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* CrusadingLawyer: Carol is this for Taylor.
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%%* EnergyWeapon: This would be the case if Taylor didn't purposely hamstring herself to avoid potential collateral damage.
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* FrickinLaserBeams: This would be the case if Taylor didn't purposely hamstring herself to avoid potential collateral damage.
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* InvisibilityCloak: Several of Taylor's bots can have this.
* MissionControl: Taylor acts as this when New Wave go out.
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* TakeThat: A good-natured example. Revenant was started when the author disliked how the sensors were handled in Fanfic/ACloudyPath.
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* TakeThat: A good-natured example. Revenant was started when the author disliked how the sensors were handled in Fanfic/ACloudyPath.''Fanfic/ACloudyPath''.
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* AdultFear: [[spoiler:Laserdream nearly dies twice, both to Oni Lee and the Teeth while out fighting crime with her family.]]
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* HostageSituation: During the Merchant's attack on New Wave, one of the gangers takes a civilian hostage.
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* WeHaveReserves: Taylor has no problem sacrificing her robots in battle to accomplish the mission or save a live.
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* WeHaveReserves: Taylor has no problem sacrificing her robots in battle to accomplish the mission or save a live.life.
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* Foreshadowing: The prologue, to the point where the author has voiced regret about posting it because of the expectations it created.
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Revenant is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Songless about Taylor triggering with a Tinker power that has access to the Cybran tech tree from the''VideoGame/SupremeCommander'' [[RealTimeStrategy real-time strategy video game]] series. It can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857632/ SpaceBattles]].
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Revenant is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Songless about Taylor triggering with a Tinker power that has access to the Cybran tech tree from the''VideoGame/SupremeCommander'' the ''VideoGame/SupremeCommander'' [[RealTimeStrategy real-time strategy video game]] series. It can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857632/ SpaceBattles]].
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-> ''The smallest design I had, what my power helpfully seemed to call a 'hunter (light assault bot)', was a bipedal drone that I originally thought would maybe reach my waist. Instead, it was a robotic monster as tall as our house.''
-->~Taylor thinking about her powers, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857703/ Solitaire 1.1]]
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Revenant is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Songless about Taylor triggering with a Tinker power that has access to the Cybran tech tree from the''VideoGame/SupremeCommander'' [[RealTimeStrategy real-time strategy video game]] series. It can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857632/ SpaceBattles]].
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AdultFear: [[spoiler:Laserdream nearly dies to the Teeth while out fighting crime with her family.]]
* {{BFG}}: Taylor uses nanite missiles on Lung that vaporize half his body.
* CrusadingLawyer: Carol is this for Taylor.
* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Sorta. Taylor can shut off her emotions with an implant and later in the story she realizes that that is not always a good thing.
* TheFaceless: What Taylor is to the Protectorate and New Wave [[spoiler:Though she later reveals herself to New Wave.]]
* Foreshadowing: The prologue, to the point where the author has voiced regret about posting it because of the expectations it created.
* FrickinLaserBeams: This would be the case if Taylor didn't purposely hamstring herself to avoid potential collateral damage.
* InvisibilityCloak: Several of Taylor's bots can have this.
* MissionControl: Taylor acts as this when New Wave go out.
* NoTranshumanismAllowed: Averted. Taylor created implants to install in her brain that allows her to control her robots and regulate her emotions.
*RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: "All right, I'm asking it, everyone's thinking it. Why did you make your flying robot look like it's trying to out-evil Darth Vader?"
* ShockAndAwe: Since most of Taylor's weapons are too strong to use on people, she outfits her drones with a lightning gun that is normally used for disabling incoming missiles.
* TakeThat: A good-natured example. Revenant was started when the author disliked how the sensors were handled in Fanfic/ACloudyPath.
* WeHaveReserves: Taylor has no problem sacrificing her robots in battle to accomplish the mission or save a live.
-->~Taylor thinking about her powers, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857703/ Solitaire 1.1]]
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Revenant is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Songless about Taylor triggering with a Tinker power that has access to the Cybran tech tree from the''VideoGame/SupremeCommander'' [[RealTimeStrategy real-time strategy video game]] series. It can be found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/19857632/ SpaceBattles]].
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AdultFear: [[spoiler:Laserdream nearly dies to the Teeth while out fighting crime with her family.]]
* {{BFG}}: Taylor uses nanite missiles on Lung that vaporize half his body.
* CrusadingLawyer: Carol is this for Taylor.
* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Sorta. Taylor can shut off her emotions with an implant and later in the story she realizes that that is not always a good thing.
* TheFaceless: What Taylor is to the Protectorate and New Wave [[spoiler:Though she later reveals herself to New Wave.]]
* Foreshadowing: The prologue, to the point where the author has voiced regret about posting it because of the expectations it created.
* FrickinLaserBeams: This would be the case if Taylor didn't purposely hamstring herself to avoid potential collateral damage.
* InvisibilityCloak: Several of Taylor's bots can have this.
* MissionControl: Taylor acts as this when New Wave go out.
* NoTranshumanismAllowed: Averted. Taylor created implants to install in her brain that allows her to control her robots and regulate her emotions.
*RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: "All right, I'm asking it, everyone's thinking it. Why did you make your flying robot look like it's trying to out-evil Darth Vader?"
* ShockAndAwe: Since most of Taylor's weapons are too strong to use on people, she outfits her drones with a lightning gun that is normally used for disabling incoming missiles.
* TakeThat: A good-natured example. Revenant was started when the author disliked how the sensors were handled in Fanfic/ACloudyPath.
* WeHaveReserves: Taylor has no problem sacrificing her robots in battle to accomplish the mission or save a live.
