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* DramaPanes:
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'': From "Matters of Interest", just a glance, but still important. It's a reference to Luna's control over the night and how she wasn't active for a millennium.
---> "Celestia."
---> "Good evening, Luna."
---> Luna looked out the window. As with her, the stars were coming out. She smiled a little. "Yes, it is. I am proud to have had a hoof in making it so once more."
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'': "How Not To Luau'': Twilight looks out the window at an erupting volcano.
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'': From "Matters of Interest", just a glance, but still important. It's a reference to Luna's control over the night and how she wasn't active for a millennium.
---> "Celestia."
---> "Good evening, Luna."
---> Luna looked out the window. As with her, the stars were coming out. She smiled a little. "Yes, it is. I am proud to have had a hoof in making it so once more."
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'': "How Not To Luau'': Twilight looks out the window at an erupting volcano.
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Crosswicking.
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* NamedAfterFirstInstallment: Named after the first entry in the anthology series, "Story Shuffle." It's a series of anthologies based on a card game, which involves shuffling.
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* FlashyTeleportation: Teleportation by both ponies and Discord are accompanied by flashes of light:
** The first series, with Discord, in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/6/story-shuffle/guest-speaker "Guest Speaker"]]:
---> Everypony outside, there's learning to be had!" And with a flash of light, he vanished from the classroom.
** The second series, with Discord, using it to leave a mind, in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/24/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/we-are-each-of-us-a-multitude "We Are, Each of Us, a Multitude"]]:
---> No sense spending all day lost in your thoughts." He snapped his talons, and light consumed his vision.
** The first series, with Discord, in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/6/story-shuffle/guest-speaker "Guest Speaker"]]:
---> Everypony outside, there's learning to be had!" And with a flash of light, he vanished from the classroom.
** The second series, with Discord, using it to leave a mind, in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/24/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/we-are-each-of-us-a-multitude "We Are, Each of Us, a Multitude"]]:
---> No sense spending all day lost in your thoughts." He snapped his talons, and light consumed his vision.
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/5/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/paparazzoid "Paparazzoid"]]: Likely a {{Portmantitle}} of Paparazzo and Droid, because a spying robot is involved in the story.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/6/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/vivace "Vivace"]]: A musical term, because a musician is the protagonist.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/6/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/vivace "Vivace"]]: A musical term, because a musician is the protagonist.
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* ShoutOut: In the Tables of Contents:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/1/story-shuffle/table-of-contents The first series']]: To some summaries of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'', that go like, "In the grim darkness of the far future, there is only war."
---> 26. Marine Biology (EoH compatible)\\
[...]\\
In the grim wetness of the ocean depths of Ungula, there is mostly war.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/1/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/table-of-contents The second series']]: To ''VideoGame/BioShock1'''s line, "A man chooses, a slave obeys."
---> 16. Intrusive Thoughts\\
[...]\\
A pony chooses. A slave obeys.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/1/story-shuffle/table-of-contents The first series']]: To some summaries of ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'', that go like, "In the grim darkness of the far future, there is only war."
---> 26. Marine Biology (EoH compatible)\\
[...]\\
In the grim wetness of the ocean depths of Ungula, there is mostly war.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/469652/1/story-shuffle-2-double-masters/table-of-contents The second series']]: To ''VideoGame/BioShock1'''s line, "A man chooses, a slave obeys."
---> 16. Intrusive Thoughts\\
[...]\\
A pony chooses. A slave obeys.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle Story Shuffle]]'' is an anthology of oneshot ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards, written by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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The fanfics in the series are:
## ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'' (2014)
## ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle2DoubleMasters'' (2020)
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!! ''Story Shuffle'' provides examples of:
* AlliterativeTitle: ''S''tory ''S''huffle
* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes "No and Yes"]], [[spoiler:Dinky]]'s talent centers around breaking and undoing others' magic.
-->''I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.''
