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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler:Pacifica interrgoates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on his groin. Morty threatens Jerry with nanobots that will make all his underwear crush his groin if he screws up his chances with Mabel. He actually does it to Gideon a chapter later.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler:Pacifica interrgoates interrogates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on his groin. Morty threatens Jerry with nanobots that will make all his underwear crush his groin if he screws up his chances with Mabel. He actually does it to Gideon a chapter later.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Mark, the leader of the cult, was abused by his whole family.]] [[spoiler:Turns out the North-Wests electrocute Pacifica if she ignores the bell.]]
* AcheyScars: Dipper and Mabel are both traumatised by Dipper's abduction.
* AcheyScars: Dipper and Mabel are both traumatised by Dipper's abduction.
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* AbusiveParents: AbusiveParents:
** [[spoiler:Mark, the leader of the cult, was abused by his whole family.]] ]]
** [[spoiler:Turns out theNorth-Wests Northwests electrocute Pacifica if she ignores the bell.]]
* AcheyScars: Dipper and Mabel are bothtraumatised traumatized by Dipper's abduction.
** [[spoiler:Mark, the leader of the cult, was abused by his whole family.
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* AcheyScars: Dipper and Mabel are both
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* FlorenceNightingaleEffect: [[spoiler:Dipper's ordeal has taken such a heavy toll, he has has been left too weak to move his body. Out of love for him, Pacifica nurses him back to health.]] [[spoiler:Heart-broken by how badly Mark was abused, Wendy falls for him and vows to look after him.]]
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* FlorenceNightingaleEffect: [[spoiler:Dipper's ordeal has taken such a heavy toll, he has has been left too weak to move his body. Out of love for him, Pacifica nurses him back to health.]] [[spoiler:Heart-broken Heart-broken by how badly Mark was abused, Wendy falls for him and vows to look after him.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler:Pacifica interrgoates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on his groin.]] [[spoiler:Morty threatens Jerry with nanobots that will make all his underwear crush his groin if he screws up his chances with Mabel. He actually does it to Gideon a chapter later.]]
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* GroinAttack: [[spoiler:Pacifica interrgoates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on his groin.]] [[spoiler:Morty Morty threatens Jerry with nanobots that will make all his underwear crush his groin if he screws up his chances with Mabel. He actually does it to Gideon a chapter later.]]
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: [[spoiler:At the end of chapter 3, the gang rush Dipper, who is in a critical condition, to hospital. Pacifica cradles him in her arms, begging him to hold on and [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AnguishedDeclarationOfLove confessing her love for him in tears and fear of losing him]].]]
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Reincarnation Reincarnation]]: [[spoiler:Bill was reincarnated as an axolotl.]]
* [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Reincarnation Reincarnation]]: [[spoiler:Bill was reincarnated as an axolotl.]]
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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: [[spoiler:At the end of chapter 3, the gang rush Dipper, who is in a critical condition, to hospital. Pacifica cradles him in her arms, begging him to hold on and [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AnguishedDeclarationOfLove [[AnguishedDeclarationOfLove confessing her love for him in tears and fear of losing him]].]]
*[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Reincarnation Reincarnation]]: {{Reincarnation}}: [[spoiler:Bill was reincarnated as an axolotl.]]
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* ShoutOut: There's a couple of shout-outs to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebVideo/DarkHarvest Dark Harvest]] in the story. There's also refrences to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/RedDwarf Red Dwarf]] in parts of the story.
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* ShoutOut: There's a couple of shout-outs to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebVideo/DarkHarvest Dark Harvest]] in the story. There's also refrences to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/RedDwarf Red Dwarf]] in parts of ''WebVideo/DarkHarvest'' and ''Series/RedDwarf'' throughout the story.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: [[spoiler:In chapter 3, Pacifica interrogates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on him while screaming "IF YOU DON'T TELL ME WHERE MY MAN IS RIGHT NOW, I'LL TURN YOU INTO A EUNUCH!!!" and in Chapter 4, she kicks a bully's teeth out after he picks on Dipper.]] [[spoiler:Grenda knocks a cultist out for targeting Marius.]]
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend:
** [[spoiler:In chapter 3, Pacifica interrogates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on him while screaming "IF YOU DON'T TELL ME WHERE MY MAN IS RIGHT NOW, I'LL TURN YOU INTO A EUNUCH!!!" and in Chapter 4, she kicks a bully's teeth out after he picks on Dipper.]] [[spoiler:Grenda ]]
**[[spoiler:Grenda knocks a cultist out for targeting Marius.]]
** [[spoiler:In chapter 3, Pacifica interrogates a cultist by using a pair of pliers on him while screaming "IF YOU DON'T TELL ME WHERE MY MAN IS RIGHT NOW, I'LL TURN YOU INTO A EUNUCH!!!" and in Chapter 4, she kicks a bully's teeth out after he picks on Dipper.
**[[spoiler:Grenda knocks a cultist out for targeting Marius.]]
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* ShoutOut: There's a couple of shout-outs to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebVideo/DarkHarvest Dark Harvest]] in the story.
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* ShoutOut: There's a couple of shout-outs to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebVideo/DarkHarvest Dark Harvest]] in the story. There's also refrences to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Series/RedDwarf Red Dwarf]] in parts of the story.
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Mark, the leader of the cult, was abused by his whole family.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler:Mark, the leader of the cult, was abused by his whole family.]] [[spoiler:Turns out the North-Wests electrocute Pacifica if she ignores the bell.]]
