeDragons: When Alma finds the Hotburple stealing the town's silverware, it immediately reminds her of her childhood pet Oso, a cat that was so fat and lazy, it looked more like a small bear than a house-cat.
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* CatlikeDragons: When Alma finds the Hotburple stealing the town's silverware, it immediately reminds her of her childhood pet Oso, a cat that was so fat and lazy, it looked more like a small bear than a house-cat.The narrative also describes Toothless as cat-like at one point.
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* GoodParents: All of the Madrigal adults are depicted as this in the story (although Pepa and Alma lean more towards Parents as People). Julieta and Agustin are quick to serve as surrogate parental figures for Hiccup (especially after learning that Stoick disowned him). By the time he's been in the Encanto for a year, every adult willingly calls Hiccup a member of the family and defends him.
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This or these examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected, or something is just an innate aspect of the setting or character that has a logical reason for being present); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** After spending a full month without flying, a lot of Toothless's flying muscles had atrophied slightly, resulting in him and Hiccup struggling to get back into the air without relearning how to do it.
** Being in Viking Era Scandinavia, tropical fruits like bananas are very rare and end up in high demand, Berk and Eret's village developing a boom in their economy trading them to other villages in the Barbaric Archipelago.
** After spending a full month without flying, a lot of Toothless's flying muscles had atrophied slightly, resulting in him and Hiccup struggling to get back into the air without relearning how to do it.
** Being in Viking Era Scandinavia, tropical fruits like bananas are very rare and end up in high demand, Berk and Eret's village developing a boom in their economy trading them to other villages in the Barbaric Archipelago.
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* TookTheWifesName: Like everyone else who married into the Madrigals, [[spoiler:Hiccup takes the last name "Madrigal" instead of Mirabel taking the name "Haddock"]]. [[UnfortunateNames Not that anyone can blame them.]]