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grows at approximately human rates:
-->''[[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.''\\
''I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.''\\
''Twilght Sparkle''\\
''Age 7''\\\
'''Author's Note''':\\
At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smiled.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at [[ChildProdigy age 7, is a magical prodigy]], doing feats thought impossible, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* FinishingEachOthersSentences: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], the Flimflam twins finish each other's shocked retort.
--> Ditzy looked from one brother to the other. "What profits? You'll never sell one of these."\\
The brothers looked at one another over her back. Flim looked horrified. "Never…"\\
"Sell?" finished a shocked Flam.
* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]] talks about the creation process of golems in Equestria. They can be made from a variety of materials, but volatile or formerly living ones are explicitly prohibited.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Indentured service to the crown is part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* {{Invisibility}}: Spells for it are mentioned in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]]:
-->''True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.''
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]], the drift in standard Equestrian over the thousand years of Luna's banishment causes a misunderstanding between her and Celestia. Originally, Equestrian used "thou", "thee" and "thine" as informal pronoun for use between family and friends, and "you" and "yours" as formal ones used for more distant acquaintances. The informal pronouns eventually dropped from use, but Luna, not knowing this, perceived Celestia's use of "you" as a deliberate distancing and a sign that her sister had not forgiven her for her fall.
* LiteralMetaphor: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], Adult Twilight's response to a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was a child:
--> '''Author's Note:''' Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]] when the narration mentions that Hollow Shades are not a nice place and that, given the name and Equestria's tendency to use meaningful names for everything, this comes as no real surprise.
* MundaneUtility: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], it's mentioned that unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by performing menial magical labor such as enchanting electromantic materials or performing fine telekinesis in assembly lines.
* OneWordTitle: Some of the story titles:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]], a story where Twilight Sparkle relaxes.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]], a story about music and endings.
* TheParalyzer: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a criminal unicorn's horn ring paralyses the offender if they try to go beyond city limits.
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals, severely limit their ability to use magic.
* PunBasedTitle: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on "Rock On"]]: A story about magic, music, MagicMusic, stones, and magic stones that relate to music.
* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], Octavia, a cellist who starts the story as a full-grown mare, went to the big city as a "naive filly [...] with little more than a cello on her back". She uses her cello playing to perform music that and uses that to do what's implied to be MagicMusic that enchants wineglasses whose wine [[spoiler:[[EmotionControl alters a griffin's thoughts]]]].
* TimeTravel: In "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]]", [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job involves traveling through time.
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
* AlliterativeTitle: ''S''tory ''S''huffle
* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes "No and Yes"]], [[spoiler:Dinky]]'s talent centers around breaking and undoing others' magic.
-->''I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.''
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grows at approximately human rates:
-->''[[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.''\\
''I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.''\\
''Twilght Sparkle''\\
''Age 7''\\\
'''Author's Note''':\\
At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smiled.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at [[ChildProdigy age 7, is a magical prodigy]], doing feats thought impossible, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* FinishingEachOthersSentences: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], the Flimflam twins finish each other's shocked retort.
--> Ditzy looked from one brother to the other. "What profits? You'll never sell one of these."\\
The brothers looked at one another over her back. Flim looked horrified. "Never…"\\
"Sell?" finished a shocked Flam.
* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]] talks about the creation process of golems in Equestria. They can be made from a variety of materials, but volatile or formerly living ones are explicitly prohibited.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Indentured service to the crown is part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* {{Invisibility}}: Spells for it are mentioned in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]]:
-->''True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.''
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]], the drift in standard Equestrian over the thousand years of Luna's banishment causes a misunderstanding between her and Celestia. Originally, Equestrian used "thou", "thee" and "thine" as informal pronoun for use between family and friends, and "you" and "yours" as formal ones used for more distant acquaintances. The informal pronouns eventually dropped from use, but Luna, not knowing this, perceived Celestia's use of "you" as a deliberate distancing and a sign that her sister had not forgiven her for her fall.
