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* ForgottenFallenFriend: Frodo and Aragorn, both canonically prominent members of the Fellowship, are gracelessly killed off and never mourned by the narrative and surviving characters.
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight, then inverted, and finally averted. The first third of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, then the. Latter half. Is inexplicably riddled. With them, and the final third seemingly reaches some semblance of normal punctuation.
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight, then inverted, and finally averted. The first third of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, then the. Latter half.Next third. Is inexplicably riddled. With them, and the final third seemingly reaches some semblance of normal punctuation.
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* MacGuffin: Sary gives Aragorn a powerful, divinely blessed sword that can supposedly kill Sauron (Andúril?), but it's never used or touched upon after this. It's Sary's powers that ultimately kill Sauron.
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight and then inverted. The first half of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, and then the. Latter half. Is inexplicably riddled. With them.
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight and straight, then inverted. inverted, and finally averted. The first half third of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, and then the. Latter half. Is inexplicably riddled. With them.them, and the final third seemingly reaches some semblance of normal punctuation.
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Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight and then averted. The first half of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, and then the. Latter half. Is inexplicably riddled. With them.
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* NoPunctuationPeriod: Played straight and then averted.inverted. The first half of the story distinctly lacks full stops in true ''Fanfic/LegolasByLaura'' fashion, and then the. Latter half. Is inexplicably riddled. With them.
