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Silver is a fanfiction crossover between Series/DoctorWho and TheProfessionals Series/TheProfessionals written by YnitOcelot.
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* AndIMustScream: What the victims are eventually reduced to. [[spoiler: Drake]] gets the worst example of it.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: Alban]] and then [[spoiler: Doyle.]]
* DemonicPossession: The Darkness uses a form of this.
* DrowningPit: Bodie, the Doctor and Drake are trapped in one in the third chapter.
* EyeColourChange: When the Darkness possesses its victims their eyes turn silver.
* DemonicPossession: The Darkness uses a form of this.
* DrowningPit: Bodie, the Doctor and Drake are trapped in one in the third chapter.
* EyeColourChange: When the Darkness possesses its victims their eyes turn silver.
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* EyeColourChange: When the Darkness possesses its
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* GoingForTheBigScoop: James Drake.
* ILied: Said word-for-word by one character.
* ItsQuietTooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this. Leading on to...
* NothingIsScarier: After thinking about the above and nothing happening Doyle decides to eventually tell his imagination to 'shut up.'.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: At the end the Doctor wipes both Bodie and Doyle's memories to keep them safe from Torchwood.]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]] by the end.
* ILied: Said word-for-word by one character.
* ItsQuietTooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this. Leading on to...
* NothingIsScarier: After thinking about the above and nothing happening Doyle decides to eventually tell his imagination to 'shut up.'.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: At the end the Doctor wipes both Bodie and Doyle's memories to keep them safe from Torchwood.]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]] by the end.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: At the
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* [[spoiler: RedShirt Reporter:]] James Drake.
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* SecretUndergroundPassage: Alban has one of these.
* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: [[spoiler: Doyle]] says this word-for-word.
* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: [[spoiler: Doyle]] says this word-for-word.
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* ItsQuiet...TooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this. Leading on to...
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* ItsQuiet...TooQuiet: ItsQuietTooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this. Leading on to...
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* PlausableDeniability: Why [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]]'s memories are wiped.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with Ain'tTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
* SecretUndergroundPassageway: Alban has one of these.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with Ain'tTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
* SecretUndergroundPassageway: Alban has one of these.
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* PlausableDeniability: PlausibleDeniability: Why [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]]'s memories are wiped.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with Ain'tTooProudToBeg andLetThemGo!
YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo!
*SecretUndergroundPassageway: SecretUndergroundPassage: Alban has one of these.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with Ain'tTooProudToBeg and
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Silver is a fanfiction crossover between DoctorWho Series/DoctorWho and TheProfessionals written by YnitOcelot.
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* ILied: Said word-for-word by one character.
* [[spoiler: RedShirt Reporter:]] James Drake.
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* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.
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* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.to.
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: [[spoiler: Doyle]] says this word-for-word.
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: [[spoiler: Doyle]] says this word-for-word.
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* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with NotTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
* SecretPassageway: Alban has one of these.
* SecretPassageway: Alban has one of these.
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* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with NotTooProudToBeg Ain'tTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
*SecretPassageway: SecretUndergroundPassageway: Alban has one of these.
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* It'sQuiet...TooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this.Leading on to...
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* It'sQuiet...ItsQuiet...TooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this. Leading on to...
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: At the end the Doctor wipes both Bodie and Doyle's memories to keep them safe from Torchwood.]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]] by the end.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]] by the end.
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* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].
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* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] Bold Type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].LETTERS]].
* PlausableDeniability: Why [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]]'s memories are wiped.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with NotTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
* SecretPassageway: Alban has one of these.
* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.
* PlausableDeniability: Why [[spoiler: Bodie and Doyle]]'s memories are wiped.
* PleaseIWillDoAnything!: [[spoiler: Doyle]] begs [[spoiler: Alban]] to let his friends go, combining this with NotTooProudToBeg and LetThemGo!
* SecretPassageway: Alban has one of these.
* TunnelNetwork: What the secret passageway leads to.
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* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his first one fails.
->''He was awake.He felt it all. He was awake. He felt it all...''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].
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->''He was awake.He felt it all. He was awake. He felt it all...''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].
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* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his first one fails.
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->''He was awake.He felt it all. He was awake. He felt it all...''
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** He picks up another one near the end of the story, but this time he's trying to tell Bodie something.
->''It's got a body. It's got a body. It's got a body!''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITALLETTERS]].
*LETTERS]].
->''He was awake.He felt it all. He was awake. He felt it all...
** He picks up another one near the end of the story, but this time he's trying to tell Bodie something.
->''It's got a body. It's got a body. It's got a body!''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL
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* FightingFromTheInside: [[spoiler: Doyle]] does this, but unfortunately he can only delay the Darkness rather than defeat it.