* LiteralMetaphor: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], Adult Twilight's response to a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was a child:
--> '''Author's Note:''' Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]] when the narration mentions that Hollow Shades are not a nice place and that, given the name and Equestria's tendency to use meaningful names for everything, this comes as no real surprise.
* MundaneUtility: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], it's mentioned that unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by performing menial magical labor such as enchanting electromantic materials or performing fine telekinesis in assembly lines.
* OneWordTitle: Some of the story titles:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]], a story where Twilight Sparkle relaxes.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]], a story about music and endings.
* TheParalyzer: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a criminal unicorn's horn ring paralyses the offender if they try to go beyond city limits.
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals, severely limit their ability to use magic.
* PunBasedTitle: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on "Rock On"]]: A story about magic, music, MagicMusic, stones, and magic stones that relate to music.
* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], Octavia, a cellist who starts the story as a full-grown mare, went to the big city as a "naive filly [...] with little more than a cello on her back". She uses her cello playing to perform music that and uses that to do what's implied to be MagicMusic that enchants wineglasses whose wine [[spoiler:[[EmotionControl alters a griffin's thoughts]]]].
* TimeTravel: In "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]]", [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job involves traveling through time.
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
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* AlliterativeTitle:
*
* OneWordTitle: Used in multiple stories in multiple anthologies:
** ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle1'':
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.
-->''I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.''
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grows at approximately human rates:
-->''[[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.''\\
''I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.''\\
''Twilght Sparkle''\\
''Age 7''\\\
'''Author's Note''':\\
At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smiled.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at [[ChildProdigy age 7, is a magical prodigy]], doing feats thought impossible, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* FinishingEachOthersSentences: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], the Flimflam twins finish each other's shocked retort.
--> Ditzy looked from one brother to the other. "What profits? You'll never sell one of these."\\
The brothers looked at one another over her back. Flim looked horrified. "Never…"\\
"Sell?" finished a shocked Flam.
* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]] talks about the creation process of golems in Equestria. They can be made from a variety of materials, but volatile or formerly living ones are explicitly prohibited.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Indentured service to the crown is part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* {{Invisibility}}: Spells for it are mentioned in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]]:
-->''True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.''
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]], the drift in standard Equestrian over the thousand years of Luna's banishment causes a misunderstanding between her and Celestia. Originally, Equestrian used "thou", "thee" and "thine" as informal pronoun for use between family and friends, and "you" and "yours" as formal ones used for more distant acquaintances. The informal pronouns eventually dropped from use, but Luna, not knowing this, perceived Celestia's use of "you" as a deliberate distancing and a sign that her sister had not forgiven her for her fall.
* LiteralMetaphor: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], Adult Twilight's response to a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was a child:
--> '''Author's Note:''' Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]] when the narration mentions that Hollow Shades are not a nice place and that, given the name and Equestria's tendency to use meaningful names for everything, this comes as no real surprise.
* MundaneUtility: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], it's mentioned that unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by performing menial magical labor such as enchanting electromantic materials or performing fine telekinesis in assembly lines.
* OneWordTitle: Some of the story titles:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.
**
*** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]], a story where Twilight Sparkle relaxes.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.
* PowerLimiter: As said in
** [[https://www.fimfiction.
* PunBasedTitle: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on "Rock On"]]:
* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], Octavia,
* TimeTravel: In "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]]", [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job involves traveling through time.
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle Story Shuffle]]''', An anthology of oneshot ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'', cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes "No and Yes"]], part of [[spoiler:Dinky's]] set of spells:
--> I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grow at approximately human rates:
--> [[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.\\
I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
Twilght Sparkle\\
Age 7\\\
--> I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grow at approximately human rates:
--> [[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.\\
I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
Twilght Sparkle\\
Age 7\\\
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* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes "No and Yes"]], part of [[spoiler:Dinky's]] set of spells:
--> I[[spoiler:Dinky]]'s talent centers around breaking and undoing others' magic.
-->''I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo. \n''
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, andgrow grows at approximately human rates:
--> [[spoiler:You -->''[[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.\\
I''\\
''I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
Twilght Sparkle\\
Age 7\\\''\\
''Twilght Sparkle''\\
''Age 7''\\\
--> I
-->''I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.
* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and
I
''I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.
Twilght Sparkle\\
Age 7\\\
''Twilght Sparkle''\\
''Age 7''\\\
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* FinishingEachOthersSentences: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], with the Flimflam twins:
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* FinishingEachOthersSentences: From In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], with the Flimflam twins:twins finish each other's shocked retort.
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], which talks [[spoiler:about the creation process]] of golems in Equestria.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], which Assignment"]] talks [[spoiler:about about the creation process]] process of golems in Equestria.
Equestria. They can be made from a variety of materials, but volatile or formerly living ones are explicitly prohibited.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]:Part Indentured service to the crown is part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]:
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--> True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]]. It causes an accidental perception of formality:
--> Luna raised a hoof "Peace, sister. Thou wert ne'er the only pony at fault, and at the end, all blame lay with that which I became." She hung her head. "I do not blame thee for not forgiving me in full."\\
Celestia flinched and took a step back. "What! How could you think that?"\\
"If thou didst truly forgive me, why dost thou still speak to me so formally?"\\
The two just looked at one another for a time. Celestia then facehoofed. "Because I am even more of an idiot than I realized."\\
"Sister?"\\
"A thousand years is a long time for a language, Luna. 'Thou,' 'thee,' and 'thine' have fallen out of use."
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]]. It causes an accidental perception of formality:
--> Luna raised a hoof "Peace, sister. Thou wert ne'er the only pony at fault, and at the end, all blame lay with that which I became." She hung her head. "I do not blame thee for not forgiving me in full."\\
Celestia flinched and took a step back. "What! How could you think that?"\\
"If thou didst truly forgive me, why dost thou still speak to me so formally?"\\
The two just looked at one another for a time. Celestia then facehoofed. "Because I am even more of an idiot than I realized."\\
"Sister?"\\
"A thousand years is a long time for a language, Luna. 'Thou,' 'thee,' and 'thine' have fallen out of use."
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* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of
--> Luna raised a hoof "Peace, sister. Thou wert ne'er
Celestia flinched and took a step back. "What! How could you think that?"\\
"If thou didst truly forgive me, why dost thou still speak to me so formally?"\\
The two just looked at one another for a time. Celestia then facehoofed. "Because I am even more of an idiot than I realized."\\
"Sister?"\\
"A
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--> '''Author's Note'''\\
Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]]:
--> The Hollow Shades are not a nice place.\\
This doesn't exactly come as a surprise to ponies. Names are almost always meaningful in Equestria.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]]:
--> The Hollow Shades are not a nice place.\\
This doesn't exactly come as a surprise to ponies. Names are almost always meaningful in Equestria.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
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--> '''Author's Note'''\\
Note:''' Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil NecessaryEvil]]:
--> TheEvil]] when the narration mentions that Hollow Shades are not a nice place.\\
This doesn't exactly come as a surpriseplace and that, given the name and Equestria's tendency to ponies. Names are almost always use meaningful in Equestria.
names for everything, this comes as no real surprise.
* MundaneUtility: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-HomeAssignment"]]: Unicorn Assignment"]], it's mentioned that unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line performing menial magical labor such as enchanting electromantic components, materials or performing fine-detail fine telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."assembly lines.
* MeaningfulName: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary
--> The
This doesn't exactly come as a surprise
* MundaneUtility: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home
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* TheParalyzer: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], what a penitent's ring does if the offender tries to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
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* TheParalyzer: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], what a penitent's criminal unicorn's horn ring does if paralyses the offender tries if they try to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
limits.
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]],a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.criminals, severely limit their ability to use magic.