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* FightingFromTheInside: [[spoiler: Doyle]] does this, but unfortunately he can only delay the Darkness rather than defeat it.
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* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his [[SurvivalMantra: first one]] fails.
->''[[AndIMustScream: He was awake.]] [[NightmareFuel: He felt it all.]] He was awake. He felt it all...''
->''[[AndIMustScream: He was awake.]] [[NightmareFuel: He felt it all.]] He was awake. He felt it all...''
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* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his [[SurvivalMantra: first one]] one fails.
->''[[AndIMustScream: ->''He was awake.He felt it all. He was awake.]] [[NightmareFuel: He felt it all.]] He was awake. He felt it all...''
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* It'sQuiet...TooQuiet: When Bodie and Doyle break into Alban Industries, Doyle wonders about this.Leading on to...
* NothingIsScarier: After thinking about the above and nothing happening Doyle decides to eventually tell his imagination to 'shut up.'.
* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his [[SurvivalMantra: first one]] fails.
->''[[AndIMustScream: He was awake.]] [[NightmareFuel: He felt it all.]] He was awake. He felt it all...''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].
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* NothingIsScarier: After thinking about the above and nothing happening Doyle decides to eventually tell his imagination to 'shut up.'.
* MadnessMantra: Doyle gets one after his [[SurvivalMantra: first one]] fails.
->''[[AndIMustScream: He was awake.]] [[NightmareFuel: He felt it all.]] He was awake. He felt it all...''
* PaintingTheMedium: To start off with the Darkness only speaks in [[AC: bold type]] but after [[spoiler: regaining its true form]] speaks in [[AC: ALL CAPITAL LETTERS]].
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-->'''The Doctor reading a poem carved on the wall''',Doctor''',
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Drake is killed when the Darkness possessing him regains its TrueForm and rips out from inside him.]]
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Drake is killed when the Darkness possessing him regains its TrueForm body inside Drake's and rips out from inside him.]]inside.]].
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* AndIMustScream: What the victims are eventually reduced to.
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* AndIMustScream: What the victims are eventually reduced to. [[spoiler: Drake]] gets the worst example of it.
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Drake is killed when the Darkness possessing him regains its TrueForm and rips out from inside him.]]
* BodyHorror: [[spoiler: Drake is killed when the Darkness possessing him regains its TrueForm and rips out from inside him.]]
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* AndIMustScream: What the victims are eventually reduced to.
* DrowningPit: Bodie, the Doctor and Drake are trapped in one in the third chapter.
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* GoingInForTheBigScoop: James Drake.
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* GoingInForTheBigScoop: GoingForTheBigScoop: James Drake.
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* GrandTheftMe: The Darkness switches bodies to further its goal. It needs physical contact to BodySurf.
* GoingInForTheBigScoop: James Drake.
* FightingFromTheInside: [[spoiler: Doyle]] does this, but unfortunately he can only delay the Darkness rather than defeat it.
* GoingInForTheBigScoop: James Drake.
* FightingFromTheInside: [[spoiler: Doyle]] does this, but unfortunately he can only delay the Darkness rather than defeat it.
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After a politician is murdered outside Alban Industries Bodie and Doyle are sent undercover to discover what is going on.
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After a politician is murdered outside Alban Industries Bodie and Doyle are sent undercover to discover what is going on. During their investigation they meet an edgy reporter named James Drake and a mysterious man calling himself 'The Doctor'.
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!!Silver contains examples of:
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: Alban]] and then [[spoiler: Doyle.]]
* DemonicPossession: The Darkness uses a form of this.
* EyeColourChange: When the Darkness possesses its victims their eyes turn silver.
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!!Silver contains examples of:
* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: Alban]] and then [[spoiler: Doyle.]]
* DemonicPossession: The Darkness uses a form of this.
* EyeColourChange: When the Darkness possesses its victims their eyes turn silver.
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->''You cannot run. You cannot hide. The Darkness hunts with silver eyes.''
-->'''The Doctor reading a poem carved on the wall''',
Silver is a fanfiction crossover between DoctorWho and TheProfessionals written by YnitOcelot.
After a politician is murdered outside Alban Industries Bodie and Doyle are sent undercover to discover what is going on.
-->'''The Doctor reading a poem carved on the wall''',
Silver is a fanfiction crossover between DoctorWho and TheProfessionals written by YnitOcelot.
After a politician is murdered outside Alban Industries Bodie and Doyle are sent undercover to discover what is going on.