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
* PowerLimiter: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]],
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* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], about Octavia, a cellist who starts the story as a full-grown mare, went to the big city as a "naive filly [...] with little more than a cello on her back". She uses her cello playing to perform music that and uses that to do what's implied to be MagicMusic that enchants wineglasses whose wine [[spoiler:[[EmotionControl alters a griffin's thoughts]]]].
--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."\\
[...]\\
The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
* TimeTravel: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job:
--> you'll be sent to the past
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."\\
[...]\\
The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
* TimeTravel: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job:
--> you'll be sent to the past
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by criminals.
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* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], about Octavia, a cellist who starts the story as a full-grown mare, went to the big city as a "naive filly [...] with little more than a cello on her back". She uses her cello playing to perform music that and uses that to do what's implied to be MagicMusic that enchants wineglasses whose wine [[spoiler:[[EmotionControl alters a griffin's thoughts]]]].
--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."\\
[...]\\
The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
* TimeTravel: In [[https://www."[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of Yes]]", [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job:
--> you'll be sent to the past
job involves traveling through time.
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn bycriminals.criminals.
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[...]\\
The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
--> you'll be sent to the past
* TrackingDevice: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings, which are worn by
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* FinishingEachOthersSentences: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/14/story-shuffle/peer-review "Peer Review"]], with the Flimflam twins:
--> Ditzy looked from one brother to the other. "What profits? You'll never sell one of these."\\
The brothers looked at one another over her back. Flim looked horrified. "Never…"\\
"Sell?" finished a shocked Flam.
--> Ditzy looked from one brother to the other. "What profits? You'll never sell one of these."\\
The brothers looked at one another over her back. Flim looked horrified. "Never…"\\
"Sell?" finished a shocked Flam.
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--> True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.
--> True, there was another pegasus on the staff now, but Speedy Delivery couldn't use acceleration spells to guarantee same-day delivery, or invisibility spells to keep ponies from noticing the barely subsonic grey blur.
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* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of [[spoiler:Dinky's]] set of spells:
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* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No "No and Yes]], Yes"]], part of [[spoiler:Dinky's]] set of spells:
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--> I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
--> I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
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--> [[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.
-->know.\\
I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.\\
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* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at [[ChildProdigy age 7, is a magical prodigy, prodigy]], doing feats thought impossible, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks [[spoiler:about the creation process]] of golems in Equestria.
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], "Take-Home Assignment"]], which talks [[spoiler:about the creation process]] of golems in Equestria.
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* LiteralMetaphor: Adult Twilight's response to a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was a child:
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* LiteralMetaphor: As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], Adult Twilight's response to a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was a child:
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* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
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* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
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* TheParalyzer: What a penitent's ring does if the offender tries to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
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* TheParalyzer: What As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], what a penitent's ring does if the offender tries to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
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* PowerLimiter: Another function of penitent's rings.
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* PowerLimiter: Another As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings.rings, which are worn by criminals.
* PunBasedTitle: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on "Rock On"]]: A story about magic, music, MagicMusic, stones, and magic stones that relate to music.
* PunBasedTitle: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/13/story-shuffle/rock-on "Rock On"]]: A story about magic, music, MagicMusic, stones, and magic stones that relate to music.
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--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."
--> [...]
--> The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
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--> The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
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--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."
-->"\\
[...]
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The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
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The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
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* TrackingDevice: Another function of penitent's rings.
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* TrackingDevice: Another As said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment "Take-Home Assignment"]], a function of penitent's rings.rings, which are worn by criminals.
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* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
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* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: "Take-Home Assignment"]]: Part of the punishment for the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.golems.
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]]. It causes an accidental perception of formality:
--> Luna raised a hoof "Peace, sister. Thou wert ne'er the only pony at fault, and at the end, all blame lay with that which I became." She hung her head. "I do not blame thee for not forgiving me in full."\\
Celestia flinched and took a step back. "What! How could you think that?"\\
"If thou didst truly forgive me, why dost thou still speak to me so formally?"\\
The two just looked at one another for a time. Celestia then facehoofed. "Because I am even more of an idiot than I realized."\\
"Sister?"\\
"A thousand years is a long time for a language, Luna. 'Thou,' 'thee,' and 'thine' have fallen out of use."
* LanguageDrift: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/28/story-shuffle/matters-of-interest "Matters of Interest"]]. It causes an accidental perception of formality:
--> Luna raised a hoof "Peace, sister. Thou wert ne'er the only pony at fault, and at the end, all blame lay with that which I became." She hung her head. "I do not blame thee for not forgiving me in full."\\
Celestia flinched and took a step back. "What! How could you think that?"\\
"If thou didst truly forgive me, why dost thou still speak to me so formally?"\\
The two just looked at one another for a time. Celestia then facehoofed. "Because I am even more of an idiot than I realized."\\
"Sister?"\\
"A thousand years is a long time for a language, Luna. 'Thou,' 'thee,' and 'thine' have fallen out of use."
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* SignatureInstrument: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda "Coda"]], about Octavia, a cellist who starts the story as a full-grown mare, went to the big city as a "naive filly [...] with little more than a cello on her back". She uses her cello playing to perform music that and uses that to do what's implied to be MagicMusic that enchants wineglasses whose wine [[spoiler:[[EmotionControl alters a griffin's thoughts]]]].
--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."
--> [...]
--> The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
--> Octavia stood at attention. "[[spoiler:The ambassador]] drank four glasses of wine after I applied the appropriate resonance to the glasses. [[spoiler:Between that and the performance, his desire for war]] was thoroughly terminated. He will very likely [[spoiler:revise his assessment of our military capabilities before sending it to Gryphheim]]."
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--> The princess nodded. "[...] you're one of my best when it comes to ending [[spoiler: ideas]]."
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* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child.child, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]].
* MeaningfulNames: Discussed in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/7/story-shuffle/necessary-evil Necessary Evil]]:
--> The Hollow Shades are not a nice place.\\
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--> The Hollow Shades are not a nice place.\\
This doesn't exactly come as a surprise to ponies. Names are almost always meaningful in Equestria.
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]].
Downtime]], a story where Twilight Sparkle relaxes.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/codaCoda]].Coda]], a story about music and endings.
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda
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Age 7\\
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* AntiMagic: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of [[spoiler:Dinky's]] set of spells:
--> I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.
--> I break spells. You know that. There is nothing you can do that I can't undo.
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* LiteralMetaphor: Twilight's response to the BrickJoke about an embarrassing incident from when she was 7:
--> '''Author's Note'''
--> Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
--> '''Author's Note'''
--> Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
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* LiteralMetaphor: Adult Twilight's response to the BrickJoke about an embarrassing incident a BrickJoke, whose setup was from when she was 7:
a child:
--> '''Author'sNote'''
-->Note'''\\
Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
--> '''Author's
-->
Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
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* TimeTravel: In [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/20/story-shuffle/no-and-yes No and Yes]], part of [[spoiler:Pumpkin's]] job:
--> you'll be sent to the past
--> you'll be sent to the past
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I think Limiter instead of Surpressor?
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* PowerNullifier: Another function of penitent's rings.
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* PowerNullifier: PowerLimiter: Another function of penitent's rings.
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle Story Shuffle]]''', An anthology of oneshot of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle Story Shuffle]]''', An anthology of oneshot of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'', cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks [[about the creation process]] of golems in Equestria.
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks [[about [[spoiler:about the creation process]] of golems in Equestria.
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--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
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--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].Guard]].
* PowerNullifier: Another function of penitent's rings.
* TrackingDevice: Another function of penitent's rings.
* PowerNullifier: Another function of penitent's rings.
* TrackingDevice: Another function of penitent's rings.
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--> At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smile.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, as demonstrated in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]] when she [[spoiler:makes a coal golem]].
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, as demonstrated in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]] when she [[spoiler:makes a coal golem]].
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--> At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smile.
smiled.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, asdemonstrated said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]] when she [[spoiler:makes a coal golem]].Assignment]].
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, as
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks about the golem creation process in Equestria.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for unregistered golem creation.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for unregistered golem creation.
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* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks about [[about the golem creation process process]] of golems in Equestria.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment forunregistered golem creation.the illegal, [[spoiler:unregistered, and unlicensed creation]] of golems.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for
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* OneWordTitle:OneWordTitle: Some of the story titles:
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].
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** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].Coda]].
* TheParalyzer: What a penitent's ring does if the offender tries to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
* TheParalyzer: What a penitent's ring does if the offender tries to go beyond city limits, as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]:
--> [[spoiler:During my indentures, I would have to wear a standard-issue "penitent's ring" around my horn at all times. This would act as a tracking device, and when I was not at work, a magical suppressor. It would also allow me to perceive the city limits of Canterlot as a luminous barrier, because if I were to leave those limits, it would immediately paralyze me and notify the City Guard]].
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There's a story behind every Magic card, but they probably don't have quite as many ponies in them as these do. Set throughout Equestrian probability space, each of these stories was inspired by a card chosen through Gatherer's Random Card function. As such, categories and characters will vary.
An anthology of oneshot of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]].
An anthology of oneshot of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]].
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An anthology of oneshot of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
The story can be found [[http://www.
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* BrickJoke: As part of the Author's Note for [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]. Twilight is approximately a young adult or older at her coronation, and grow at approximately human rates:
--> [[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.
--> I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.
--> Twilght Sparkle
--> Age 7
--> '''Author's Note''':
--> At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smile.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, as demonstrated in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]] when she [[spoiler:makes a coal golem]].
* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child.
--> [[spoiler:You chose to commute my sentence to this written report and]] what you described as "a surprise." You went on to state that when the time comes, I'll know.
--> I suspect that the anticipation is intended to be as much a part of the punishment as whatever action you take. I admit, it's working.
--> Twilght Sparkle
--> Age 7
--> '''Author's Note''':
--> At some point during Twilight's coronation party, Celestia reminded her of this incident, then smile.
* ChildMage: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, is a magical prodigy, doing feats thought impossible, as demonstrated in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]] when she [[spoiler:makes a coal golem]].
* ChildProdigy: Twilight Sparkle, at age 7, does magical feats thought impossible for a child.
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* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
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* LiteralMetaphor: Twilight's response to the BrickJoke about an embarrassing incident from when she was 7:
--> '''Author's Note'''
--> Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor.""
* OneWordTitle:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].
--> '''Author's Note'''
--> Twilight's response was literally unprintable. Her profanity transcended language.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor.
* OneWordTitle:
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/9/story-shuffle/aftershock Aftershock]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/12/story-shuffle/downtime Downtime]].
** [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/31/story-shuffle/coda Coda]].
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An anthology of oneshot of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfics inspired by MagicTheGathering cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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An anthology of oneshot of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics inspired by MagicTheGathering ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
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There's a story behind every Magic card, but they probably don't have quite as many ponies in them as these do. Set throughout Equestrian probability space, each of these stories was inspired by a card chosen through Gatherer's Random Card function. As such, categories and characters will vary.
An anthology of oneshot of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfics inspired by MagicTheGathering cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]].
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!! ''StoryShuffle'' provides examples of:
* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks about the golem creation process in Equestria.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for unregistered golem creation.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
An anthology of oneshot of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfics inspired by MagicTheGathering cards by [=FanOfMostEverything=].
The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]].
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!! ''StoryShuffle'' provides examples of:
* {{Golem}}: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]], which talks about the golem creation process in Equestria.
* IndenturedServitude: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Part of the punishment for unregistered golem creation.
* MundaneUtility: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/18/story-shuffle/take-home-assignment Take-Home Assignment]]: Unicorn criminals usually pay their debt to society by "long hours at an assembly line enchanting electromantic components, performing fine-detail telekinesis in assembling those components, or other menial magical labor."
